Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCX59E8277SAPB6M4W5A0XV

Run Details

Duration:
10m 7s
Cost:
$0.019680
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven's Nest buzzed against the Soho drizzle, painting Rory’s wet shoulders in a sick, electric shade. She pushed through the door. The latch clicked behind her with finality. Inside, the dim bar smelled of old wood, burnt sugar, and the particular silence that only settled in rooms built for secrets. Yellowed maps covered the walls behind glass, their borders faded to the colour of old teeth. Black-and-white photographs of strangers in uniform stared down from the darkness, frozen in moments that no longer mattered. Rory stood at the threshold, her bright blue eyes adjusting to the gloom. Three years. Maybe closer to four. She had lived in the flat above since Eva had called from Cardiff, since Rory had fled Evan’s fists and the crushing weight of pre-law textbooks, since she had accepted the part-time delivery work for Yu-Fei Cheung at the Golden Empress. Every night she climbed the back stairs to her flat. She never used the front entrance. She never crossed into this room. Then she saw him. Silas Blackwood leaned against the back bar, one hand wrapped around a glass he made no move to drink. His grey-streaked auburn hair caught the low amber light like rusted wire. His neatly trimmed beard matched the streaks exactly, framing a jaw that had hardened since she last looked at it. He wore a dark shirt, sleeves rolled to his elbows, and on his right hand, a silver signet ring gleamed with quiet authority. His left leg bore a slight limp when he shifted his weight, an old knee injury that had not existed in the man who had once taught her to read a room before entering it. “Rory.” His voice carried the same quiet authority, but it had deepened, weathered by smoke, regret, and years she had not shared. She touched her left wrist without thinking. The small crescent-shaped scar from her childhood accident felt cold against her palm, a half-moon reminder of a girl who had once believed in straight lines. “Silas.” “I thought you lived upstairs.” He set the untouched glass onto the bar. “Not that I ever saw proof of it.” She stepped closer. The bar between them felt less like furniture and more like a border drawn in sand. “I’ve been delivering. Golden Empress. Yu-Fei needs runners who don’t ask questions.” “Your father must be thrilled.” He did not smile. “Brendan Carter’s daughter, running paper bags of noodles through Soho rain instead of arguing in courtrooms.” The words struck the space between her ribs. Brendan Carter, the Irish barrister with his sharp suits and sharper expectations. Jennifer Carter née Ellis, the Welsh teacher who had read Rory bedtime stories about justice. They had wanted a barrister. They had not wanted a daughter who flinched at loud voices. “He doesn’t call.” Rory met his hazel eyes. “Neither of them. I think they decided I died in Cardiff.” Silas nodded slowly. The limp was more pronounced now, a story written in the way he favoured his left side. “Eva told me you left. She said Evan had left marks.” “You haven’t changed.” She pulled her wet coat tighter, water dripping onto the floorboards. “Except the hair. The leg. The ring.” “I retired.” He tapped the silver signet ring against the glass, producing a dull chime. “Prague. A botched operation. I opened this place as a front, then it became the only architecture I understood. The Raven’s Nest. People come here to forget names they once loved.” She looked at the old maps. Prague was not marked among them, but she saw the absence in his posture. “You used to teach me how to read people. Now you pour them whisky and watch them drown.” “I taught you to survive,” he corrected. He stepped around the bar, favouring his left knee, closing the distance without rushing it. The smell of tobacco and cedarwood followed him like a shadow. “Look at you. Shoulder-length black hair, sharp as the day you argued your way out of school detention. But your eyes are tired, Rory. They carry the weight of someone who runs instead of fights.” “Don’t say my name like that.” She kept her voice low, almost lost beneath the neon hum. “Don’t say it like I’m still your student.” “You’re not a student.” He stopped near her, close enough that she could see the grey threading through his auburn hair, close enough that his breath smelled faintly of the whiskey he refused to drink. “You’re a survivor. But you haven’t spoken to me since you moved into the flat above. You avoid the stairs that lead down. You avoid me.” She looked at the crescent scar on her wrist, then back at his ring. “You remind me of who I was. The girl with the scar and the law books. The girl who believed her parents’ disappointment was the worst thing she could face. That girl is dead, Silas. Evan killed her. Cardiff buried her.” “Is she dead?” He reached into his pocket and pulled out a matchbook bearing the green logo of The Raven’s Nest. “I kept this when I thought you might come through that door. I kept the flat open. Not out of pity. Because I know regret tastes like stale beer and empty rooms, and I have been drinking it for years.” The bar was quiet except for the neon buzz and the distant London rain. One of the black-and-white photographs behind him showed a younger Silas in uniform, straight-backed, unmarked by limp or grey, his hazel eyes bright with purpose. “You look like a ghost in that picture.” Rory pointed a finger that trembled slightly. “I feel like one.” He struck a match, not to light a cigarette or candle, only to watch the flame bite and hold. “I used to move through shadows with purpose. Now I stand in one and call it a business. You used to move toward the light. Now you deliver it in paper bags to strangers, then climb back up to a flat where no one asks your name.” She laughed, short and brittle, the sound breaking against the old photographs. “That’s poetic for a spymaster.” “I’m not a spymaster anymore.” The match burned closer to his fingers. “That man died in Prague along with my knee. I’m Silas. The Spymaster is dead too.” They stood in the dim light, two broken architectures facing each other across a bar built for hiding. The weight of the years between them hung heavier than the rain outside, heavier than the maps that had lost their colour. Rory touched the bar’s wooden edge, feeling the grain worn smooth by strangers. “I came in because I was cold. Not because I missed this place.” “I know.” He turned back to the bar, picked up his untouched glass, and set it down again. “But you’re still here.” The green neon flickered above them, painting the yellowed maps in sick green and casting long shadows across the black-and-white faces on the walls. Rory stayed in the doorway, neither crossing fully into the bar nor stepping back into the rain, suspended in the broken space between the girl she had been and the woman she had become. Silas stood in the same fractured middle, silver ring gleaming, favouring his injured leg, a retired ghost tending a bar full of other people’s forgotten names, with Rory’s bright blue eyes watching him from the threshold, carrying the crescent scar and all the unspoken regret neither of them had learned to name.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.394
leniency0.788
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.061
92.07% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1261
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1261
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"electric"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"weight"
count4
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"trembled"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"fractured"
count1
8
word"gleaming"
count1
9
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"silence"
2"gloom"
3"weight"
4"reminder"
5"trembled"
6"flickered"
7"fractured"
8"gleaming"
9"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1261
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.37% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount855
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.05
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Soho1
Rory9
Eva1
Cardiff1
Evan1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
Blackwood1
Carter2
Irish1
Ellis1
Welsh1
Silas4
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Eva"
3"Evan"
4"Yu-Fei"
5"Cheung"
6"Blackwood"
7"Carter"
8"Ellis"
9"Silas"
places
0"Nest"
1"Soho"
2"Cardiff"
3"Golden"
4"London"
globalScore0.974
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
41.40% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.586
wordCount1261
matches
0"not marked among them, but she saw the absence in his posture"
1"neither crossing fully into the bar nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean42.03
std28.02
cv0.667
sampleLengths
090
182
24
3109
41
521
634
721
831
925
1051
1119
1231
1321
1446
1538
1668
1725
1861
1955
2061
2139
2215
2370
2417
2528
2640
2726
2822
29110
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs137
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences78
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount867
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.03460207612456748
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.00922722029988466
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean16.17
std10.94
cv0.677
sampleLengths
022
15
27
322
416
518
613
72
84
941
1010
116
126
134
1419
1512
1620
1723
1835
191
2021
217
2226
231
2413
258
263
2716
2812
299
3016
318
3212
3315
345
3511
368
3711
383
3917
4011
4114
427
4315
4431
456
4614
4718
487
4915
55.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.38461538461538464
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners30
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences56
matches
0"Maybe closer to four."
1"Then she saw him."
ratio0.036
27.14% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences56
matches
0"She pushed through the door."
1"She had lived in the"
2"She never used the front"
3"She never crossed into this"
4"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
5"His neatly trimmed beard matched"
6"He wore a dark shirt,"
7"His left leg bore a"
8"His voice carried the same"
9"She touched her left wrist"
10"He set the untouched glass"
11"She stepped closer."
12"He did not smile"
13"They had wanted a barrister."
14"They had not wanted a"
15"She pulled her wet coat"
16"He tapped the silver signet"
17"She looked at the old"
18"He stepped around the bar,"
19"She kept her voice low,"
ratio0.482
13.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences56
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"She pushed through the door."
2"The latch clicked behind her"
3"Rory stood at the threshold,"
4"She had lived in the"
5"Every night she climbed the"
6"She never used the front"
7"She never crossed into this"
8"Silas Blackwood leaned against the"
9"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
10"His neatly trimmed beard matched"
11"He wore a dark shirt,"
12"His left leg bore a"
13"His voice carried the same"
14"She touched her left wrist"
15"The small crescent-shaped scar from"
16"He set the untouched glass"
17"She stepped closer."
18"The bar between them felt"
19"He did not smile"
ratio0.893
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
75.89% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"His left leg bore a slight limp when he shifted his weight, an old knee injury that had not existed in the man who had once taught her to read a room before ent…"
1"The small crescent-shaped scar from her childhood accident felt cold against her palm, a half-moon reminder of a girl who had once believed in straight lines."
2"Jennifer Carter née Ellis, the Welsh teacher who had read Rory bedtime stories about justice."
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She pulled, water dripping onto the floorboards"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.03
leniency0.061
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.061
84.3854%