Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCWHM8SPYA1FM9C3BS8E5V6

Run Details

Duration:
12.7s
Cost:
$0.015078
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the soot-stained brickwork of Soho, slicking the cobblestones into mirror-bright ribbons of sodium light. Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted her grip on her sidearm, her boots pounding a brutal rhythm against the pavement. Thirty yards ahead, Tomás Herrera sprinted through the downpour. His dark curls plastered against his skull, olive skin glistening under the haze of the streetlamps. He ducked left, cutting hard around a row of overflowing dustbins. "Stop running, Herrera!" Quinn’s voice cracked through the storm, sharp and devoid of warmth. "You make this ten times worse every step you take!" Herrera didn't slow. He shoved past a couple sheltering under an umbrella, sending the pair stumbling into the gutter. He rounded the corner onto Camden High Street, his worn leather jacket flapping wildly behind him like a broken wing. Quinn vaulted over a puddle, the impact jarring her knees. Eighteen years on the force taught a woman how to read a runner's stride. Herrera was panicked, but his movements held purpose. He wasn't just fleeing; he was navigating. A Saint Christopher medallion swung wildly from his neck, catching the ambient glare of a distinctive green neon sign buzzing above *The Raven's Nest*. For a second, Quinn thought he would bolt inside the bar. Instead, he veered down a narrow service alley choked with steam from a bakery vent. She hit the mouth of the alley just in time to see a heavy steel door slam shut. Quinn slid to a halt, her chest heaving, rain trickling into her eyes. She wiped her forehead with the back of her glove, her worn leather watch catching the faint light—11:42 PM. The night air smelled of ozone, stagnant sewage, and something thick and metallic that tasted like copper on the back of her tongue. She approached the door. A rusted iron latch hung loose. No lock. Quinn took a breath, drawing her weapon, and kicked the steel panel open. The door swung inward with a shriek of ungreased hinges, revealing a staircase plunging straight into the gloom. Damp cold bloomed up from the abyss, smelling of wet slate and old subterranean moss. The footsteps below were fast, rhythmic, echoing off tiled walls. He was heading down into the abandoned Tube network. She unclipped her heavy flash torch, clicked the beam into existence, and stepped onto the top stair. "You're stepping out of your jurisdiction, Detective!" Herrera’s voice bounced up the stairwell, muffled by the sheer depth. "London Metropolitan covers underground too, Tommy!" She descended three steps at a time, keeping her back flush against the curved wall. "Stand down!" "Not this underground!" The stairs gave way to a long, tiled passenger tunnel, its yellowed ceramic walls stained with decades of grime. Broken Victorian pipes hissed along the ceiling, dripping foul water onto the concrete. The track bed stretched ahead into absolute blackness, but fifty yards down, a strange, amber luminescence pulsed from an open maintenance access archway. Herrera stood right at the threshold of that glow. He held up his left hand, revealing the deep knife scar carved into his forearm. His right hand dipped into his pocket and pulled out a jagged piece of polished ivory—a bone token. "Don't do it," Quinn said, levelling her pistol at his chest. Her target sight sat steady between his shoulder blades. "Walk back to me. Talk to me about Morris. Tell me what happened three years ago, and we can settle this in an interview room." Herrera looked at her, his warm brown eyes filled with a bizarre mix of pity and terror. He didn't drop the token. "You think you're chasing a crook, Harlow," Herrera said, his Spanish accent thick with exhaustion. "You're chasing a ghost. And if you walk through this door without knowing the rules, you won't like what answers you find." "I don't need rules, Herrera. I have a warrant." "A piece of paper doesn't mean anything to the people down here." He pressed the bone token against a brass plate bolted to the brick arch. The air shuddered. A sound like grinding millstones echoed through the tunnel as the spatial pressure plunged, popping Quinn’s ears. The ambient noise of the rain overhead cut off instantly, replaced by a low, throbbing murmur of hundreds of overlapping voices, clinking glass, and exotic, discordant music. The amber light flared, thick as molten honey, casting long, distorted shadows across the track bed. Herrera stepped backward through the arch and vanished into the market. Quinn froze at the threshold. Her instincts screamed at her to fall back. This wasn't standard police work. The atmospheric shift, the impossible soundscape echoing from a dead Tube station—it reeked of the same unnatural phenomena that had swallowed DS Morris three years ago. She remembered the cold, empty room, the scent of copper, and the total lack of blood or bodies. If she went through that archway, she left behind the safety of the law, her radio, her backup. She was walking into a hornets' nest without armor. She looked down at her service weapon. Standard issue 9mm. A tool built for a world that made sense. "Damn it," she muttered under her breath. Quinn tightened her grip on her gun, lowered it to a low-ready stance, and crossed the threshold into the Veil Market. The shift was instantaneous. The dank concrete tunnel gave way to a sprawling cavernous concourse that once belonged to Camden Town station. Now, it bustled with impossible life. Stalls constructed from salvaged iron, velvet drapes, and bleached bone lined the platforms. Overhead, floating lanterns burned with violet and green flames, casting eerie illumination over crowds of figures draped in heavy cloaks, silk tunics, and tailor-made suits that looked decades out of date. The air was heavy with the stench of dried herbs, burning sulfur, and raw, butchered meat. Quinn pushed through a cluster of tall, gaunt figures wearing bird-beaked masks. They turned to track her movement, their eyes glittering through the eyeholes with an unnatural, luminous intensity. She ignored them, her eyes locked on a flash of a wet leather jacket dodging between two stallholders selling bottled glowing liquids. "Herrera!" she shouted, shoving past a merchant displaying jars of writhing, iridescent centipedes. The former paramedic glanced back, his face pale under the violet lantern light. "You really are a stubborn fool, Quinn!" He turned hard right, darting into a narrow aisle framed by hanging carpets that reeked of old incense. Quinn pursued, her tactical boots slapping loudly against the stone, completely out of place among the soft-footed patrons of the Market. A vendor—a woman with ash-grey skin and teeth filed to needle points—snapped her jaws at Quinn as she passed. Quinn didn't flinch; she raised her badge in her left hand, keeping her right on her gun. "Metropolitan Police! Out of the way!" The grey-skinned woman laughed, a sound like dry leaves scraping across pavement. "The King's law stops at the bone, little bird." Herrera was gaining ground, weaving through the labyrinthine aisles with the ease of someone who frequented the black market. He ducked under a heavy tapestry guarding a private alcove. Quinn reached the tapestry and yanked it aside. Herrera was cornered. The alcove was a dead end, filled with wooden crates stamped with sigils she couldn't decipher. He backed against the far wall, his hands raised, his chest heaving as he tried to catch his breath. "End of the line, Tommy," Quinn said, stepping into the alcove. She didn't raise the gun, but her finger hovered over the guard. "No more running. No more secret doors." Herrera wiped a mix of sweat and rainwater from his chin, his Saint Christopher medallion clinking against his collarbone. "You don't understand what you're standing in the middle of, Harlow. If they see that badge, if they realize what you are—" "I know what I am," Quinn said, her voice dropping into a dangerous, icy register. "I'm the detective who's going to find out who killed Morris. And you're the off-the-books medic who patched up the bastard who did it."
created_at"2026-07-25T14:58:22.625Z" 7/25/2026, 2:58:22 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.909
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.56% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1344
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1344
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"pounding"
count1
1
word"glistening"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"navigating"
count1
4
word"gloom"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"rhythmic"
count1
7
word"echoing"
count2
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"standard"
count2
11
word"constructed"
count1
12
word"velvet"
count1
13
word"silk"
count1
14
word"intensity"
count1
15
word"tapestry"
count2
highlights
0"pounding"
1"glistening"
2"warmth"
3"navigating"
4"gloom"
5"footsteps"
6"rhythmic"
7"echoing"
8"pulsed"
9"echoed"
10"standard"
11"constructed"
12"velvet"
13"silk"
14"intensity"
15"tapestry"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was heavy with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences86
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords3
totalWords1339
ratio0.002
matches
0"The Raven's Nest"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1138
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.49
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn17
Tomás1
Herrera11
Camden2
High1
Street1
Saint2
Christopher2
Raven1
Tube2
Victorian1
Spanish1
Morris1
Veil1
Market2
Town1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Raven"
7"Victorian"
8"Morris"
places
0"Soho"
1"Camden"
2"High"
3"Street"
4"Veil"
5"Market"
6"Town"
globalScore0.753
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"tasted like copper on the back of her ton"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1339
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"through that archway"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean31.88
std21.5
cv0.674
sampleLengths
071
124
239
389
418
555
612
713
852
917
1018
1123
123
1355
1442
1545
1622
1737
189
1926
2063
2111
225
2357
2427
2519
267
2721
2872
2916
3051
3113
3220
3375
346
3521
3629
378
3838
3930
4041
4139
97.10% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences86
matches
0"was panicked"
1"was cornered"
19.82% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs185
matches
0"was navigating"
1"wasn't just fleeing"
2"was heading"
3"was walking"
4"was gaining"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences98
ratio0.061
matches
0"He wasn't just fleeing; he was navigating."
1"She wiped her forehead with the back of her glove, her worn leather watch catching the faint light—11:42 PM."
2"His right hand dipped into his pocket and pulled out a jagged piece of polished ivory—a bone token."
3"The atmospheric shift, the impossible soundscape echoing from a dead Tube station—it reeked of the same unnatural phenomena that had swallowed DS Morris three years ago."
4"A vendor—a woman with ash-grey skin and teeth filed to needle points—snapped her jaws at Quinn as she passed."
5"Quinn didn't flinch; she raised her badge in her left hand, keeping her right on her gun."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount796
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.01256281407035176
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005025125628140704
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean13.66
std6.53
cv0.478
sampleLengths
017
118
29
316
411
514
610
73
816
920
1010
1114
128
137
1424
1511
1615
1718
1813
1919
2023
214
226
232
2413
2518
2615
2710
289
2917
3018
3121
322
333
3419
3513
3623
379
3815
3918
4011
419
4225
4317
445
4515
4622
479
4826
493
52.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.35714285714285715
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners35
39.22% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"Instead, he veered down a"
ratio0.012
88.24% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences85
matches
0"His dark curls plastered against"
1"He ducked left, cutting hard"
2"He shoved past a couple"
3"He rounded the corner onto"
4"He wasn't just fleeing; he"
5"She hit the mouth of"
6"She wiped her forehead with"
7"She approached the door."
8"He was heading down into"
9"She unclipped her heavy flash"
10"She descended three steps at"
11"He held up his left"
12"His right hand dipped into"
13"Her target sight sat steady"
14"He didn't drop the token."
15"He pressed the bone token"
16"Her instincts screamed at her"
17"She remembered the cold, empty"
18"She was walking into a"
19"She looked down at her"
ratio0.329
18.82% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences85
matches
0"Rain lashed against the soot-stained"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted her"
2"His dark curls plastered against"
3"He ducked left, cutting hard"
4"Quinn’s voice cracked through the"
5"Herrera didn't slow."
6"He shoved past a couple"
7"He rounded the corner onto"
8"Quinn vaulted over a puddle,"
9"Herrera was panicked, but his"
10"He wasn't just fleeing; he"
11"A Saint Christopher medallion swung"
12"She hit the mouth of"
13"Quinn slid to a halt,"
14"She wiped her forehead with"
15"The night air smelled of"
16"She approached the door."
17"A rusted iron latch hung"
18"Quinn took a breath, drawing"
19"The door swung inward with"
ratio0.882
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences85
matches
0"If she went through that"
1"Now, it bustled with impossible"
ratio0.024
61.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"A Saint Christopher medallion swung wildly from his neck, catching the ambient glare of a distinctive green neon sign buzzing above *The Raven's Nest*."
1"Quinn slid to a halt, her chest heaving, rain trickling into her eyes."
2"The atmospheric shift, the impossible soundscape echoing from a dead Tube station—it reeked of the same unnatural phenomena that had swallowed DS Morris three y…"
3"Overhead, floating lanterns burned with violet and green flames, casting eerie illumination over crowds of figures draped in heavy cloaks, silk tunics, and tail…"
4"He turned hard right, darting into a narrow aisle framed by hanging carpets that reeked of old incense."
5"Herrera was gaining ground, weaving through the labyrinthine aisles with the ease of someone who frequented the black market."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Herrera said, his Spanish accent thick with exhaustion"
1"Quinn said, her voice dropping into a dangerous, icy register"
13.64% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"He pressed (press)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"she shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.318
leniency0.636
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.273
76.8250%