Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCWQ7HVY61VNB2TA1076D8X

Run Details

Duration:
44.1s
Cost:
$0.059469
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The last deadbolt gave way with a screech of rusted iron. Rory swung the heavy oak door inward, words of dismissal ready on her tongue. They vanished. Lucien Moreau leaned against the doorframe, wet rain glittering on the shoulders of his charcoal suit. Platinum hair clung to his temples in slick, damp strands. One amber eye narrowed; the other, pure obsidian, tracked her every movement. The ivory head of his cane rested beneath his gloved knuckles. "You took your time." His voice carried the dark, velvet weight of a cellar-aged wine, laced with the sharp cadence of Marseille. Rory gripped the edge of the door until her knuckles turned white. "I locked three deadbolts for a reason." "A flimsy illusion of safety." Lucien stepped past the threshold, his height filling the narrow entry and forcing her back into the dim hallway. "Especially when your bottom hinge drops half an inch every time the floorboards swell." He kicked the door shut with the heel of his leather boot. The brass lock snapped home. "Out." She pointed a thumb toward the landing. "Get out before I drop you through the floorboards myself." "Charming." He unbuttoned his coat, exposing a tailored silk waistcoat beneath. Raindrops pooled on the silver chain of his pocket watch. "You vanished from the docks. No message. No ledger. Only a trail of smashed streetlamps and two burnt demons." "You sold me out to the Syndicate, Lucien." "I redirected their attention." His cane met the hardwood with a sharp thud. "There is a distinction." "Not from where I stood." Ptolemy slunk out from beneath a tower of leather-bound folios, his striped tail flicking with annoyance. The tabby inspected Lucien’s calf, sniffed the damp charcoal trousers, and released a low, rasping hiss before retreating behind a stack of yellowed parchment. Lucien paid the cat no mind. His gaze remained pinned to her face. "You took the obsidian key." "Consider it severance." Rory folded her arms across her chest, her thumb automatically tracing the crescent scar on her left wrist—a habit she cursed herself for revealing. "You used me to flush out Avaros' lingering hounds. I took the only object in that vault worth more than my life." "That key belongs to my family." "Your father was a demon from the pit. Nothing in that vault belongs to anyone who bleeds red." Lucien closed the gap between them in two unhurried strides. The air around him surged with heat, the scent of sulfur and ozone choking out the cold draft beneath the door. He snared her left wrist, his thumb landing squarely over her crescent scar. His skin burned against hers—far hotter than any human body had a right to be. Rory refused to pull away. She planted her feet, bright blue eyes cutting straight into his mismatched pair. "Touch me again and I'll see how thin that blade inside your cane really is." Lucien’s lips twitched, a shadow of a smirk touching his mouth, though his obsidian eye stayed utterly dark. "You always did make threats sound like poetry." "Try me." His grip relaxed, yet his thumb lingered against her skin, feeling the heavy, wild thrum of her pulse. It rattled against his palm, exposing every drop of panic she strove to bury. He traced the pale curve of her childhood scar once before releasing her wrist. "I looked for you for six weeks." "You didn't look hard enough. I was three miles away." "You were hiding under the roof of an information broker on Brick Lane." He glanced around the cramped room. Curry spices seeped through the floorboards from the kitchen below, mixing with the scent of old paper, rain, and wet cat fur. "A suffocating flat dripping with dampness, surrounded by dead men's thoughts." "It's clean. And you weren't invited." "I never require invitations." He turned, his cane ticking rhythmic against the floor as he navigated the narrow path between towers of books. He stopped beside her desk, lifting a heavy brass compass she had brought from her father's study in Cardiff. "You left your coat at my townhouse." "I burned it." "Liar." Lucien set the compass down with a quiet clink. "It sits across the back of my study chair. It still carries your citrus oil and street slush." Rory’s breath caught—a tiny, sharp hitch in her chest. He caught it instantly. He always caught the structural cracks in her defense. Her Welsh cadence slipped into her speech, sharp and clipped. "Why are you here, Lucien? The key isn't here. Even if it were, I would hurl it into the Thames before placing it back in your palm." "I didn't come for the key." He walked back toward her, unhurried, each movement laced with lethal elegance. The clutter of the room seemed to shrink, trapping her in his sphere. Her shoulders hit the rough spine of a mahogany bookcase. A stack of law texts shifted behind her left arm. "Then you came to die." "I came because the Syndicate knows you have it." He stopped inches away, his breath warm against her cheek. "Three of Avaros' high marshals crossed the veil an hour ago. They aren't searching for the artifact, Rory. They want the thief who made fools of them." She held his gaze, refusing to retreat into the wood behind her. "I put two of their hounds in the ground at the docks." "Those were mongrels." His hand rose, his fingers hovering near her jawline, radiating heat without making contact. "These are warlords. They will tear this flat apart, tear Brick Lane apart, until they drag you out." "And you came to play protector?" A dry, bitter sound left her throat. "The great fixer of the London underworld, suddenly playing guardian angel?" "I came to collect what is mine." "I am not your property." "The debt between us stands open." His black eye swallowed the dim yellow glow of the desk lamp, a deep, volatile magic churning beneath his tailored composure. "You owe me a night. You owe me the truth about what happened before the flames broke out at the docks." Rory reached forward, her fingers knotting into the front of his silk waistcoat, hauling him down until their faces were inches apart. Heat radiated off his chest, scorching through the thin fabric of her shirt. "You let them surround the warehouse," she snapped. "You knew they were waiting in the shadows." "I knew they planned an ambush." Lucien made no attempt to pull back. His hand came up, long fingers wrapping over hers where she gripped his vest, locking her against him. "I did not know they carried iron-tipped chains. I did not know they would hurt you." The admission hung in the air, heavy and unvarnished. He did not lie—his demon bloodline forbade it. Rory searched his face, hunting for the ruthless broker who traded human lives like ledger columns. Instead, she found an unravelling restraint, a raw, dangerous hunger that made her pulse spike harder than the threat of demon marshals outside. "You should have let me burn," she murmured. "I couldn't." Ptolemy let out a sharp, offended meow from the corner, knocking a stack of unbound manuscripts off a stool. Pages fluttered to the rug like dying moths. Neither of them looked down. Lucien pressed closer, crowding her completely against the bookshelf. Books shifted and groaned against her spine. The smell of ozone, rain, and his expensive cologne filled her lungs, wiping away the lingering curry and stale tea. "They are two streets over," he whispered, his mouth hovering a fraction of an inch from her lips. "We have five minutes before the ward on your front door shatters." "Then stop talking." Rory yanked him down by his collar.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He glanced around [around]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.302
leniency0.604
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.038
84.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1292
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"utterly"
2"suddenly"
3"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1292
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"silk"
count2
3
word"tracing"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"rhythmic"
count1
7
word"navigated"
count1
8
word"churning"
count1
9
word"fluttered"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"weight"
2"silk"
3"tracing"
4"pulse"
5"traced"
6"rhythmic"
7"navigated"
8"churning"
9"fluttered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences67
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1288
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.12% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount820
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.1
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Marseille1
Raindrops1
Ptolemy2
Lucien9
Curry1
Cardiff1
Rory8
Welsh1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Raindrops"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
4"Curry"
5"Rory"
places
0"Marseille"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.951
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1288
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean23.85
std17.17
cv0.72
sampleLengths
025
12
249
34
418
519
638
717
818
940
108
1117
125
1340
1418
1549
166
1718
1859
1918
2015
2126
222
2346
247
2510
2652
276
2849
293
3028
3159
326
3345
345
3546
3624
3735
3824
397
405
4148
4235
4316
4447
4517
4639
478
482
4932
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs138
matches(empty)
5.49% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences104
ratio0.048
matches
0"One amber eye narrowed; the other, pure obsidian, tracked her every movement."
1"\"Consider it severance.\" Rory folded her arms across her chest, her thumb automatically tracing the crescent scar on her left wrist—a habit she cursed herself for revealing."
2"His skin burned against hers—far hotter than any human body had a right to be."
3"Rory’s breath caught—a tiny, sharp hitch in her chest."
4"He did not lie—his demon bloodline forbade it."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount826
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.025423728813559324
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006053268765133172
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean12.38
std6.3
cv0.509
sampleLengths
011
114
22
316
410
512
611
74
818
912
107
1124
1214
1312
145
158
1610
1711
1810
1919
208
2113
224
235
2416
2524
266
277
285
2927
3022
316
3218
3310
3421
3513
3615
375
3813
3915
4018
418
422
4318
4414
4514
467
4710
4819
4922
60.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3942307692307692
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners41
52.08% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"Instead, she found an unravelling"
ratio0.016
51.25% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences64
matches
0"His voice carried the dark,"
1"He kicked the door shut"
2"She pointed a thumb toward"
3"He unbuttoned his coat, exposing"
4"His cane met the hardwood"
5"His gaze remained pinned to"
6"He snared her left wrist,"
7"His skin burned against hers—far"
8"She planted her feet, bright"
9"His grip relaxed, yet his"
10"It rattled against his palm,"
11"He traced the pale curve"
12"He glanced around the cramped"
13"He turned, his cane ticking"
14"He stopped beside her desk,"
15"He caught it instantly."
16"He always caught the structural"
17"Her Welsh cadence slipped into"
18"He walked back toward her,"
19"Her shoulders hit the rough"
ratio0.422
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences64
matches
0"The last deadbolt gave way"
1"Rory swung the heavy oak"
2"Lucien Moreau leaned against the"
3"Platinum hair clung to his"
4"The ivory head of his"
5"His voice carried the dark,"
6"Rory gripped the edge of"
7"Lucien stepped past the threshold,"
8"He kicked the door shut"
9"The brass lock snapped home."
10"She pointed a thumb toward"
11"He unbuttoned his coat, exposing"
12"Raindrops pooled on the silver"
13"His cane met the hardwood"
14"Ptolemy slunk out from beneath"
15"The tabby inspected Lucien’s calf,"
16"Lucien paid the cat no"
17"His gaze remained pinned to"
18"Rory folded her arms across"
19"Lucien closed the gap between"
ratio0.969
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
84.94% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Rory reached forward, her fingers knotting into the front of his silk waistcoat, hauling him down until their faces were inches apart."
1"Rory searched his face, hunting for the ruthless broker who traded human lives like ledger columns."
2"Instead, she found an unravelling restraint, a raw, dangerous hunger that made her pulse spike harder than the threat of demon marshals outside."
93.75% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He stopped, his breath warm against her cheek"
93.40% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she snapped (snap)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.057
leniency0.113
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.113
82.5005%