Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCY6N0QHBKC05ZR3SRPA9X9

Run Details

Duration:
15.4s
Cost:
$0.016120
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the green neon sign above the entrance, casting long, emerald streaks down the alleyway pavement. Inside The Raven’s Nest, light scraped past brass fixtures and settled into the dark grain of mahogany. Rory sat on a high stool near the end of the bar, her fingers tracing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. She nursed a glass of tap water, listening to the muffled rumble of traffic off Oxford Street. The heavy oak front door swung inward, dragging a gust of damp London night air across the floorboards. Leather boots creaked against the threshold. Rory didn't look up until the shadow fell over her coaster. "Aurora?" The voice lacked the brassy, chaotic pitch she remembered. It sounded scraped down, sanded flat. Rory turned. Eva stood in a soaking wet trench coat, black hair plastered to her cheeks. The last time Rory saw her, six years ago on a platform at Cardiff Central, Eva wore three neon hair clips, shredded fishnets, and laughed loudly enough to draw glares from the conductors. Now, a sharp charcoal suit collar poked above her coat. Her hands—once permanently stained with acrylic paint and cheap nicotine—were manicured, bare of any silver rings. "You're late for the storm," Rory said. Eva blinked, the hesitation fleeting before a practised, smooth smile took its place. She pulled out the stool beside Rory, her movements precise, calculated. "I didn't expect to find you here. In London, sure, but..." Eva gestured to the dusty walls hung with black-and-white photographs and faded nautical maps. "It’s quiet." "I live upstairs." Rory caught Silas’ eye at the far end of the bar. The older man wiped a tumbler with a clean rag, his hazel eyes tracking the newcomer with the unhurried precision of a hawk. He set the glass down, his left leg dragging slightly as he walked over. The silver signet ring on his right hand clinked against the polished bar top. "Scotch," Eva said, glancing at Silas. "Neat. Whatever's top shelf." Silas didn't move immediately. He looked at Rory, an unspoken question hanging in the set of his jaw. Rory gave a small, barely perceptible nod. "Laphroaig," Silas said, his voice a low gravel growl. He reached for a bottle on the upper display. Eva leaned her elbows against the wood, her shoulders square. "You look... different, Rory. Smaller, maybe. Or just neat." "I stopped cutting my own bangs with kitchen scissors," Rory said, tapping her glass. "That usually cleans a person up." "I missed that humor." Eva pulled a leather card holder from her pocket, setting a crisp firm-branded gold card on the counter. "You never answered my emails after year two." Silas slid the amber glass across the wood. Eva didn't pick it up right away; she watched the legs of the liquor cling to the crystal. "I was busy," Rory said. "Delivering spring rolls for the restaurant down the block? I asked around before I came in. I had to make sure it was really you." The bite in the statement landed with heavy, deliberate weight. Rory didn't flinch. She picked up her water, the ice long melted, and swallowed the rest. "It pays the rent. Nobody asks for my LSAT scores when I hand them a bag of prawn crackers." "You were brilliant, Rory. Dad always said you’d be running a chamber in Temple by thirty. You had the brain for it. The instinct." Eva took a sip of the scotch, her throat bobbing as she swallowed without a wince. "Instead, you ran." "I left," Rory corrected. Her thumb dug into the crescent mark on her wrist, a reflex born of old habit. "There’s a difference." "You left Evan, fine. He was an anchor around your neck, we both knew it. But you left everything else, too. Me, Cardiff, the law degree. You tucked your tail and vanished into a basement flat in Soho." Silas moved past them again, carrying a tray of clean pint glasses. He didn't interrupt, but the heavy thud of his boots on the floorboards sounded like a metronome marking time. "You didn't see the flat before I left," Rory said, her voice dropping an octave. "You didn't see the broken door frame." Eva’s gaze flicked away, landing on a frame hung behind the taps—a grainy photograph of a foggy harbor. The cool, polished posture wavered for a fraction of a second, a crack in the porcelain. "I bought you the train ticket," Eva murmured, her fingers tightening around her glass until her knuckles turned white. "I stood on that platform with thirty pounds in my pocket and handed you every penny I had." "And I took it." "Then you stopped calling." "Because every time I spoke to you, you asked when I was coming back," Rory said, leaning in. Her bright blue eyes locked onto Eva’s dark ones. "You wanted the old Rory back. The one who argued case law over cheap cider and fixed your messes when you got too high at three in the morning. She didn't exist anymore. Evan killed her, or I did, but she wasn't coming on the train." Eva swirled the scotch. The ice-less liquid coated the glass. "I went back to school." "I know. I saw your name in the paper last winter. Associate partner at Vance & Sterling." "It took sixty hours a week. No sleep. No art." Eva threw her head back and finished the drink in one long pull. She slammed the glass down, a sharp crack that echoed off the empty tables. "I threw away every canvas I ever painted. I burned the notebooks. I became exactly what we used to mock when we sat on the fire escape." "You look expensive," Rory said softly. "I am expensive. My billable rate is four hundred an hour." Eva laughed, but the sound was dry, stripped of joy. "I buy three-thousand-pound coats so people listen to me in boardroom meetings. And I drink twelve-year-old single malt alone on a Tuesday because I don't know how to speak to anyone who doesn't talk about equity splits." Silas stepped up, picking up the empty glass. He picked up the bottle of Laphroaig, pouring another two fingers without being asked. "On the house," Silas said, his grey-streaked auburn beard twitching slightly. "You look like you're carrying a heavy load, miss." Eva stared at the fresh drink. "I don't need charity." "It's not charity," Silas grunted, turning back to his washing sink. "It's hospitality. There's a distinction." Eva rubbed her temples, smear of rain and tired makeup smudging under her eyes. The immaculate facade crumbled further, revealing the exhausted woman beneath the tailored charcoal wool. "I missed you, Rory," Eva whispered. The room seemed to contract around the words. "I spent five years being angry at you for abandoning me. Then I realized I was just furious that you got out, and I stayed until I became part of the machinery." Rory reached across the damp wooden bar. Her fingers brushed against Eva’s sleeve, feeling the heavy, costly weave of the fabric. "You didn't get stuck, Eva. You chose it." "Is this choice?" Eva gestured wildly at herself, her suit, her sleek phone resting face down on the counter. "I don't even like scotch. I hate it. It tastes like ash." "Then why drink it?" "Because it’s what people like me are supposed to order." Eva slid off the stool, her heel clicking sharply against the floor. She grabbed her coat, draping it over her arm rather than putting it back on. She reached into her pocket and pulled out a small, crumpled piece of paper, setting it beside her untouched second glass. "I kept this. I don't know why." Rory picked up the paper. It was a receipt from a diner near the Cardiff docks, dated seven years ago. On the back, written in smeared blue ink, was a rough sketch of a bird flying over a stylized cityscape, signed with Rory's initials. "You were going to paint that on my bedroom wall," Eva said, her voice barely audible over the rain outside. "I ran out of time," Rory said. Eva adjusted her collar, pulling the sharp edges tight around her neck again, piecing the armor back together block by block. "I have a meeting at eight tomorrow in Canary Wharf. I shouldn't have come." "Eva." Eva paused at the door, her hand resting on the brass handle. She didn't turn around. Her shoulders were locked tight, a rigid line against the dark glass of the entrance. "The bar is open late," Rory said. "If you ever just want a tap water."
created_at"2026-07-25T15:27:20.11Z" 7/25/2026, 3:27:20 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Rory said softly [softly]"
1"Eva gestured wildly [wildly]"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.436
leniency0.873
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.073
82.66% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1442
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"softly"
3"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.39% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1442
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"chaotic"
count1
2
word"fleeting"
count1
3
word"calculated"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count1
5
word"crystal"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"wavered"
count1
9
word"porcelain"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"facade"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"chaotic"
2"fleeting"
3"calculated"
4"unspoken"
5"crystal"
6"weight"
7"flicked"
8"wavered"
9"porcelain"
10"echoed"
11"facade"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences79
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1439
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions62
wordCount885
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.71
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Oxford1
Street1
London1
Rory21
Cardiff2
Central1
Eva24
Silas8
Laphroaig1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Silas"
3"Laphroaig"
places
0"Raven"
1"Oxford"
2"Street"
3"London"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore0.144
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like a metronome marking time"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1439
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean26.65
std18.76
cv0.704
sampleLengths
074
135
21
317
473
57
624
727
814
951
1010
1125
1218
1319
1420
1530
1626
175
1825
1926
2019
2143
2223
2338
2431
2522
2634
2737
284
294
3073
3115
3217
3364
346
3558
3622
3720
3810
3916
4028
4146
4221
438
4431
454
4665
4744
4820
497
96.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"were manicured"
1"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs158
matches(empty)
64.94% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences110
ratio0.027
matches
0"Her hands—once permanently stained with acrylic paint and cheap nicotine—were manicured, bare of any silver rings."
1"Eva didn't pick it up right away; she watched the legs of the liquor cling to the crystal."
2"Eva’s gaze flicked away, landing on a frame hung behind the taps—a grainy photograph of a foggy harbor."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount676
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.028106508875739646
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0073964497041420114
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean13.08
std8.65
cv0.661
sampleLengths
017
117
223
317
418
56
611
71
89
96
102
1114
1233
1310
1416
157
1613
1711
1825
192
2014
2123
2214
2314
246
254
264
2714
287
299
309
3110
329
3314
346
3522
368
378
3818
395
4025
4110
423
4313
4419
4540
463
474
4816
493
43.64% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.2545454545454545
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences71
matches
0"She nursed a glass of"
1"It sounded scraped down, sanded"
2"Her hands—once permanently stained with"
3"She pulled out the stool"
4"He set the glass down,"
5"He looked at Rory, an"
6"He reached for a bottle"
7"She picked up her water,"
8"Her thumb dug into the"
9"He didn't interrupt, but the"
10"Her bright blue eyes locked"
11"She slammed the glass down,"
12"He picked up the bottle"
13"Her fingers brushed against Eva’s"
14"She grabbed her coat, draping"
15"She reached into her pocket"
16"It was a receipt from"
17"She didn't turn around."
18"Her shoulders were locked tight,"
ratio0.268
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences71
matches
0"Rory sat on a high"
1"She nursed a glass of"
2"The heavy oak front door"
3"Leather boots creaked against the"
4"Rory didn't look up until"
5"The voice lacked the brassy,"
6"It sounded scraped down, sanded"
7"Eva stood in a soaking"
8"The last time Rory saw"
9"Her hands—once permanently stained with"
10"Eva blinked, the hesitation fleeting"
11"She pulled out the stool"
12"Eva gestured to the dusty"
13"The older man wiped a"
14"He set the glass down,"
15"The silver signet ring on"
16"Eva said, glancing at Silas"
17"Silas didn't move immediately."
18"He looked at Rory, an"
19"Rory gave a small, barely"
ratio0.944
70.42% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"Now, a sharp charcoal suit"
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She grabbed her coat, draping it over her arm rather than putting it back on."
1"Eva adjusted her collar, pulling the sharp edges tight around her neck again, piecing the armor back together block by block."
20.83% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Silas said, his voice a low gravel growl"
1"Eva took, her throat bobbing as she swallowed without a wince"
2"Rory said, her voice dropping an octave"
3"Eva slid, her heel clicking sharply against the floor"
4"Eva said, her voice barely audible over the rain outside"
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Rory corrected (correct)"
1"Eva murmured (murmur)"
2"Eva laughed (laugh)"
3"Silas grunted (grunt)"
4"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.309
leniency0.618
rawRatio0.294
effectiveRatio0.182
79.6784%