Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCWW7R7W70HVJPEHVBWRBR3

Run Details

Duration:
11m 53s
Cost:
$0.024352
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt resisted Rory’s thumb. She twisted the brass cylinder, felt it surrender, and pulled Eva’s front door inward. Curry steam climbed from the shop below, thick with cumin and burnt onion, mixing with the paper-and-ink breath of the flat. Books towered on every surface—scrolls unfurled, research notes pinned like moth wings, leather volumes stacked in teetering columns. Ptolemy’s tail flicked across her ankle before the tabby vanished behind a shelf. Then she saw him. Lucien Moreau filled the doorway, soaked in London grey, yet immaculate. His charcoal suit clung to narrow shoulders without a wrinkle. Platinum hair lay slicked to his skull like wet ice. One amber eye burned. The other, black as wet asphalt, drank the hall light whole. His ivory cane tapped once against the threshold, a quiet sound that carried weight. “Rory.” Her bright blue eyes narrowed. The small crescent scar on her left wrist itched beneath the sleeve of her delivery jacket. She pressed her palm against the doorframe. “What do you want?” He stepped forward. The cane’s tip caught the door’s edge. She didn’t drop it. He pushed inside. “I came to see you.” “Eva’s place isn’t a drop-in centre.” “You left without a word.” His voice stayed low, French vowels rounding every sharp edge. “Three months. No message. No address until tonight.” Rory shut the door behind him. The deadbolts clicked back into place—one, two, three. The flat felt smaller already. “I’m not missing, Lucien.” “No. You are hiding.” Ptolemy leapt onto a stack of grimoires and hissed at his polished shoes. Lucien looked down. His lip twitched, not quite a smile, not quite warmth. “Even the cat remembers my shoes.” Rory folded her arms tight. The scar faced outward, pale against her skin. “You shouldn’t have come.” “I know.” But he didn’t move toward the exit. She smelled him—cedar, something darker, like iron left in rain. Her black hair hung straight to her shoulders, damp from the drizzle she’d walked through. The Golden Empress logo on her jacket was faded. She’d been half-asleep, reading Eva’s notes on protective sigils, when the knock had come. Now her pulse hammered in her throat, quick and traitorous. “I heard about Evan,” he said. Her breath caught. “Don’t.” “I heard he found you.” “He found nothing. I left.” “You left him.” Lucien tilted his head. The amber eye studied her mouth, her hands, the tension in her shoulders. “But you left me too.” The cramped flat seemed to contract. Rory turned away and walked to the small kitchen alcove. A kettle sat cold. She gripped the counter, knuckles white. “You made that easy.” “I made nothing easy.” He followed. Not close, but closer. The cane tapped the floorboards with measured patience. “You vanished after Marseille. I searched every flat, every bar, every restaurant with a delivery sign in the window.” “That’s your job. Searching.” “No. That is my work. You were never work.” She faced him. Her height—five foot six—put her eye level with his throat. She looked up anyway. “Then why are you here?” “Because you opened the door.” The silence stretched, tight as wire between them. Rory stepped closer. She shouldn’t. The books pressed around them, a forest of paper and old words, but she moved through them. Her shoulder brushed his suit jacket. The fabric felt expensive, cold, real. “Say it,” she whispered. His jaw tightened. The black eye held steady. “Say what?” “Whatever you didn’t say in Marseille.” The amber eye flickered. His hand lifted—not to her face, but to her wrist. His bare fingers, no gloves now, hovered over the crescent scar. “You carry this like I carry the blade.” He gestured to the cane. “Hidden. Sharp. Useless unless drawn.” “I’m not useless.” “I never said—” “You left me in that flat with Evan’s shadow on the walls. You left me with nothing but a doorway and silence.” “I left you safe.” “You left me alone.” Her voice cracked. She hated the sound. She pulled her wrist back, but he didn’t grip it. He only watched. Lucien lowered his hand. The black eye softened, impossible for a half-demon, yet there it was—human regret. “I am not leaving tonight until you tell me why you ran.” “I’m not running now.” She was closer than she meant. His breath touched her forehead. She smelled cedar, iron, the danger he wore like tailored cloth. “I’m still angry,” she said. “I know.” “I’m still—” She stopped. The word lodged in her throat, sharp and unsaid. “I’m still not over what you did.” He nodded slowly. “Good.” Then his free hand lifted to her jaw. His thumb brushed her lower lip, gentle despite everything. “Then stay angry,” he said. “But stay.” The flat seemed to hold its breath. Ptolemy watched from the shelf, tail curled tight. Rory’s hand found the lapel of his suit. The fabric felt expensive under her fingers. “You smell like trouble.” “I am trouble.” “You smell like regret.” He leaned in. The cane rested against her leg. His mouth hovered near her ear, his words low and rough. “I smell like I never finished what I started with you.” Her breath hitched. She should push him away. She should unlock the deadbolts and throw him into the curry-scented dark of Brick Lane. She should protect the fragile peace Eva’s flat offered. Instead, her fingers tightened on his lapel. “You talk too much,” she said. “Then stop me.” She pulled him down. Their mouths met—hard, urgent, filled with the months of silence and the hurt that had never been spoken aloud. His hand slid into her hair, fingers tangling in the straight black strands. Her other hand pressed against his chest, feeling the heartbeat that was too fast, too human, too real for a demon’s blood. The books around them swayed as she backed into a shelf. A scroll tumbled to the floor. Ptolemy jumped down with a thump, then stalked away with an irritated flick of his tail. Lucien broke away. His amber eye burned. “Rory.” “Don’t stop talking,” she breathed. “Not if you mean it.” He kissed her again, slower, deeper, the kind of kiss that rewrote every unsaid word into something physical, something that hurt and healed at once. His fingers traced the line of her jaw, her neck, the collarbone visible above her jacket. She felt every inch of the five-foot-eleven frame pressing into hers, the tailored charcoal suit a barrier and an invitation. When they parted, her lips were swollen. His hair had come slightly loose, a platinum strand falling over his forehead. The black eye looked almost human in the dim light. “I should go,” he said. “You should not.” “I will destroy your peace.” “Peace was always Eva’s books. Not mine.” She let her hand fall to his cane. The ivory handle felt warm now, alive with his grip. “Draw it,” she said. He froze. “If you carry a blade hidden, draw it. Show me you’re real. Show me you’re not just the fixer who walks away.” His fingers tightened on the handle. The thin blade slid free—silver, thin as a whisper, lethal and beautiful. Rory looked at it. Then at him. “I’m not afraid.” “I am,” he said. “Of you.” She took the blade—not the handle, but the flat of the steel—between her thumb and finger. The crescent scar on her left wrist glowed white in the lamplight. “Then stay,” she said. “And finish it.” The cane clattered to the floor. His hands found her waist, pulling her close, closer, until there was no space left for the old silence, only the fire of everything they had refused to say until now.
created_at"2026-07-25T15:04:10.256Z" 7/25/2026, 3:04:10 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.238
leniency0.476
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1289
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.57% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1289
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"measured"
count1
6
word"silence"
count4
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"weight"
2"warmth"
3"pulse"
4"tension"
5"measured"
6"silence"
7"flickered"
8"traced"
9"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences121
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences121
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences169
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1278
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount969
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.72
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory7
Eva3
Moreau1
London1
French1
Golden1
Empress1
Brick1
Lane1
Ptolemy4
Lucien5
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Moreau"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Lucien"
places
0"London"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite a smile, not quite warmth"
1"not quite warmth"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.347
wordCount1278
matches
0"Not close, but closer"
1"not to her face, but to her wrist"
2"not the handle, but the flat of the steel"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences169
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs96
mean13.31
std14.09
cv1.059
sampleLengths
06
166
24
360
41
528
64
717
85
96
1023
1119
124
134
1413
1513
166
1713
184
192
207
2158
226
233
241
255
265
2725
286
2920
304
3137
324
339
3417
355
365
378
3834
394
408
412
426
4325
4418
453
463
4722
484
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences121
matches
0"been spoken"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs182
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences169
ratio0.053
matches
0"Books towered on every surface—scrolls unfurled, research notes pinned like moth wings, leather volumes stacked in teetering columns."
1"The deadbolts clicked back into place—one, two, three."
2"She smelled him—cedar, something darker, like iron left in rain."
3"Her height—five foot six—put her eye level with his throat."
4"His hand lifted—not to her face, but to her wrist."
5"The black eye softened, impossible for a half-demon, yet there it was—human regret."
6"Their mouths met—hard, urgent, filled with the months of silence and the hurt that had never been spoken aloud."
7"The thin blade slid free—silver, thin as a whisper, lethal and beautiful."
8"She took the blade—not the handle, but the flat of the steel—between her thumb and finger."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount987
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.034447821681864235
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004052684903748734
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences169
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences169
mean7.56
std5.23
cv0.692
sampleLengths
06
114
221
318
413
54
611
710
810
94
1011
1114
121
135
1416
157
164
173
187
194
203
215
226
2315
248
256
268
275
284
294
3013
313
3210
336
345
358
364
372
387
3910
4015
419
4214
4310
446
453
461
475
485
497
44.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.23076923076923078
totalSentences169
uniqueOpeners39
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences107
matches
0"Then she saw him."
1"Then his free hand lifted"
2"Instead, her fingers tightened on"
3"Then at him."
ratio0.037
29.35% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences107
matches
0"She twisted the brass cylinder,"
1"His charcoal suit clung to"
2"His ivory cane tapped once"
3"Her bright blue eyes narrowed."
4"She pressed her palm against"
5"He stepped forward."
6"She didn’t drop it."
7"He pushed inside."
8"His voice stayed low, French"
9"His lip twitched, not quite"
10"She smelled him—cedar, something darker,"
11"Her black hair hung straight"
12"She’d been half-asleep, reading Eva’s"
13"Her breath caught."
14"She gripped the counter, knuckles"
15"She faced him."
16"Her height—five foot six—put her"
17"She looked up anyway."
18"Her shoulder brushed his suit"
19"His jaw tightened."
ratio0.477
2.06% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences107
matches
0"The third deadbolt resisted Rory’s"
1"She twisted the brass cylinder,"
2"Curry steam climbed from the"
3"Books towered on every surface—scrolls"
4"Ptolemy’s tail flicked across her"
5"Lucien Moreau filled the doorway,"
6"His charcoal suit clung to"
7"Platinum hair lay slicked to"
8"The other, black as wet"
9"His ivory cane tapped once"
10"Her bright blue eyes narrowed."
11"The small crescent scar on"
12"She pressed her palm against"
13"He stepped forward."
14"The cane’s tip caught the"
15"She didn’t drop it."
16"He pushed inside."
17"His voice stayed low, French"
18"Rory shut the door behind"
19"The deadbolts clicked back into"
ratio0.916
46.73% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences107
matches
0"Now her pulse hammered in"
ratio0.009
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"His ivory cane tapped once against the threshold, a quiet sound that carried weight."
1"Her other hand pressed against his chest, feeling the heartbeat that was too fast, too human, too real for a demon’s blood."
2"He kissed her again, slower, deeper, the kind of kiss that rewrote every unsaid word into something physical, something that hurt and healed at once."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.159
leniency0.317
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.063
81.8622%