Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCWSGAD0JZ780B1ANA00FHR

Run Details

Duration:
6.7s
Cost:
$0.003308
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Three deadbolts slid back one by one, heavy iron bolts grating against dry timber. The warped wood yielded with a low groan, revealing a wedge of dim hallway light. Lucien stood on the threshold, his platinum blond hair catching the amber glow of the stairwell bulb. A tailored charcoal suit clung to his frame, the fabric uncrested by the London mist clinging to the brick outside. One hand rested casually upon the ivory handle of his cane, knuckles pale against the polished material. "You missed our meeting at the docks," Lucien said, his heterochromatic gaze—one amber, one black—sweeping past the shoulder blocking the gap. Rory gripped the edge of the doorframe, her straight black hair falling forward to shadow the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "The Golden Empress needed extra runs during the midday rush. Deliveries wait for no fixer." "Fish and noodles matter more than an alliance?" Lucien stepped forward, bridging the boundary without an invitation, forcing her to back into the cramped corridor of Brick Lane. "Soups pay the rent." Rory closed the door two inches, narrowing the gap between them. "Unlike whatever high-society games you play in Soho." "We both know your landlord Silas takes payment in gossip just as happily as pounds." Lucien scanned the precarious stacks of books and scrolls spilling across every available surface. He leaned his weight onto the cane, the tip tapping sharply against the worn floorboards. "Eva still letting you sleep on this archaeology hazard?" "She went to Oxford for a dig. I'm house-sitting." Rory planted her feet, refusing to yield another inch of territory. "Ptolemy needed someone to feed him." A fat tabby cat uncurled from a pile of parchment on a nearby armchair, stretched its legs, and padded over to rub against Lucien's tailored trouser leg. "Traitor," Rory muttered, watching the cat purr against the demon-blood's ankle. "Animals recognize value." Lucien crouched slightly, though the movement strained the tight weave of his jacket across his shoulders. He straightened immediately, his mismatched eyes locking onto hers with a sudden, suffocating intensity. "You vanished from the warehouse district three weeks ago. No message. No note left under the door of the bar." "I cleared my debts with you." Rory crossed her arms over her chest, the fabric of her delivery jacket stiff against her ribs. "The slate wiped clean." "Slates never wipe clean in our line of work, Rory." Lucien closed the remaining distance, invading her personal space until the sharp scent of ozone and expensive cologne filled her lungs. "You left a knife on the table. My favorite stiletto." "Consider it a severance fee for last month's disaster in Marseille." Rory tilted her chin up, refusing to drop her gaze beneath the unsettling weight of his stare. "You knew the risks of bringing a half-demon into a pureblood smuggling ring. You used me as a distraction." "You handled the guards in under forty seconds." Lucien’s voice dropped an octave, the smooth French cadence thickening. "I watched you break three collarbones before breakfast. You thrived in that warehouse." "Surviving isn't thriving." Rory shoved a stray lock of black hair behind her ear, her fingers brushing the pulse point on her throat where her heartbeat hammered against her skin. "I left Cardiff to get away from men who think control equates to affection. You pulled the exact same strings, Lucien." "I kept you breathing when Evan hunted you across three counties." Lucien gripped the ivory handle of his cane so hard his knuckles turned translucent. "Who fed you intelligence on his syndicate? Who gave you the safe house in Soho?" "You wanted a return on investment." Rory uncrossed her arms, her hands clenching into fists at her sides. "Don't dress up protection as charity. We both operate on leverage." "Leverage?" Lucien barked a dry laugh, stepping closer still until his chest brushed the heavy cotton of her jacket. "Is that what you call the night we spent behind the antiquities shop in Bloomsbury?" The air in the narrow hallway turned frigid. Rory's breath hitched, the memory of rain slicking his platinum hair and the heat of his hands against her spine flashing behind her eyelids. "That was a mistake born of adrenaline," Rory whispered, her voice losing its defensive edge. "You didn't call it a mistake when you pulled me down by my lapels." Lucien raised his free hand, his fingers hovering millimeters from her cheek before dropping back to his side. "You're terrified of what happens when you let someone past the barricades." "I built this life brick by brick after tearing down the last one." Rory jabbed a finger against the solid wall of his chest. "I answer to no syndicate, no father, and certainly no French broker with a god complex." "I am standing in a hallway on Brick Lane smelling like curry and damp wool because I couldn't sleep wondering if you caught a silver bullet in the docks." Lucien caught her wrist, his thumb brushing directly over the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. His touch was feather-light, belying the strength in his grip. "Does that sound like leverage to you?" Rory stared down at his thumb tracing the old wound, her pulse roaring in her ears. The anger that had sustained her through three weeks of silence fractured, leaving raw edges exposed between them. "You complicate things," she murmured, her voice dropping to a harsh rasp. "So do you." Lucien leaned down, his breath warm against her temple, his heterochromatic eyes searching hers for any sign of retreat. "Stop running, Rory."
created_at"2026-07-25T15:02:40.725Z" 7/25/2026, 3:02:40 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Lucien crouched slightly [slightly]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.553
leniency1
rawRatio0.048
effectiveRatio0.048
83.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount929
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"happily"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"happily"
1"sharply"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
30.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount929
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"intensity"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"affection"
count1
5
word"clenching"
count1
6
word"complex"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"roaring"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"fractured"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"weight"
2"intensity"
3"pulse"
4"affection"
5"clenching"
6"complex"
7"tracing"
8"roaring"
9"silence"
10"fractured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences35
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences35
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences52
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords927
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
32.03% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount551
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.36
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London1
Rory12
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien13
French1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
places
0"London"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore0.32
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences35
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount927
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
65.81% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean34.33
std13.06
cv0.38
sampleLengths
029
154
221
338
428
523
653
726
827
911
1053
1127
1241
1347
1431
1551
1640
1729
1834
1932
2015
2144
2240
2362
2434
2512
2625
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences35
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs85
matches(empty)
87.91% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences52
ratio0.019
matches
0"\"You missed our meeting at the docks,\" Lucien said, his heterochromatic gaze—one amber, one black—sweeping past the shoulder blocking the gap."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount557
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.01436265709156194
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.008976660682226212
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences52
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences52
mean17.83
std7.91
cv0.444
sampleLengths
014
115
217
320
417
521
623
715
828
915
108
1129
1215
139
1420
156
1627
1711
1819
1914
2020
2123
224
2331
2410
2528
2619
2718
2813
2930
3021
3125
3215
3318
3411
3519
3615
378
3824
3915
4032
4112
4224
4316
4445
4510
467
4716
4818
4912
86.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5769230769230769
totalSentences52
uniqueOpeners30
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences35
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount4
totalSentences35
matches
0"He leaned his weight onto"
1"He straightened immediately, his mismatched"
2"His touch was feather-light, belying"
3"she murmured, her voice dropping"
ratio0.114
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount33
totalSentences35
matches
0"The warped wood yielded with"
1"Lucien stood on the threshold,"
2"A tailored charcoal suit clung"
3"Lucien said, his heterochromatic gaze—one"
4"Rory gripped the edge of"
5"Lucien stepped forward, bridging the"
6"Rory closed the door two"
7"Lucien scanned the precarious stacks"
8"He leaned his weight onto"
9"Rory planted her feet, refusing"
10"A fat tabby cat uncurled"
11"Rory muttered, watching the cat"
12"Lucien crouched slightly, though the"
13"He straightened immediately, his mismatched"
14"Rory crossed her arms over"
15"Lucien closed the remaining distance,"
16"Rory tilted her chin up,"
17"Lucien’s voice dropped an octave,"
18"Rory shoved a stray lock"
19"Lucien gripped the ivory handle"
ratio0.943
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences35
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences13
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Rory's breath hitched, the memory of rain slicking his platinum hair and the heat of his hands against her spine flashing behind her eyelids."
1"Rory stared down at his thumb tracing the old wound, her pulse roaring in her ears."
2"The anger that had sustained her through three weeks of silence fractured, leaving raw edges exposed between them."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Rory planted, refusing to yield another inch of territory"
1"Lucien crouched slightly, though the movement strained the tight weave of his jacket across his shoulders"
2"Rory crossed, the fabric of her delivery jacket stiff against her ribs"
3"Rory uncrossed, her hands clenching into fists at her sides"
4"Rory whispered, her voice losing its defensive edge"
5"she murmured, her voice dropping to a harsh rasp"
44.74% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
1"Lucien barked (bark)"
2"Rory whispered (whisper)"
3"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.132
leniency0.263
rawRatio0.8
effectiveRatio0.211
74.1639%