Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCX2DRCRH4FQ9EZHQVNPDMH

Run Details

Duration:
13m 43s
Cost:
$0.027259
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven's Nest buzzed against the Soho dark like a tired pulse, painting Rory’s face in sickly lime as she pushed through the door. Inside, the air hung thick with aged oak, burnt espresso, and the ghost of tobacco. Old maps curled behind yellowed glass, their edges peeling like sunburnt skin. Black-and-white photographs lined the brick—strangers in sharp collars, women with hard mouths—all of them watching. She had not crossed this threshold in years, not since she had climbed the narrow stairs to the flat above and decided the world downstairs could stay downstairs. Silas Blackwood stood behind the mahogany bar, his left knee bent slightly to ease the old limp. His grey-streaked auburn hair was trimmed closer than she remembered, and his neatly trimmed beard had filled in with more silver, matching the streaks. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the amber light as he set down a linen cloth. His hazel eyes lifted. They did not widen. They held. “You’re late,” he said. Rory pulled her coat tighter. The straight black hair that fell to her shoulders had lost its softness, cut with a severity that felt like armour. Her bright blue eyes scanned the room not with fear, but with a cold assessment she had learned to wear. The small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—pale, untouched—rested against the bar top as she slid onto the stool. “I don’t live downstairs,” she said. “I live up.” “Some of us notice the stairs.” She looked at him. “You look older.” “You look different.” “I am different.” Silas reached for a bottle without asking. He poured two fingers of amber liquid and slid the glass toward her. “Since when do you drink whiskey without a fight?” “Since I stopped pretending to be a barrister’s daughter.” The glass caught the light. She did not lift it. “You smell like rain and delivery bikes,” Silas said. “Not like Cardiff.” “I work part-time for Yu-Fei Cheung. Golden Empress. Noodles and regret.” “You work,” he said. “You don’t hide. There’s a difference.” Rory traced the rim of the glass. “I hide in other ways. Rory Carter is tired. Laila works the morning shift. Malphora pays the rent. I collect names like shells.” “You collect them,” Silas said, “but you don’t wear them. Your eyes are still blue. Your scar is still there. Your accent still carries the Welsh coast.” She covered her wrist with her other hand, then stopped. “Some things don’t change.” “Most do.” He wiped a spot on the counter that did not exist. “Your hair is cut like a blade. Your shoulders are stiffer. You speak in aliases now. But you came through the green neon. That means you wanted to see if I was still real.” “I needed to know,” Rory said, “if I invented you. To make leaving easier.” Silas’s hand stilled over the silver ring. “You left Cardiff for London because of Eva. You stayed because of Evan. You ran again when he put his hands on you and called it love.” The name hung in the air like smoke. Rory drank. The burn cleared her throat but did nothing for the weight behind her ribs. “I came back because Eva wrote me out. Not with a letter. With silence. I walked back into a city that forgot me, moved into a flat above a bar I refused to enter, and delivered food to people who don’t remember my face.” “You refused to enter,” Silas said. “You climbed past my door for two years. You heard the music. You smelled the coffee. You never came down.” “I wasn’t ready to see what you’d become.” “And what have I become?” “A retired spymaster with a hidden room behind a bookshelf and a network of contacts who still call you the Spymaster. A man with a permanent knee injury from Prague who serves whiskey to strangers and waits for delivery girls with black hair and blue eyes.” “I waited,” Silas said. “Every night I close the secret room and there’s no one inside to lie to. Every morning I see your bike below my window and know you won’t come through the door.” Rory set the glass down hard. The amber rippled. “I didn’t come for forgiveness,” she said. “You came for something,” Silas replied. “Otherwise you wouldn’t have pushed through that door.” She looked at the photographs on the wall. “I changed my name. I changed my hair. I thought if I became someone else—Laila, Malphora, anyone—I wouldn’t carry Cardiff around like a stone in my chest.” “You carry it in your voice,” he said. “In the way you hold your wrist when you’re afraid. In the way you look at me and don’t ask why I stayed.” Rory turned back. “Why did you stay?” Silas leaned on the bar, favouring his left leg. The limp was slight but permanent, a reminder of Prague, of failure, of retirement that was never really retirement. “Because someone had to keep the door open. Because you were nineteen and hiding in law libraries and I knew you’d need a place to land when Evan finally showed you what he was.” “I didn’t need saving,” Rory said. “I needed to save myself.” “You did,” Silas said. “You left him. You came here. You changed your names. You delivered food instead of signing away your life in court. But saving yourself doesn’t mean you have to disappear from everyone who knew you before.” Rory’s fingers tightened around the glass. “You knew me before. You knew the girl who wanted to be a lawyer like her father, Brendan Carter, and please her mother, Jennifer. You knew the girl with the crescent scar who believed in order.” “I knew her,” Silas said. “I also know the woman who sits in front of me now—the one with the armour hair and the delivery uniform hidden under that coat. The one who speaks in aliases but still asks for whiskey without asking for help.” She drank again, slower. The bar was quiet except for the hum of the green neon outside and the distant rattle of a bus on the Soho street. “I regret not saying goodbye,” Rory said. “Not to you. To her. To the girl who thought law was a shield.” Silas straightened. The signet ring caught the light. “I regret not pulling you upstairs the night you arrived with the bruise on your arm and pretending it was a doorframe. I regret opening this bar and calling it retirement instead of calling it what it is—a place to watch the door for people who left.” Rory stood. The stool scraped against the floor, loud in the silence. “I have to go,” she said. “The flat is cold. The delivery bike is outside. Yu-Fei expects the morning shift.” “You’ll come back down,” Silas said. “Not tomorrow. Maybe not next month. But the stairs are still there. The secret room is still behind the bookshelf. The maps are still peeling. And I’m still here, limping behind the bar.” Rory walked to the door. She stopped with her hand on the frame, the green neon washing over her shoulder. “I’m still Rory,” she said. “Under the other names. Under the hair. Under the scar.” “I know,” Silas said. “That’s why I stayed.” She pushed through the door into the Soho night, leaving the glass half-full and the photographs watching. Silas picked up the cloth and began to wipe the counter again, the silver ring dull in the amber light, the limp settling into the familiar ache, the hidden room behind the bookshelf remaining dark and waiting.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.364
leniency0.727
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.22% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1285
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1285
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"reminder"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"scanned"
2"traced"
3"weight"
4"silence"
5"reminder"
6"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences63
matches
0"t with fear"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1277
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount541
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.77
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho3
Rory12
Blackwood1
Silas15
Prague1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Blackwood"
4"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
globalScore0.114
windowScore0
66.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences30
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like armour"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.783
wordCount1277
matches
0"not with fear, but with a cold assessment she had learned to wear"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean25.54
std21.34
cv0.836
sampleLengths
099
170
24
365
49
56
67
73
83
929
109
1110
1212
1311
1410
1530
1627
1714
1847
1914
2034
218
2260
2326
248
255
2646
2736
289
297
3014
3135
3231
337
3462
3511
3640
3742
3845
394
4024
4121
4255
4312
4420
4539
4620
4715
488
4954
99.69% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"was trimmed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs100
matches(empty)
84.55% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences98
ratio0.02
matches
0"Black-and-white photographs lined the brick—strangers in sharp collars, women with hard mouths—all of them watching."
1"The small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—pale, untouched—rested against the bar top as she slid onto the stool."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount550
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.023636363636363636
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.007272727272727273
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean13.03
std11.36
cv0.872
sampleLengths
029
115
212
315
428
517
624
719
84
94
102
114
125
1321
1420
1519
166
173
186
194
203
213
223
237
2413
259
269
275
285
299
303
3111
324
336
347
3523
3627
3710
384
3913
4034
4114
427
4327
448
452
4614
4744
486
4920
40.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.2755102040816326
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences40
matches(empty)
ratio0
80.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences40
matches
0"She had not crossed this"
1"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
2"His hazel eyes lifted."
3"They did not widen."
4"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
5"She looked at him."
6"He poured two fingers of"
7"She did not lift it."
8"She covered her wrist with"
9"He wiped a spot on"
10"She looked at the photographs"
11"She drank again, slower."
12"She stopped with her hand"
13"She pushed through the door"
ratio0.35
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount37
totalSentences40
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"She had not crossed this"
2"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
3"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
4"The silver signet ring on"
5"His hazel eyes lifted."
6"They did not widen."
7"Rory pulled her coat tighter."
8"The straight black hair that"
9"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
10"The small crescent-shaped scar on"
11"She looked at him."
12"Silas reached for a bottle"
13"He poured two fingers of"
14"The glass caught the light."
15"She did not lift it."
16"Rory traced the rim of"
17"She covered her wrist with"
18"He wiped a spot on"
19"Silas’s hand stilled over the"
ratio0.925
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences40
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The limp was slight but permanent, a reminder of Prague, of failure, of retirement that was never really retirement."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.345
leniency0.691
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.8938%