| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "His mouth curved barely [barely]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.244 | | leniency | 0.488 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.049 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 994 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 74.85% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 994 | | totalAiIsms | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "fluttered" | | 2 | "flicked" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 979 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.87% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 739 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.08 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Brick | 3 | | Lane | 3 | | Eva | 6 | | Latin | 1 | | Rory | 8 | | Evan | 1 | | Avaros | 2 | | London | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Lucien | 4 | | Ptolemy | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.959 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 94.44% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed louder now, locking them in with every scroll that claimed connections between Cardiff and Avaros, between her father’s law books and Lucien’s demon blood" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 979 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 52 | | mean | 18.83 | | std | 19.45 | | cv | 1.033 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 111 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 41 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 38 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 42 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 29 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 28 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 31 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 46 | | 49 | 44 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 135 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 105 | | ratio | 0.114 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock landed hard—three sharp strikes against wood that had already survived two centuries of Brick Lane chaos." | | 1 | "Every surface—table, chair, windowsill—disappeared beneath books, scrolls pinned with rusted drawing pins, and research notes scribbled in Eva’s frantic hand." | | 2 | "His cane—ivory handle catching the hallway glow—rested against the jamb." | | 3 | "The scent of charcoal and rain and something older—smoke from realms that didn’t appear on London maps—wrapped around the stale air." | | 4 | "Her black hair—straight, shoulder-length—fell across her cheek." | | 5 | "Outside, Brick Lane roared—cars, voices, the curry house venting fresh heat into the London dark." | | 6 | "His hand lifted—slow, deliberate—to her left wrist." | | 7 | "Instead, her free hand rested against his chest, feeling the heartbeat beneath the suit—too fast, too human, too tied to something she’d tried to outrun." | | 8 | "Her eyes held his—amber drinking her light, black swallowing her doubt." | | 9 | "It was years of silence breaking—hurt, attraction, everything left unsaid exploding into contact." | | 10 | "His lips tasted of smoke and regret; hers of cold tea and defiance." | | 11 | "It was just them—broken, bright, and finally together in the wreckage they’d made." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 756 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "foreign, expensive, wrong against her" |
| | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.03042328042328042 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003968253968253968 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 105 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 105 | | mean | 9.32 | | std | 6.34 | | cv | 0.68 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 66.98% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.41904761904761906 | | totalSentences | 105 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she opened the door." | | 1 | "Only want, sharp and unguarded." | | 2 | "Instead, her free hand rested" |
| | ratio | 0.044 | |
| 72.94% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "She crossed the cramped room." | | 1 | "Her bare feet caught on" | | 2 | "His cane—ivory handle catching the" | | 3 | "She gripped the edge." | | 4 | "He stepped inside before she" | | 5 | "His polished shoe brushed a" | | 6 | "They swayed, held, then settled." | | 7 | "Her black hair—straight, shoulder-length-fell across" | | 8 | "He leaned on the cane" | | 9 | "She moved past him into" | | 10 | "She touched it, pulled away." | | 11 | "Her bright blue eyes reflected" | | 12 | "He stepped closer." | | 13 | "His hand lifted—slow, deliberate—to her" | | 14 | "She pulled back, but her" | | 15 | "She looked up." | | 16 | "His heterochromatic gaze held no" | | 17 | "His mouth curved, barely" | | 18 | "She didn’t speak." | | 19 | "His jaw tightened" |
| | ratio | 0.368 | |
| 55.59% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock landed hard—three sharp" | | 1 | "Rory set her cold mug" | | 2 | "Ptolemy lifted one ear from" | | 3 | "The flat smelled of turmeric" | | 4 | "Every surface—table, chair, windowsill—disappeared beneath" | | 5 | "She crossed the cramped room." | | 6 | "Her bare feet caught on" | | 7 | "The crescent scar on her" | | 8 | "Lucien filled the frame." | | 9 | "Charcoal suit, lapels sharp enough" | | 10 | "His cane—ivory handle catching the" | | 11 | "She gripped the edge." | | 12 | "He stepped inside before she" | | 13 | "The cane tapped the floorboards" | | 14 | "The deadbolts snapped shut behind" | | 15 | "Books climbed the walls in" | | 16 | "Ptolemy arched his back, hissed" | | 17 | "Lucien moved through the flat" | | 18 | "His polished shoe brushed a" | | 19 | "They swayed, held, then settled." |
| | ratio | 0.809 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The deadbolts seemed louder now, locking them in with every scroll that claimed connections between Cardiff and Avaros, between her father’s law books and Lucie…" |
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| 75.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said, her voice low" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.122 | | leniency | 0.244 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.049 | |