Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCXB9GQ5V8NDBHDSGWEKXKB

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Duration:
14.4s
Cost:
$0.020393
Provider:
Google AI Studio

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
"You changed the locks." Lucien didn't wait for an invitation. He swept past me into the narrow entryway, the silver tip of his ivory cane clicking heavily against the worn floorboards. He smelled of rain, expensive clove tobacco, and the crisp, ozone bite of Avarosian magic. "Three deadbolts," I said, slamming the heavy wooden door shut behind him and turning the brass knobs with three sharp, metallic clacks. "Standard precaution when an ex-boss knows how to pick a lock." "I never picked your locks, Rory. I merely persuaded the tumblers to yield." He paused in the center of Eva's cramped living room, his heterochromatic eyes, one warm amber, the other absolute obsidian, sweeping over the towering stacks of dusty grimoires, scattered parchment, and half-empty mugs of black tea. "Charming place. The curry house downstairs provides a delightful mask for the scent of amateur dark magic." "What are you doing here, Luc?" "You left your coat at the bar." "Six months ago." "It is a very fine coat." He leaned his weight onto his cane, hands resting over the carved ivory head. Tailored charcoal wool hugged his broad shoulders without a single wrinkle. He looked entirely out of place among Eva's chaotic clutter, like an antique oil painting hung in a derelict garage. "And you left without your final envelope." "Keep the money. I don't want anything from you." "Clearly." His amber eye narrowed slightly as his gaze dropped to my left wrist. I instinctively pulled my cardigan sleeve down, hiding the small crescent-shaped scar, but the damage was done. His mouth set into a thin, pale line. "You look pale. Are you eating? Or does the Golden Empress pay you strictly in greasy spring rolls?" "I'm fine." "You are a terrible liar, my dear. You always were." A low, guttural purr broke the tension. Ptolemy, Eva's oversized tabby, slunk out from behind a stack of Latin treatises on demonology. The cat circled Lucien's polished leather shoes, weaving between his legs and rubbing his cheek against the sharp crease of his trousers. "Traitor," I muttered. "Animals possess an innate sense for quality," Lucien murmured softly. He didn't bend down, but his dark shadow softened just a fraction as the cat rubbed against his ankle. "Unlike certain humans who prefer fleeing to East London over accepting a generous protection detail." "I didn't need your protection then, and I don't need it now." "Evan is back in London." The quiet statement hit the room like a drop of liquid nitrogen. The air rushed out of my lungs. My pulse hammered against my throat, rapid and thrumming, making my skin feel uncomfortably tight. I backed up until my hips hit the edge of Eva's crowded desk, sending a loose quill rolling onto the carpet. "He doesn't know where I am," I said, my voice dropping an octave. "He knows you are in the city. He spent three hours last night tearing apart a low-tier gambling den in Soho asking for a girl with Cardiff in her accent and a notch on her wrist." Lucien took a step forward. The polished wood of his cane didn't make a sound on the faded rug. "He is close, Rory." "And you came to play the savior? How heroic. Does the fixer of the underworld get a badge for that, or just a cut of the profits?" "I came because you are incompetent at hiding." "I stayed hidden from you for half a year!" "You stayed hidden because I allowed you to be hidden!" His voice cracked through the room like a whip, sharp and commanding. The air pressure plummeted. Shadows along the skirting boards lengthened, stretching upward like dark, reaching fingers before Lucien caught himself. He drew a slow, shuddering breath, smoothing the front of his jacket with one gloved hand. "I gave you space because you asked for it. Because you looked at me that night in the office as if I were no better than the man who gave you that scar." The silence between us grew heavy, thick with the memory of the night I walked out. The night the air in his private office had burned with unspoken desires, terror, and the sharp, coppery scent of demon blood on his blade. I had kissed him. He had pulled away to keep me safe. I had left before he could shatter the rest of my heart. "You pushed me away," I whispered. "I spared you." "I didn't ask to be spared!" I snapped, taking two strides toward him, closing the distance until I could feel the intense heat radiating from his skin. Half-demons ran hot, a constant reminder of the hellfire tucked neatly beneath those bespoke French suits. "You made the choice for me. Just like Evan always did. You decided what I could handle, what I could see, who I could be." "Evan used iron and fists," Lucien murmured, his voice dropping into a rough, velvet register that sent an unwanted shiver down my spine. He raised his free hand, his fingers hesitating an inch from my face before he let them drop. "I used distance. Do not confuse my restraint with his cruelty." "It felt the same." "Then you are a fool." "And you're a coward." His black eye seemed to swallow the light in the flat. In a motion so swift it blurred, Lucien discarded his cane against the sofa and grabbed my waist, pulling me flush against his chest. My hands slammed into his lapels, gripping the thick wool to steady myself. His heat crashed over me, a suffocating, intoxicating wave of spice and rain. "Call me a monster, Rory," he breathed, his face inches from mine, his warm breath fanning across my lips. "Call me a liar, a thief, a fixer. But do not call me a coward. I have spent six months dying every single hour you were not in my bed." "Luc..." "Tell me to leave." His fingers dug firmly into the small of my back, holding me trapped against the hard angle of his hips. "Say the word, and I walk out that door. I will leave a guard on the street to slaughter Evan the moment he steps into this alley, and you will never have to look at my face again. Say it." My heart hammered a frantic rhythm against my ribs. I stared into his eyes, reading the raw, agonizing hunger buried beneath his usual icy composure. My mouth opened. The word sat on my tongue, simple, easy, safe. I didn't say it. Instead, my fingers slid up his lapels, wrapping around the back of his neck, pulling his head down. The kiss wasn't gentle. It was a collision of six months of anger, fear, and starved, desperate longing. Lucien let out a low growl deep in his chest, his arms wrapping around me like iron bands, lifting me slightly off my feet until I was grounded only by his grip. He tasted of bitter espresso and sweet tobacco, sharp and dark and entirely overwhelming. He backed me up until my spine hit the doorframe of the tiny kitchen. A stack of Eva's research papers tumbled from a side table, fluttering down around our feet like white leaves, but neither of us cared. His mouth moved against mine with a ruthless, possessive intensity that made my knees go soft. "I hate you," I gasped against his lips, my hand tangling into his slicked-back blond hair, tugging just hard enough to pull a dark chuckle from his throat. "I know," he murmured, kissing the jawline right beneath my ear, making my head tilt back against the wood. "Tell me again." Before I could answer, a loud, heavy thud echoed from the corridor outside the flat door. Ptolemy hissed, his back arching as he darted under the sofa. The ambient light in the room flickered violently, turning a sickly, jaundiced yellow. Lucien froze instantly. The warmth melted from his face, replaced in a split second by the cold, lethal mask of the Marseille fixer. He pushed me behind his back, his hand dropping smoothly to the ivory handle of his cane on the floor. A sharp, metallic scraping sound began on the outside of the front door. Someone was carving something into the wood. Right over the top deadbolt. "Stay behind me," Lucien whispered, his voice dangerously calm as the thin, hidden blade slid three inches from the bottom of his cane with a soft *shring*.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
69.57% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"His amber eye narrowed slightly [slightly]"
1"Lucien murmured softly [softly]"
2"His fingers dug firmly [firmly]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.37
leniency0.739
rawRatio0.176
effectiveRatio0.13
85.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1411
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1411
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"standard"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"chaotic"
count1
3
word"tension"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"reminder"
count1
9
word"velvet"
count1
10
word"down my spine"
count1
11
word"firmly"
count1
12
word"intensity"
count1
13
word"echoed"
count1
14
word"flickered"
count1
15
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"standard"
1"weight"
2"chaotic"
3"tension"
4"pulse"
5"silence"
6"unspoken"
7"could feel"
8"reminder"
9"velvet"
10"down my spine"
11"firmly"
12"intensity"
13"echoed"
14"flickered"
15"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences69
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1411
ratio0.001
matches
0"shring"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.13% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount964
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.04
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Avarosian1
Eva5
Tailored1
Latin1
Lucien10
Half-demons1
French1
Marseille1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Latin"
2"Lucien"
3"Half-demons"
places
0"Marseille"
globalScore0.981
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1411
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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std24.27
cv0.808
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233
366
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57
63
758
89
957
102
1110
1244
133
1444
1512
165
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1813
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256
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2852
294
305
314
3261
3349
341
3564
3637
3722
3864
3954
4028
4122
4216
4324
4443
4525
4627
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"was grounded"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs155
matches
0"was carving"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences98
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount968
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar,"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.026859504132231406
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.01652892561983471
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean14.4
std9.21
cv0.64
sampleLengths
04
16
221
315
422
511
649
717
86
97
103
1120
1211
1320
147
159
1614
1717
188
1918
202
2110
227
2315
2422
253
2610
2719
2815
2912
305
3112
327
3315
3421
3513
3641
3714
384
3927
408
419
4222
434
4416
4516
4633
4716
4825
494
52.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3673469387755102
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners36
49.75% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"Instead, my fingers slid up"
ratio0.015
5.07% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences67
matches
0"He swept past me into"
1"He smelled of rain, expensive"
2"I said, slamming the heavy"
3"He paused in the center"
4"He leaned his weight onto"
5"He looked entirely out of"
6"His amber eye narrowed slightly"
7"I instinctively pulled my cardigan"
8"His mouth set into a"
9"He didn't bend down, but"
10"My pulse hammered against my"
11"I backed up until my"
12"I said, my voice dropping"
13"His voice cracked through the"
14"He drew a slow, shuddering"
15"I had kissed him."
16"He had pulled away to"
17"I had left before he"
18"I snapped, taking two strides"
19"He raised his free hand,"
ratio0.537
4.78% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences67
matches
0"Lucien didn't wait for an"
1"He swept past me into"
2"He smelled of rain, expensive"
3"I said, slamming the heavy"
4"He paused in the center"
5"He leaned his weight onto"
6"He looked entirely out of"
7"His amber eye narrowed slightly"
8"I instinctively pulled my cardigan"
9"His mouth set into a"
10"A low, guttural purr broke"
11"Ptolemy, Eva's oversized tabby, slunk"
12"The cat circled Lucien's polished"
13"Lucien murmured softly"
14"He didn't bend down, but"
15"The quiet statement hit the"
16"The air rushed out of"
17"My pulse hammered against my"
18"I backed up until my"
19"I said, my voice dropping"
ratio0.91
74.63% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"Before I could answer, a"
ratio0.015
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Instead, my fingers slid up his lapels, wrapping around the back of his neck, pulling his head down."
1"His mouth moved against mine with a ruthless, possessive intensity that made my knees go soft."
66.18% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He leaned, hands resting over the carved ivory head"
1"I said, my voice dropping an octave"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"I muttered (mutter)"
1"Lucien murmured softly (murmur)"
2"I whispered (whisper)"
3"I snapped (snap)"
4"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
5"he breathed (breathe)"
6"I gasped (gasp)"
7"he murmured (murmur)"
8"Lucien whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.239
leniency0.478
rawRatio0.818
effectiveRatio0.391
81.4424%