Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCXY6V5XGXNQ23S42PABQ7Y

Run Details

Duration:
14.2s
Cost:
$0.015010
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain slicked the Soho pavement, reflecting the distinctive green neon sign above the entrance of The Raven's Nest. Inside, warmth pressed against the thick glass windows, heavy with the scents of stale gin, damp wool, and polished mahogany. Silas Blackwood wiped down the counter with a frayed cloth, his silver signet ring catching the low Amber light each time his right hand swept across the wood. His left knee gave its familiar, dull throb—a damp-weather reminder of a rooftop in Prague thirty years past. The bell above the heavy oak door chimed. Aurora Carter looked up from the corner booth where she sorted through a stack of delivery receipts for the Golden Empress. Straight shoulder-length black hair fell past her jaw, framing eyes a striking, bright blue. She tugged at the sleeve of her jumper, absently rubbing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. A tall man stepped over the threshold, shedding his soaked trench coat. He smoothed a hand over his grey-streaked auburn hair, his hazel eyes scanning the dimly lit bar before settling on the proprietor. Silas froze, the rag motionless in his fist. "Well. I'll be damned." The newcomer stood unmoving, his posture rigid, shoulders pulled back with an unnatural, military precision. The slouch that had defined him for forty years was gone. The soft, apologetic curve of his mouth had flattened into a stern, unyielding line. "You look like you've seen a ghost, Silas," the man said. His voice sat an octave lower than it used to, stripped of its old Cardiff lilt, dry as bone. "Julian." Silas dragged his left leg as he moved around the counter, stopping a few feet short. "Ten years. Maybe eleven." "Twelve." Julian stepped forward, offering a hand. The gesture was stiff, formal. Silas looked down at the extended hand, then up into eyes that belonged to a stranger. He bypassed the handshake, clapping a heavy arm around Julian's shoulder, though the lack of give in the younger man's frame made the embrace awkward. "Twelve years. Sit down before my bad leg gives out just staring at you." They retreated to a booth opposite Rory, who kept her head down, though her ears pricked up at the sudden density of the silence between the two men. "What brings a Ghost of the Foreign Office to Soho?" Silas rested his elbows on the sticky table. "Or do you go by something else now?" "Just Julian. Still." Julian glanced around the walls, his gaze lingering on the faded black-and-white photographs of pre-war Prague and the yellowed maps pinned to the dark wood. "You built yourself a quiet little tomb here." "It's a business. It pays for the whiskey." Silas motioned toward the bar. "Single malt? The Balvenie? I still keep a bottle under the counter for special occasions. Or apocalypses." "Tonic water. Ice, if you have it." Silas blinked. "Tonic water." "I don't drink anymore." "Right." Silas swallowed the impulse to press. He slid out of the booth, limped to the bar, and poured a heavy double of Laphroaig for himself and a tall glass of tonic for his guest. When he returned, he set the glasses down with a sharp clink. "You used to buy out the entire cellar at the Red Lion when we closed a case." "People change, Silas." Julian took a sip, his thumb tracing the rim of the glass. "Or they perish." "You certainly did something." Silas leaned back, taking in the bespoke suit, the polished Oxfords, the complete absence of the nervous twitch Julian used to have in his jaw whenever a handler walked into the room. "The last time I saw you, you were weeping into a cold donor kebab off the Stranded, sweating over a botched wiretap in Berlin." Julian’s eyes flicked up, cold and flat. "Berlin was a long time ago." "It was. And yet, I still hear the echo of you panicking through my earpiece." Silas took a slow sip of his whiskey, the peat burning his throat. "You were human back then, Julian. Reckless, loud, miserable, but human." "Humanity gets team members killed." The sentence hung in the air, thick and suffocating. Across the room, Rory’s pen stopped scraping against her paper. "Is that what they taught you in the Third Directorate?" Silas asked softly. "They taught me that guilt is an inefficiency," Julian replied without hesitation. "You retired, Silas. You got off the ride because your knee blew out and your heart went soft. You picked a hole in the wall and crawled inside it to feel safe. Some of us had to stay behind and clean up the grease." "Grease?" Silas chuckled, a dry, rasping sound. "Is that what we're calling Sarah now?" Julian’s hand tightened around the glass until his knuckles turned chalk-white. For a fraction of a second, the mask slipped. The tight muscle beneath his left eye twitched—the old tell. "Don't," Julian whispered. "I buried her, Julian. You didn't even send a card. You were too busy climbing the ladder in Whitehall." Silas leaned forward, the hazel in his eyes hardening. "I sat in that church in St. Pancras with four other people while rain leaked through the roof. You were in Vienna, making sure the minister’s nephew didn't suffer the consequences of his own incompetence." "I was doing my job." "You were running." "I was surviving!" Julian’s voice cracked through the quiet bar, sharp as a pistol shot. He caught himself instantly, his chest heaving once, twice, before the invisible armor snapped back into place. He smoothed his tie with two fingers. "I did what was required. I didn't have the luxury of a tragic injury to excuse my departure." Silas looked at his old friend, really looked at him. He saw the silver creeping into Julian’s dark hair, not in distinguished patches, but in jagged, stressed streaks. He saw the faint blue shadows beneath eyes that refused to blink too often. "You look like a corpse wrapped in Savile Row, Jules," Silas said, the old nickname slipping out like a slip of the tongue. Julian closed his eyes for a long moment. When he opened them, the coldness was back, but behind it lay a vast, hollow exhaustion. "I came to tell you that the Vane file was destroyed." Silas went still. "Which one?" "All of them. The Warsaw transcripts. The photographs from the safehouse. Everything with your signature on it." Julian stood up, pulling a leather glove onto his right hand. "The archives caught fire last Tuesday. Electrical fault. Tragic loss of historical records." Silas stared at him, his drink halfway to his mouth. "You burned the archive." "I cleared the ledger," Julian said, pulling on the second glove. "So you can stay here in your green-lit tomb and pour cheap scotch for students without waiting for a knock at the door." "Julian..." "We're even now, Silas. For Berlin. For Sarah. For everything." Julian reached into his coat and laid a crisp fifty-pound note on the dark wood of the table. "Don't look for me again." "I never was looking for you," Silas said quietly. Julian turned toward the door, his movements fluid, efficient, devoid of the warmth that used to make him laugh until he choked on bad lager. He pushed the heavy oak door open, letting in a gust of cold, wet London air, and stepped out into the rain without looking back. The neon sign hummed above the glass. Silas sat alone in the booth, staring at the untouched glass of tonic water and the pristine bank note. He reached out, took his whiskey, and swallowed it in one long, burning gulp. "Friend of yours?" Rory asked from the corner, her voice cautious. Silas didn't answer right away. He ran his thumb over his silver signet ring, watching the condensation bead on the glass across the table. "He used to be," Silas said, his voice barely louder than the hum of the green light outside. "A long time ago."
created_at"2026-07-25T15:22:43.44Z" 7/25/2026, 3:22:43 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
46.15% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Julian glanced around [around]"
1"Silas leaned back [back]"
2"Silas asked softly [softly]"
3"Silas said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.442
leniency0.885
rawRatio0.174
effectiveRatio0.154
92.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1332
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"really"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Sarah"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.20% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1332
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"throb"
count1
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"lilt"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"flicked"
count1
9
word"echo"
count1
10
word"efficient"
count1
11
word"pristine"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"familiar"
2"throb"
3"reminder"
4"scanning"
5"lilt"
6"silence"
7"tracing"
8"flicked"
9"echo"
10"efficient"
11"pristine"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1330
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount871
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity2.41
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Blackwood1
Amber1
Prague2
Carter1
Golden1
Empress1
Cardiff1
Julian16
Rory3
Silas21
Laphroaig1
Oxfords1
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Blackwood"
2"Amber"
3"Carter"
4"Julian"
5"Rory"
6"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
globalScore0.294
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.752
wordCount1330
matches
0"not in distinguished patches, but in jagged, stressed streaks"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean26.6
std18.79
cv0.706
sampleLengths
018
166
28
353
434
512
640
730
821
912
1055
1128
1226
1336
1430
157
164
174
1864
1918
2060
2113
2239
235
2419
2513
2656
2714
2830
293
3063
315
323
3357
3442
3523
3635
375
3841
3914
4034
411
4233
439
4450
457
4633
4711
4824
4922
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs134
matches(empty)
83.33% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences96
ratio0.021
matches
0"His left knee gave its familiar, dull throb—a damp-weather reminder of a rooftop in Prague thirty years past."
1"The tight muscle beneath his left eye twitched—the old tell."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount881
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.026106696935300794
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007945516458569807
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean13.85
std8.69
cv0.627
sampleLengths
018
120
228
318
48
521
614
718
812
922
108
114
1215
1311
1414
1511
1619
1717
184
197
205
2116
2225
2314
2428
2518
268
2728
288
2913
3017
317
322
332
344
357
3628
3712
3817
3915
403
4136
4224
437
446
4528
4611
475
489
4910
58.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3958333333333333
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences65
matches
0"His left knee gave its"
1"She tugged at the sleeve"
2"He smoothed a hand over"
3"His voice sat an octave"
4"He bypassed the handshake, clapping"
5"They retreated to a booth"
6"He slid out of the"
7"He caught himself instantly, his"
8"He smoothed his tie with"
9"He saw the silver creeping"
10"He saw the faint blue"
11"He pushed the heavy oak"
12"He reached out, took his"
13"He ran his thumb over"
ratio0.215
6.15% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences65
matches
0"Rain slicked the Soho pavement,"
1"Silas Blackwood wiped down the"
2"His left knee gave its"
3"The bell above the heavy"
4"Aurora Carter looked up from"
5"She tugged at the sleeve"
6"A tall man stepped over"
7"He smoothed a hand over"
8"Silas froze, the rag motionless"
9"The newcomer stood unmoving, his"
10"The slouch that had defined"
11"The soft, apologetic curve of"
12"the man said"
13"His voice sat an octave"
14"Silas dragged his left leg"
15"Julian stepped forward, offering a"
16"The gesture was stiff, formal."
17"Silas looked down at the"
18"He bypassed the handshake, clapping"
19"They retreated to a booth"
ratio0.908
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Julian turned toward the door, his movements fluid, efficient, devoid of the warmth that used to make him laugh until he choked on bad lager."
59.78% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Julian took, his thumb tracing the rim of the glass"
1"Silas took, the peat burning his throat"
2"Rory asked, her voice cautious"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Silas chuckled (chuckle)"
1"Julian whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.192
leniency0.385
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.077
79.6155%