Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCY0KE18ETSJEB4WP19PQAT

Run Details

Duration:
32.4s
Cost:
$0.045275
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Damp air thick with ozone and rust hit Harlow Quinn before her feet found the final rung of the service ladder. She adjusted the worn leather watch on her left wrist, checking the face. 03:14. Beneath Camden High Street, the abandoned access tunnel smelled of stagnant water, old coal dust, and iron filings scorched on a stove. Flashlight beams cut through the gloom ahead, painting yellow disks on curved tile walls slick with black soot. "Mind the drop, Detective." Sergeant Miller stepped around a pile of collapsed Victorian brickwork, ducking under dangling copper wire. He shone his light down at his mud-splattered boots. "Forensics are twenty minutes out. Patrol found the breach during a routine sweep of the surface grates." Harlow stepped off the iron rungs. Her coat cleared the damp wall with clean precision. She adjusted her grip on her heavy flashlight and scanned the cavernous station platform. Victorian white tiles, blackened by decades of subterranean filth, arched overhead like ribbing inside a dead whale. Broken glass crunched under her boots. "Where is the body?" Miller gestured toward the far end of the platform where the rusted rails melted into pitch-black tunnel mouth. A heavy yellow tarp covered a shape against the wall. "Right by the old maintenance alcove. Squatter dispute, most likely. Looks like a break-in that turned vicious." Harlow walked down the edge of the platform, the beam of her torch sweeping the concrete. She stopped three paces short of the tarp. Her brown eyes narrowed. "Squatters who sweep the floors?" Miller swung his torch across the platform. Harlow pointed her light down. A three-metre circle of concrete surrounding the tarp lacked the heavy mantle of dust present everywhere else in the station. Soot had been wiped away in precise, sweeping arcs. Inside the clear patch, white residue clung to the microscopic pits in the stone. "Chemical cleaners," Miller offered, tapping his notebook against his thigh. "They tried to scrub the evidence before running off." Harlow crouched, lowering her flashlight to angle the beam parallel to the floor. She dipped a gloved index finger into the white powder, bringing it close to her nose. "Coarse sea salt. Unrefined." "Salt?" "They were sealing a perimeter, Miller, not cleaning a spill." She stood up, pulling back the rubber edge of the tarp. The victim lay on his back, eyes staring blankly at the arched ceiling. He wore a tailored wool coat fitted with concealed inner pockets that swung open, empty. No wallet, no phone, no wrist watch. A jagged tear ruined the front of his vest, but the fabric curled inward, stained dark brown. Miller knelt beside her, flashlight beam hovering over the chest wound. "Single stab wound to the thoracic cavity. Blunt blade, maybe a rusted screwdriver. Took a heavy blow, bled out in minutes." Harlow leaned closer, her sharp jaw set tight under the harsh LED light. She pulled a thin wooden applicator from her kit and gently pried open the torn edges of the victim's vest. "Look at the burn marks on the cotton." "Friction heat from the force of the thrust." "Cotton ignites at over two hundred degrees Celsius, Miller. A screwdriver does not flash-fry fabric upon entry. The edges of the wound are cauterised." She traced the rim of the puncture with her probe. No arterial spray coated the surrounding brick wall. No pool of blood saturated the floor beneath his back, despite the shattered chest cavity. "He did not bleed out," Harlow said. "The blood ceased circulating before his heart stopped beating." Miller shifted his weight, rustling his heavy yellow waterproof trousers. "Shock does strange things to human physiology, Quinn. A sudden drop in blood pressure, trauma—" "Look at his hands." Harlow lifted the victim's left arm by the sleeve. The skin was pale, dry, and cool, but the fingers locked in a claw, stiff as dried oak. Trapped under the fingernails were slivers of polished ivory. Or bone. "He was clawing at something hard," Miller said. "Trying to get traction on the floor." "Or he tore at an object held against his chest." Harlow turned her torch toward the edge of the track bed. She stepped off the platform, her boots sinking two inches into dark, oily ballast gravel. "Quinn, stay off the tracks until the photography unit finishes." Harlow ignored him, stepping down the line of wooden sleepers. Ten feet past the platform edge, where the tunnel narrowed into complete darkness, her beam caught a flash of dull metal tucked between two iron rails. She crouched, pulling fresh nitrile gloves over her hands. It was a heavy brass pocket compass, roughly three inches in diameter. Its surface carried a thick patina of verdigris, but underneath the green corrosion, intricate geometric sigils were deeply etched into the metal face. "Drop off from the victim?" Miller called down from the platform rim, leaning over the edge. "Fell out during the struggle?" Harlow picked up the object. The weight felt wrong—far too heavy for hollow brass. She turned it over in her palm. The glass cover was cracked in a spiderweb pattern, yet the needle inside chattered back and forth, defying the magnetic pull of north. "The glass broke from internal pressure," Harlow murmured. She stood up, staring into the dark tunnel where the rails ran deeper beneath the city. The compass needle pulled hard toward the solid brick wall five yards down the line—a wall sealing off a disused branch line closed since 1924. "This was not a murder over loose change, Miller." "Look, Quinn, I know you always look for the unusual angles. Ever since—" Miller caught himself, clearing his throat. "Ever since Morris. But this is a straight case. A homeless camp, a deal gone bad, a crude shiv to the chest. We trace the coat contents to the local pawn shops in Camden Market, we find our guy." Harlow climbed back onto the platform with methodical, even movements. She held the brass compass out toward Miller, pointing her flashlight directly at the etched casing. "Where is north?" Miller blinked under the bright light, squinting at the dial. "The mechanism is broken. It fell six feet onto gravel." "The needle points directly at a solid brick retaining wall," Harlow said. "And look at the markings." Miller leaned in, his brows furrowing as he took in the sharp angles carved into the brass casing. They were not cardinal directions. Symbols reminiscent of medieval manuscripts surrounded a tiny central glass orb filled with dark liquid. "Some piece of antique junk he was carrying to sell," Miller said, though his tone lost its firm edge. "It does not change the cause of death." "It changes the motive." Harlow walked back to the body under the tarp. She unbuttoned her coat, pulling a small steel ruler from her breast pocket. She laid the ruler against the floor next to the body's shoulder. "Notice the pattern of dust around his feet?" Miller crouched beside her again. "He dragged his heels." "No. His boots are clean of soot along the heels. He was laid here." Harlow highlighted the floor with her beam. "Two sets of tracks lead away from the circle of salt. Neither set belongs to the victim. One set wore heavy rubber work boots. The second set left no heel impression at all, only a dragging hem." Miller shifted his flashlight beam to the floor beyond the salt. "A long coat or a dress." "Or a robe," Harlow said. "And look at the salt ring again. It is incomplete. Someone kicked a gap through the eastern arc before the victim died." She pointed the torch at a dark smudge on the tile wall three feet above the floor. A handprint, clear and wet, marked the white porcelain. Five distinct fingers, but the palm print was elongated, stretched beyond normal human proportions. Harlow touched the tile edge beside the mark. "The ridges of the fingers are crisp. It was not smeared. The hand that made it was six inches wide from index to pinky." She reached down, picked up a small plastic specimen bag from her kit, and scooped a fragment of shattered bone from beneath the victim's left fingernail. She sealed the bag, holding it up to her torchlight. The bone carried an iridescent sheen, like mother-of-pearl under oil. "He did not get this from his attacker," Harlow said, her eyes fixed on the specimen. "He pulled this off whatever came through that gap." Miller threw his hands up, his voice ringing against the arched roof. "Come through where?" Harlow slipped the brass compass into her coat pocket. The metal felt unnaturally cold through her glove, radiating an icy chill through her layers. "This station was not empty tonight, Miller. It was an exchange." She turned her flashlight down the dark tunnel toward the sealed brick wall. "And someone broke the terms."
created_at"2026-07-25T15:24:01.866Z" 7/25/2026, 3:24:01 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.229
leniency0.458
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1479
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.91% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1479
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"shattered"
count2
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"intricate"
count1
6
word"etched"
count2
7
word"magnetic"
count1
8
word"pawn"
count1
9
word"methodical"
count1
10
word"furrowing"
count1
11
word"porcelain"
count1
12
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"scanned"
2"traced"
3"shattered"
4"weight"
5"intricate"
6"etched"
7"magnetic"
8"pawn"
9"methodical"
10"furrowing"
11"porcelain"
12"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences86
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1477
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
49.60% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount996
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.01
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Miller"
discoveredNames
Harlow20
Quinn1
Camden1
High1
Street1
Miller16
Victorian2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Miller"
places(empty)
globalScore0.496
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1477
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean20.51
std15.32
cv0.747
sampleLengths
057
118
24
324
417
552
64
728
817
928
105
117
1248
1319
1429
154
161
1710
1811
1952
2011
2121
2233
238
248
2524
2633
2716
2810
2915
304
3138
3215
3310
3426
3510
3636
379
3835
3921
4044
418
4241
439
4458
4526
463
4710
4810
4917
93.02% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences86
matches
0"been wiped"
1"was cracked"
2"was elongated"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs157
matches(empty)
96.40% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences123
ratio0.016
matches
0"The weight felt wrong—far too heavy for hollow brass."
1"The compass needle pulled hard toward the solid brick wall five yards down the line—a wall sealing off a disused branch line closed since 1924."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1003
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.019940179461615155
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006979062811565304
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean12.01
std6.69
cv0.558
sampleLengths
021
113
21
322
418
54
615
79
817
96
109
1114
1217
136
144
1518
1610
1717
1816
198
204
215
227
235
2420
259
2614
2710
289
2913
3016
314
321
3310
3411
3513
3615
377
3817
3911
4021
4113
4220
438
448
4524
4610
478
4815
497
59.84% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.39344262295081966
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners48
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
93.42% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences79
matches
0"She adjusted the worn leather"
1"He shone his light down"
2"Her coat cleared the damp"
3"She adjusted her grip on"
4"She stopped three paces short"
5"Her brown eyes narrowed."
6"She dipped a gloved index"
7"She stood up, pulling back"
8"He wore a tailored wool"
9"She pulled a thin wooden"
10"She traced the rim of"
11"She stepped off the platform,"
12"She crouched, pulling fresh nitrile"
13"It was a heavy brass"
14"Its surface carried a thick"
15"She turned it over in"
16"She stood up, staring into"
17"She held the brass compass"
18"They were not cardinal directions."
19"She unbuttoned her coat, pulling"
ratio0.316
23.29% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences79
matches
0"She adjusted the worn leather"
1"Flashlight beams cut through the"
2"Sergeant Miller stepped around a"
3"He shone his light down"
4"Harlow stepped off the iron"
5"Her coat cleared the damp"
6"She adjusted her grip on"
7"Victorian white tiles, blackened by"
8"Miller gestured toward the far"
9"A heavy yellow tarp covered"
10"Harlow walked down the edge"
11"She stopped three paces short"
12"Her brown eyes narrowed."
13"Miller swung his torch across"
14"Harlow pointed her light down."
15"A three-metre circle of concrete"
16"Soot had been wiped away"
17"Miller offered, tapping his notebook"
18"Harlow crouched, lowering her flashlight"
19"She dipped a gloved index"
ratio0.873
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He wore a tailored wool coat fitted with concealed inner pockets that swung open, empty."
1"Miller leaned in, his brows furrowing as he took in the sharp angles carved into the brass casing."
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Miller said, though his tone lost its firm edge"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Miller called down (call dow)"
1"Harlow murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.083
84.5880%