Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
79
glossingSentenceCount
7
matches
0
"seemed thicker greener, than any London park had right to offer"
1
"voice that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere"
2
"seemed woven from the grove itself"
3
"seemed smaller than her presence demanded, ethereal and ageless, her feet leaving no impression on the wildflowers that bloomed year-round even in winter’s grip"
4
"shapes that seemed to shift when Rory tried to focus"
"Aurora Carter—Rory to anyone who knew her—stood at the threshold, her black hair falling straight across her collarbone, bright blue eyes fixed on the shimmer that hung between the trees."
1
"\"Not a portal.\" Nyx reached out—not with hands, but with a tendril of darkness that brushed the stone."
2
"Isolde had given it to her—this slender, leaf-shaped weapon that could cut through magical wards, particularly effective against demons."
3
"She walked—no, she glided—around them, leaving no footprints, never breaking the wildflowers beneath her path."
4
"The sweet wildflower scent turned sharp, carrying notes of exotic fruits and something darker—roasted meat, old wine, excess."
5
"Her lavender eyes held no deception—she could not lie, this Half-Fae seer exiled from the Courts for sharing visions with mortals—only the careful architecture of misdirection."
6
"\"Protection and warning share the same pulse.\" Isolde reached out—her hand translucent at the edges, more mist than flesh—and touched the crimson gem."
7
"\"—feeds on more than shadows,\" Isolde finished."
8
"She checked her watch—only minutes had passed since they entered, but the light had shifted, golden and thick, like the warm amber sky of Dymas itself bleeding through the trees."
9
"Ancient oaks gave way to trees that weren’t trees at all—trunks of twisted silver, leaves that chimed softly in breezes that touched Rory’s hair but left Eva’s still."
10
"Rory glanced at them—this being of living shadow, ageless, wild card, neither ally nor enemy but something in between."
11
"\"Some doors are meant to be walked through. Others—\" They gestured to the trees that now bore fruits unlike any Rory had seen—plums that glowed with inner crimson light, vines heavy with clusters of grapes that smelled of honeyed corruption."
12
"Around it, wildflowers bloomed in impossible arrangements—colors that hurt to look at directly, shapes that seemed to shift when Rory tried to focus."
13
"The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—old, from childhood—itched suddenly, as if the air itself pressed against old wounds."
14
"But of course—visions."
15
"In the reflection—visible only in the shadow, not in the water itself—Rory saw not Nyx’s silhouette but a human face, old but not aged, the face of Aldric the sorcerer."
16
"The smell of exotic fruits, of grand feasts, of culinary competitions where helbound souls served as master chefs—it was stronger here, almost overwhelming."
17
"Not from wind—there was none."
18
"She sheathed the blade—not putting away, but ready."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
47
technicalSentenceCount
11
matches
0
"Aurora Carter—Rory to anyone who knew her—stood at the threshold, her black hair falling straight across her collarbone, bright blue eyes fixed on the shimmer t…"
1
"Behind her, Eva shifted her weight, boots silent on moss that seemed thicker, greener, than any London park had right to offer."
2
"The air smelled of wildflowers in perpetual bloom, a sweetness that made Rory’s head ache with strangeness."
3
"At five feet five, she seemed smaller than her presence demanded, ethereal and ageless, her feet leaving no impression on the wildflowers that bloomed year-roun…"
4
"Rory felt the weight of the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip, the moonsilver dagger always cold, faintly luminescent in the moonlight that filtered through impossibl…"
5
"Isolde had given it to her—this slender, leaf-shaped weapon that could cut through magical wards, particularly effective against demons."
6
"Ancient oaks gave way to trees that weren’t trees at all—trunks of twisted silver, leaves that chimed softly in breezes that touched Rory’s hair but left Eva’s …"
7
"Around it, wildflowers bloomed in impossible arrangements—colors that hurt to look at directly, shapes that seemed to shift when Rory tried to focus."
8
"The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—old, from childhood—itched suddenly, as if the air itself pressed against old wounds."
9
"Their violet eyes held a depth of sorrow that spanned centuries of being trapped between realms."
10
"Rory looked at the ancient oaks, the standing stones marking boundaries that existed in more dimensions than three, at Isolde’s fading form, at the blade in her…"