Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCWH6E6SH0XHSPQPWD5K92K

Run Details

Duration:
12.8s
Cost:
$0.014322
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Ancient oak standing stones loomed through the Richmond fog, their rough surfaces humming with an octave low enough to rattle Rory’s teeth. She pressed her thumb against her left wrist, the crescent-shaped scar thrumming in time with the stone’s vibration. "Step between the second and third pillars," Nyx whispered. The sound rasped like dry autumn leaves scraping across flagstones. Their silhouette drifted inches above the damp grass, violet eyes burning faintly in the murk. "Touch nothing else. The threshold hungers for careless flesh." Rory drew the leaf-shaped dagger from her belt. Moonsilver gleamed along the blade, leaching heat from her fingers until her joints ached. She nudged the warm thumb-sized crimson gem resting against her collarbone. The Heartstone Pendant throbbed, throwing red light over the fog. "Isolde said the path was clear," Rory said. "Isolde speaks in twists that suit her own court," Nyx replied, shadow-fingers lengthening into long, incorporeal tendrils that probed the air between the oaks. "The Fae Grove does not welcome those carrying the taint of Hel, human." Rory took a breath and stepped over the boundary. The fog vanished. Warm, syrupy amber light crashed over her. The chill of London winter dissolved into heavy, humid heat that smelled of crushed sugar cane, overripe plums, and roasted cloves. Rory stumbled onto a path made of polished white bone—not human, but wide, flat vertebrae fitted together like cobblestones. Her ears popped. The ambient roar of traffic from the perimeter road died instantly, replaced by a unsettling harmony: the rustle of emerald leaves that chimed like crystal stemware, and the distant, rhythmic gurgle of a river running thick as honey. "This isn't Richmond Park," Rory said, her eyes wide as she tracked the horizon. Sprawling, terraced vineyards climbed impossibly tall, spire-like cliffs that pierced a sky stained the color of spun gold. Grapes the size of apples hung in heavy, glowing clusters from vines that twined around marble statues of forgotten kings. "The air tastes... dense." "You stand in the borderland where the Grove bleeds into Dymas," Nyx said, pooling into a dense, solid shadow at her left side. Their faint lavender gaze swept the overhead canopy. "The sin of Gluttony rots the edges of the wild places when the Veil grows thin. Look up." Above them, where the canopy of giant wildflowers should have met the sky, massive upside-down gardens hung suspended in the amber air. Soil drifted down in fine, fragrant dust, smelling of cinnamon and dried blood. Rory picked her way along the spine-path, the soles of her boots snapping brittle fossilized cartilage. She held her moonsilver blade low, its icy bite keeping the oppressive heat from swamp-fogging her mind. "The solstice isn't for weeks. Why is the boundary this weak?" "Someone cut a vein," Nyx murmured. They drifted toward a hedge of white roses whose petals leaked a thick, dark nectar. A swarm of glass-winged insects hovered over the blooms, drinking until their bellies swelled and burst with a sickening, wet pop. "Or someone left a door unlatched." A sharp chime echoed through the grove, echoing from the cliffs. Rory halted, her heart slamming against her ribs. She crouched behind a marble pedestal supporting the bust of a horned woman whose mouth had been carved open to serve as a fountain. Clear, effervescent liquid bubbled over the lips, cascading into a basin carved from a single piece of black glass. "Footsteps," Rory whispered. "No," Nyx corrected, their voice flattening into a cool breeze that rustled Rory’s black hair. "Not feet. Claws." Through the tall, blue-stemmed grass at the edge of the vineyard, something moved. It didn't push the stalks aside; it devoured them as it advanced, leaving a wide, black swath of dead soil behind. The crunching sound was methodical, like stone grinding wheat. Rory reached for her pendant. The Heartstone was practically scalding now, casting a harsh, crimson circle over the white bone path. "Put it away," Nyx hissed, dissolving into a flat stain on the path beneath her feet. "The light draws the bottom-feeders of Belphegor’s court." Rory shoved the pendant beneath her collar, wincing as the hot stone bit into her skin. She gripped the cold hilt of Isolde’s blade with both hands. The creature burst through the blue grass into the amber light. It stood five feet high, built like a hound but forged from fused copper and hardened caramel. Steam whistled from vents along its spine, smelling of scorched sugar and copper wire. It had no eyes, only a wide, gaping maw lined with three concentric rings of needle-thin teeth that clicked rhythmically. It sniffed the air, its snout twitching as it caught the scent of the cool moonsilver. "A skimmer," Nyx’s voice echoed from the shadow beneath the beast's belly. "A scavenger from the low kitchens of Dymas. It feeds on magic and fresh meat." The beast let out a high-pitched whistle and lunged. Rory didn't retreat. She dropped low, sliding across the slick bone cobbles as the creature leapt over her. She drove the Fae blade upward, aiming for the soft joint between its shoulder and ribs. The moonsilver cut through the bronze hide like hot steel through fat. Black, syrupy fluid spattered across Rory’s jacket, instantly hardening into brittle, sweet-smelling resin. The beast shrieked—a sound like glass breaking in a metal drum—and crashed onto the path, thrashing as frost spread rapidly from the wound, crystallizing its caramel flesh. Rory scrambled up, wiping her blade on her jeans. The cold metal hissed as it met the hot, sweet blood. "Quickly," Nyx commanded, coalescing back into a tall silhouette beside a archway made of woven willow branches. "The noise will draw the Warden’s hounds, and we are far past the point where human law applies." Rory followed, her boots crunching over the frozen remains of the hound. She stepped through the willow archway and stopped dead. The path ended at the edge of a vast, sunken amphitheater carved into the side of a cliff. Below them, thousands of glowing amber lanterns floated in mid-air, illuminating long, curved tables heaped with impossible feasts. Roast beasts with iridescent scales, towers of translucent pastry that swayed in the breeze, and fountains of liquid silver stretched as far as the eye could see. At the far end of the arena, a rift tore through the air—a jagged, black scar in the amber sky, shimmering like gasoline on water. Earth was visible on the other side: the gray, rain-slicked trees of Richmond, frozen in time. "The Veil," Rory breathed, watching the tear pulse. "It's tearing wider." "Not tearing," Nyx said, leaning over the stone balustrade, their violet eyes reflecting the golden light of the infernal feast below. "It is being pulled apart from this side."
created_at"2026-07-25T14:58:08.46Z" 7/25/2026, 2:58:08 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.52
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.56% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1125
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
28.89% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1125
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"crystal"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"marble"
count2
6
word"oppressive"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count2
8
word"echoing"
count1
9
word"cascading"
count1
10
word"footsteps"
count1
11
word"methodical"
count1
12
word"maw"
count1
13
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"throbbed"
2"chill"
3"crystal"
4"rhythmic"
5"marble"
6"oppressive"
7"echoed"
8"echoing"
9"cascading"
10"footsteps"
11"methodical"
12"maw"
13"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1121
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
60.71% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount952
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.79
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Rory17
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Nyx9
London1
Sprawling1
Through1
Isolde1
Fae1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Pendant"
2"Nyx"
3"Sprawling"
4"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"London"
globalScore0.607
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.892
wordCount1121
matches
0"not human, but wide, flat vertebrae fitted together like cobblestones"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean32.03
std17.25
cv0.539
sampleLengths
040
143
243
38
437
59
63
747
841
956
1049
1135
1244
1348
1411
1551
163
1718
1843
1921
2024
2127
2211
2367
2427
259
2634
2752
2820
2935
3021
3163
3241
3311
3429
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"been carved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs163
matches
0"was practically scalding"
1.76% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences81
ratio0.049
matches
0"Rory stumbled onto a path made of polished white bone—not human, but wide, flat vertebrae fitted together like cobblestones."
1"It didn't push the stalks aside; it devoured them as it advanced, leaving a wide, black swath of dead soil behind."
2"The beast shrieked—a sound like glass breaking in a metal drum—and crashed onto the path, thrashing as frost spread rapidly from the wound, crystallizing its caramel flesh."
3"At the far end of the arena, a rift tore through the air—a jagged, black scar in the amber sky, shimmering like gasoline on water."
76.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount970
adjectiveStacks4
stackExamples
0"warm thumb-sized crimson"
1"massive upside-down gardens"
2"tall, blue-stemmed grass"
3"gray, rain-slicked trees"
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.020618556701030927
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009278350515463918
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean13.84
std6.6
cv0.477
sampleLengths
022
118
29
310
415
59
68
714
811
910
108
1124
1213
139
143
157
1621
1719
183
1938
2014
2118
2220
234
2423
258
2618
2722
2813
2916
3017
3111
326
3315
3421
356
3611
378
3824
3919
403
4115
423
4313
4421
459
465
4716
4816
498
67.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.43209876543209874
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners35
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences65
matches
0"She pressed her thumb against"
1"Their silhouette drifted inches above"
2"She nudged the warm thumb-sized"
3"Her ears popped."
4"Their faint lavender gaze swept"
5"She held her moonsilver blade"
6"They drifted toward a hedge"
7"She crouched behind a marble"
8"It didn't push the stalks"
9"She gripped the cold hilt"
10"It stood five feet high,"
11"It had no eyes, only"
12"It sniffed the air, its"
13"She dropped low, sliding across"
14"She drove the Fae blade"
15"She stepped through the willow"
ratio0.246
36.92% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences65
matches
0"She pressed her thumb against"
1"The sound rasped like dry"
2"Their silhouette drifted inches above"
3"Rory drew the leaf-shaped dagger"
4"Moonsilver gleamed along the blade,"
5"She nudged the warm thumb-sized"
6"The Heartstone Pendant throbbed, throwing"
7"Nyx replied, shadow-fingers lengthening into"
8"Rory took a breath and"
9"The fog vanished."
10"The chill of London winter"
11"Rory stumbled onto a path"
12"Her ears popped."
13"The ambient roar of traffic"
14"Rory said, her eyes wide"
15"Grapes the size of apples"
16"Nyx said, pooling into a"
17"Their faint lavender gaze swept"
18"Soil drifted down in fine,"
19"Rory picked her way along"
ratio0.846
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The chill of London winter dissolved into heavy, humid heat that smelled of crushed sugar cane, overripe plums, and roasted cloves."
1"Grapes the size of apples hung in heavy, glowing clusters from vines that twined around marble statues of forgotten kings."
2"It had no eyes, only a wide, gaping maw lined with three concentric rings of needle-thin teeth that clicked rhythmically."
3"Roast beasts with iridescent scales, towers of translucent pastry that swayed in the breeze, and fountains of liquid silver stretched as far as the eye could se…"
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory said, her eyes wide as she tracked the horizon"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
2"Rory whispered (whisper)"
3"Nyx corrected (correct)"
4"Nyx hissed (hiss)"
5"Rory breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.44
leniency0.88
rawRatio0.545
effectiveRatio0.48
77.7128%