Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCXPQDBZGW5HQ3MF2PHRMWN

Run Details

Duration:
9m 18s
Cost:
$0.020844
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock landed hard—three sharp strikes against wood that had already survived two centuries of Brick Lane chaos. Rory set her cold mug down on a stack of Eva’s grimoires, tea untouched, the ceramic clinking against Latin spine. Ptolemy lifted one ear from his throne atop a rolled scroll tube but remained still. The flat smelled of turmeric seeped up from the curry house below and the dry dust of ten thousand pages. Every surface—table, chair, windowsill—disappeared beneath books, scrolls pinned with rusted drawing pins, and research notes scribbled in Eva’s frantic hand. Three deadbolts glinted in a line on the front door, a fortress Rory had trusted since fleeing Evan. She crossed the cramped room. Her bare feet caught on a fallen map of Avaros. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the yellow bulb light as she reached for the chain. Then she opened the door. Lucien filled the frame. Charcoal suit, lapels sharp enough to cut, platinum hair slicked back like frost on black glass. His cane—ivory handle catching the hallway glow—rested against the jamb. One amber eye, one black, pinned her with the patience of a blade drawn slow. "Carter." She gripped the edge. "Lucien." He stepped inside before she could block him. The cane tapped the floorboards with a rhythm like a metronome counting down to something inevitable. "You changed the locks." "Eva did. After." The deadbolts snapped shut behind him, bone against bone, locking them into the cramped chaos together. Books climbed the walls in teetering columns. Ptolemy arched his back, hissed once, then vanished under the sofa with a flick of his tabby tail. Lucien moved through the flat with the ease of someone who owned disorder. His polished shoe brushed a tower of demonology texts. They swayed, held, then settled. The scent of charcoal and rain and something older—smoke from realms that didn’t appear on London maps—wrapped around the stale air. "You left," he said. "You remember." "I remember everything." He turned. The black eye drank the light. "Deliveries at the Golden Empress stopped Tuesday. Yu-Fei Cheung asked questions with his hands folded and his eyes too calm. Silas asked with a bottle. I came because silence rots faster than flesh." Rory folded her arms. Her black hair—straight, shoulder-length—fell across her cheek. "This is Eva’s flat. Not mine." "But you’re here. Hiding among scrolls that smell of your friend’s desperation." "I’m not hiding." "No?" He leaned on the cane. Beneath the ivory, she knew the blade waited, thin and ready. "Then why do you jump when I say your name?" She moved past him into the kitchen nook, where Eva’s kettle sat cold and crusted. She touched it, pulled away. Her bright blue eyes reflected nothing in the dark window. "We parted on complicated terms." "You called them poison." "I called them true." The silence stretched, thick as the dust on Eva’s shelves. Outside, Brick Lane roared—cars, voices, the curry house venting fresh heat into the London dark. Inside, the books watched, silent witnesses to every word left broken between them. Rory turned. "What do you want, Lucien?" "Proof you’re breathing." "I’m standing here." "Visible proof never satisfied me." He stepped closer. The tailored charcoal suit brushed against a stack of research notes that fluttered to the floor like dead leaves. His hand lifted—slow, deliberate—to her left wrist. Between her sleeve and palm, the crescent scar glowed white against her skin. "Still there," he murmured. "Childhood accident." "Or fate wearing a different mask." She pulled back, but her fingers caught his coat lapel. The wool was foreign, expensive, wrong against her chipped nails and delivery uniform. "Don’t dress old hurt in poetry." "I’m not dressing it. I’m showing you it still lives." She looked up. His heterochromatic gaze held no broker’s mask now, no smoothness bought with four languages and sharper secrets. Only want, sharp and unguarded. "You came unannounced," she said. "Because if I asked, you’d say no." The deadbolts seemed louder now, locking them in with every scroll that claimed connections between Cardiff and Avaros, between her father’s law books and Lucien’s demon blood. Rory’s heart hammered. "I’m not the same girl who left Marseille in your shadow." "No. You’re harder. Brighter." His mouth curved, barely. "And you still haven’t answered." "What question?" "Whether you want me to leave." She didn’t speak. Instead, her free hand rested against his chest, feeling the heartbeat beneath the suit—too fast, too human, too tied to something she’d tried to outrun. "Eva’s research," Rory said, her voice low. "The scrolls. She thinks there’s a thread between your father’s realm and the accident that marked me." "My father’s realm touches many things, Carter." His jaw tightened. "Including the ones who try to escape it." "I don’t try to escape anything." "No?" His breath brushed her ear. "Then stop thinking. Tell me what you feel." Her eyes held his—amber drinking her light, black swallowing her doubt. The flat shrank. Books pressed closer. Ptolemy’s tail flicked in the dark under the sofa, a silent vote of caution. "I feel," she said, "that if I open my mouth, I’ll say things I can’t take back." "Say them." The kiss wasn’t gentle. It was years of silence breaking—hurt, attraction, everything left unsaid exploding into contact. His lips tasted of smoke and regret; hers of cold tea and defiance. The cane clattered to the floor, blade hidden, purpose forgotten in the chaos of Eva’s papers. Rory pressed against him, the scar on her wrist burning where their hands locked together. The books watched. The curry smell rose, warm and insistent. And for a moment, the flat above Brick Lane wasn’t Eva’s refuge, or Rory’s hiding place, or Lucien’s battleground. It was just them—broken, bright, and finally together in the wreckage they’d made. But the deadbolts stayed locked. The scrolls waited, patient and terrible. And neither spoke of tomorrow.
created_at"2026-07-25T15:18:38.259Z" 7/25/2026, 3:18:38 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"His mouth curved barely [barely]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.244
leniency0.488
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.049
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount994
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount994
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"silence"
count3
1
word"fluttered"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"fluttered"
2"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences74
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords979
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.87% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount739
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.08
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Brick3
Lane3
Eva6
Latin1
Rory8
Evan1
Avaros2
London2
Cardiff1
Lucien4
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Evan"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.959
windowScore1
94.44% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed louder now, locking them in with every scroll that claimed connections between Cardiff and Avaros, between her father’s law books and Lucien’s demon blood"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount979
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean18.83
std19.45
cv1.033
sampleLengths
0111
133
25
34
441
51
65
728
83
941
1048
114
122
1344
1417
1512
163
1727
1835
194
204
2138
227
233
243
255
2642
274
282
296
3029
3110
3225
335
347
3527
3614
3713
382
396
4028
4124
4218
436
4414
4531
4617
472
4846
4944
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs135
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences105
ratio0.114
matches
0"The knock landed hard—three sharp strikes against wood that had already survived two centuries of Brick Lane chaos."
1"Every surface—table, chair, windowsill—disappeared beneath books, scrolls pinned with rusted drawing pins, and research notes scribbled in Eva’s frantic hand."
2"His cane—ivory handle catching the hallway glow—rested against the jamb."
3"The scent of charcoal and rain and something older—smoke from realms that didn’t appear on London maps—wrapped around the stale air."
4"Her black hair—straight, shoulder-length—fell across her cheek."
5"Outside, Brick Lane roared—cars, voices, the curry house venting fresh heat into the London dark."
6"His hand lifted—slow, deliberate—to her left wrist."
7"Instead, her free hand rested against his chest, feeling the heartbeat beneath the suit—too fast, too human, too tied to something she’d tried to outrun."
8"Her eyes held his—amber drinking her light, black swallowing her doubt."
9"It was years of silence breaking—hurt, attraction, everything left unsaid exploding into contact."
10"His lips tasted of smoke and regret; hers of cold tea and defiance."
11"It was just them—broken, bright, and finally together in the wreckage they’d made."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount756
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"foreign, expensive, wrong against her"
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.03042328042328042
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003968253968253968
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean9.32
std6.34
cv0.68
sampleLengths
018
120
215
320
420
518
65
710
818
95
104
1116
1210
1315
141
154
161
178
1816
194
203
2116
227
2318
2413
259
265
2721
284
292
305
316
3233
334
347
356
3612
373
386
3911
4010
4115
425
4310
445
454
464
4710
4815
4913
66.98% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.41904761904761906
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners44
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences68
matches
0"Then she opened the door."
1"Only want, sharp and unguarded."
2"Instead, her free hand rested"
ratio0.044
72.94% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences68
matches
0"She crossed the cramped room."
1"Her bare feet caught on"
2"His cane—ivory handle catching the"
3"She gripped the edge."
4"He stepped inside before she"
5"His polished shoe brushed a"
6"They swayed, held, then settled."
7"Her black hair—straight, shoulder-length-fell across"
8"He leaned on the cane"
9"She moved past him into"
10"She touched it, pulled away."
11"Her bright blue eyes reflected"
12"He stepped closer."
13"His hand lifted—slow, deliberate—to her"
14"She pulled back, but her"
15"She looked up."
16"His heterochromatic gaze held no"
17"His mouth curved, barely"
18"She didn’t speak."
19"His jaw tightened"
ratio0.368
55.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences68
matches
0"The knock landed hard—three sharp"
1"Rory set her cold mug"
2"Ptolemy lifted one ear from"
3"The flat smelled of turmeric"
4"Every surface—table, chair, windowsill—disappeared beneath"
5"She crossed the cramped room."
6"Her bare feet caught on"
7"The crescent scar on her"
8"Lucien filled the frame."
9"Charcoal suit, lapels sharp enough"
10"His cane—ivory handle catching the"
11"She gripped the edge."
12"He stepped inside before she"
13"The cane tapped the floorboards"
14"The deadbolts snapped shut behind"
15"Books climbed the walls in"
16"Ptolemy arched his back, hissed"
17"Lucien moved through the flat"
18"His polished shoe brushed a"
19"They swayed, held, then settled."
ratio0.809
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The deadbolts seemed louder now, locking them in with every scroll that claimed connections between Cardiff and Avaros, between her father’s law books and Lucie…"
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory said, her voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.122
leniency0.244
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.049
87.6560%