Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCX4QP02D4K24RJ04Q09R4K

Run Details

Duration:
3m 36s
Cost:
$0.004776
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory stepped through the gap in the oaks. The air turned thick. Old bark sealed behind her, silvered by moonlight. She had come for Eva's letter, for the key hidden somewhere in this pocket. From the first breath, Richmond Park smelled wrong—honey and rot, wildflowers blooming in winter dark. Her boots crushed frost that should have melted hours ago. The grove glowed faint. The Heartstone pendant swung beneath her collar, crimson deep as a fresh bruise, pulsing faint warmth against her sternum. She tightened her grip on her jacket. The crescent scar on her left wrist itched. "You're not alone," a voice said. Not Eva's. Not human. Rory spun. The standing stones circled the clearing, ancient oak carved with spirals that seemed to shift. Between them, shadows pooled like spilled ink. Something moved at the edge of vision. Not fast. Patient. The wildflowers bent toward her feet. Year-round. Unnatural. The pendant throbbed harder. Near a Hel portal. Here. Now. Rory backed toward the center. The air tasted of copper and old promises. Footsteps echoed—her own, doubled, lagging half a beat behind. She stopped. The echo continued. Three steps. Then silence. Rory's breath fogged white, too rapid. Her black hair clung to her cheeks. Twenty-five years old, and she had fled Cardiff for London, fled Evan's fists, fled law books she never wanted. She worked deliveries for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress, lived above Silas' bar. She did not flee into fairy tales. But the grove held her. The stones hummed. Low. Bone-deep. She reached for the pendant. The crimson gem flickered with inner glow. Near a portal. The wrongness crystallized—this place existed between Earth and Fae, and something had followed the opening. A branch snapped behind her. She whirled. Nothing stood there. Only wildflowers, wrong and bright, bending in a wind she could not feel. The echo returned. Closer. Her own shoes on grass that should not exist in this season. Rory pressed her back against an oak standing stone. The bark felt warm, almost pulsing. The crescent scar on her left wrist burned. The shadow at the tree line detached. Not a shape. An absence of shape. Tall. Wrong angles. Waiting. Rory's heart hammered. The pendant burned now, crimson light painting her fingers. She had come for Eva. The letter had said meet me in Isolde's grove, said the portal needed closing, said Eva could not come back alone. But Eva was not here. Only Rory. Only the silence that was not silent. The wildflowers turned. Every bloom faced her. The air split—not with sound, but with pressure. Time folded. An hour here might be days outside. Or minutes. Or eternity. The thing at the trees stepped closer. Rory saw no face. Only the sense of being watched by something that wore no eyes, only hunger. She ran. Not back—the gap had vanished. The stones closed ranks, ancient oak blocking escape. The grove kept her. Time moved differently, trapped her in this breath between realms. Her boots pounded frozen earth. The echo chased her, faster now, gaining. The pendant glowed crimson, guiding her—not away, but toward. The portal. The Hel portal that thrummed with the gem's warmth. She found it in a hollow. A tear in the air. Darker than the dark. The shadow stopped at the clearing's edge. Rory turned. Her blue eyes reflected crimson light. She was cool-headed. Intelligent. Out-of-the-box thinking. She had survived Evan, survived Cardiff's expectations, survived London alone. She stepped into the hollow. The wrongness peaked—a sound like glass screaming, like flowers dying, like Eva's voice muffled by distance. The portal swallowed her. Behind her, the shadow dissolved into wildflowers that turned black. Rory fell through. The Heartstone blazed. Warmth turned to heat, then to fire. She landed on dirt that smelled of London rain. The grove was gone. The stones. The echo. Only the pendant, still crimson, still warm. And the certainty, cold in her bones, that she was not leaving alone. Something had entered with her. Something that moved at the edge of her flat above Silas' bar, waiting for the heartstone's glow to fade. Rory touched the scar on her wrist. It matched the crescent moon that now hung over Richmond Park, visible through the trees that had never been part of the grove. She walked back to London. The wildflowers followed, blooming in her footprints, wrong and bright, year-round in winter dark.<|end_message|>
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount738
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount738
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"warmth"
count3
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"echo"
count4
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"crystallized"
count1
8
word"sense of"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"throbbed"
2"footsteps"
3"echoed"
4"echo"
5"silence"
6"flickered"
7"crystallized"
8"sense of"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences118
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords731
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
73.29% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount717
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.53
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva6
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone2
Hel2
Cardiff2
London4
Evan2
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
Earth1
Fae1
Isolde1
Rory11
persons
0"Eva"
1"Heartstone"
2"Evan"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Cheung"
5"Empress"
6"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Hel"
3"Cardiff"
4"London"
5"Isolde"
globalScore0.733
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"spirals that seemed to shift"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.736
wordCount731
matches
0"not with sound, but with pressure"
1"not away, but toward"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean14.62
std11.75
cv0.804
sampleLengths
049
133
215
36
44
524
67
73
88
910
1013
119
122
137
1451
155
165
1730
185
192
2016
2116
2223
237
2411
2538
265
279
287
2921
307
3118
322
3327
3412
3520
3615
377
3824
395
4016
414
4210
4313
449
458
467
4737
4830
4919
99.32% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences118
matches
0"being watched"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs131
matches
0"was not leaving"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences118
ratio0.059
matches
0"From the first breath, Richmond Park smelled wrong—honey and rot, wildflowers blooming in winter dark."
1"Footsteps echoed—her own, doubled, lagging half a beat behind."
2"The wrongness crystallized—this place existed between Earth and Fae, and something had followed the opening."
3"The air split—not with sound, but with pressure."
4"Not back—the gap had vanished."
5"The pendant glowed crimson, guiding her—not away, but toward."
6"The wrongness peaked—a sound like glass screaming, like flowers dying, like Eva's voice muffled by distance."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount234
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount4
adverbRatio0.017094017094017096
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean6.19
std4.71
cv0.76
sampleLengths
08
14
28
314
415
510
64
719
87
98
106
112
122
132
1415
157
167
172
181
196
201
211
224
234
241
251
265
278
289
292
303
312
322
336
347
3519
3612
377
385
393
401
411
425
437
443
4515
465
472
483
4913
44.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.3474576271186441
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners41
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences88
matches
0"Only wildflowers, wrong and bright,"
1"Only the silence that was"
2"Only the sense of being"
3"Only the pendant, still crimson,"
ratio0.045
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences88
matches
0"She had come for Eva's"
1"Her boots crushed frost that"
2"She tightened her grip on"
3"Her black hair clung to"
4"She worked deliveries for Yu-Fei"
5"She did not flee into"
6"She reached for the pendant."
7"Her own shoes on grass"
8"She had come for Eva."
9"Her boots pounded frozen earth."
10"She found it in a"
11"Her blue eyes reflected crimson"
12"She was cool-headed."
13"She had survived Evan, survived"
14"She stepped into the hollow."
15"She landed on dirt that"
16"It matched the crescent moon"
17"She walked back to London."
ratio0.205
50.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences88
matches
0"Rory stepped through the gap"
1"The air turned thick."
2"She had come for Eva's"
3"Her boots crushed frost that"
4"The grove glowed faint."
5"The Heartstone pendant swung beneath"
6"She tightened her grip on"
7"The crescent scar on her"
8"a voice said"
9"The standing stones circled the"
10"Something moved at the edge"
11"The wildflowers bent toward her"
12"The pendant throbbed harder."
13"Rory backed toward the center."
14"The air tasted of copper"
15"Footsteps echoed—her own, doubled, lagging"
16"The echo continued."
17"Rory's breath fogged white, too"
18"Her black hair clung to"
19"She worked deliveries for Yu-Fei"
ratio0.818
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.2622%