Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCWTYGMYKJ43CNVY8AYH2WP

Run Details

Duration:
2m 50s
Cost:
$0.005612
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The first deadbolt clicked back like a gunshot. Rory's hand froze on the brass. Behind her, Brick Lane hissed with curry smoke and rain. She pulled the second. The chain rattled free. Aurora Carter stared into the hallway that smelled of turmeric and old paper. Then she yanked the door open. Lucien Moreau filled the frame in charcoal wool, platinum hair plastered dark by the drizzle, amber eye and black eye both fixed on her mouth. His ivory cane tapped once against the threshold, blade hidden, useless tonight. "You came," he said. "Door's open. I don't keep schedules for ghosts." "He'd injured you." "Don't." The flat on Brick Lane swallowed the silence. Three deadbolts glared behind her, useless now. Ptolemy the tabby arched over a stack of scrolls, tail high, then vanished into Eva's bedroom without greeting anyone. Rory stepped back. Her shoulder-length black hair brushed her collarbone. The crescent scar on her left wrist flashed white in the lamplight. "Inside. Before the curry smell soaks your suit." He moved past her, slow, cane silent on the scarred floorboards. The room cramped beneath books, scrolls, research notes stacked on every surface—Eva's absence heavy, a ghost thicker than Lucien. He did not sit. He stood by the window, rain streaking the glass, charcoal shoulders taut. "You locked three deadbolts," he said. "Yet you opened on the first knock." "Your knock isn't anyone else's." "That was not an answer." Her blue eyes narrowed. "What do you want, Luc? Information? A favour? Or just to stand in my doorway and bleed on my floor?" "Your floor is Eva's. You hide here." "I live here." "Above Silas' bar you work deliveries. For Yu-Fei Cheung. Golden Empress." His mouth twisted. "Not hidden. Just small." Rory crossed her arms. The scar on her wrist throbbed, old childhood accident, fresh tonight. "Say it." "You left London without word." "I left Evan. You know the difference." "Do I?" He turned. Heterochromatic eyes caught the bulb—amber burning, black swallowing light. "You let him think he broke you. Then you vanished into part-time jobs and curry-house air. You did not vanish from me." The air tightened. Outside, a motorbike backfired. Inside, books seemed to lean closer, listening. Rory's breath hitched. "You traded in hurt, Lucien. Every language you speak, every secret you broker in this supernatural back-alley you call home. You told me I was weak for running. For loving badly. For—" "For needing a door with three deadbolts?" He stepped closer. Rain smelled of iron and his cologne, something sharp, Marseille-born, demon-half. "I told you nothing of the kind. I told you to leave before he killed the part of you that thinks out of boxes." She laughed, brittle. "Cool-headed, intelligent Rory. That's what they call me. Not weak." "You are not weak." His gloved hand lifted, hovered near her jaw, then dropped. The cane's ivory handle glinted. "You are frightened. And I am frightened I spoke in four languages when one—yours—would have kept you." Rory's heart hammered against her ribs. She felt the flat's cramped walls, Eva's absence, the tabby's silent watch from the bedroom door. Every scroll and note pressed in, witnesses. "You hurt me," she said, quiet. "I know." "You said—" "I said you should flee to London at Eva's behest. I arranged the flat above Silas'. I arranged the delivery work with Yu-Fei. I arranged your safety and then I disappeared into information and charcoal suits because I am a coward in the language of love." The word hung, naked. Rory's lips parted. "Don't." "Don't what? Don't name it?" She stepped forward. His tailored coat brushed her arm. She smelled rain, tobacco, the blade hidden inside ivory. "You left things unsaid," she whispered. "Then let me say them." His black eye softened. The amber flickered. "I am half-demon. From Avaros. My father is not human. I fix things for people who have no names in your law books. I have hurt you with silence. I have hurt you with presence. And I am here, unannounced, on Brick Lane, because Eva's flat is the only map that leads back to you." Rory's fingers found the crescent scar on her left wrist. She traced it, old accident, present anchor. "You shouldn't have come." "I could not stay away." She looked up. Bright blue met heterochromatic gold and abyss. "One kiss," she said, "and then you leave." He leaned. His mouth found hers—cold rain, hot regret, four languages collapsing into one breath. Rory pulled back first. Her hand rested on his chest, feeling the heart that beat wrong, demon-half, still hers. "Go," she said. Lucien bowed his head. The cane tapped once, blade sheathed, useless. "I will return," he said. "Not as a ghost." The door opened. The three deadbolts waited behind him. Brick Lane swallowed his silhouette into the rain. Rory stood in Eva's cramped flat, books and scrolls breathing around her, the scar on her wrist burning like a new moon. She did not lock the chain.<|end_message|>
created_at"2026-07-25T15:03:28.028Z" 7/25/2026, 3:03:28 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount836
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.10% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount836
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"throbbed"
2"flickered"
3"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences66
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences66
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords831
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
53.23% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount465
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.94
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Brick3
Lane3
Carter1
Moreau1
Eva4
Lucien3
Rory9
Heterochromatic1
Rain1
Marseille-born1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
4"Rory"
5"Heterochromatic"
6"Rain"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille-born"
globalScore0.532
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences35
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount831
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean15.68
std14.26
cv0.909
sampleLengths
024
18
213
36
437
54
68
73
81
934
1022
118
1246
1313
145
155
1624
177
183
1918
2017
215
227
2335
2414
2535
2645
2713
2836
2929
306
312
322
3346
344
354
365
3718
386
3967
4017
414
425
4310
448
4515
4619
473
4811
499
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs91
matches(empty)
51.67% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences94
ratio0.032
matches
0"The room cramped beneath books, scrolls, research notes stacked on every surface—Eva's absence heavy, a ghost thicker than Lucien."
1"Heterochromatic eyes caught the bulb—amber burning, black swallowing light."
2"His mouth found hers—cold rain, hot regret, four languages collapsing into one breath."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount472
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.025423728813559324
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean8.84
std8.49
cv0.96
sampleLengths
08
16
210
34
44
513
66
725
812
94
108
113
121
138
147
1519
163
177
1812
198
2011
2119
224
2312
246
257
265
275
284
2920
307
313
3214
334
344
3511
362
375
387
394
409
4122
423
434
447
453
4632
4710
4811
4924
58.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3723404255319149
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners35
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences58
matches
0"Then she yanked the door"
1"Bright blue met heterochromatic gold"
ratio0.034
68.28% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences58
matches
0"She pulled the second."
1"His ivory cane tapped once"
2"Her shoulder-length black hair brushed"
3"He moved past her, slow,"
4"He did not sit."
5"He stood by the window,"
6"Her blue eyes narrowed."
7"His mouth twisted"
8"He stepped closer"
9"She laughed, brittle."
10"His gloved hand lifted, hovered"
11"She felt the flat's cramped"
12"she said, quiet"
13"She stepped forward."
14"His tailored coat brushed her"
15"She smelled rain, tobacco, the"
16"His black eye softened"
17"She traced it, old accident,"
18"She looked up."
19"His mouth found hers—cold rain,"
ratio0.379
20.34% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences58
matches
0"The first deadbolt clicked back"
1"Rory's hand froze on the"
2"She pulled the second."
3"The chain rattled free."
4"Aurora Carter stared into the"
5"Lucien Moreau filled the frame"
6"His ivory cane tapped once"
7"The flat on Brick Lane"
8"Ptolemy the tabby arched over"
9"Rory stepped back."
10"Her shoulder-length black hair brushed"
11"The crescent scar on her"
12"He moved past her, slow,"
13"The room cramped beneath books,"
14"He did not sit."
15"He stood by the window,"
16"Her blue eyes narrowed."
17"His mouth twisted"
18"Rory crossed her arms."
19"The scar on her wrist"
ratio0.879
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences17
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Rory stood in Eva's cramped flat, books and scrolls breathing around her, the scar on her wrist burning like a new moon."
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, quiet"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.175
leniency0.35
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.05
86.8604%