Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCXPKEEM2C90XRZVWCNV5VJ

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Duration:
52.3s
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$0.014665
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain in Soho didn’t fall; it attacked. Harlow Quinn stood beneath the sick green glow of The Raven’s Nest, her collar turned up against the lash, her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair already darkened to slate. The worn leather watch on her left wrist ticked against her pulse—steady, ancient, relentless. She was forty-one, five-foot-nine of military precision carved sharp at the jawline, and she had not blinked in four minutes. The side door opened. Tomás Herrera slipped into the alley like a man who knew every exit by heart. Twenty-nine, olive skin glistening, short curly dark brown hair plastered to his scalp. The warm brown eyes Quinn had studied in file photographs scanned nothing and everything at once. He wore a dark jacket that hung loose on his five-foot-ten frame, but she caught the glint of the Saint Christopher medallion at his throat and, when he turned to button his collar against the storm, the pale track of the scar running along his left forearm—a knife attack, old, ugly, healed wrong. Quinn moved. No announcement. No radio crackle. Eighteen years of decorated service had taught her that noise killed pursuits faster than bullets. She kept twenty yards behind, her boots silent on the wet cobblestones, her breath measured through the nose. The Raven’s green neon bled across the puddles at her feet, painting the old maps and black-and-white photographs she knew covered the bar’s interior walls in shades of jade. Behind one of those photographs, behind a bookshelf that smelled of cedar and secrecy, the clique held their clandestine meetings. She had seen the light through the crack in that hidden door twice now. Tonight, Herrera had come through it carrying something small and wrapped in waxed cloth. He turned left onto Greek Street, then right toward the tube. Quinn matched his pace, her sharp jaw set, brown eyes tracking the sway of his shoulders. Three years. Three years since DS Morris had died under circumstances that still tasted like rust in Quinn’s mouth—unexplained circumstances, the report said, though she knew now that “unexplained” was just the language institutions used to hide the supernatural. The clique knew. Herrera knew. And Quinn was going to find out why, even if it meant walking into the kind of darkness that had swallowed her partner whole. Herrera never looked back. He moved with the economy of a former paramedic, someone who had once saved lives in the narrow gap between heartbeats and now moved through London like he was already measuring someone’s last breath. The medallion at his neck bounced with each stride. The scar on his forearm disappeared beneath his sleeve, but Quinn had memorized it—the map of violence that led a Seville-born healer to these rain-soaked streets, to unauthorized treatments, to a lost license and an off-the-books practice that served things no NHS ward would admit existed. The streets narrowed. Soho bled into Camden’s bones. The rain thickened, turning the air metallic, and the city’s usual hum faded into a muffled roar behind brick walls. Herrera reached the entrance to an abandoned Tube station—Camden, long shuttered, its mouth a black yawn beneath a rusted arch. Quinn hung back, pressing into the shadow of a shuttered newsagent’s stall. She watched him reach into his jacket. The bone token was small, carved from something that had never been synthetic. It glowed faintly in his palm—pale, porous, wrong. He held it up to a figure standing in the dark archway, a silhouette with no face she could discern, only the impression of waiting patience. The figure nodded. A gate in the darkness unlatched with a sound like teeth grinding stone. The Veil Market. Quinn’s fingers tightened around the grip of her service weapon, though she knew steel was polite fiction here. Beneath Camden, in the abandoned station that moved every full moon—tonight, hidden behind storm clouds but pulling at the tides nonetheless—lay the market. Enchanted goods laid out like produce. Banned alchemical substances glowing in vials that whispered promises. Information sold by the ounce, traded for secrets, for blood, for ignorance. And Herrera was walking into it like he owned the floor. Quinn stepped out of the shadow. The air at the threshold smelled of ozone and old iron, of things that had been buried and were now breathing. She had no bone token. She had no invitation. She had only the watch ticking against her wrist, the memory of Morris’s laughter—quick, sharp, gone—and the absolute certainty that if she turned back now, the clique would bury another partner in the kind of silence that never healed. Herrera paused at the gate, half-turned toward her. His warm brown eyes met hers across the rain and the dark. There was no surprise in them, only assessment—the look of a healer deciding whether a wound was worth treating. “You shouldn’t be here, Detective,” he said. His voice carried the soft edges of Seville, layered with London grime. The Saint Christopher medallion caught the faint light. “This isn’t your world.” Quinn advanced. Her hair was plastered to her skull, her sharp jawline rigid, her brown eyes unblinking. “My partner died in a world just like it,” she said. “That makes it mine.” She reached the archway. The figure with no face held out a hand—not for her, but for the space she intended to occupy. Quinn ignored it. She looked at Herrera, at the scar on his forearm, at the waxed package still hidden in his jacket, and she made the decision that had been forming since the moment she’d seen the light behind the bookshelf at The Raven’s Nest. She followed him into the dark. The stairs descended into a space that should not have existed. The abandoned Tube station had been transformed—stalls of black silk and rusted iron lined the platform, their wares glowing with colors that had no names in English. Quinn’s boots echoed on tiles that had been replaced with something smoother, older. She kept her hand near her belt, not on her weapon, her military bearing unbroken even as her heart hammered a rhythm that felt like a countdown. Herrera walked ahead, not running now, leading her through aisles of alchemical fire and whispered contracts. The full moon’s pull reached even here, a vibration in the air that made the leather strap of Quinn’s watch feel tight against her bone. She thought of Morris, of the supernatural origins she still couldn’t name, and she knew—knew with the certainty of a woman who had spent eighteen years learning the shapes of lies—that this market, this clique, this scarred paramedic from Seville, held the key to the death that had hollowed her out. Quinn stepped deeper into the Veil, her shadow merging with the others, her decision made. The chase had ended. The pursuit had begun.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1146
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1146
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"glistening"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"glint"
count1
4
word"measured"
count1
5
word"clandestine"
count1
6
word"synthetic"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"silk"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"glistening"
2"scanned"
3"glint"
4"measured"
5"clandestine"
6"synthetic"
7"silence"
8"silk"
9"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
86.47% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences76
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1131
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
82.31% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount1108
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.35
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Quinn15
Raven3
Nest2
Herrera9
Saint2
Christopher2
Greek1
Street1
Morris3
London2
Seville-born1
Camden3
Tube2
Veil2
Market1
Seville3
English1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Raven"
2"Herrera"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Morris"
places
0"Soho"
1"Greek"
2"Street"
3"London"
4"Seville-born"
5"Camden"
6"Tube"
7"Veil"
8"Seville"
9"English"
globalScore0.823
windowScore1
59.09% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"tasted like rust in Quinn’s mouth—unexpla"
1"felt like a countdown"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.884
wordCount1131
matches
0"not for her, but for the space she intended to occupy"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs21
mean53.86
std35.85
cv0.666
sampleLengths
069
14
297
32
4115
595
693
767
863
93
1079
116
1269
1339
1431
1532
1668
176
1894
1976
2023
86.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences76
matches
0"been buried"
1"was plastered"
2"been transformed"
3"been replaced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs184
matches
0"was already measuring"
1"was walking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences78
ratio0.167
matches
0"Rain in Soho didn’t fall; it attacked."
1"The worn leather watch on her left wrist ticked against her pulse—steady, ancient, relentless."
2"He wore a dark jacket that hung loose on his five-foot-ten frame, but she caught the glint of the Saint Christopher medallion at his throat and, when he turned to button his collar against the storm, the pale track of the scar running along his left forearm—a knife attack, old, ugly, healed wrong."
3"Three years since DS Morris had died under circumstances that still tasted like rust in Quinn’s mouth—unexplained circumstances, the report said, though she knew now that “unexplained” was just the language institutions used to hide the supernatural."
4"The scar on his forearm disappeared beneath his sleeve, but Quinn had memorized it—the map of violence that led a Seville-born healer to these rain-soaked streets, to unauthorized treatments, to a lost license and an off-the-books practice that served things no NHS ward would admit existed."
5"Herrera reached the entrance to an abandoned Tube station—Camden, long shuttered, its mouth a black yawn beneath a rusted arch."
6"It glowed faintly in his palm—pale, porous, wrong."
7"Beneath Camden, in the abandoned station that moved every full moon—tonight, hidden behind storm clouds but pulling at the tides nonetheless—lay the market."
8"She had only the watch ticking against her wrist, the memory of Morris’s laughter—quick, sharp, gone—and the absolute certainty that if she turned back now, the clique would bury another partner in the kind of silence that never healed."
9"There was no surprise in them, only assessment—the look of a healer deciding whether a wound was worth treating."
10"The figure with no face held out a hand—not for her, but for the space she intended to occupy."
11"The abandoned Tube station had been transformed—stalls of black silk and rusted iron lined the platform, their wares glowing with colors that had no names in English."
12"She thought of Morris, of the supernatural origins she still couldn’t name, and she knew—knew with the certainty of a woman who had spent eighteen years learning the shapes of lies—that this market, this clique, this scarred paramedic from Seville, held the key to the death that had hollowed her out."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1138
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.022847100175746926
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006151142355008787
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean14.5
std11.71
cv0.807
sampleLengths
07
128
214
320
44
515
613
716
853
92
102
113
1215
1318
1429
1520
1614
1714
1811
1916
202
2137
223
232
2424
254
2634
279
2846
293
305
3120
3220
3312
347
3513
368
3726
383
3913
403
4118
4223
436
449
4512
4611
476
4821
495
50.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3717948717948718
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences69
matches
0"She was forty-one, five-foot-nine of"
1"He wore a dark jacket"
2"She kept twenty yards behind,"
3"She had seen the light"
4"He turned left onto Greek"
5"He moved with the economy"
6"She watched him reach into"
7"It glowed faintly in his"
8"He held it up to"
9"She had no bone token."
10"She had no invitation."
11"She had only the watch"
12"His warm brown eyes met"
13"His voice carried the soft"
14"Her hair was plastered to"
15"She reached the archway."
16"She looked at Herrera, at"
17"She followed him into the"
18"She kept her hand near"
19"She thought of Morris, of"
ratio0.29
46.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences69
matches
0"Harlow Quinn stood beneath the"
1"The worn leather watch on"
2"She was forty-one, five-foot-nine of"
3"The side door opened."
4"Tomás Herrera slipped into the"
5"The warm brown eyes Quinn"
6"He wore a dark jacket"
7"She kept twenty yards behind,"
8"The Raven’s green neon bled"
9"She had seen the light"
10"Tonight, Herrera had come through"
11"He turned left onto Greek"
12"Quinn matched his pace, her"
13"The clique knew."
14"Herrera never looked back."
15"He moved with the economy"
16"The medallion at his neck"
17"The scar on his forearm"
18"The streets narrowed."
19"Soho bled into Camden’s bones."
ratio0.826
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"He wore a dark jacket that hung loose on his five-foot-ten frame, but she caught the glint of the Saint Christopher medallion at his throat and, when he turned …"
1"Behind one of those photographs, behind a bookshelf that smelled of cedar and secrecy, the clique held their clandestine meetings."
2"He moved with the economy of a former paramedic, someone who had once saved lives in the narrow gap between heartbeats and now moved through London like he was …"
3"The scar on his forearm disappeared beneath his sleeve, but Quinn had memorized it—the map of violence that led a Seville-born healer to these rain-soaked stree…"
4"The bone token was small, carved from something that had never been synthetic."
5"Beneath Camden, in the abandoned station that moved every full moon—tonight, hidden behind storm clouds but pulling at the tides nonetheless—lay the market."
6"The air at the threshold smelled of ozone and old iron, of things that had been buried and were now breathing."
7"The abandoned Tube station had been transformed—stalls of black silk and rusted iron lined the platform, their wares glowing with colors that had no names in En…"
8"She kept her hand near her belt, not on her weapon, her military bearing unbroken even as her heart hammered a rhythm that felt like a countdown."
9"The full moon’s pull reached even here, a vibration in the air that made the leather strap of Quinn’s watch feel tight against her bone."
10"She thought of Morris, of the supernatural origins she still couldn’t name, and she knew—knew with the certainty of a woman who had spent eighteen years learnin…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"DS Morris had, the report said, though she knew now that"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.6139%