| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.455 | | leniency | 0.909 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.49% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1175 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 27.66% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1175 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "throbbed" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "navigated" | | 3 | "sentinels" | | 4 | "echoed" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "sentinel" | | 8 | "vibrated" | | 9 | "churning" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "reverberated" | | 12 | "familiar" | | 13 | "fluttered" | | 14 | "searing" | | 15 | "stark" | | 16 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 6 | | totalWords | 1169 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "Thump-thump. Thump-thump." | | 1 | "crack" | | 2 | "Tink. Tink. Tink." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.78% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 1125 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.24 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | November | 1 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Evan | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Rory | 14 | | Dirt | 1 | | Silas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Yu-Fei" | | 3 | "November" | | 4 | "Silence" | | 5 | "Evan" | | 6 | "Rory" | | 7 | "Silas" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.878 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1169 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 25.98 | | std | 16.52 | | cv | 0.636 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 41 | | 1 | 47 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 66 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 35 | | 9 | 54 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 45 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 38 | | 16 | 54 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 41 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 47 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 50 | | 30 | 29 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 35 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 38 | | 37 | 41 | | 38 | 41 | | 39 | 31 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 29 | | 43 | 31 | | 44 | 11 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 183 | | matches | | |
| 5.49% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 104 | | ratio | 0.048 | | matches | | 0 | "Pale wildflowers—species that had no right blooming in the dead of November—glimmered in the darkness like spilled teeth." | | 1 | "The tone belonged to Evan—soft, possessive, and dripping with the familiar, suffocating malice that had driven her out of Cardiff three years ago." | | 2 | "It didn't glide or fly; it hitched itself forward in jerky, unnatural bursts, its limbs folding inward like a crushed spider." | | 3 | "White fabric fluttered around its torso—a pale, torn dress." | | 4 | "She reached for the heavy brass key in her pocket—the one Silas had given her for emergencies—and scraped it hard across the surface of the nearest oak monolith." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1141 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "long, needle-tipped fingers" |
| | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.03155127081507449 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013146362839614373 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 104 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 104 | | mean | 11.24 | | std | 7.18 | | cv | 0.639 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 28 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 40.38% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.3173076923076923 | | totalSentences | 104 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "Only, the sound wasn't just" | | 1 | "Dark, viscous droplets welled from" | | 2 | "Pale, lidless eyes blinked out" | | 3 | "Then it dropped." |
| | ratio | 0.044 | |
| 82.22% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "She reached up to steady" | | 1 | "she muttered, her voice swallowed" | | 2 | "She navigated by the dull" | | 3 | "She turned her head slowly." | | 4 | "She took three deliberate paces" | | 5 | "Her eyes caught a flash" | | 6 | "She rubbed her thumb over" | | 7 | "It coated her tongue, thick" | | 8 | "She pushed deeper into the" | | 9 | "It came from beneath the" | | 10 | "She shone the flashlight down." | | 11 | "It was a wet, sliding" | | 12 | "It started ten feet behind" | | 13 | "Her law school professors had" | | 14 | "It stretched out from her" | | 15 | "She lunged toward the gap" | | 16 | "She stumbled, pitching forward into" | | 17 | "It wasn't Evan anymore." | | 18 | "It was Yu-Fei's clipped, pragmatic" | | 19 | "It didn't glide or fly;" |
| | ratio | 0.344 | |
| 32.22% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 77 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain stopped at the" | | 1 | "Rory stepped past the boundary" | | 2 | "She reached up to steady" | | 3 | "The Heartstone Pendant sat heavy" | | 4 | "The pulse matched her own" | | 5 | "she muttered, her voice swallowed" | | 6 | "Yu-Fei had sent her with" | | 7 | "She navigated by the dull" | | 8 | "A snap echoed to her" | | 9 | "Rory froze, her breath pooling" | | 10 | "She turned her head slowly." | | 11 | "The shadows between the ancient" | | 12 | "She took three deliberate paces" | | 13 | "Her eyes caught a flash" | | 14 | "A pale figure, towering and" | | 15 | "Rory whipped around, bringing her" | | 16 | "The beam pierced the mist," | | 17 | "The top of the stone" | | 18 | "She rubbed her thumb over" | | 19 | "The skin there tingled, cold" |
| | ratio | 0.856 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 21.56% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped past the boundary marker, her boots sinking into moss that felt unnaturally warm through thick rubber soles." | | 1 | "Pale wildflowers—species that had no right blooming in the dead of November—glimmered in the darkness like spilled teeth." | | 2 | "It stretched out from her heels, twice as long as it should have been, with arms that ended in elongated, needle-thin points." | | 3 | "The shadow's head tilted, snapping ninety degrees to the side with a dry *crack* that reverberated through her jaw." | | 4 | "The tone belonged to Evan—soft, possessive, and dripping with the familiar, suffocating malice that had driven her out of Cardiff three years ago." | | 5 | "The flashlight tumbled from her grip, its beam spinning wildly across the clearing before settling on a cluster of white blossoms." | | 6 | "Where features should have been, the skin was smooth and stretched tight as a drumhead, save for a single, horizontal slit across the middle that twitched like …" | | 7 | "The slit in its head stretched open, revealing rows of translucent, needle-like teeth, and let out a high, warbling hum that rattled the fillings in Rory's teet…" | | 8 | "Rory took advantage of the hesitation, throwing her weight against the stone, searching blindly for the hidden groove that marked the boundary fold." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Rory hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.273 | | leniency | 0.545 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.545 | |