Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCXWDXYS72AACEWCNXFAB3V

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolts clacked in sequence, tick-tock-tick-tock, a familiar rhythm that made Rory's shoulders ease before her brain caught up. Three heavy locks. Then the fourth, the one she had added after leaving Evan. The brass key turned. Ptolemy didn't hiss. The tabby only yowled, deep in his throat, a low old growl that meant strangers. Rory opened the door a crack. Lucien stood in the narrow Brick Lane corridor, charcoal suit immaculate despite the damp East End air, ivory cane hooked over his arm. One amber eye, one black, fixed on her. "You always did prefer overkill with security." His voice carried the precise lilt of Marseille, polished by London. She didn't move. "Eva's out. She texted." "She mentioned." The cane's tip tapped the floor once, sharp. "But I came for you." "Not smart." "I've never claimed intelligence in your presence, Aurora." He stepped closer. The scent of cedar and something darker, like burnt sugar, followed him. "May I?" She stepped aside. The flat smelled of curry from downstairs, of old books, of the lavender Eva burned to mask research chemicals. Lucien entered. His cane swept the cramped room, the scrolls, the research notes covering every surface. Ptolemy arched his back on the windowsill, fur spiked. "You live in chaos," Lucien said. "I live in freedom." "You live above a curry house with three deadbolts and a cat named after a Greek astronomer. That's not freedom, Laila. That's a cage with better wallpaper." Rory's jaw tightened. Only her father used her middle name. Only Lucien used Laila. "What do you want?" "The Golden Empress called me. Yu-Fei said you missed your delivery shift. Twice." "I was sick." "You never miss shifts. You deliver for Yu-Fei with the discipline of a soldier." Rory folded her arms. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the lamplight, pale against her skin. "You don't have the right to track me." "I have every right. You vanished from my life without a word, and now you vanish from work? I'm concerned." The word hung between them like smoke. "Don't." She turned away. A half-empty mug of cold tea sat on the stack of ancient law texts she refused to unpack. "You don't get to be concerned. You made your choice." Lucien's cane clicked against the wooden floor. "My choice was necessary. Avaros politics don't wait for sentiment." "Don't talk to me about sentiment." Rory faced him. Her bright blue eyes, hard as winter glass, held his heterochromatic gaze. "You used me for information. You let me think there was something real, then you disappeared into your demon father's court." "That court wants me dead, Aurora. I left to protect you." "You left because you're half-demon and terrified of being human with me. Don't dress up cowardice as nobility." The silence stretched. Ptolemy jumped down, his paws landing softly. Outside, a bus rumbled past on Brick Lane. Lucien set his cane against the wall. His tailored charcoal suit seemed too perfect for the cluttered flat. "I came because Eva said you were asking about the old contacts. The ones from Cardiff." "That concerns you?" "I know every dangerous name in that city. Your father, Brendan Carter, is a barrister with enemies. Your ex, Evan, has been seen near Whitechapel. You're not just missing work, Rory. You're digging." She walked to the window. The curry house lights glowed red below. "Evan found me. Two nights ago. Outside the Golden Empress." The shift in Lucien's posture was immediate. His shoulders tightened. The amber eye darkened. "Did he touch you?" "He followed. That's all. But he knew where I live. This flat, Eva's flat, it's not safe." "You shouldn't have come back to London." "I had nowhere else." Lucien crossed the distance between them in three silent steps. His hand, gloved in black leather, reached for her wrist, the one with the scar. His thumb traced the crescent shape gently, a touch that contradicted every sharp word they'd exchanged. "I missed your mind," he said, his voice lower now, losing its polished edge. "Your quick thinking. The way you see patterns others miss. I missed this." His fingers brushed her jaw. Rory should have pulled away. She should have slapped him, or cursed him, or called him every name she had saved since he left. Instead, she leaned into the touch, just slightly, her breath catching. "We can't," she whispered. "We already have." The door to the flat burst open. Eva stood in the doorway, her arms full of scrolls, her dark hair wild, Ptolemy winding between her legs in greeting. Behind her, a figure filled the corridor. Evan. Rory's heart stopped. Evan's face had changed since she last saw him in Cardiff. Thinner. Meaner. A dark bruise blooming across his cheekbone that hadn't been there before. His eyes fixed on her with the possessive fury that had driven her to flee. "You found her," Evan said, his voice rough. "Took longer than I expected." Lucien moved with unnatural speed. The ivory cane separated in his grip, revealing the thin blade hidden within. He positioned himself between Rory and the intruder. "Leave," Lucien said. Evan laughed, a broken sound. "The Frenchman. Still playing knight. She told me about you. Half-breed fixer." "She told you enough." Rory's mind raced. Quick out-of-the-box thinking, her father had called it. Not now for sentiment. She grabbed the closest heavy object, an ancient Welsh law text bound in cracked leather, and hurled it not at Evan but at the lamp behind him. Glass exploded. The flat plunged into shadow. Evan cursed, disoriented. "Door!" Rory shouted. She didn't wait. She grabbed Eva's arm, pulled her friend toward the back, past the scattered research notes, past the books that covered every surface. Lucien struck. The blade sang through the air. Evan dodged, but not fast enough, blood sprayed across the scroll-covered table. "Move!" Rory dragged Eva through the narrow kitchen, toward the fire escape window that led down into the curry house alley. Behind them, the fight turned ugly. A crash. A grunt. The sound of metal meeting bone. Rory shoved Eva onto the fire escape. "Go!" "I'm not leaving you!" "You have to. Eva, please." Eva's eyes, wide with fear, met hers. Then she climbed. Rory turned back. Lucien and Evan were locked together, the cane blade pressed against Evan's throat, but Evan's hand had found Rory's arm, pulling her closer, using her as a shield. "Stay away, half-breed," Evan spat, "or I break her wrist." The scar on Rory's left wrist burned like fire. Rory twisted. Her elbow connected with Evan's ribs. She used the momentum to drive her knee upward, hard, into his groin. Evan howled. His grip loosened. Lucien didn't hesitate. The blade struck. Evan collapsed. The flat fell silent except for their breathing. Blood pooled on the wooden floor, dark and recent, copper stinging Rory's nostrils. Eva stood in the kitchen doorway, trembling. Rory looked at Lucien. His heterochromatic eyes held hers. The suit was ruined. The cane was broken. "You came back," she said. "I never left." He lowered the blade. "Not really." Outside, sirens began to wail, approaching fast. "Then you just made us both criminals," Rory said. "Together." She reached out and touched his face, her thumb brushing his jaw, feeling the tension there. "Let's run," she said. "Together."<|end_message|>
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She turned away [away]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.34
leniency0.679
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.038
83.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1222
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"gently"
2"slightly"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1222
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"lilt"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"raced"
count1
6
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"lilt"
2"silence"
3"perfect"
4"traced"
5"raced"
6"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences112
matches
0"e with fear"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences112
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences147
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1222
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions70
wordCount838
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.27
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Rory19
Evan15
Brick2
Lane2
East1
End1
Marseille1
London1
Eva7
Lucien14
Laila1
Ptolemy4
Cardiff1
Welsh1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Evan"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
4"Laila"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"East"
3"End"
4"Marseille"
5"London"
6"Cardiff"
globalScore0.366
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.818
wordCount1222
matches
0"not at Evan but at the lamp behind him"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences147
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs77
mean15.87
std12
cv0.756
sampleLengths
055
16
231
318
47
515
62
725
822
925
106
114
1227
1318
1413
153
1614
1726
1820
197
2032
2117
2242
2311
2418
2518
2634
273
2833
2922
3018
3117
327
334
3441
3532
3635
374
383
397
4028
411
423
4340
4413
4526
463
4717
484
4942
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences112
matches
0"was ruined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs153
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences147
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount843
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.027283511269276393
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.00830367734282325
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences147
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences147
mean8.31
std6.4
cv0.77
sampleLengths
019
13
211
34
43
515
66
723
88
918
103
114
1210
135
142
1511
1612
172
183
1919
202
2114
229
236
244
2527
263
277
284
294
3013
313
3214
334
3414
358
3620
377
384
3918
4010
417
4210
439
4412
4521
4611
4718
483
497
45.92% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.2925170068027211
totalSentences147
uniqueOpeners43
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences93
matches
0"Then the fourth, the one"
1"Only her father used her"
2"Only Lucien used Laila."
3"Instead, she leaned into the"
4"Then she climbed."
ratio0.054
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences93
matches
0"His voice carried the precise"
1"She didn't move."
2"He stepped closer"
3"She stepped aside."
4"His cane swept the cramped"
5"She turned away"
6"Her bright blue eyes, hard"
7"His tailored charcoal suit seemed"
8"She walked to the window."
9"His shoulders tightened."
10"His hand, gloved in black"
11"His thumb traced the crescent"
12"he said, his voice lower"
13"His fingers brushed her jaw"
14"She should have slapped him,"
15"His eyes fixed on her"
16"He positioned himself between Rory"
17"She grabbed the closest heavy"
18"She didn't wait."
19"She grabbed Eva's arm, pulled"
ratio0.28
29.89% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences93
matches
0"The deadbolts clacked in sequence,"
1"The brass key turned."
2"Ptolemy didn't hiss."
3"The tabby only yowled, deep"
4"Rory opened the door a"
5"Lucien stood in the narrow"
6"His voice carried the precise"
7"She didn't move."
8"The cane's tip tapped the"
9"He stepped closer"
10"The scent of cedar and"
11"She stepped aside."
12"The flat smelled of curry"
13"His cane swept the cramped"
14"Ptolemy arched his back on"
15"Rory's jaw tightened."
16"Rory folded her arms."
17"The crescent scar on her"
18"The word hung between them"
19"She turned away"
ratio0.86
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The deadbolts clacked in sequence, tick-tock-tick-tock, a familiar rhythm that made Rory's shoulders ease before her brain caught up."
1"The tabby only yowled, deep in his throat, a low old growl that meant strangers."
2"His thumb traced the crescent shape gently, a touch that contradicted every sharp word they'd exchanged."
3"She reached out and touched his face, her thumb brushing his jaw, feeling the tension there."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"The cane's tip tapped, sharp"
1"he said, his voice lower now, losing its polished edge"
2"Evan said, his voice rough"
93.40% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"Rory shouted (shout)"
2"Evan spat (spit)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.189
leniency0.377
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.113
83.5561%