| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 80.90% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1309 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "utterly" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 42.70% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1309 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "effortless" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "depths" | | 4 | "peril" | | 5 | "calculated" | | 6 | "eyebrow" | | 7 | "could feel" | | 8 | "chill" | | 9 | "intensity" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "flicker" | | 12 | "tension" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 8.93% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 9 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 57 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1303 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "You look thin, he murmured, the teasing edge slipping out of his voice, replaced by something lower, rougher around the …" | | 1 | "Because, Lucien said softly, his mismatched gaze dropping to her face, locking onto hers with an intensity that made her…" | | 2 | "For two hundred and forty days, I told myself you were better off." | | 3 | "You traded my safety for a leverage play, Lucien, she said, her voice dropping to a harsh rasp." | | 4 | "It was a bluff, he said instantly, the defense sharp and immediate, a flicker of genuine panic touching his amber eye." | | 5 | "I know, he murmured." | | 6 | "You have five minutes, she said, her voice trembling despite her best efforts to steady it." | | 7 | "Fair terms, he said, his gaze never leaving hers as the distance between them finally vanished." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 50 | | wordCount | 1268 | | uniqueNames | 21 | | maxNameDensity | 0.87 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Lucien | 11 | | Italian | 1 | | November | 1 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | Troy | 1 | | Mayfair | 1 | | Marseille | 1 | | Soho | 1 | | Paddington | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Mr | 1 | | Tuesday | 1 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | April | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | You | 9 | | Let | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Lucien" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Troy" | | 3 | "Mr" | | 4 | "Ptolemy" | | 5 | "Eva" | | 6 | "You" | | 7 | "Let" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Mayfair" | | 4 | "Marseille" | | 5 | "Soho" | | 6 | "Paddington" | | 7 | "Golden" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 83.33% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if checking to see if he’d brought an audience" | | 1 | "quite reach his eyes" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.767 | | wordCount | 1303 | | matches | | 0 | "not pushing it open with force, but simply resting there, a warm anchor against the chill of the" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 36.19 | | std | 23.23 | | cv | 0.642 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 39 | | 2 | 77 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 34 | | 6 | 39 | | 7 | 61 | | 8 | 53 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 98 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 35 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 58 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 53 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 69 | | 25 | 40 | | 26 | 60 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 72 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 65 | | 31 | 46 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 37 | | 34 | 33 | | 35 | 23 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 216 | | matches | | 0 | "was, smelling" | | 1 | "was lying" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 96 | | ratio | 0.052 | | matches | | 0 | "He looked up, his mismatched eyes fixing on her—one a clear, burning amber, the other an abyss of absolute, lightless black." | | 1 | "It had been eight months since they last spoke—eight months since a midnight deal gone sideways in an abandoned underground station near Soho had left her bleeding on a concrete floor while Lucien calmly traded a pocketful of forged talismans for their lives, treating her peril as a calculated risk on a spreadsheet." | | 2 | "Lucien took half a step forward, closing the distance between them until Rory could feel the faint, unnatural chill radiating off him—the subtle, subterranean drop in temperature that always accompanied his proximity." | | 3 | "The history between them—the late-night research sessions surrounded by Eva’s towering stacks of grimoires, the quiet drinks in Silas' bar downstairs where they pretended they were just colleagues, the reckless, heat-soaked mistakes they had made in the dark—rushed back, crashing against her ribs like a tide she had spent months holding at bay." | | 4 | "He leaned in just an inch closer, the scent of him—rain, cedar, and something faintly ozone-sharp—filling her senses." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 855 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.03391812865497076 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.019883040935672516 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 96 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 96 | | mean | 13.57 | | std | 10.18 | | cv | 0.75 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 41 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 53 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 32 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 65.63% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.4375 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 64.44% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "He looked entirely out of" | | 1 | "His tailored charcoal suit clung" | | 2 | "He looked up, his mismatched" | | 3 | "You’ve got nerve, Rory said," | | 4 | "She didn't drop her hand" | | 5 | "It is cold out, and" | | 6 | "We aren't reenacting anything, because" | | 7 | "You know where the tube" | | 8 | "I don't really care which" | | 9 | "You look thin, he murmured," | | 10 | "I look fine." | | 11 | "You look like you are" | | 12 | "It had been eight months" | | 13 | "She had walked out before" | | 14 | "I don't have time for" | | 15 | "I'm expecting a delivery, she" | | 16 | "I doubt Mr." | | 17 | "He purred when I scratched" | | 18 | "You gave him imported smoked" | | 19 | "I did not cross the" |
| | ratio | 0.389 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt always stuck," | | 1 | "Rory braced her palm against" | | 2 | "The door swung inward, and" | | 3 | "He looked entirely out of" | | 4 | "His tailored charcoal suit clung" | | 5 | "He looked up, his mismatched" | | 6 | "Neither of them moved for" | | 7 | "You’ve got nerve, Rory said," | | 8 | "She didn't drop her hand" | | 9 | "Lucien offered a slow, maddeningly" | | 10 | "It is cold out, and" | | 11 | "We aren't reenacting anything, because" | | 12 | "Rory let her gaze drift" | | 13 | "You know where the tube" | | 14 | "I don't really care which" | | 15 | "Lucien sighed, a theatrical, chest-heaving" | | 16 | "Those amber and black depths" | | 17 | "You look thin, he murmured," | | 18 | "I look fine." | | 19 | "You look like you are" |
| | ratio | 0.656 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "Because, Lucien said softly, his" | | 1 | "If I had shown a" | | 2 | "Because I had to keep" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 76.72% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien offered a slow, maddeningly familiar smirk, the corner of his mouth ticking upward just enough to show the faint edge of a canine that was a fraction too…" | | 1 | "Lucien sighed, a theatrical, chest-heaving performance that didn't quite reach his eyes." | | 2 | "She had walked out before the adrenaline even faded from her bloodstream, catching the first cab to Paddington and refusing to look back." | | 3 | "And now here he was, smelling of rain and expensive cedarwood, looking at her as if those eight months hadn't been an agonizing exercise in reconstruction." | | 4 | "Because, Lucien said softly, his mismatched gaze dropping to her face, locking onto hers with an intensity that made her breath hitch, I tried not to be." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |