Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCY4619258RR6JAGMRM349N

Run Details

Duration:
16.0s
Cost:
$0.015357
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain leaked through the cracked Victorian ceiling, dripping onto the rusted iron tracks below. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over a decaying wooden sleeper, the beam of her Maglite cutting through the subterranean fog. Down here, eighty feet beneath Camden, the air tasted of ozone, rotting paper, and wet copper. "Step light, Quinn." DS Miller’s voice echoed off the curved tiled walls of the abandoned station. "Foundations are shot. One wrong foot and you’ll drop into the sewer mains." Harlow adjusted her grip on the torch. She tapped the face of the worn leather watch on her wrist out of habit. Three thirty in the morning. "Where’s the body?" Miller gestured with his own torch toward a disused pedestrian archway painted in chipped maroon enamel. "Platform three. Or what’s left of it. Transit police found the grate crowbarred open during a routine surface check." Harlow followed him through the archway, her boots crunching on smashed tile and ancient gravel. The station had been sealed since the Blitz, erased from transport maps, yet the shadows felt heavy, almost crowded. Chalk marks crisscrossed the floor, but they weren't police markings. Spiral patterns and geometric jagged lines bled into the mortar, drawn in a thick, dried substance that trapped the torchlight rather than reflecting it. "Homeless squatters?" Harlow crouched, tracing a finger an inch above a drawn sigil. The brick beneath it radiated an impossible, prickling heat. "That’s my call," Miller said. He slapped a notebook against his thigh. "Group of drifters got down here, lit some bad trash fires, had a dispute over territory. Classic gang-land rules, just underground." Harlow shined her light directly onto the center of the platform. The victim sat slumped against a rusted poster frame. A young man, early twenties, dressed in a sharp tweed coat completely out of place for a damp tunnel. His eyes stared straight ahead, wide and glassy, reflecting the torch beam. No blood pools stained his collar. No bullet holes ruined the tailored wool. No knife slits cut the cloth. "Cause of death?" Harlow asked, stepping closer. "Hypothermia, most likely. Or cardiac arrest from whatever booze they were downing." Miller nudged a shattered glass vial near the victim's leather boots with his toe. "Found half a dozen of these little jars scattered around. Some kind of moonshine or bath salts." "Don't touch the scene, Miller." "It's trash, Harlow. The guy froze." Harlow knelt beside the body, her sharp jaw setting tightly. She pulled a pair of nitrile gloves from her pocket and snapped them on with a sharp strike of rubber against skin. "Look at his hands." Miller leaned over, sighing loudly. "What about them?" "Class ring from Oxford. Tailored sleeves. Fingernails manicured." She gently lifted the victim's left wrist. "No defensive wounds. No frostbite on the lips or fingertips. Core body temperature drops slowly in hypothermia—the blood leaves the extremities first, causing livedo reticularis. Blue patches. Discoloration." She turned the victim's pale palm up. "His skin is porcelain white. Pure ivory. The blood didn't settle to his feet, either." "So he died sitting up. Recently." "Look at the dust." Harlow pointed the bright beam of her flashlight at the platform floor surrounding the body. A thick layer of grey grime covered the concrete, blown in through the ventilation shafts over decades. "You walked over here, you left heel marks. I left heel marks. The transit cops left heel marks." She swept the light around the corpse in a five-foot radius. The dust lay completely undisturbed. Smooth as fallen snow. "He didn't walk here," Harlow said. "And nobody carried him here." Miller frowned, shifting his weight. "Maybe he jumped down from the upper gantry?" "Without disturbing the dust when he landed? Without breaking an ankle?" She peered at the victim’s lap. Half hidden inside his coat pocket, a metallic gleam caught the light. "What do we have here?" She used two fingers to draw the object out. It was a small brass compass, heavy and cold, covered in a mottled patina of verdigris. Sigils—the same strange, angular markings painted in chalk on the walls—were deeply etched across the glass face. The needle inside wasn't floating on a pin; it spun continuously in fluid, erratic sweeps, refusing to settle on magnetic north. "A shadow compass," Harlow muttered under her breath. "A what?" Miller asked. Harlow didn't answer. Her mind raced back three years. DS Morris. A dark alley behind a Soho club. The same unnatural cold in the middle of July. The same absence of blood, the same impossible lack of physical tracks, and a tiny brass trinket tucked into Morris’s cold, stiff hand. The coroner had ruled it a heart attack. Harlow had known better, even if she couldn't prove it. "This place isn't just a dead subway," Harlow said, standing up. She scanned the perimeter of the platform. "Look at the rubbish, Miller. What do you see?" "Empty tins. Broken crates. Scrap metal." "Look closer." She stepped toward a pile of wooden debris. "These crates aren't British Rail. The nails are hand-forged square iron. The stenciling on the side is in Latin and Old German." She kicked a piece of timber aside, revealing a velvet-lined case crushed beneath it. "And over there. A stall counter. Hinged display trays." "A subterranean boot sale?" Miller sneered. "Come on, Harlow. You're reaching. It's a squat." "Squatters don't leave behind velvet-lined display cases, and they don't buy two-thousand-pound vintage tweed." Harlow walked toward the wall, her torch beam tracking higher, past the chalk marks to the ceiling. "The air is moving." "It's a ventilation shaft." "No. The shafts are capped with steel grates at street level. I checked the street plans before we came down." She reached out, her gloved hand halting an inch from the brickwork. The air didn't smell like rain or petrol anymore. It smelled like dry earth, crushed lavender, and burning tallow. "There was a market here. Stalls. Vendors. People buying and selling things that don't belong in a police register." "You're lose your mind, Quinn," Miller said, his voice dropping a register, losing its casual edge. "It’s a murder scene. Or an accidental death. We log the body, call the morgue van, and get out of this damp hole." "Look at the floor under the victim again," Harlow said, ignoring him. She crouched back down, shining the torch at an angle across the concrete floor. In the low-angled light, the dust revealed a pattern. Not footprints. Indentations. Hundreds of shallow, circular depressions forming a grid that stretched across the entire platform, disappearing into the dark recesses of the tunnel. "Tables," Harlow whispered. "Legs of folding tables. Arranged in rows. They were set up here recently, packed away in a hurry, and swept clean." She reached into the victim's inner jacket pocket. Her fingers brushed against stiff parchment. She pulled out an envelope made of heavy, handmade paper, sealed with black wax. The wax was stamped with an emblem—a key entwined with a serpent. Written on the front in elegant, sweeping calligraphy was a single name: *Eva Kowalski*. "Who's that?" Miller asked, leaning over her shoulder. "Someone who has some very difficult questions to answer," Harlow said, sliding the envelope into an evidence bag. She held the brass compass up to the light. The needle suddenly stopped its chaotic spinning. It snapped toward the dark tunnel mouth leading deeper into the abandoned underground system, pointing straight into the blackness where the tracks veered off toward Camden Town. Harlow rose to her feet, her shadow stretching long and dark against the tiled wall. "Call the coroner," Harlow said, her voice hard as iron. "Tell them to bring a transport unit. But tell them not to touch the coat. Only I handle the evidence." "Harlow, what are you looking for?" "A door," Harlow said, staring into the dark tunnel where the compass pointed. "One that isn't on any map."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.481
leniency0.962
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
73.44% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1318
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"completely"
count2
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
5
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"tightly"
2"gently"
3"slowly"
4"very"
5"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1318
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"shattered"
count1
3
word"porcelain"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"magnetic"
count1
7
word"raced"
count1
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"velvet"
count2
10
word"chaotic"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"tracing"
2"shattered"
3"porcelain"
4"weight"
5"etched"
6"magnetic"
7"raced"
8"scanned"
9"velvet"
10"chaotic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences83
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords2
totalWords1314
ratio0.002
matches
0"Eva Kowalski"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
32.21% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount849
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.36
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Victorian1
Harlow20
Quinn1
Maglite1
Camden2
Miller10
Blitz1
Half1
Morris2
Soho1
July1
Town1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Maglite"
3"Miller"
4"Blitz"
5"Half"
6"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"Town"
globalScore0.322
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"smelled like dry earth, crushed lavender,"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1314
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean26.82
std20.05
cv0.748
sampleLengths
049
129
227
33
435
568
622
733
811
959
107
1143
125
136
1436
158
1665
176
1854
1911
209
2111
2213
2334
2463
258
264
2768
2827
296
3055
3114
3235
334
3470
3539
3626
3711
3823
3924
4040
4114
428
4318
4443
4515
4630
476
4819
96.81% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences83
matches
0"been sealed"
1"was stamped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs141
matches
0"wasn't floating"
64.94% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences110
ratio0.027
matches
0"Sigils—the same strange, angular markings painted in chalk on the walls—were deeply etched across the glass face."
1"The needle inside wasn't floating on a pin; it spun continuously in fluid, erratic sweeps, refusing to settle on magnetic north."
2"The wax was stamped with an emblem—a key entwined with a serpent."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount855
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"same strange, angular markings"
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.022222222222222223
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.012865497076023392
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean11.95
std7.34
cv0.614
sampleLengths
014
119
216
316
413
57
615
75
83
916
1019
1115
1219
1310
1424
1513
169
175
187
1921
2011
219
2219
2312
246
257
266
277
2826
2917
305
316
3210
3322
344
355
363
3715
3835
3915
406
4119
4217
4318
4411
455
464
476
485
495
81.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5181818181818182
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners57
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences75
matches
0"She tapped the face of"
1"He slapped a notebook against"
2"His eyes stared straight ahead,"
3"She pulled a pair of"
4"She gently lifted the victim's"
5"She turned the victim's pale"
6"She swept the light around"
7"She peered at the victim’s"
8"She used two fingers to"
9"It was a small brass"
10"Her mind raced back three"
11"She scanned the perimeter of"
12"She stepped toward a pile"
13"She kicked a piece of"
14"She reached out, her gloved"
15"It smelled like dry earth,"
16"She crouched back down, shining"
17"She reached into the victim's"
18"Her fingers brushed against stiff"
19"She pulled out an envelope"
ratio0.293
20.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences75
matches
0"Rain leaked through the cracked"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over"
2"DS Miller’s voice echoed off"
3"Harlow adjusted her grip on"
4"She tapped the face of"
5"Miller gestured with his own"
6"Harlow followed him through the"
7"The station had been sealed"
8"Chalk marks crisscrossed the floor,"
9"Harlow crouched, tracing a finger"
10"The brick beneath it radiated"
11"He slapped a notebook against"
12"Harlow shined her light directly"
13"The victim sat slumped against"
14"A young man, early twenties,"
15"His eyes stared straight ahead,"
16"Harlow asked, stepping closer"
17"Miller nudged a shattered glass"
18"Harlow knelt beside the body,"
19"She pulled a pair of"
ratio0.88
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
96.77% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Spiral patterns and geometric jagged lines bled into the mortar, drawn in a thick, dried substance that trapped the torchlight rather than reflecting it."
1"Hundreds of shallow, circular depressions forming a grid that stretched across the entire platform, disappearing into the dark recesses of the tunnel."
65.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"She reached out, her gloved hand halting an inch from the brickwork"
1"Miller said, his voice dropping a register, losing its casual edge"
2"Harlow said, her voice hard as iron"
92.31% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Harlow muttered (mutter)"
1"Miller sneered (sneer)"
2"Harlow whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.269
leniency0.538
rawRatio0.214
effectiveRatio0.115
82.3926%