| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 91.14% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1129 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 33.57% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1129 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "etched" | | 1 | "standard" | | 2 | "cataloged" | | 3 | "measured" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "pristine" | | 6 | "perfect" | | 7 | "tracing" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "maw" | | 10 | "magnetic" | | 11 | "could feel" | | 12 | "gloom" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.21% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1124 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 11.36% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rough landing for a Sunday stroll, Hayes said, his voice bouncing hollowly off the curved tile walls." | | 1 | "Robbery, Harlow murmured, her voice flat." | | 2 | "Standard mugging, Hayes insisted, emboldened by her silence." | | 3 | "He was laid here, Harlow said quietly." | | 4 | "Information, Harlow whispered." |
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| 74.38% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 48 | | wordCount | 1124 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.51 | | worstName | "Harlow" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Harlow" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 2 | | Harlow | 17 | | Quinn | 1 | | Metropolitan | 1 | | Police | 1 | | Hayes | 12 | | Sunday | 1 | | Miller | 1 | | Northern | 1 | | Line | 1 | | Chalk | 1 | | Farm | 1 | | King | 1 | | Cross | 1 | | Morris | 2 | | London | 1 | | Detective | 2 | | Whitehall | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Police" | | 3 | "Hayes" | | 4 | "Miller" | | 5 | "King" | | 6 | "Cross" | | 7 | "Morris" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.744 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1124 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 35.13 | | std | 23.21 | | cv | 0.661 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 89 | | 3 | 36 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 46 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 49 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 82 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 53 | | 13 | 85 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 48 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 55 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 66 | | 24 | 41 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 47 | | 30 | 32 | | 31 | 36 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | |
| 90.11% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 182 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't twitching" | | 1 | "was crumbling" | | 2 | "were slowly shifting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 96 | | ratio | 0.052 | | matches | | 0 | "The injury was catastrophic—a depression fracture above the right ear that should have sprayed arterial blood and biological matter across a wide radius of the platform." | | 1 | "Something about the air pressure down here felt wrong—thin, dry, and cold, like opening a freezer door in the middle of summer." | | 2 | "It looked old—older than the Tube station, older perhaps than the city above them." | | 3 | "A spatial tear, Harlow muttered to herself, the memory of Morris's case file flashing behind her eyelids—reports of missing persons, unexplained energy spikes beneath the pavements of London, and rumors of a hidden bazaar that only appeared on the full moon." | | 4 | "Not just the station—clear the streets above." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1136 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.02640845070422535 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014084507042253521 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 96 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 96 | | mean | 11.71 | | std | 8.97 | | cv | 0.766 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 37 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 32 |
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| 81.94% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.5416666666666666 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 52 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "It rested directly over the" | | 1 | "She kept her posture rigid," | | 2 | "She walked the perimeter with" | | 3 | "Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair" | | 4 | "She didn't touch the victim," | | 5 | "He was laid here, Harlow" | | 6 | "It hasn't settled." | | 7 | "She directed the beam of" | | 8 | "It reminded her of things" | | 9 | "It wasn't moving at all." | | 10 | "It sat dead-locked, pointing straight" | | 11 | "It wasn't a wallet they" | | 12 | "She knelt again, this time" | | 13 | "It wasn't manufactured in any" | | 14 | "It looked old—older than the" | | 15 | "They’re not damp, Harlow corrected," | | 16 | "It looked as though the" | | 17 | "You think there's a structural" | | 18 | "She locked her jaw and" | | 19 | "It's not a mugging, Harlow" |
| | ratio | 0.241 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "The damp air of the" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off" | | 2 | "Camden’s disused subterranean lines were" | | 3 | "It rested directly over the" | | 4 | "A small brass compass with" | | 5 | "Harlow checked her left wrist," | | 6 | "She kept her posture rigid," | | 7 | "Constable Hayes stood a few" | | 8 | "Sergeant Miller called it in" | | 9 | "Looks like a robbery gone" | | 10 | "Muggers down here are getting" | | 11 | "Wallet is gone." | | 12 | "Harlow didn't answer right away." | | 13 | "She walked the perimeter with" | | 14 | "Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair" | | 15 | "Robbery, Harlow murmured, her voice" | | 16 | "Standard mugging, Hayes insisted, emboldened" | | 17 | "Tramp gets greedy, rolls a" | | 18 | "Harlow crouched beside the body." | | 19 | "She didn't touch the victim," |
| | ratio | 0.644 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, the brickwork directly behind" | | 1 | "If someone had scrubbed this" | | 2 | "If it wasn't a robbery," |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 55.75% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Above her, the arched brick ceiling of the platform vanished into impenetrable shadow, weeping black water that pooled between the rails with a slow, greasy rhy…" | | 1 | "It rested directly over the painted circle of an old, faded safety line, arms neatly folded across a chest that wore an expensive tweed waistcoat." | | 2 | "A small brass compass with a heavy patina of verdigris lay open beside the victim's stiffened fingers, its delicate face etched with protective sigils that didn…" | | 3 | "The injury was catastrophic—a depression fracture above the right ear that should have sprayed arterial blood and biological matter across a wide radius of the …" | | 4 | "It looked as though the stones were slowly shifting, sliding sideways by a fraction of an inch, opening microscopic fissures that smelled faintly of ozone and c…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |