Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCXR0BRSWBXK1CPNVDZCYB6

Run Details

Duration:
3m 18s
Cost:
$0.006308
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Green neon bled through the Soho fog, humming against wet brick like a toothache. Aurora Carter pushed through the heavy oak door of The Raven's Nest, the smell of stale hops and polished mahogany hitting her like a physical blow. Her shoulder-length black hair clung damp from the rain, her bright blue eyes scanning the dim interior out of old habit—exit routes, sightlines, shadows that moved wrong. She wore a faded delivery jacket, the crescent scar on her left wrist hidden beneath a frayed cuff. Twenty-five years old, already tired in her bones, she needed silence more than alcohol. She found a stool near the back, beneath a black-and-white photograph of some dead spy or soldier, and ordered a whiskey she wouldn't finish. Life had shrunk since London—part-time deliveries for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress, a flat above this bar, a name she barely recognised in the mirror. Rory, her friends called her. Rory Carter. Not Laila. Not Malphora. Just a ghost of a girl who'd fled Cardiff and an abusive ex named Evan, trading one prison for another. Then the bookshelf near the hidden back room groaned open, and Silas Blackwood stepped out. Not Silas the spymaster. Not the retired MI6 field agent with the neat grey-streaked auburn beard and the silver signet ring on his right hand. Not the man whose slight limp in his left leg had become a legend whispered across clandestine tables in this very bar. He was thinner. The beard had turned almost white at the chin. His hazel eyes, once sharp enough to cut glass, looked clouded with cataracts and regret. "Rory." She froze, the glass halfway to her lips. "Si." He lowered himself onto the stool beside her with a wince, favouring that ruined left knee. The signet ring caught the green neon, throwing a sickly glow across the bar top. "You live up there," he said. Not a question. "Flat above. You still own this place." "Own it. Run it. Same prison, different bars." She took a sip. The whiskey burned. "You look different." "Fifty-eight years old, Rory. Prague took more than my knee. Took my certainty. You look..." He paused, studying her. "You look like you're running from something that already caught you." She set the glass down hard. "Evan is behind me. Cardiff is behind me. This is just... survival." "Survival." He laughed, a dry rasp. "Is that what Eva sends you? Survival messages?" Her jaw tightened. "You talk to Eva?" "Every Tuesday. She worries. You vanished into delivery trucks and silence, and she thinks you're dead inside." "I'm not dead." But the words rang hollow even to her own ears. Silas signalled the bartender, then turned back, lowering his voice. "You used to be fire. Quick out-of-the-box thinking, they said at university. Pre-Law. Your father Brendan Carter wanted you in courtrooms, not kitchens." "I never wanted courtrooms. I wanted out." "Of Cardiff? Or of becoming your mother? Jennifer Ellis Carter, the teacher. The quiet woman who swallowed her own voice?" Aurora felt the old wound split open. "Don't talk about my mother." "Why? Because she stayed? Because she taught other children how to speak while her own daughter fled?" "She taught me to survive quietly. I learned loud." The hidden bookshelf behind them creaked, but neither moved. The bar had emptied, leaving only the green neon and the weight of years. "You work for Yu-Fei?" Silas asked softly. "Golden Empress. Delivery. It's temporary." "Nothing is temporary, Rory. Not the scars." He gestured to her left wrist, the crescent mark now visible as she gripped the glass. "Not the choices. You ran from Evan. You ran from law school. You ran to London at Eva's behest, and now you run deliveries above my bar like you're hiding in plain sight." "I'm not hiding." "Then what are you? Laila? Malphora? The aliases don't fit you anymore. You're Aurora Carter, and she's been sitting in this bar for years, waiting." She felt the tension crackle—who she was against who she'd become. The girl who'd fled Cardiff with dreams of justice, of loudness, of love that didn't hurt. The woman who now delivered food to strangers, lived in a flat above a retired spymaster's front, and answered to Rory. "I don't know who I am," she admitted. Silas reached across, his hand shaking slightly, and covered her wrist—not holding, not comforting, just connecting. His silver ring was cold against her skin. "I opened The Raven's Nest after Prague because I needed a front, yes. But also because I needed a place where old ghosts could sit without performing. You came in here tonight not for whiskey. You came because some part of Aurora Carter remembers she used to think." She looked at him, really looked—at the grey-streaked hair, the trimmed beard, the limp, the ring, the eyes that had seen too many secrets. "I thought I was done with secrets," she said. "You never finish with them. You just learn to carry them quieter." She pulled her wrist back gently, not harshly. "Eva said you retired to be a bar owner. Not to keep running your network." "Eva knows what I tell her. She doesn't know about the back room. She doesn't know that I still take messages through this bookshelf. She doesn't know I'm dying of something slower than a bullet, and that every Tuesday I tell her I'm fine." The silence stretched, thick with regret. Two old friends, separated by years they hadn't realised they'd lost, reunited in a bar that smelled of lies and old photographs. "I missed you, Si," Aurora said, and her voice broke—not from weakness, but from the shock of truth. "I missed the girl who argued with her father about law, not the woman who hides from it. But I also know her. She's still in there." Aurora finished her whiskey. Outside, the green neon flickered against the fog, painting the Soho street in sickly emerald. She stood, smoothing her jacket, feeling the crescent scar pulse. "Next time," she said, "I won't hide in the back." Silas smiled, sad and sharp. "There is no back, Rory. Only front. Only now." She walked toward the door, past the old maps and the black-and-white photographs, past the hidden bookshelf that led to rooms she wasn't ready to enter. The door closed behind her with a quiet click, leaving Silas alone with his ring, his limp, and the green neon humming its endless, regretful song.<|end_message|>
created_at"2026-07-25T15:19:20.193Z" 7/25/2026, 3:19:20 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Silas asked softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.278
leniency0.556
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.056
76.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1083
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"softly"
2"slightly"
3"really"
4"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.83% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1083
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"clandestine"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"comforting"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"silence"
2"clandestine"
3"weight"
4"tension"
5"comforting"
6"flickered"
7"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences56
matches
0"k with regret"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences56
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences82
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1076
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.57% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount643
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity1.09
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Carter2
Raven1
Nest1
London1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
Laila1
Malphora1
Cardiff2
Evan1
Silas7
Blackwood1
Rory3
Aurora4
persons
0"Carter"
1"Raven"
2"Yu-Fei"
3"Cheung"
4"Laila"
5"Evan"
6"Silas"
7"Blackwood"
8"Rory"
9"Aurora"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.956
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.929
wordCount1076
matches
0"not from weakness, but from the shock of truth"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean23.91
std21.03
cv0.879
sampleLengths
099
179
215
374
41
59
631
79
87
98
1010
1130
1218
1314
147
1517
1613
1733
187
1920
2012
2117
229
2323
247
255
2656
273
2825
2948
308
3124
3248
3324
349
3512
3623
3744
3828
3918
4027
4129
4210
4314
4452
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs107
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences82
ratio0.073
matches
0"Her shoulder-length black hair clung damp from the rain, her bright blue eyes scanning the dim interior out of old habit—exit routes, sightlines, shadows that moved wrong."
1"Life had shrunk since London—part-time deliveries for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress, a flat above this bar, a name she barely recognised in the mirror."
2"She felt the tension crackle—who she was against who she'd become."
3"Silas reached across, his hand shaking slightly, and covered her wrist—not holding, not comforting, just connecting."
4"She looked at him, really looked—at the grey-streaked hair, the trimmed beard, the limp, the ring, the eyes that had seen too many secrets."
5"\"I missed you, Si,\" Aurora said, and her voice broke—not from weakness, but from the shock of truth."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount659
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"neat grey-streaked auburn"
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.03490136570561457
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.013657056145675266
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences82
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences82
mean13.12
std9.36
cv0.713
sampleLengths
014
126
227
318
414
524
624
75
82
92
102
1120
1215
134
1421
1522
163
179
1815
191
208
211
2216
2315
246
253
267
278
284
293
303
3119
3211
336
3412
356
368
373
384
3917
4013
4110
4223
437
4420
457
465
4717
489
499
59.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4146341463414634
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners34
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences49
matches
0"Just a ghost of a"
1"Then the bookshelf near the"
ratio0.041
64.90% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences49
matches
0"Her shoulder-length black hair clung"
1"She wore a faded delivery"
2"She found a stool near"
3"He was thinner."
4"His hazel eyes, once sharp"
5"She froze, the glass halfway"
6"He lowered himself onto the"
7"She took a sip."
8"He paused, studying her"
9"She set the glass down"
10"He laughed, a dry rasp"
11"Her jaw tightened."
12"He gestured to her left"
13"She felt the tension crackle—who"
14"His silver ring was cold"
15"She looked at him, really"
16"She pulled her wrist back"
17"She stood, smoothing her jacket,"
18"She walked toward the door,"
ratio0.388
72.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount38
totalSentences49
matches
0"Aurora Carter pushed through the"
1"Her shoulder-length black hair clung"
2"She wore a faded delivery"
3"She found a stool near"
4"Life had shrunk since London—part—time"
5"Rory, her friends called her."
6"He was thinner."
7"The beard had turned almost"
8"His hazel eyes, once sharp"
9"She froze, the glass halfway"
10"He lowered himself onto the"
11"The signet ring caught the"
12"She took a sip."
13"The whiskey burned."
14"He paused, studying her"
15"She set the glass down"
16"He laughed, a dry rasp"
17"Her jaw tightened."
18"Silas signalled the bartender, then"
19"Aurora felt the old wound"
ratio0.776
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Her shoulder-length black hair clung damp from the rain, her bright blue eyes scanning the dim interior out of old habit—exit routes, sightlines, shadows that m…"
1"The girl who'd fled Cardiff with dreams of justice, of loudness, of love that didn't hurt."
2"Silas reached across, his hand shaking slightly, and covered her wrist—not holding, not comforting, just connecting."
3"She looked at him, really looked—at the grey-streaked hair, the trimmed beard, the limp, the ring, the eyes that had seen too many secrets."
4"Two old friends, separated by years they hadn't realised they'd lost, reunited in a bar that smelled of lies and old photographs."
5"She stood, smoothing her jacket, feeling the crescent scar pulse."
6"She walked toward the door, past the old maps and the black-and-white photographs, past the hidden bookshelf that led to rooms she wasn't ready to enter."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
94.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"He laughed (laugh)"
1"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.194
leniency0.389
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.111
83.7084%