Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCWRM9CMS2TC2GEMSRRYN1B

Run Details

Duration:
7.9s
Cost:
$0.004045
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The damp air of the abandoned Tube station tasted of copper, ozone, and old grease. Detective Harlow Quinn stood at the edge of the disused platform, her boots crunching on gritty ballast that hadn't felt the weight of a passenger train in half a century. Above them, somewhere in the tangled roots of Camden, traffic rumbled. Down here, the silence was heavy, broken only by the steady drip of subterranean water echoing against the curved tile walls of the tunnel. Harlow adjusted the collar of her heavy coat against the chill and checked her watch. The worn leather strap felt familiar against her wrist, grounding her in the mundane mechanics of time and procedure while the scene before her defied both. Three uniform officers had cordoned off the lower landing with yellow plastic tape, their breath pluming in the flashlight beams. At the center of the platform lay a body. Not a local drifter or an urban explorer, but a young woman in her mid-twenties, sprawled unnaturally across the tracks. Her red curls were matted with dark soot, and her round glasses lay shattered a few feet away, one lens cracked down the center. A worn leather satchel, half-spilled, disgorged a handful of waterlogged notebooks onto the concrete. It was Eva Kowalski. The researcher from the British Museum. The girl Harlow had been watching for three weeks, ever since intelligence linked her circle to the illicit antiquities trade. A shadow detached itself from the curved brickwork of the tunnel entrance. Detective Sergeant Vance stepped into the pooling light of a portable halogen lamp, his hands buried deep in his trench coat pockets. Rough night for an archaeology field trip, Vance said, his voice bouncing off the vaulted ceiling. Pathologist says she took a header off the platform edge. Neck snapped clean. Looks like a misstep in the dark. Poor sod probably didn't see the drop. Harlow didn't look at him. She crouched beside the edge of the concrete, her sharp jaw tightening as she surveyed the geometry of the fall. Eighteen years in the Metropolitan Police taught her to look past the obvious story a corpse told and listen to the contradictions whispering beneath it. Accidental fall, Harlow murmured. That is your working theory? Vance sighed, stepping closer and kicking a loose piece of ballast with his toe. Look around, Quinn. It is an unlit station. No CCTV, no trespassers caught on the perimeter sensors. She was down here poking around old tube tunnels, slipped off the platform in the dark, and broke her neck. Case closed before the morning briefing. Harlow stood up slowly, her brown eyes scanning the soot-stained walls behind the victim. She reached out, her gloved fingers hovering over the edge of the platform, then traced a line downward. If she slipped in the dark, Vance, why are her hands clean? Vance blinked. What? Look at her palms, Harlow said, gesturing with her chin toward the fallen woman. She fell backward onto a track bed covered in decades of coal dust, grease, and iron filings. A person falling instinctively throws their hands out to break the fall. Their palms and forefingers should be coated in black grime. Her hands are spotless, save for a light smudge across the left wrist. She didn't fall. She was placed here. Vance frowned, shifting his weight. Maybe she was pushed from behind and landed square on her back, never reaching out. Reflexes can fail— And what about her satchel? Harlow cut in, kneeling again to inspect the leather bag. It is unzipped. The contents spilled out, but notice the orientation of the books. They aren't scattered radially, as if the bag hit the ground and burst open. They were pulled out in a neat stack and dropped beside her hip. Furthermore—she reached out with two fingers and lifted a small brass object from the concrete—this was tucked directly beneath her hand. As if someone tried to press it into her grip after she was already dead. She held up the brass compass. The casing was worn, carrying a heavy patina of verdigris across its curved surface. Etched into the brass face were intricate protective sigils, unfamiliar to any standard department lexicon. The needle inside didn't twitch toward magnetic north; it spun lazily, then locked dead-center, trembling as though pulled by an invisible current. Vance stared at the object, his brow furrowing. Some kind of antique trinket. She worked at the museum, Quinn. People collect weird junk. Probably bought it at the Veil Market or some other underground fencing ring. Harlow turned the compass over in her hand, feeling the chill radiating from the metal that had nothing to do with the subterranean draft. She had heard whispers of the Veil Market on the street—rumors of an illicit black market that shifted its location with every full moon, dealing in goods that defied scientific classification. A place where people traded in banned alchemical substances and forbidden information. A place Eva Kowalski frequented. She didn't just collect junk, Vance, Harlow said softly, her gaze narrowing as she looked past the body into the deeper, yawning dark of the tunnel ahead. And she didn't die from a fall. Look at the soot on the ceiling directly above the tracks. Vance raised his flashlight, sweeping the beam upward. The curved brickwork overhead was scorched in a strange, circular pattern, the soot blasted outward from a single point as if a localized flash fire had occurred within the last few hours. Yet, the wooden ties of the track below showed no sign of charring. That is... odd, Vance admitted, his casual tone evaporating. Electrical arc? There are no live rails down here, Vance. Power was cut to this spur in nineteen-seventy-two, Harlow reminded him, her voice dropping to a low, steady register that brooked no argument. Something else happened here. Something violent, and precise, and entirely outside the jurisdiction of a standard homicide report. She stood up, slipping the verdigris-cased compass into her coat pocket. The metal pressed against her ribs, cold and heavy. Her mind flashed briefly to the cold case file sitting locked in her bottom drawer at the station—the case of DS Morris, her former partner who had vanished three years ago during an investigation into a locked-room warehouse fire that left no ashes, only strange scorch marks and an impossible void. Vance watched her, uneasy now, shifting his coat around his shoulders. So what do you want to do? Write it up as suspicious? Call the brass? Harlow looked down at the shattered round glasses resting on the concrete, then out into the black throat of the tunnel where the compass needle still pointed with unswerving certainty. We don't call the brass yet, Harlow said, her jaw set with military precision. We secure the perimeter, we pull the station logs from the transit authority, and we find out who else down here was waiting for her. She turned on her heel, her boots clicking sharply against the platform as she walked back toward the rusted staircase leading up to the street. Vance lingered for a moment, casting one last nervous glance at the quiet body on the tracks before hurrying to catch up to her in the dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
83.48% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1211
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"lazily"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"lazily"
2"softly"
3"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1211
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"echoing"
count1
3
word"chill"
count2
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"shattered"
count2
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"intricate"
count1
10
word"standard"
count2
11
word"magnetic"
count1
12
word"furrowing"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
2"echoing"
3"chill"
4"familiar"
5"shattered"
6"scanning"
7"traced"
8"etched"
9"intricate"
10"standard"
11"magnetic"
12"furrowing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences93
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1207
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions4
matches
0"Rough night for an archaeology field trip, Vance said, his voice bouncing off the vaulted ceiling."
1"Accidental fall, Harlow murmured."
2"Look at her palms, Harlow said, gesturing with her chin toward the fallen woman."
3"odd, Vance admitted, his casual tone evaporating."
96.15% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount1207
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.08
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow13
Quinn3
Camden1
Eva2
Kowalski2
British1
Museum1
Sergeant1
Vance13
Metropolitan1
Police1
Veil2
Market2
Morris1
Look3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Eva"
3"Kowalski"
4"Sergeant"
5"Vance"
6"Police"
7"Morris"
places
0"British"
1"Museum"
2"Metropolitan"
3"Veil"
4"Look"
globalScore0.961
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.829
wordCount1207
matches
0"Not a local drifter or an urban explorer, but a young woman in her mid-twenties, sprawled unnaturally acro"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean44.7
std23.45
cv0.525
sampleLengths
080
141
287
330
434
543
650
79
857
932
1012
113
1273
1323
1492
1557
1636
1772
1845
1953
2011
2149
2271
2326
2430
2539
2652
78.85% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences93
matches
0"were matted"
1"was placed"
2"was pushed"
3"is unzipped"
4"were pulled"
5"was tucked"
6"was scorched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs188
matches
0"was waiting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences93
ratio0.054
matches
0"Reflexes can fail—"
1"Furthermore—she reached out with two fingers and lifted a small brass object from the concrete—this was tucked directly beneath her hand."
2"The needle inside didn't twitch toward magnetic north; it spun lazily, then locked dead-center, trembling as though pulled by an invisible current."
3"She had heard whispers of the Veil Market on the street—rumors of an illicit black market that shifted its location with every full moon, dealing in goods that defied scientific classification."
4"Her mind flashed briefly to the cold case file sitting locked in her bottom drawer at the station—the case of DS Morris, her former partner who had vanished three years ago during an investigation into a locked-room warehouse fire that left no ashes, only strange scorch marks and an impossible void."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1219
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.029532403609515995
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.012305168170631665
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean12.98
std8.85
cv0.682
sampleLengths
015
130
211
324
415
526
620
79
820
924
1014
114
126
1320
1412
1522
1616
1710
183
197
207
215
2220
2325
244
255
2614
273
285
299
3020
316
3214
3318
3412
352
361
3714
3817
3912
4010
4113
423
434
445
4515
463
475
4810
493
77.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.5053763440860215
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners47
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences89
matches
0"Maybe she was pushed from"
1"Furthermore—she reached out with two"
2"Probably bought it at the"
ratio0.034
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences89
matches
0"Her red curls were matted"
1"It was Eva Kowalski."
2"She crouched beside the edge"
3"It is an unlit station."
4"She was down here poking"
5"She reached out, her gloved"
6"She fell backward onto a"
7"Their palms and forefingers should"
8"Her hands are spotless, save"
9"She didn't fall."
10"She was placed here."
11"It is unzipped."
12"They aren't scattered radially, as"
13"They were pulled out in"
14"She held up the brass"
15"She worked at the museum,"
16"She had heard whispers of"
17"She didn't just collect junk,"
18"She stood up, slipping the"
19"Her mind flashed briefly to"
ratio0.258
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences89
matches
0"The damp air of the"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stood at"
2"Harlow adjusted the collar of"
3"The worn leather strap felt"
4"Her red curls were matted"
5"A worn leather satchel, half-spilled,"
6"It was Eva Kowalski."
7"The researcher from the British"
8"The girl Harlow had been"
9"A shadow detached itself from"
10"Detective Sergeant Vance stepped into"
11"Pathologist says she took a"
12"Neck snapped clean."
13"Looks like a misstep in"
14"Harlow didn't look at him."
15"She crouched beside the edge"
16"That is your working theory?"
17"Vance sighed, stepping closer and"
18"It is an unlit station."
19"She was down here poking"
ratio0.697
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences89
matches
0"If she slipped in the"
1"As if someone tried to"
2"Yet, the wooden ties of"
ratio0.034
38.96% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stood at the edge of the disused platform, her boots crunching on gritty ballast that hadn't felt the weight of a passenger train in half…"
1"The needle inside didn't twitch toward magnetic north; it spun lazily, then locked dead-center, trembling as though pulled by an invisible current."
2"Harlow turned the compass over in her hand, feeling the chill radiating from the metal that had nothing to do with the subterranean draft."
3"She had heard whispers of the Veil Market on the street—rumors of an illicit black market that shifted its location with every full moon, dealing in goods that …"
4"The curved brickwork overhead was scorched in a strange, circular pattern, the soot blasted outward from a single point as if a localized flash fire had occurre…"
5"Power was cut to this spur in nineteen-seventy-two, Harlow reminded him, her voice dropping to a low, steady register that brooked no argument."
6"Her mind flashed briefly to the cold case file sitting locked in her bottom drawer at the station—the case of DS Morris, her former partner who had vanished thr…"
7"She turned on her heel, her boots clicking sharply against the platform as she walked back toward the rusted staircase leading up to the street."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.8345%