Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCWK2WG9BMKT6KMM145WWMH

Run Details

Duration:
18.0s
Cost:
$0.019457
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked into place with a dry heavy thud, and Rory paused, her fingers still rested on the burnished brass of the turn-knob. She had barely dragged herself up the narrow staircase above the curry house, the heavy scent of cardamom and fried onions clinging to the threads of her jacket. Rain was lashing against the glass down in the alley, a steady, rhythmic London deluge that made the old floorboards groan underfoot. Then came the knock. It wasn't the frantic, three-beat rattle of Eva returning because she’d forgotten her keys again, nor was it the heavy-palmed thumping of the landlord coming to complain about the hot water. It was three slow, deliberate taps of iron against wood. Rory froze. Her heart gave a sudden, hard kick against her ribs. She knew that rhythm. She had heard it echoing on the cobblestones outside the Golden Empress, heard it tapping a soft, impatient cadence against the worn leather of booth seats in Silas’ basement bar. She reached down, her thumb instinctively tracing the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, pressing until the pale line turned white under her skin. Slowly, she turned the top deadbolt back. Then the middle. Then the bottom. When she pulled the door inward, Lucien Moreau was standing under the weak yellow glow of the hallway bulb. He hadn't changed. The rain had misted his slicked-back platinum hair, turning it into a sheet of pale silver under the light, but not a single strand was out of place. His charcoal suit was immaculate, tailored so precisely to his broad shoulders that it looked like armor. In his right hand, he held the ivory-handled cane, the polished bone gleaming beneath the sheen of water. His heterochromatic eyes—one bright, piercing amber, the other as black and vast as an unlit well—locked onto hers. "Rory," he said. His voice was a low, smooth rasp, laced with the velvet drag of his Marseille accent. "You're tracking water onto the mat," she said. It was a stupid line, defensive and thin, but it was all she could muster to bridge the sudden, suffocating gap between them. Lucien took a half-step forward, his eyes sweeping over her face, taking in the faint shadows under her bright blue eyes, the damp strands of her black hair clinging to her neck, the oversized jumper she wore to keep out the chill of Eva’s drafty flat. "A warm welcome. As charming as ever." "You don't get a welcome at all," Rory said, though she didn't close the door. She couldn't. Her feet felt pinned to the floorboards. "It's eleven o'clock on a Tuesday, Lucien. What are you doing here?" "May I come in?" "No." "It is pouring, *chérie*." "I have a coat rack. You have a driver." She leaned against the doorframe, crossing her arms, trying to harness the sharp, cool-headed instinct that usually kept her grounded when her life descended into chaos. But Lucien had always been the exception to her rules. "We said everything we needed to say three weeks ago at the docks." "You said everything," Lucien corrected softly. "I listened. There is a distinct difference." Before she could push the door closed, a fat, striped shadow darted past her ankles. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, rubbed his heavy flank against Lucien’s leather-clad calf, letting out a loud, traitorous purr. Lucien glanced down, the corner of his mouth twitching into a faint, dark smile that hit Rory like a sudden drop in temperature. He bent slightly, extending two gloved fingers to scratch the cat right behind the ears. Ptolemy leaned into it instantly. "Traitors, the lot of you," Rory muttered under her breath. "Animals have an instinct for quality," Lucien said. He lifted his head, those mismatched eyes catching hers again. The playfulness vanished, replaced by an intensity that made the air in the cramped doorway feel heavy, electric. "I need twenty minutes, Rory. That is all. If you wish me to leave after that, I will walk out the door and I will not return unless you call for me." She hated how easily he offered terms, how carefully he parsed his words like a lawyer negotiating a treaty. She hated even more that she believed him. Rory took a step back, opening the door wide enough for him to pass. "Twenty minutes. Track mud on the rugs and I’ll throw you out myself." Lucien stepped into the flat, his presence immediately shrinking the room. The space was already crowded—towers of Eva’s research notes leaned precariously against the walls, leather-bound books stacked three-deep on the coffee table, scrolls tucked into old brass vases. Lucien fit into the clutter like a wolf in a birdcage, entirely too large, too lethal, and too sleek for the domestic decay around him. He set his umbrella in the corner and leaned his cane against the side of the armchair, though he didn't sit. He unbuttoned his jacket, revealing the dark silk vest beneath, his movements fluid and deliberate. "Nice to see you've kept up with your reading," he remarked, glancing at a thick volume on demonic heraldry lying open on the sofa. "It's Eva's," Rory said, closing the front door and locking the deadbolts once more—a habit born of necessity, of a life spent running from things that wished her harm. "And don't act like you came here to inspect the library. Speak." Lucien turned to face her. He stepped closer, stopping just outside the circle of her personal space, though the heat radiating off him reached her anyway. Up close, she could smell him—rain, expensive wool, and that subtle, unnerving scent of ozone and clove that belonged entirely to his demon blood. "Evan was seen in Soho tonight," Lucien said flatly. The room seemed to tilt. The name struck Rory like a physical blow, sending a cold, sick shudder straight down her spine. Her left wrist began to throb with a phantom ache. "What?" "My contacts in the West End spotted him at a private club off Greek Street," Lucien continued, his voice dropping an octave, losing its performative charm. It was flat, hard, cold as iron. "He is looking for you, Rory. He has been asking questions among the lower-tier dealers." Rory swallowed hard, her throat suddenly dry. She forced her shoulders back, forcing her voice to stay steady. "I left him in Cardiff. I covered my tracks." "Not well enough for a man with his resources. Or his desperation." Lucien took another step forward, closing the distance between them until he was standing directly in front of her. He reached out, his gloved fingers hovering an inch above her wrist, right over the crescent scar, before he drew his hand back, as if remembering himself. "I told you three weeks ago that you could not handle this alone. You walked away from me because you thought I was trying to control you. But I was trying to keep you alive." "You were trying to manage me," Rory snapped, her anger flaring up to swallow the fear. "There's a difference, Lucien! You treat people like assets on a ledger. You buy secrets, you trade favors, you manipulate the board until everyone lands exactly where you want them. I am not one of your chess pieces!" "You were never a piece to me," he said softly. The quiet tone hit harder than if he had shouted. Rory blinked, caught off guard by the raw, unvarnished honesty in his eyes. "Do you have any idea," Lucien said, his black eye swallowing what little light remained in the room, "what it was like to watch you walk down that pier? Knowing that if I followed you, I would only push you further away? I have lived thirty-two years in this world, Rory. I have fought demons, I have outsmarted lords of Avaros, I have built an empire out of whispers. And yet I stood there like a fool, unable to say the one thing that would make you stay." Rory’s breath hitched. She looked up into his face, seeing the fine lines of tension around his mouth, the faint flickers of amber deep within his right eye that signaled his blood was stirring. "What were you supposed to say?" she whispered, her defense crumbling just enough for the truth to bleed through. "You lied to me about Yu-Fei. You knew who Evan was before I even told you his name. You had a file on me before I ever walked into Silas' bar." "Yes," Lucien admitted without hesitation. "I did. Because that is what I do. I collect truth so that no one can use it against me. But when I met you..." He paused, searching her face, his gaze lingering on her mouth, her eyes, the dark line of her jaw. "The truth stopped being a weapon. It became a liability. Because for the first time in my life, I found something I couldn't bear to lose." He raised his hand again, and this time he didn't pull back. His leather-clad thumb brushed gently against her cheekbone, warm even through the leather. Rory didn't flinch. She couldn't. Her heart was hammering against her ribs, a violent, confused rhythm of lingering fear, bitter pride, and a deep, aching warmth that had been burning inside her since the night they met. "You're infuriating," she whispered, her voice trembling slightly. "I have been told," Lucien replied, a ghost of a smile touching his lips. He unclipped his glove with his teeth, pulling the black leather free to reveal his bare hand—pale, strong, with dark, sharp nails that betrayed his non-human heritage. He touched her cheek again, skin to skin this time. His thumb trailed down to her jawline, resting over her pulse point. "He won't touch you, Rory. I will tear London apart before I let him near you again." "I don't need a protector," she insisted, though her hand came up to rest over his wrist, her fingers curling around the fine fabric of his sleeve. "I know," Lucien said, his amber eye gleaming in the dim light. "You are brilliant, and you are dangerous, and you could likely survive without me entirely. But I do not offer protection as a master to a servant, or a broker to a client." He leaned down, his breath warm against her lips, smelling of sweet spices and rain. "I offer it as a man who is utterly at your mercy." Rory stared at him, her quick mind racing, trying to find the flaw in his logic, the angle he was playing. But looking at the sharp angle of his cheekbones, the tension in his hands, the terrifying softness in his dark eye, she found nothing. Just him. "Twenty minutes are up," she breathed against his mouth. Lucien didn't pull back. He shifted his thumb, tracing the lower curve of her lip. "Then tell me to go." Rory tightened her grip on his suit sleeve, pulling him that fraction of an inch closer until the space between them vanished entirely. "Don't you dare," she murmured, and closed her eyes as his mouth met hers.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:59:10.36Z" 7/25/2026, 2:59:10 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
84.62% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Lucien corrected softly [softly]"
1"Lucien said flatly [flatly]"
2"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.578
leniency1
rawRatio0.115
effectiveRatio0.115
73.12% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1860
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count2
3
adverb"slightly"
count2
4
adverb"carefully"
count1
5
adverb"suddenly"
count1
6
adverb"gently"
count1
7
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"precisely"
2"softly"
3"slightly"
4"carefully"
5"suddenly"
6"gently"
7"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.92% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1860
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count2
3
word"gleaming"
count2
4
word"velvet"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"intensity"
count1
7
word"electric"
count1
8
word"silk"
count1
9
word"down her spine"
count1
10
word"throb"
count1
11
word"charm"
count1
12
word"tension"
count2
13
word"warmth"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
15
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"echoing"
2"tracing"
3"gleaming"
4"velvet"
5"chill"
6"intensity"
7"electric"
8"silk"
9"down her spine"
10"throb"
11"charm"
12"tension"
13"warmth"
14"pulse"
15"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
97.26% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences94
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences114
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen89
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1854
ratio0.001
matches
0"chérie"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount1303
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.38
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory15
London1
Eva4
Golden1
Empress1
Lucien18
Moreau1
Marseille1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Empress"
3"Lucien"
4"Moreau"
places
0"London"
1"Golden"
2"Marseille"
globalScore0.809
windowScore0.667
78.57% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like armor"
1"as if remembering himself"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1854
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences114
matches
0"knew that rhythm"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean37.84
std24.18
cv0.639
sampleLengths
075
14
241
346
437
519
666
718
819
931
1053
1136
124
131
144
1558
1613
1776
1810
1968
2027
2127
2264
2336
2424
2541
2650
279
2833
2948
3027
3193
3254
3310
3423
3588
3634
3750
3875
3925
4037
418
4280
4327
4472
4547
469
4720
4837
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
47.09% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs218
matches
0"was lashing"
1"was standing"
2"was standing"
3"was hammering"
4"was playing"
17.54% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences114
ratio0.044
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes—one bright, piercing amber, the other as black and vast as an unlit well—locked onto hers."
1"The space was already crowded—towers of Eva’s research notes leaned precariously against the walls, leather-bound books stacked three-deep on the coffee table, scrolls tucked into old brass vases."
2"\"It's Eva's,\" Rory said, closing the front door and locking the deadbolts once more—a habit born of necessity, of a life spent running from things that wished her harm."
3"Up close, she could smell him—rain, expensive wool, and that subtle, unnerving scent of ozone and clove that belonged entirely to his demon blood."
4"He unclipped his glove with his teeth, pulling the black leather free to reveal his bare hand—pale, strong, with dark, sharp nails that betrayed his non-human heritage."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount815
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.03067484662576687
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007361963190184049
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean16.26
std12.46
cv0.766
sampleLengths
025
128
222
34
431
510
62
710
84
930
1024
117
123
133
1419
153
1628
1717
1818
1918
203
2116
228
2323
2446
257
2615
272
287
2912
304
311
324
3335
3410
3513
366
377
3815
3918
4023
4115
425
4310
448
4510
4618
4732
4819
498
46.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.32456140350877194
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners37
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences87
matches
0"Then came the knock."
1"Slowly, she turned the top"
2"Then the middle."
3"Then the bottom."
ratio0.046
26.90% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences87
matches
0"She had barely dragged herself"
1"It wasn't the frantic, three-beat"
2"It was three slow, deliberate"
3"Her heart gave a sudden,"
4"She knew that rhythm."
5"She had heard it echoing"
6"She reached down, her thumb"
7"He hadn't changed."
8"His charcoal suit was immaculate,"
9"His heterochromatic eyes—one bright, piercing"
10"His voice was a low,"
11"It was a stupid line,"
12"Her feet felt pinned to"
13"She leaned against the doorframe,"
14"He bent slightly, extending two"
15"He lifted his head, those"
16"She hated how easily he"
17"She hated even more that"
18"He set his umbrella in"
19"He unbuttoned his jacket, revealing"
ratio0.483
17.47% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences87
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked into"
1"She had barely dragged herself"
2"Rain was lashing against the"
3"It wasn't the frantic, three-beat"
4"It was three slow, deliberate"
5"Her heart gave a sudden,"
6"She knew that rhythm."
7"She had heard it echoing"
8"She reached down, her thumb"
9"He hadn't changed."
10"The rain had misted his"
11"His charcoal suit was immaculate,"
12"His heterochromatic eyes—one bright, piercing"
13"His voice was a low,"
14"It was a stupid line,"
15"Lucien took a half-step forward,"
16"Rory said, though she didn't"
17"Her feet felt pinned to"
18"She leaned against the doorframe,"
19"Lucien corrected softly"
ratio0.885
57.47% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"Before she could push the"
ratio0.011
38.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Rain was lashing against the glass down in the alley, a steady, rhythmic London deluge that made the old floorboards groan underfoot."
1"Lucien took a half-step forward, his eyes sweeping over her face, taking in the faint shadows under her bright blue eyes, the damp strands of her black hair cli…"
2"The playfulness vanished, replaced by an intensity that made the air in the cramped doorway feel heavy, electric."
3"Up close, she could smell him—rain, expensive wool, and that subtle, unnerving scent of ozone and clove that belonged entirely to his demon blood."
4"He reached out, his gloved fingers hovering an inch above her wrist, right over the crescent scar, before he drew his hand back, as if remembering himself."
5"She looked up into his face, seeing the fine lines of tension around his mouth, the faint flickers of amber deep within his right eye that signaled his blood wa…"
6"Her heart was hammering against her ribs, a violent, confused rhythm of lingering fear, bitter pride, and a deep, aching warmth that had been burning inside her…"
9.62% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Lucien continued, his voice dropping an octave, losing its performative charm"
1"Rory snapped, her anger flaring up to swallow the fear"
2"she whispered, her voice trembling slightly"
3"Lucien replied, a ghost of a smile touching his lips"
4"she insisted, though her hand came up to rest over his wrist, her fingers curling around the fine fabric of his sleeve"
5"Lucien said, his amber eye gleaming in the dim light"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags20
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"Lucien corrected softly (correct)"
1"Rory muttered (mutter)"
2"Lucien continued (continue)"
3"Rory snapped (snap)"
4"she whispered (whisper)"
5"Lucien admitted (admit)"
6"she whispered (whisper)"
7"she insisted (insist)"
8"she breathed (breathe)"
9"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.444
73.6714%