| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.71% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1076 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 30.30% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1076 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "tracing" | | 2 | "echo" | | 3 | "fluttered" | | 4 | "fractured" | | 5 | "silk" | | 6 | "down her spine" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "charged" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "gleaming" | | 11 | "familiar" | | 12 | "vibrated" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1067 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | 0 | "from" | | 1 | "Thump." | | 2 | "Thump." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1023 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.88 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heathrow | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | London | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Aurora | 9 | | Isolde | 1 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heathrow" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 74.24% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like an icicle, but the deep crims" | | 1 | "sounded like her own voice, distorted, str" |
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| 12.56% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.874 | | wordCount | 1067 | | matches | | 0 | "not the sound of boots, but something wet" | | 1 | "not the dark park beyond, but a starless, suffocating void" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 26.68 | | std | 18.55 | | cv | 0.695 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 55 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 40 | | 5 | 54 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 59 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 51 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 60 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 35 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 56 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 38 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 46 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 48 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 48 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 157 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 85 | | ratio | 0.106 | | matches | | 0 | "The city noise—the distant rumble of the A3, the drone of night flights bound for Heathrow—vanished the moment she stepped between the two ancient oak standing stones." | | 1 | "It didn't seep in; it slammed down like a iron door." | | 2 | "Wildflowers—foxgloves, white hellebore, and pale poppies—grew in impossible, lush clusters beneath the canopy, their petals fully open despite the hour." | | 3 | "A scrap of paper fluttered in her pocket—the cryptic note left on her counter at the flat above Silas’ bar, signed only with an archaic rune." | | 4 | "They didn't lead *from* anywhere; they simply began in the middle of the grass." | | 5 | "Then, the shadow’s head tilted—a slow, sickening crunch of an invisible neck bending beyond human limits—while Aurora’s own head remained perfectly still." | | 6 | "A heavy thump echoed behind her—not the sound of boots, but something wet and solid dropping onto the earth from the branches above." | | 7 | "Every time she darted a glance to the side, she caught only glimpses: a patch of gray skin stretched taut over sharp, protruding joints; a flash of needle-thin teeth gleaming in the dark; an arm far too long, dragging its knuckles through the mud." | | 8 | "The Heartstone beneath her shirt wasn't just warm now—it vibrated with a sharp, warning hum that vibrated through her ribs." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 228 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 5 | | adverbRatio | 0.021929824561403508 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017543859649122806 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 85 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 85 | | mean | 12.55 | | std | 8.28 | | cv | 0.66 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 25 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 63.14% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.43529411764705883 | | totalSentences | 85 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 92.59% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the wildflowers, glowing with" | | 1 | "Then, the shadow’s head tilted—a" |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 86.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "It didn't seep in; it" | | 1 | "She reached for her wrist," | | 2 | "She took three steps toward" | | 3 | "It had brought her here," | | 4 | "She spun toward the tree" | | 5 | "she said, leaning into the" | | 6 | "She turned back toward the" | | 7 | "It wasn't a voice, but" | | 8 | "They didn't lead *from* anywhere;" | | 9 | "Her thumb dug into the" | | 10 | "Her shadow didn't match her" | | 11 | "She kept her arm raised," | | 12 | "she whispered, the realization sinking" | | 13 | "She charged toward the oak" | | 14 | "It moved with terrible speed," | | 15 | "she grunted through gritted teeth," | | 16 | "She reached out a hand" | | 17 | "Her fingers slammed into a" | | 18 | "She scrambled onto her elbows," | | 19 | "It had no distinct face," |
| | ratio | 0.333 | |
| 29.44% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Midnight mist clung to the" | | 1 | "Aurora adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The city noise—the distant rumble" | | 3 | "Silence swallowed the clearing." | | 4 | "It didn't seep in; it" | | 5 | "She reached for her wrist," | | 6 | "The skin twitched, cold despite" | | 7 | "The silver chain felt like" | | 8 | "Aurora’s voice dropped into the" | | 9 | "She took three steps toward" | | 10 | "Wildflowers—foxgloves, white hellebore, and pale" | | 11 | "The air held the sickly" | | 12 | "A scrap of paper fluttered" | | 13 | "It had brought her here," | | 14 | "Something snapped to her left." | | 15 | "She spun toward the tree" | | 16 | "she said, leaning into the" | | 17 | "The silver bark of the" | | 18 | "She turned back toward the" | | 19 | "The standing stones seemed five" |
| | ratio | 0.861 | |
| 69.44% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, the quiet felt less" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 85.71% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones seemed five feet further away, their rough faces twisted at wrong angles, as though the earth beneath them had shuddered and reset." | | 1 | "The shadow on the ground raised its hands, opening long, spindly fingers that extended past the borders of the grass, swallowing the wildflowers in blackness." | | 2 | "The impact knocked the wind from her lungs, her wrench slipping from her fingers and clattering into the darkness." | | 3 | "The Heartstone beneath her shirt wasn't just warm now—it vibrated with a sharp, warning hum that vibrated through her ribs." |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, the realization sinking like lead into her stomach" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she grunted (grunt)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.375 | | leniency | 0.75 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |