Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCWJ37DVYPYRM2QBZQE847P

Run Details

Duration:
8.9s
Cost:
$0.004391
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt always stuck, catching on the warped timber frame before sliding home with a heavy, protesting thither. Rory braced her palm against the peeling paint of the door, throwing her weight into it just as she heard the latch give way from the outside. The door swung inward, and the stale air of the hallway rushed out, smelling faintly of old curry spice and damp wool. Standing on the threshold, framed by the harsh fluorescent hum of the Brick Lane landing, was Lucien. He looked entirely out of place, yet infuriatingly at home. His tailored charcoal suit clung to his shoulders with the effortless precision of bespoke Italian wool, utterly uncreased despite the November drizzle plastered against the London panes outside. In his right hand, he leaned on his ivory-handled cane, the polished grip catching the dim overhead bulb. He looked up, his mismatched eyes fixing on her—one a clear, burning amber, the other an abyss of absolute, lightless black. Neither of them moved for three long breaths. You’ve got nerve, Rory said, her voice dropping into that cool, level register she reserved for difficult clients and worse memories. She didn't drop her hand from the doorframe, effectively blocking the entrance. What part of stay out of my periphery did your demonic lineage fail to translate? Lucien offered a slow, maddeningly familiar smirk, the corner of his mouth ticking upward just enough to show the faint edge of a canine that was a fraction too sharp to be entirely human. Bonjour, Rory. It is cold out, and your door takes entirely too much persuasion to open. May I come in, or are we going to reenact the siege of Troy on a landing that smells strongly of stale turmeric? We aren't reenacting anything, because you aren't coming in. Rory let her gaze drift past him, down the narrow, dingy corridor, as if checking to see if he’d brought an audience. You know where the tube station is. Go back to Mayfair. Or Marseille. I don't really care which cardinal direction you choose, as long as it involves a moving vehicle. Lucien sighed, a theatrical, chest-heaving performance that didn't quite reach his eyes. Those amber and black depths were entirely too sharp, cataloging the flour dust on the knees of her jeans, the slight dark circles under her bright blue eyes, the way her straight black hair was hastily clipped back from her face. You look thin, he murmured, the teasing edge slipping out of his voice, replaced by something lower, rougher around the edges. I look fine. You look like you are surviving on cold tea and spite. Which, to be fair, is your natural baseline, but usually you have more color in your cheeks. Rory tightened her grip on the wood. Every nerve ending in her body felt suddenly raw, humming with a frantic, unwelcome electricity. It had been eight months since they last spoke—eight months since a midnight deal gone sideways in an abandoned underground station near Soho had left her bleeding on a concrete floor while Lucien calmly traded a pocketful of forged talismans for their lives, treating her peril as a calculated risk on a spreadsheet. She had walked out before the adrenaline even faded from her bloodstream, catching the first cab to Paddington and refusing to look back. And now here he was, smelling of rain and expensive cedarwood, looking at her as if those eight months hadn't been an agonizing exercise in reconstruction. I don't have time for this, Lucien. I'm expecting a delivery, she lied smoothly, tilting her chin up. From the Golden Empress? At this hour? Lucien raised an eyebrow, shifting his weight against his cane. I doubt Mr. Cheung sends his delivery girls out past midnight on a Tuesday. Besides, Ptolemy misses me. Don't bring the cat into this. Ptolemy hates everyone. He purred when I scratched behind his ears last April. That was bribery, and you know it. You gave him imported smoked salmon. Good cat. Good taste. Lucien took half a step forward, closing the distance between them until Rory could feel the faint, unnatural chill radiating off him—the subtle, subterranean drop in temperature that always accompanied his proximity. Let me in, Rory. I did not cross the city in the rain to argue through a four-inch gap in your security. Why are you here? The defensiveness cracked, just a fraction, letting a ragged edge of exhaustion bleed through. Why now? Why this door? Because, Lucien said softly, his mismatched gaze dropping to her face, locking onto hers with an intensity that made her breath hitch, I tried not to be. For two hundred and forty days, I told myself you were better off. That the brick wall you put up between us was for the best. And? she whispered against her better judgment. And I was lying to myself. The silence that rushed in to fill the cramped hallway was heavy, suffocating with unsaid things. The history between them—the late-night research sessions surrounded by Eva’s towering stacks of grimoires, the quiet drinks in Silas' bar downstairs where they pretended they were just colleagues, the reckless, heat-soaked mistakes they had made in the dark—rushed back, crashing against her ribs like a tide she had spent months holding at bay. You traded my safety for a leverage play, Lucien, she said, her voice dropping to a harsh rasp. You stood there in the dark and you let them think I was expendable so you could secure the eastern shipping lanes. It was a bluff, he said instantly, the defense sharp and immediate, a flicker of genuine panic touching his amber eye. You know how those negotiations work. If I had shown a single ounce of care for you, they would have smelled the blood in the water. I had to look cold. I had to look like I didn't care. And you played the part terrifyingly well. Because I had to keep you alive. Lucien finally lost his patience, the polished veneer cracking entirely. He reached out, his gloved fingers catching the edge of the door, not pushing it open with force, but simply resting there, a warm anchor against the chill of the hall. Do you think it was easy? Walking away from that station knowing you hated me? Knowing I had bought your safety with your trust? It's a high price to pay, she breathed, her heart hammering a frantic rhythm against her ribs. I know, he murmured. He leaned in just an inch closer, the scent of him—rain, cedar, and something faintly ozone-sharp—filling her senses. I’m here to pay the interest on the debt, Rory. Let me in. Let me explain. Or yell at me. Throw a book at my head. Do whatever you need to do, but stop keeping me on the other side of this door. Rory looked at him for a long, agonizing moment. She saw the tension in the set of his jaw, the genuine uncertainty in eyes that usually held all the answers. The anger that had sustained her for months felt suddenly brittle, like dried leaves crushed underfoot. With a slow, shaky breath, she let go of the doorframe and stepped back into the shadows of the cramped hallway. You have five minutes, she said, her voice trembling despite her best efforts to steady it. And if I don't like what you have to say, the cane goes out the window first, and you go second. Lucien stepped across the threshold, kicking the door shut behind him with a quiet, solid click. A small, self-deprecating smile touched his lips as he dropped his hat onto the small entry table. Fair terms, he said, his gaze never leaving hers as the distance between them finally vanished. I wouldn't expect anything less from you.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:58:37.941Z" 7/25/2026, 2:58:37 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1309
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count2
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"really"
2"suddenly"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.70% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1309
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"effortless"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"depths"
count1
4
word"peril"
count1
5
word"calculated"
count1
6
word"eyebrow"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"chill"
count2
9
word"intensity"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"flicker"
count1
12
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"effortless"
2"familiar"
3"depths"
4"peril"
5"calculated"
6"eyebrow"
7"could feel"
8"chill"
9"intensity"
10"silence"
11"flicker"
12"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
8.93% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount9
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences96
filterMatches
0"know"
1"look"
2"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen57
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1303
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions8
matches
0"You look thin, he murmured, the teasing edge slipping out of his voice, replaced by something lower, rougher around the …"
1"Because, Lucien said softly, his mismatched gaze dropping to her face, locking onto hers with an intensity that made her…"
2"For two hundred and forty days, I told myself you were better off."
3"You traded my safety for a leverage play, Lucien, she said, her voice dropping to a harsh rasp."
4"It was a bluff, he said instantly, the defense sharp and immediate, a flicker of genuine panic touching his amber eye."
5"I know, he murmured."
6"You have five minutes, she said, her voice trembling despite her best efforts to steady it."
7"Fair terms, he said, his gaze never leaving hers as the distance between them finally vanished."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount1268
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity0.87
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien11
Italian1
November1
London1
Rory9
Troy1
Mayfair1
Marseille1
Soho1
Paddington1
Golden1
Empress1
Mr1
Tuesday1
Ptolemy2
April1
Eva1
You9
Let3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Rory"
2"Troy"
3"Mr"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Eva"
6"You"
7"Let"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
3"Mayfair"
4"Marseille"
5"Soho"
6"Paddington"
7"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
83.33% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if checking to see if he’d brought an audience"
1"quite reach his eyes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.767
wordCount1303
matches
0"not pushing it open with force, but simply resting there, a warm anchor against the chill of the"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"landing that smells"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean36.19
std23.23
cv0.642
sampleLengths
046
139
277
38
448
534
639
761
853
921
103
1128
1298
1326
1418
1535
169
1710
1813
1958
2023
2153
227
236
2469
2540
2660
277
2872
2917
3065
3146
3221
3337
3433
3523
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs216
matches
0"was, smelling"
1"was lying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences96
ratio0.052
matches
0"He looked up, his mismatched eyes fixing on her—one a clear, burning amber, the other an abyss of absolute, lightless black."
1"It had been eight months since they last spoke—eight months since a midnight deal gone sideways in an abandoned underground station near Soho had left her bleeding on a concrete floor while Lucien calmly traded a pocketful of forged talismans for their lives, treating her peril as a calculated risk on a spreadsheet."
2"Lucien took half a step forward, closing the distance between them until Rory could feel the faint, unnatural chill radiating off him—the subtle, subterranean drop in temperature that always accompanied his proximity."
3"The history between them—the late-night research sessions surrounded by Eva’s towering stacks of grimoires, the quiet drinks in Silas' bar downstairs where they pretended they were just colleagues, the reckless, heat-soaked mistakes they had made in the dark—rushed back, crashing against her ribs like a tide she had spent months holding at bay."
4"He leaned in just an inch closer, the scent of him—rain, cedar, and something faintly ozone-sharp—filling her senses."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount855
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.03391812865497076
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.019883040935672516
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean13.57
std10.18
cv0.75
sampleLengths
019
127
222
317
410
528
618
721
88
921
1012
1115
1234
132
1414
1523
169
1722
187
194
202
2117
2212
2341
2421
253
2611
2717
287
2915
3053
3123
3226
337
3411
354
363
3710
383
3911
404
416
423
4310
447
456
462
472
4832
494
65.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4375
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners42
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
64.44% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences90
matches
0"He looked entirely out of"
1"His tailored charcoal suit clung"
2"He looked up, his mismatched"
3"You’ve got nerve, Rory said,"
4"She didn't drop her hand"
5"It is cold out, and"
6"We aren't reenacting anything, because"
7"You know where the tube"
8"I don't really care which"
9"You look thin, he murmured,"
10"I look fine."
11"You look like you are"
12"It had been eight months"
13"She had walked out before"
14"I don't have time for"
15"I'm expecting a delivery, she"
16"I doubt Mr."
17"He purred when I scratched"
18"You gave him imported smoked"
19"I did not cross the"
ratio0.389
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences90
matches
0"The third deadbolt always stuck,"
1"Rory braced her palm against"
2"The door swung inward, and"
3"He looked entirely out of"
4"His tailored charcoal suit clung"
5"He looked up, his mismatched"
6"Neither of them moved for"
7"You’ve got nerve, Rory said,"
8"She didn't drop her hand"
9"Lucien offered a slow, maddeningly"
10"It is cold out, and"
11"We aren't reenacting anything, because"
12"Rory let her gaze drift"
13"You know where the tube"
14"I don't really care which"
15"Lucien sighed, a theatrical, chest-heaving"
16"Those amber and black depths"
17"You look thin, he murmured,"
18"I look fine."
19"You look like you are"
ratio0.656
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences90
matches
0"Because, Lucien said softly, his"
1"If I had shown a"
2"Because I had to keep"
ratio0.033
76.72% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Lucien offered a slow, maddeningly familiar smirk, the corner of his mouth ticking upward just enough to show the faint edge of a canine that was a fraction too…"
1"Lucien sighed, a theatrical, chest-heaving performance that didn't quite reach his eyes."
2"She had walked out before the adrenaline even faded from her bloodstream, catching the first cab to Paddington and refusing to look back."
3"And now here he was, smelling of rain and expensive cedarwood, looking at her as if those eight months hadn't been an agonizing exercise in reconstruction."
4"Because, Lucien said softly, his mismatched gaze dropping to her face, locking onto hers with an intensity that made her breath hitch, I tried not to be."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.7552%