Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCWTMBJQWTX8R448J7NE8XW

Run Details

Duration:
37.1s
Cost:
$0.041545
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Cold rain lashed Camden High Street in sheets, sweeping sideways off Victorian eaves and churning the gutters into black torrents. Harlow Quinn tracked her mark through the neon-drenched dark, her tactical boots pounding wet asphalt. Water streamed down her collar, soaking the lining of her heavy leather coat, but her eyes remained locked on the figure darting thirty yards ahead. Tomás Herrera cut through the drizzle like a shadow, his dark coat billowing as he skirted a row of shuttered storefronts. The glare of a passing night bus caught his profile—olive skin flushed with exertion, short dark curls plastered flat against his forehead. Rounding a delivery van, he glanced back. The silver Saint Christopher medallion around his neck flashed amber under the streetlamps, swinging violently with every stride. Harlow drew a deep, burning lungful of night air and pushed her pace, her sharp jaw set against the cold. Eighteen years in the Metropolitan Police had trained her legs to ignore the bite of pavement, but the slick cobbles near the canal locks tested every step. "Hold it right there, Herrera!" Tomás didn't slow. He leaped an overturned vegetable crate, landing with a splash that sent dirty water spraying across the brickwork of a narrow alleyway. "I can't do that, Detective!" Harlow rounded the corner hard, her shoulder skimming a damp poster-plastered wall. "You're adding evading arrest to an already absurd list of infractions!" "You don't know what you're interfering with!" Tomás veered into the dark lane behind the old stables, his shoes kicking up a cloud of startled roosting pigeons. The scar on his left forearm, pale and jagged against his skin, caught the pale moonlit drizzle as he ducked under an archway. Harlow gained ground, narrowing the distance to twenty feet. Her left hand pressed against her belt, securing her kit, while her right hovered over the low-slung holster at her hip. "Stop running, Tommy! We just want to talk about the unauthorized pharmaceuticals!" "I'm not going to a cell!" He smashed his shoulder against a corrugated iron service door set deep into the subterranean brick foundations of the abandoned northern line extension. The heavy hatch rattled in its frame, secured by a thick, rusted deadbolt. Harlow slowed her approach, her boots spread wide on the wet stones, her center of gravity low. She unclipped her Glock 17, keeping the barrel trained on the ground between them. "End of the alley. Put your hands on the iron." Tomás backed up until his spine hit the door, his chest heaving, his warm brown eyes wide in the gloom. Rain trickled into the deep lines around his mouth. "You need to walk away, Harlow." "That's Detective Quinn. Turn around." "If you catch me, people die." Tomás dipped his left hand toward his inner coat pocket. "Don't do it!" Harlow brought the sidearm up, three-point alignment settling instantly on the center of his chest. "Keep your hands where I can see them." Tomás pulled his hand out slowly. He held no weapon. Pressed between his thumb and forefinger was a flat piece of carved ivory—a thumb-sized bone token, ancient and yellowed, etched with delicate, microscopic grooves that seemed to swallow the ambient light. He didn't drop it. He drove the token into a hairline crack between the iron door and the damp brickwork. A low, resonant hum vibrated through the alley floor, rattling the loose cobbles around Harlow's boots. The heavy deadbolt retracted with a metallic thud that sounded like a rifle discharge, and the rusted door swung inward, revealing a yawning black gap. Tomás let himself fall backward into the darkness. "Stay on the surface!" Harlow surged forward, her fingers catching only wet wool before Tomás slipped out of reach. The door remained propped open, an unholy draft pouring out from the depths. It wasn't the dead, damp air of a disused sewer. It carried a thick, oppressive warmth, smelling of ozone, dry cinnamon, burnt tallow, and copper. Harlow unhitched her heavy tactical torch from her vest, clicking the high-intensity beam into life. The white light cut through the gloom, illuminating a flight of steep, Victorian-tiled stairs winding down into the earth. Green moss slicked the cracked white tiles, and soot stained the arched ceiling. Far below, rapid footsteps echoed, slapping down stone steps at impossible angles. She checked her wrist. The worn leather watch strap felt cold and sodden against her skin. Midnight had just passed. "Herrera!" Her voice bounced off the subterranean tile, swallowed quickly by the expanding dark. She stepped over the threshold. The heavy iron door slammed shut behind her with absolute, deafening finality. Harlow spun, driving her boot against the metal. It didn't yield an inch. She grabbed the frame, searching for a latch, a handle, or a keyhole. The interior surface was completely smooth, warm to the touch, sealed like a tomb. "Brilliant," she muttered under her breath. She turned back to the stairs, her light carving out the path ahead. Her thumb rested securely on the frame of her Glock. Military precision took over, damping down the spike of adrenaline in her throat. She descended, each step deliberate, her ears straining against the heavy silence of the tunnel. Ten steps. Twenty. The air grew rapidly hotter, thick enough to coat her tongue with an oily residue. The distant thrum of London traffic—the sirens, the heavy diesel engines, the steady hum of the surface—vanished completely. In its place, a rhythmic, pulsing vibration echoed through the masonry, beating against her eardrums like a distant drum. The spiral flight ended sixty feet down, opening into a high-vaulted concourse. White subway tiles gave way to jagged London clay and ancient soot-stained brickwork. Harlow flattened herself against a thick masonry pillar, switching off her torch to preserve the battery and blend into the shadows. Flickering orange and violet light spilled from the far end of the platform. Red paper lanterns, suspended by braided copper wire, swung softly in a breeze that had no right to exist this far underground. She peeked around the curved brickwork. An illicit subterranean bazaar stretched out before her, occupying an abandoned, vast Tube station buried beneath Camden. Hundreds of figures moved between rows of makeshift stalls draped in heavy canvas and iron chains. The wares displayed on the wooden counters defied standard logic: glass jars filled with swirling, luminescent vapor; silver trays piled with dried roots that twitched in the humid air; locked iron cages holding small, pale things that rustled against the bars. Peddlers dressed in heavy wool capes traded whisper-thin parchment scrolls with buyers whose faces remained hidden beneath deep cowls and porcelain masks. The Veil Market. A wave of low voices washed over the platform—a bizarre chorus of clicking dialects, soft melodic chimes, and deep guttural murmurs that sent a sharp chill down Harlow’s spine. Through the dense crowd of shoppers and merchants, she spotted Tomás. He was pushing past a stall draped in strange, shimmering pelts, making his way toward a rusted iron footbridge that spanned the sunken, dark rail bed down the center of the station. Harlow pulled her weapon closer to her chest, her heart hammering against her ribs. Every instinct drilled into her over two decades of police work screamed at her to retreat, to find an exit, to document the location and return with a tactical unit. Then she remembered DS Morris. Three years ago, his body had been recovered from an alley three miles from here, his skin cold, his eyes staring at nothing, his cause of death listed simply as sudden heart failure. The air in that alley had smelled of the exact same metallic ozone that now coated her throat. Upper management had sealed the file. They had told her to drop it. Tomás reached the crown of the iron bridge, pausing to cast a glance back over his shoulder toward the platform entrance. His warm brown eyes swept the shadowy pillars, searching for her. Harlow looked down at the teeming market. She possessed no bone token to navigate the stalls, no knowledge of the rules governing this underworld, and no backup coming down those stairs. Entering that crowd meant leaving every law, every protocol, and every shred of official protection behind. She shifted her footing, her leather coat rustling softly in the damp heat, her finger hovering along the guard of her firearm as she made her choice.
created_at"2026-07-25T15:03:17.63Z" 7/25/2026, 3:03:17 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.267
leniency0.533
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.59% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1401
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"completely"
count2
3
adverb"softly"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
1"quickly"
2"completely"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
28.62% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1401
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"churning"
count1
1
word"pounding"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count2
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"vibrated"
count1
5
word"depths"
count1
6
word"oppressive"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"intensity"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count2
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"rhythmic"
count1
13
word"standard"
count1
14
word"whisper"
count1
15
word"porcelain"
count1
16
word"chill"
count1
17
word"navigate"
count1
highlights
0"churning"
1"pounding"
2"gloom"
3"etched"
4"vibrated"
5"depths"
6"oppressive"
7"warmth"
8"intensity"
9"footsteps"
10"echoed"
11"silence"
12"rhythmic"
13"standard"
14"whisper"
15"porcelain"
16"chill"
17"navigate"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences87
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1396
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1306
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity1.07
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
Camden2
High1
Street1
Victorian2
Quinn1
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
Metropolitan1
Police1
Glock2
Harlow14
Tomás10
Victorian-tiled1
London2
Tube1
Veil1
Market1
Morris1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Herrera"
2"Saint"
3"Christopher"
4"Police"
5"Harlow"
6"Tomás"
7"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Metropolitan"
4"London"
globalScore0.964
windowScore0.833
83.33% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"grooves that seemed to swallow the ambient light"
1"sounded like a rifle discharge, and the ru"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1396
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"Entering that crowd"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean29.7
std17.95
cv0.604
sampleLengths
060
168
247
35
425
55
623
77
843
942
106
1136
1241
1335
145
1516
1626
1741
1820
1941
2012
2128
2225
2359
2420
2514
265
2712
2840
296
3051
3155
3225
3321
3435
356
3633
3763
383
3929
4043
4144
4256
4313
4432
4547
4627
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"been recovered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs206
matches
0"was pushing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences98
ratio0.051
matches
0"The glare of a passing night bus caught his profile—olive skin flushed with exertion, short dark curls plastered flat against his forehead."
1"Pressed between his thumb and forefinger was a flat piece of carved ivory—a thumb-sized bone token, ancient and yellowed, etched with delicate, microscopic grooves that seemed to swallow the ambient light."
2"The distant thrum of London traffic—the sirens, the heavy diesel engines, the steady hum of the surface—vanished completely."
3"The wares displayed on the wooden counters defied standard logic: glass jars filled with swirling, luminescent vapor; silver trays piled with dried roots that twitched in the humid air; locked iron cages holding small, pale things that rustled against the bars."
4"A wave of low voices washed over the platform—a bizarre chorus of clicking dialects, soft melodic chimes, and deep guttural murmurs that sent a sharp chill down Harlow’s spine."
70.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1321
adjectiveStacks5
stackExamples
0"damp poster-plastered wall."
1"steep, Victorian-tiled stairs"
2"Far below, rapid footsteps"
3"ancient soot-stained brickwork."
4"exact same metallic ozone"
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.018925056775170326
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.010598031794095382
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean14.24
std7.93
cv0.557
sampleLengths
020
115
225
321
422
57
618
720
827
95
103
1122
125
1312
1411
157
1620
1723
189
1921
2012
216
2223
2313
2417
2514
2610
2720
289
296
305
3116
3218
338
346
354
3631
374
3816
3916
4025
418
424
4315
4413
4510
4615
4715
4819
4913
75.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.47959183673469385
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners47
39.22% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"Then she remembered DS Morris."
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences85
matches
0"He leaped an overturned vegetable"
1"Her left hand pressed against"
2"He smashed his shoulder against"
3"She unclipped her Glock 17,"
4"He held no weapon."
5"He didn't drop it."
6"He drove the token into"
7"It wasn't the dead, damp"
8"It carried a thick, oppressive"
9"She checked her wrist."
10"Her voice bounced off the"
11"She stepped over the threshold."
12"It didn't yield an inch."
13"She grabbed the frame, searching"
14"she muttered under her breath"
15"She turned back to the"
16"Her thumb rested securely on"
17"She descended, each step deliberate,"
18"She peeked around the curved"
19"He was pushing past a"
ratio0.282
48.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences85
matches
0"Harlow Quinn tracked her mark"
1"Water streamed down her collar,"
2"Tomás Herrera cut through the"
3"The glare of a passing"
4"The silver Saint Christopher medallion"
5"Harlow drew a deep, burning"
6"Tomás didn't slow."
7"He leaped an overturned vegetable"
8"Harlow rounded the corner hard,"
9"Tomás veered into the dark"
10"The scar on his left"
11"Harlow gained ground, narrowing the"
12"Her left hand pressed against"
13"He smashed his shoulder against"
14"The heavy hatch rattled in"
15"Harlow slowed her approach, her"
16"She unclipped her Glock 17,"
17"Tomás backed up until his"
18"Rain trickled into the deep"
19"Tomás dipped his left hand"
ratio0.824
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
39.17% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences62
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Water streamed down her collar, soaking the lining of her heavy leather coat, but her eyes remained locked on the figure darting thirty yards ahead."
1"He leaped an overturned vegetable crate, landing with a splash that sent dirty water spraying across the brickwork of a narrow alleyway."
2"Tomás veered into the dark lane behind the old stables, his shoes kicking up a cloud of startled roosting pigeons."
3"Pressed between his thumb and forefinger was a flat piece of carved ivory—a thumb-sized bone token, ancient and yellowed, etched with delicate, microscopic groo…"
4"Red paper lanterns, suspended by braided copper wire, swung softly in a breeze that had no right to exist this far underground."
5"The wares displayed on the wooden counters defied standard logic: glass jars filled with swirling, luminescent vapor; silver trays piled with dried roots that t…"
6"A wave of low voices washed over the platform—a bizarre chorus of clicking dialects, soft melodic chimes, and deep guttural murmurs that sent a sharp chill down…"
7"He was pushing past a stall draped in strange, shimmering pelts, making his way toward a rusted iron footbridge that spanned the sunken, dark rail bed down the …"
8"She shifted her footing, her leather coat rustling softly in the damp heat, her finger hovering along the guard of her firearm as she made her choice."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.067
leniency0.133
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.133
80.9894%