Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCWW6DKYFR5H6WFYMZP133G

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Duration:
20.0s
Cost:
$0.028470
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The brass deadbolt threw a heavy metallic thud across the tiny hallway, but the weight on the other side of the timber kept pressing forward. Rory snatched the iron poker from beside the cold stove, yanked the heavy door back three inches, and thrust the pointed tip directly at the visitor's throat. "Wrong flat," she said. An ivory cane head caught the tip of the poker, flicking the heavy iron aside with absurd ease. "A warm Welsh welcome, as always." Lucien Moreau stepped across the threshold before she could slam the panel shut. Tailored charcoal wool hugged his broad shoulders, his platinum blond hair slicked back without a single stray strand. The faint scent of clove tobacco and ozone rolled off him, instantly smothering the lingering smell of roasted cardamom drifting up through the floorboards from the curry house below. One amber eye gleamed under the hallway lamp. The other remained as black as a fathomless well. Ptolemy hissed from atop a stack of leather-bound folios, his striped tail puffing to twice its normal size before the tabby bolted beneath the sofa. "Get out, Lucien." "And miss this charming hospitality?" He slid his gloves off, finger by finger, revealing pale hands with black-tinted nails. "You dropped off the radar six months ago, Rory. London is a small city for someone who owes me three distinct favors." "I owe you nothing." She kept the poker raised, her knuckles turning white against the soot-stained grip. "You got your payment in Soho. The ledger was clean." "The ledger is never clean when dark magic enters the equation." His cane gave a sharp knock against the floorboards. "And you left without taking your coat." "I left because you turned my contact over to the Enforcers." "I turned a traitor over to the people who pay for his head." Lucien took a slow step deeper into the narrow sitting room, his gaze sweeping over the chaotic scatter of research scrolls, open dictionaries, and half-empty mugs of black tea. "A necessary business transaction. You always were too soft about collateral damage." "He was my friend." "He was a thief with a bad habit of selling counterfeit sigils." Lucien stopped inches away from her. The heat off his half-demon skin radiated through the thin cotton of her sweater, suffocating and impossibly warm. "And he would have sold you to the highest bidder in Whitechapel by morning." "You don't get to decide who I trust." "Evidently not. Look at this place." His gloved finger traced the spine of an ancient Welsh legal text sitting on the table. "Hiding in Brick Lane with a fugitive academic. You used to have higher standards." "Eva isn't a fugitive." "The High Council disagrees." Rory lowered the poker an inch, her heart thumping against her ribs like a trapped bird. "Why are you here, Lucien? Truly." "I missed our conversations." "Liar." "You always did cut straight to the bone." His lips curved into a sharp, cold smile that didn't reach his mismatched eyes. "I require your mind, Rory. The out-of-the-box Welsh stubbornness that saved us in Cardiff." "Cardiff was a mistake." "Cardiff was exquisite." He tilted his head, his dark eye catching the light, reflecting nothing at all. "You were magnificent when you set that apothecary on fire." "I was running for my life from Evan." The name slipped out before she could stop it, bitter and sharp on her tongue. Lucien's smile died instantly. The air in the flat dropped five degrees, the ambient warmth of his demonic blood snapping into a freezing, razor-edged stillness. "Evan is dead," Lucien murmured, his voice dropping an octave into that low, resonant growl that made the skin on her arms prickle. "I made sure of that myself, if you recall." "I didn't ask you to kill him." "No. You merely stood there and watched him bleed out on my Persian rug while you held a silver letter opener." He reached out, his bare index finger brushing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. The touch sent a jolt of static electricity straight up her arm. "You bled for him. I dislike messy investments." Rory yanked her wrist back, step-backing until the edge of Eva's paper-strewn desk bit into her hip. "You aren't an investment, Rory. You are a habit I haven't managed to break." "Then break it now. Walk out that door." "I cannot." He reached into his breast pocket and drew out a folded piece of heavy parchment, sealed with dark red wax that bore no emblem. "Because fifteen minutes ago, someone left this on my desk in Mayfair. It has your real name written on the back." Rory stared at the wax. "Malphora?" "No," Lucien said quietly. "Aurora Carter." The flat went deathly quiet save for the hum of the refrigerator in the kitchenette and the distant rumble of a red double-decker bus grinding its gears on Brick Lane. "Who gave it to you?" she whispered. "A dead man." Lucien tossed the parchment onto the clutter of books. "He collapsed in my foyer right after delivering it. Ash in his lungs. His soul pulled clean out through his teeth." Rory snatched the parchment, her thumb breaking the red seal. Her bright blue eyes scanned the cramped, frantic handwriting covering the page. "This is Pre-Law drafting," she muttered, the legal jargon jumping out at her despite the archaic syntax. "This is a binding summons. A court mandate from the Lower Realms." "They know where you are." Lucien closed the distance between them again, his ivory cane dropping to the carpet with a dull thud. He didn't pick it up. He reached out, his heavy hand catching her chin, forcing her to look up into his mismatched eyes. "They know you fled the contract Brendan signed before you were born." "My father didn't signature any contract with Avaros." "Your father was an Irish barrister with massive gambling debts and a clever tongue," Lucien countered, his thumb tracing her lower lip with deliberate, possessive slowness. "He bargained away his firstborn's magic to clear his slate with the demon lords. You think you came to London on your own free will? You think Eva just happened to have a flat ready for you?" Rory froze, the parchment crinkling in her tightening grip. "What are you saying?" "I moved the pieces, Rory. I have been holding your leash since the night you ran from Cardiff." She lifted her hand to strike him, but Lucien caught her wrist in mid-air, pinning her arm against the wood of the desk behind her. His body pressed flush against hers, terrifyingly strong and suffocatingly hot. "Let go of me," she snarled. "Never," he whispered against her ear, his breath searing her skin. "I paid your father's debt three years ago. You belong to my house now." A sudden, deafening explosion blew the front door entirely off its hinges. Splintered wood and iron deadbolts shrieked through the narrow hallway, burying themselves deep into the plaster walls. A tall, cloaked figure stepped through the swirling cloud of dust and smoke, holding a dripping black blade. "Lucien Moreau," a raspy, dual-toned voice echoed through the flat. "The Council revokes your jurisdiction."
created_at"2026-07-25T15:04:08.908Z" 7/25/2026, 3:04:08 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Lucien said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.379
leniency0.759
rawRatio0.045
effectiveRatio0.034
95.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1197
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1197
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"chaotic"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"searing"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"chaotic"
2"traced"
3"warmth"
4"scanned"
5"tracing"
6"searing"
7"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences49
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences49
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1197
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
78.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount701
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.43
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Lucien10
Welsh1
Rory6
Eva1
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.787
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1197
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean23.02
std17.69
cv0.768
sampleLengths
025
127
24
318
46
577
625
73
841
927
1027
1111
1254
134
1450
158
1636
174
184
1922
204
211
2236
234
2427
2523
2625
2732
287
2957
3017
3114
328
3347
346
356
3630
377
3833
3922
4029
4158
428
4363
4413
4518
4636
476
4825
4929
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs105
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences85
ratio0
matches(empty)
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount713
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"freezing, razor-edged stillness."
1"small crescent-shaped scar"
2"raspy, dual-toned voice"
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.025245441795231416
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.012622720897615708
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean14.08
std8.68
cv0.616
sampleLengths
025
127
24
318
46
513
618
729
88
99
1025
113
1219
1322
1417
1510
1620
177
1811
1942
2012
214
2218
2318
2414
258
2622
2714
284
294
3016
316
324
331
3422
3514
364
3717
3810
3923
404
4121
4223
439
447
4537
4612
478
4817
4914
67.45% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4470588235294118
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences46
matches
0"He slid his gloves off,"
1"She kept the poker raised,"
2"His cane gave a sharp"
3"His gloved finger traced the"
4"His lips curved into a"
5"He tilted his head, his"
6"He reached out, his bare"
7"He reached into his breast"
8"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
9"she muttered, the legal jargon"
10"He didn't pick it up."
11"He reached out, his heavy"
12"She lifted her hand to"
13"His body pressed flush against"
14"he whispered against her ear,"
ratio0.326
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences46
matches
0"The brass deadbolt threw a"
1"Rory snatched the iron poker"
2"An ivory cane head caught"
3"Lucien Moreau stepped across the"
4"The faint scent of clove"
5"The other remained as black"
6"Ptolemy hissed from atop a"
7"He slid his gloves off,"
8"She kept the poker raised,"
9"His cane gave a sharp"
10"Lucien took a slow step"
11"Lucien stopped inches away from"
12"The heat off his half-demon"
13"His gloved finger traced the"
14"Rory lowered the poker an"
15"His lips curved into a"
16"He tilted his head, his"
17"The name slipped out before"
18"Lucien's smile died instantly."
19"The air in the flat"
ratio0.935
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He reached out, his heavy hand catching her chin, forcing her to look up into his mismatched eyes."
34.09% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"She kept, her knuckles turning white against the soot-stained grip"
1"He tilted, his dark eye catching the light, reflecting nothing at all"
2"Lucien countered, his thumb tracing her lower lip with deliberate, possessive slowness"
3"he whispered, his breath searing her skin"
63.79% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she muttered (mutter)"
3"she snarled (snarl)"
4"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.121
leniency0.241
rawRatio0.714
effectiveRatio0.172
82.5993%