Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCY7AVEBNE9NECRKZEHY375

Run Details

Duration:
10.4s
Cost:
$0.005446
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt always stuck, catching on the warped wood of the door frame before giving way with a sullen, metallic snap. Rory pulled the door open, a yellow Golden Empress delivery box hitched against her hip, ready to snap at the courier who’d buzzed her flat. Instead, the damp chill of Brick Lane drifted past a tailored charcoal shoulder, carrying the faint, unmistakable scent of wintergreen and clove. Lucien stood on the narrow landing. He looked entirely out of place against the peeling floral wallpaper and the greasy tang of the curry house downstairs, fitted into his charcoal suit as though he had stepped out of a private club and straight into a working-class corridor. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, catching the dim, flickering light of the hallway bulb, and his mismatched eyes—one a sharp, predatory amber, the other a light-absorbing void of pure black—fixed squarely on her face. For three seconds, neither of them breathed. Rory’s hand tightened on the strap of her delivery box until her knuckles turned white. A small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, pale against her skin, throbbed with a phantom ache—a reminder of old falls and worse choices. She felt the sudden, frantic thud of her pulse in her throat, an old reflex she thought she had buried somewhere around Southwark Bridge six months ago. “You’ve let your hair grow,” Lucien said. His voice was a low, smooth baritone, carrying that faint, rounded French cadence that had once sounded like a sanctuary and later like a trap. He rested both hands on the ivory handle of his cane. “You’ve lost your mind if you think you can just show up here,” Rory said. Her voice was ice, cool-headed and level, though her straight black hair swung forward to hide the flush creeping up her neck. “May I come in, Rory, or do we intend to reenact a western in the middle of a Sunday afternoon?” “Call me Laila and maybe I’ll consider slamming the door in your face.” “You won’t slam it,” Lucien said softly. He didn't wait for an invitation; he simply shifted his weight, and because physics seemed to politely bend around him, the heavy oak door drifted wide enough for him to step past her into the cramped confines of the flat. The air inside was thick with the scent of old paper, brewing black tea, and the sweet, dusty musk of Ptolemy the tabby cat, who immediately materialized from the labyrinth of books to rub indignantly against Lucien’s immaculate trouser leg. Lucien looked down, a flicker of genuine amusement crossing his austere features, before his gaze swept the room. Eva’s flat was a disaster area of research notes, scrolls, and half-empty mugs, but Lucien’s eyes tracked back to Rory with a gravity that made the room feel suddenly, claustrophobically small. Rory kicked the door shut with the heel of her boot, the three deadbolts sliding home with three distinct thuds. She dropped the delivery box onto a precarious stack of occult folios. “What do you want, Lucien?” she asked, crossing her arms over her chest. She stood her ground, five-foot-six of rigid defiance against his eleven inches of tailored arrogance. “If Avaros is burning, find another courier. I’m off the clock.” “Avaros is remarkably stable, thank you. Though I take it as a compliment that my first thought in a crisis is to drag you into it.” Lucien unbuttoned his jacket with practiced deliberation, though he didn't take it off. He leaned slightly on his cane, his amber eye catching the pale London light filtering through the grime of the window. “I am not here for business. Not formally.” “Good. Because the last time you weren't here for business, I spent three weeks sleeping on Eva’s floor and wondering if your father’s demons were going to use my flat keys to redecorate.” The barb hit its mark, but Lucien didn't flinch. The shadow in his black eye seemed to deepen, a quiet concession to a debt he hadn’t finished paying. He took a slow step forward, closing the distance between them until the faint, cool scent of him crowded out the smell of Ptolemy’s kibble. “You left without saying goodbye,” he said, and the smooth lacquer of his voice cracked just enough to let the razor-sharp edge of old hurt through. “A polite note on the bedside table. Very British. Very efficient.” “I left because I was drowning,” Rory snapped, her composure slipping past the armor she wore like chainmail. She uncrossed her arms, her hands balling into fists at her sides. “You live in a world where half-demons barter for secrets in basements and your friends carry blades disguised as walking sticks. I wanted to deliver dumplings and pay my rent, Lucien. I couldn't breathe in your life.” “You breathed just fine when you were pulling me out of the fire in Soho,” he countered, his voice dropping an octave, slipping seamlessly into a softer, more intimate register that curled around her ribs. “You were brilliant. Terrifying, but brilliant.” “I was an idiot.” “Perhaps.” Lucien took another step. He was close enough now that she could see the faint constellation of pale freckles across the bridge of his nose—a human trait his demonic blood had never quite managed to bleach away. “And yet, here you are. Delivering noodles to keep yourself grounded while you spend your nights translating grimoires for Eva. You haven't left that world, Rory. You’ve just put on a different uniform.” “At least this uniform doesn't come with an assassination target on the back.” “Everyone has a target on their back in this city. Some of us simply choose to wear tailored suits to meet it.” He reached out. The movement was slow, deliberate, telegraphing every inch so she had every opportunity to pull away. When his thumb brushed against the soft skin of her inner wrist, right over the crescent-shaped scar, a jolt of static electricity raced up her arm, settling deep in her chest. She hissed in a breath, her gaze flying up to meet his. His heterochromatic eyes were entirely bare now, stripped of the ironic detachment he wore like armor in the underworld. There was a raw, hungry vulnerability there that terrified her more than any blade he concealed in his cane. “I missed you,” he said, the words tasting like gravel in his mouth, as if he hated himself for saying them. “Every room in that wretched townhouse in Mayfair smells like cold tea and you. It’s intolerable.” “You have a strange way of showing affection,” Rory whispered, her voice losing its defensive bite. Her heart hammered against her ribs like a trapped bird. She wanted to push him away—she *should* push him away, open the three deadbolts, and throw him back out into the dreary London rain where he belonged. Instead, her fingers twitched against her thigh, aching to reach out and straighten the lapel of his jacket. “I am a half-demon from Marseille, my darling,” Lucien murmured, his gaze dropping to her lips before rising back to meet her bright blue eyes. “Romance was never my strong suit. But I am trying to learn.” “You’re impossible.” “That is the general consensus.” He closed the remaining space between them, his hand sliding from her wrist up to cup the side of her neck, his thumb pressing just beneath her jawline. His skin was always a fraction too cool, a subtle reminder of what he was, but the heat of his palm against her pulse point was unmistakable. When he leaned down, Rory didn't back away. She let out a long, ragged exhale that tasted like defeat, her eyes drifting shut just a heartbeat before his mouth found hers. It wasn't a gentle kiss. It was sharp with months of unsaid arguments, bitter with absence, and heavy with the reckless, undeniable gravity that had drawn them together in the first place. His other hand came up to grip her waist, pulling her flush against the hard line of his chest. Rory’s hands found their way to the lapels of his charcoal jacket, clutching the wool as if she were anchoring herself to the only solid thing in a collapsing room. She kissed him back with a sudden, fierce desperation, tasting the wintergreen and the familiar, dangerous edge of him that she had tried so hard to excise from her blood. It was a mistake—she knew it was a mistake, knew that by morning the flat would smell of him, and she’d be back to dodging shadow-brokers and looking over her shoulder. Right now, against the peeling wallpaper of Brick Lane, with Ptolemy weaving around their ankles and the curry house exhaust fan humming below, she didn't care. When Lucien finally pulled back, resting his forehead against hers, his chest rose and fell in a heavy, uneven rhythm. His mismatched eyes searched her face, mapping every line of her expression as if memorizing it for a journey he hadn't yet planned to take. “Does this mean I can stay for tea?” he asked, a ghost of his usual arrogant smirk playing at the corner of his mouth. Rory opened her eyes, her gaze sharp, though her lips were bruised and flushed. She reached up, catching his platinum hair in her fingers and giving it a hard, satisfying tug. “You’re buying the groceries next time, Frenchman,” she said, though she didn't let go of his jacket. “And you’re taking off those ridiculous shoes at the door.” Lucien let out a low, dark laugh, his hand sliding down from her waist to interlock his fingers with hers. “Consider it done.”
created_at"2026-07-25T15:27:42.457Z" 7/25/2026, 3:27:42 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Lucien said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.438
leniency0.875
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.063
84.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1616
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"softly"
1"suddenly"
2"slightly"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.78% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1616
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"reminder"
count2
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"sanctuary"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"efficient"
count1
8
word"raced"
count1
9
word"affection"
count1
10
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"throbbed"
2"reminder"
3"pulse"
4"sanctuary"
5"weight"
6"flicker"
7"efficient"
8"raced"
9"affection"
10"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences65
matches(empty)
54.95% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences65
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1610
ratio0.001
matches
0"should"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1237
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.97
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Golden1
Empress1
Brick2
Lane2
Southwark1
Bridge1
French1
Ptolemy3
Lucien12
Rory10
London2
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Lucien"
2"Rory"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Southwark"
3"Bridge"
4"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
22.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"sounded like a sanctuary and later like a"
1"tasted like defeat, her eyes drifting shu"
2"as if memorizing it for a journey he hadn't yet planned to take"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1610
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean39.27
std22.06
cv0.562
sampleLengths
047
122
283
37
466
543
637
720
813
947
1089
1132
1239
1368
1433
1553
1637
1767
1841
194
2071
2113
2222
2362
2438
2537
2653
2718
2837
292
305
3155
3231
3381
3461
3526
3645
3724
3831
3927
4023
94.47% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences65
matches
0"was slicked"
1"were bruised"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs191
matches
0"were anchoring"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences83
ratio0.072
matches
0"His platinum blond hair was slicked back, catching the dim, flickering light of the hallway bulb, and his mismatched eyes—one a sharp, predatory amber, the other a light-absorbing void of pure black—fixed squarely on her face."
1"A small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, pale against her skin, throbbed with a phantom ache—a reminder of old falls and worse choices."
2"He didn't wait for an invitation; he simply shifted his weight, and because physics seemed to politely bend around him, the heavy oak door drifted wide enough for him to step past her into the cramped confines of the flat."
3"He was close enough now that she could see the faint constellation of pale freckles across the bridge of his nose—a human trait his demonic blood had never quite managed to bleach away."
4"She wanted to push him away—she *should* push him away, open the three deadbolts, and throw him back out into the dreary London rain where he belonged."
5"It was a mistake—she knew it was a mistake, knew that by morning the flat would smell of him, and she’d be back to dodging shadow-brokers and looking over her shoulder."
91.99% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1253
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount53
adverbRatio0.04229848363926576
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.0111731843575419
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean19.4
std9.88
cv0.51
sampleLengths
022
125
222
36
441
536
67
715
824
927
107
1125
1211
1315
1422
1520
1613
177
1840
1940
2018
2131
2220
2312
2413
2515
2611
2739
2821
298
3033
319
3219
3325
3426
3511
3618
3712
3837
3935
406
414
425
4333
4433
4513
4622
473
4816
4931
59.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3855421686746988
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners32
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences63
matches
0"Instead, the damp chill of"
1"Instead, her fingers twitched against"
ratio0.032
4.13% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences63
matches
0"He looked entirely out of"
1"His platinum blond hair was"
2"She felt the sudden, frantic"
3"His voice was a low,"
4"He rested both hands on"
5"Her voice was ice, cool-headed"
6"He didn't wait for an"
7"She dropped the delivery box"
8"she asked, crossing her arms"
9"She stood her ground, five-foot-six"
10"He leaned slightly on his"
11"He took a slow step"
12"he said, and the smooth"
13"She uncrossed her arms, her"
14"he countered, his voice dropping"
15"He was close enough now"
16"He reached out."
17"She hissed in a breath,"
18"His heterochromatic eyes were entirely"
19"he said, the words tasting"
ratio0.54
23.49% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences63
matches
0"The third deadbolt always stuck,"
1"Rory pulled the door open,"
2"Lucien stood on the narrow"
3"He looked entirely out of"
4"His platinum blond hair was"
5"Rory’s hand tightened on the"
6"A small, crescent-shaped scar on"
7"She felt the sudden, frantic"
8"His voice was a low,"
9"He rested both hands on"
10"Her voice was ice, cool-headed"
11"Lucien said softly"
12"He didn't wait for an"
13"The air inside was thick"
14"Lucien looked down, a flicker"
15"Eva’s flat was a disaster"
16"Rory kicked the door shut"
17"She dropped the delivery box"
18"she asked, crossing her arms"
19"She stood her ground, five-foot-six"
ratio0.873
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"Rory pulled the door open, a yellow Golden Empress delivery box hitched against her hip, ready to snap at the courier who’d buzzed her flat."
1"He looked entirely out of place against the peeling floral wallpaper and the greasy tang of the curry house downstairs, fitted into his charcoal suit as though …"
2"His voice was a low, smooth baritone, carrying that faint, rounded French cadence that had once sounded like a sanctuary and later like a trap."
3"Eva’s flat was a disaster area of research notes, scrolls, and half-empty mugs, but Lucien’s eyes tracked back to Rory with a gravity that made the room feel su…"
4"There was a raw, hungry vulnerability there that terrified her more than any blade he concealed in his cane."
5"He closed the remaining space between them, his hand sliding from her wrist up to cup the side of her neck, his thumb pressing just beneath her jawline."
6"She let out a long, ragged exhale that tasted like defeat, her eyes drifting shut just a heartbeat before his mouth found hers."
7"It was sharp with months of unsaid arguments, bitter with absence, and heavy with the reckless, undeniable gravity that had drawn them together in the first pla…"
8"Rory’s hands found their way to the lapels of his charcoal jacket, clutching the wool as if she were anchoring herself to the only solid thing in a collapsing r…"
9"His mismatched eyes searched her face, mapping every line of her expression as if memorizing it for a journey he hadn't yet planned to take."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Rory snapped, her composure slipping past the armor she wore like chainmail"
1"Rory whispered, her voice losing its defensive bite"
56.25% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Rory snapped (snap)"
1"Rory whispered (whisper)"
2"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.344
leniency0.688
rawRatio0.273
effectiveRatio0.188
72.9600%