| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.542 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.077 | |
| 86.38% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1101 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 54.59% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1101 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "stark" | | 1 | "stomach" | | 2 | "tracing" | | 3 | "intricate" | | 4 | "solitary" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "echo" | | 7 | "cascading" | | 8 | "sanctuary" | | 9 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 55 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1096 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 42.98% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 45 | | wordCount | 841 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 2.14 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | London | 2 | | October | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Embedded | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Isolde | 5 | | Varga | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Nyx | 5 | | Veil | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Half-Fae" | | 6 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" | | 4 | "Veil" |
| | globalScore | 0.43 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like dry leaves scraping across fl" | | 1 | "looked like polished bone" | | 2 | "looked like dried moth wings and cobwebs" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1096 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 37.79 | | std | 20.99 | | cv | 0.556 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 64 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 40 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 58 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 67 | | 8 | 64 | | 9 | 42 | | 10 | 55 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 40 | | 13 | 58 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 55 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 75 | | 21 | 37 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 33 | | 24 | 73 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 42 | | 28 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 133 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 65 | | ratio | 0.092 | | matches | | 0 | "Flowers she couldn't name—blossoms with indigo petals that twitched like insect wings—curled around her boots." | | 1 | "It rose, lengthening until it stood over six feet tall—a silhouette of shifting, ink-black smoke." | | 2 | "Embedded in the stone steps were footprints—hundreds of them, overlapping in intricate, frantic patterns." | | 3 | "Some were the cloven tracks of heavy beasts; others were light, pointed impressions that vanished into thin air after a few strides." | | 4 | "Where her bare feet touched the earth, the indigo flowers didn't bend; the grass beneath her remained entirely undisturbed, leaving no footprints on the soft earth." | | 5 | "A faint, shimmering distortion sparkled in the air between them—a microscopic tear in the Veil, through which the smell of roasting meats, heavy spices, and ozone wafted out." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 857 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "faint, moonlight-colored radiance" | | 2 | "tragic, razor-thin expression" |
| | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.030338389731621937 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010501750291715286 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 65 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 65 | | mean | 16.86 | | std | 6.96 | | cv | 0.413 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 31 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 27 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 26 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 26 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 85.13% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.5384615384615384 | | totalSentences | 65 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "She reached up instinctively, her" | | 1 | "Her bright blue eyes darted" | | 2 | "It sounded like dry leaves" | | 3 | "It rose, lengthening until it" | | 4 | "Her hand moved to her" | | 5 | "They moved down a winding" | | 6 | "Their shadowy hand reached out," | | 7 | "Her pale lavender eyes locked" | | 8 | "She tilted her head, her" | | 9 | "She reached out a long," |
| | ratio | 0.192 | |
| 46.54% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "Rory Carter halted at the" | | 2 | "Here, the air was warm," | | 3 | "The sky above wasn't the" | | 4 | "She reached up instinctively, her" | | 5 | "The Heartstone Pendant thrummed against" | | 6 | "Rory said, her voice cutting" | | 7 | "Her bright blue eyes darted" | | 8 | "Flowers she couldn't name—blossoms with" | | 9 | "a voice whispered" | | 10 | "It sounded like dry leaves" | | 11 | "It rose, lengthening until it" | | 12 | "Nyx drifted forward, their form" | | 13 | "Rory muttered, stepping deeper into" | | 14 | "Her hand moved to her" | | 15 | "The moonsilver dagger was impossibly" | | 16 | "Nyx murmured, flowing around a" | | 17 | "The fruit bled thick, amber" | | 18 | "Rory rubbed her left wrist" | | 19 | "A nervous habit, old as" |
| | ratio | 0.827 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The sky above wasn't the dreary, overcast gray of late October, but a rich, suffocating amber that hung low and heavy like melted resin." | | 1 | "Flowers she couldn't name—blossoms with indigo petals that twitched like insect wings—curled around her boots." | | 2 | "Nyx drifted forward, their form blurring at the edges, solidifying into the dark contour of a tall, cloaked figure before smudging back into smoke." | | 3 | "The fruit bled thick, amber juice onto the moss, filling the air with a cloying sweetness that made Rory’s mouth water and her stomach turn all at once." | | 4 | "They moved down a winding descent where the ground gave way from soft, crushed moss to smooth, pale stone that looked like polished bone." | | 5 | "Above them, giant weeping willows hung like curtains of spun silver, their leaves whispering in languages that grated against Rory’s ears." | | 6 | "Some were the cloven tracks of heavy beasts; others were light, pointed impressions that vanished into thin air after a few strides." | | 7 | "Their shadowy hand reached out, hovering an inch above a track that burned with a faint, smoldering orange light." | | 8 | "She tilted her head, her lavender gaze shifting to Nyx, who pooled in the shade of a nearby boulder, silent and watchful." | | 9 | "Isolde smiled, a tragic, razor-thin expression that revealed too-sharp teeth." |
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| 9.62% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said, her voice cutting through the unnatural quiet" | | 1 | "Isolde said, her voice dropping into the lilting cadence of a riddle" | | 2 | "Rory said, her grip tightening on the hilt" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "a voice whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.542 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.308 | | effectiveRatio | 0.308 | |