Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCXEHMZTNKSDNDCCQZJWVSV

Run Details

Duration:
2m 32s
Cost:
$0.004900
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolts clattered like artillery. Rory’s thumbs pressed white against brass. She had climbed three flights past the curry house reek, past stairs that groaned under her boots. She had not knocked with her knuckles. Her fist had hit the wood like a verdict. The door cracked. Eva stood in a gap of brass and iron, hair tangled, eyes wide. Behind her, books crowded every shelf and scrolls pinned the walls like captured butterflies. Ptolemy arched on a stack of notes, tail a sharp question. “You,” Eva said. Rory leaned on the jamb. “Still three deadbolts.” Eva’s mouth went flat. “You don’t have a key.” “I left it in Cardiff with the other things I dropped.” Eva stepped back. The gap widened. Rory crossed the threshold without invitation, her jacket soaked through from the London rain. She smelled of wet asphalt and the grease of Yu-Fei Cheung’s kitchen. Behind her, Eva’s flat on Brick Lane breathed books and old paper. The curry house below sent up ghosts of cumin. Rory turned. “You’re not surprised.” “I knew you’d come back eventually,” Eva said. “I just didn’t know it would smell like fried duck.” “Golden Empress,” Rory said. “Part-time delivery. Part-time nothing else.” Eva folded her arms. The flat felt smaller with Rory inside it. Every surface still wore its armor of books and scrolls, but now they seemed to lean away from the door. “You look different,” Eva said. “Pre-Law didn’t suit me.” Eva’s laugh came sharp. “No. You look tired. You live above Silas’s bar now.” Rory’s jaw clicked. “How do you—” “London is small when you’re looking.” Rory’s bright blue eyes held Eva’s. “I’m not here to reminisce. I need—” “Don’t say it.” Eva stepped closer. The space between them shrank. “Don’t tell me you need help. Don’t tell me Evan did something worse. I know the shape of that bruise.” Rory’s hand went to her left wrist, to the crescent-shaped scar. “It’s not about him.” “It never is,” Eva said, “until it is.” Silence stretched. The books seemed to listen. Rory’s shoulders dropped a fraction. “You left first. You said run, but you stayed here. Among all this—” Eva gestured to the scrolls. “This is work. This is protection. This is me not running away with you.” “I ran because you told me to,” Rory said. “Then you locked the door.” “I locked nothing. You walked out before I could—” “Say what?” Eva’s breath hitched. “That I was wrong. That I should have come with you. That I—” She stopped. Her fingers curled into her sleeves. Rory moved closer. One step. The flat seemed to tilt. “Finish it.” Eva’s stare went to Rory’s mouth. “Don’t. You came here angry. You came here because the hurt is easier to hold than the truth.” Rory’s voice dropped low. “What truth?” Eva reached up. Her fingers brushed Rory’s jaw, rough with rain and something older. “That I still—” She bit it back. Rory caught Eva’s wrist. The scar on Rory’s left wrist showed white in the dim light. “That you still what?” Eva’s other hand found Rory’s collar. “That I still—” The deadbolts clicked behind them. No one entered. The sound was only the flat settling, or the books shifting. Rory pulled Eva closer. Their foreheads touched. “I hate you for leaving,” Eva whispered. “I hate you for staying,” Rory said. Eva’s lips parted. They did not kiss. The air between them burned. Rory’s thumb traced Eva’s bottom lip. “You have ink on your mouth.” “I have books everywhere.” Rory smiled, small and dangerous. “I came to tell you I’m not leaving this time.” Eva pulled back. Not far. “What do you need?” Rory’s eyes darkened. “A place to stand. A reason not to deliver more ducks to people who don’t see me.” Eva looked at the scrolls, the books, the flat that had never changed. Then she looked at Rory, soaked and scarred and present. “I can’t undo the hurt,” Eva said. “You can open another deadbolt,” Rory said. Eva reached past Rory. Her fingers found the lowest bolt. She turned it. The mechanism snapped. Rory exhaled. “That’s one.” Eva’s face came close again. “If you stay, it won’t be simple.” “I never asked for simple,” Rory said. The rain drummed against the window above the curry house. Ptolemy jumped down from the notes, padded to Rory’s boots, sniffed, and sat. The books rustled like approval. Eva’s hand found Rory’s, the one with the crescent scar. She pressed her thumb over it. “Stay,” Eva said. Rory nodded once. The deadbolt stayed open.<|end_message|>
created_at"2026-07-25T15:14:10.22Z" 7/25/2026, 3:14:10 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount762
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.88% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount762
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
92.44% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences85
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen20
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords762
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions66
wordCount479
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity6.47
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity9.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory31
London1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Eva29
Brick1
Lane1
Silence1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Cheung"
3"Eva"
4"Silence"
places
0"London"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences29
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount762
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean13.61
std10.24
cv0.753
sampleLengths
05
139
23
338
43
58
69
711
853
95
1018
119
1232
135
144
1514
166
176
1813
1931
2015
218
227
2318
2419
2514
269
272
2824
2912
3024
316
3221
3320
349
3519
367
377
387
3912
4012
414
4215
439
4420
4523
467
477
4816
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs105
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences115
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount481
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.02494802494802495
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.002079002079002079
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean6.63
std4.17
cv0.629
sampleLengths
05
16
217
37
49
53
613
714
811
93
105
113
124
135
1411
153
163
1714
1812
1912
209
212
223
238
2410
254
265
274
288
2920
305
314
324
3310
343
353
366
376
387
396
405
4120
4211
434
448
452
465
475
4813
495
46.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.28695652173913044
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners33
49.75% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"Then she looked at Rory,"
ratio0.015
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences67
matches
0"She had climbed three flights"
1"She had not knocked with"
2"Her fist had hit the"
3"She smelled of wet asphalt"
4"Her fingers curled into her"
5"Her fingers brushed Rory’s jaw,"
6"She bit it back"
7"Their foreheads touched."
8"They did not kiss."
9"Her fingers found the lowest"
10"She turned it."
11"She pressed her thumb over"
ratio0.179
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences67
matches
0"The deadbolts clattered like artillery."
1"Rory’s thumbs pressed white against"
2"She had climbed three flights"
3"She had not knocked with"
4"Her fist had hit the"
5"The door cracked."
6"Eva stood in a gap"
7"Ptolemy arched on a stack"
8"Rory leaned on the jamb."
9"Eva’s mouth went flat."
10"Eva stepped back."
11"The gap widened."
12"Rory crossed the threshold without"
13"She smelled of wet asphalt"
14"The curry house below sent"
15"Eva folded her arms."
16"The flat felt smaller with"
17"Every surface still wore its"
18"Eva’s laugh came sharp."
19"Rory’s jaw clicked."
ratio0.94
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences17
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She had climbed three flights past the curry house reek, past stairs that groaned under her boots."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.267
leniency0.533
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.044
85.8529%