| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.27% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1146 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 21.47% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1146 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoing" | | 1 | "resonance" | | 2 | "tracing" | | 3 | "marble" | | 4 | "velvet" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "rhythmic" | | 7 | "intricate" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "sentinels" | | 10 | "porcelain" | | 11 | "vibrated" | | 12 | "crystal" | | 13 | "throb" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1142 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.66% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 917 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.53 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Dymas | 2 | | Isolde | 6 | | Cardiff | 1 | | London | 1 | | Nyx | 5 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Overhead | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Rory | 14 | | Veil | 2 | | Earth | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Two | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Demon | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Varga" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Veil" |
| | places | | 0 | "Cardiff" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Two" |
| | globalScore | 0.737 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like solid quartz" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.876 | | wordCount | 1142 | | matches | | 0 | "not with water, but with dark, fragrant wine" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.93% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 42.3 | | std | 17.59 | | cv | 0.416 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 63 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 40 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 84 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 50 | | 10 | 72 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 52 | | 13 | 41 | | 14 | 55 | | 15 | 43 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 56 | | 18 | 49 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 64 | | 21 | 47 | | 22 | 44 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 56 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 37 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 152 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 67 | | ratio | 0.06 | | matches | | 0 | "Cold moonsilver pressed through the leather of her pocket—Isolde’s leaf-shaped blade resting heavy against her thigh." | | 1 | "Bunches of grapes—each fruit the size of a fist, glowing with an internal violet flame—hung in heavy clusters, dripping syrup that hissed where it struck the stone stairs." | | 2 | "High above the luminous clouds, tiny fractures crossed the sky—thin, shimmering lines where the amber light glinted off an invisible curve." | | 3 | "It wasn't just the hum of steam and distant music; the very ground beneath them vibrated with a low, thrumming bass, like a massive engine burning through liquid sugar." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 928 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "resting heavy against her" | | 1 | "warm, honey-colored sky." |
| | adverbCount | 14 | | adverbRatio | 0.015086206896551725 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005387931034482759 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 67 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 67 | | mean | 17.04 | | std | 7.54 | | cv | 0.443 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 36 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 28 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 84.08% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5223880597014925 | | totalSentences | 67 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "It beat like a second" | | 1 | "Her silver hair dragged across" | | 2 | "Her pale lavender eyes reflected" | | 3 | "Her boot heel crunched against" | | 4 | "They towered over nine feet" | | 5 | "It wasn't just the hum" |
| | ratio | 0.107 | |
| 85.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory’s breath bloomed in the" | | 1 | "Every step down the terrace" | | 2 | "The shade’s edges blurred, ink" | | 3 | "The sound rasped like dry" | | 4 | "Rory rubbed her left wrist," | | 5 | "The Heartstone pendant nestled against" | | 6 | "It beat like a second" | | 7 | "Rory said, her eyes sweeping" | | 8 | "Light radiated from the clouds" | | 9 | "Vines thick as ancient oaks" | | 10 | "Bunches of grapes—each fruit the" | | 11 | "Isolde Varga said from behind" | | 12 | "The half-Fae walked without a" | | 13 | "Her silver hair dragged across" | | 14 | "Her pale lavender eyes reflected" | | 15 | "Isolde continued, her voice melodious," | | 16 | "Rory tilted her head back." | | 17 | "A heavy, aromatic breeze swept" | | 18 | "Steam poured from deep grates" | | 19 | "Rory said, taking the next" |
| | ratio | 0.75 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, long halberds swung from" | | 1 | "To her left, a fountain" |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Every step down the terrace carved from polished basalt sent vibrations up her spine, echoing through a landscape that defied every law of Cardiff or London." | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant nestled against her collarbone hummed a steady, pulsing heat that radiated into her sternum." | | 2 | "Bunches of grapes—each fruit the size of a fist, glowing with an internal violet flame—hung in heavy clusters, dripping syrup that hissed where it struck the st…" | | 3 | "A heavy, aromatic breeze swept up the valley, carrying the scent of roasting meats, dark chocolate, sharp spices, and an underlying iron tang that made the hair…" | | 4 | "Where the shade's silhouette touched the glowing violet grapes hanging from a nearby trellis, the fruit withered instantly, turning to gray ash that scattered o…" | | 5 | "Yet, long halberds swung from their thick wrists, their tips dripping with a clear, viscous liquid that sizzled upon contact with the flagstones." | | 6 | "The flagstones beneath her feet felt slightly soft, yielding to her weight as if carpeted in fresh moss, though they looked like solid quartz." | | 7 | "The golden sky above seemed to tilt, the shimmering lines of the Veil flashing brightly with a harsh, violet lightning that illuminated the cracks in the sky." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde continued (continue)" | | 2 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Nyx hissed (hiss)" | | 4 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 5 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 6 | "Rory gasped (gasp)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.55 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.636 | | effectiveRatio | 0.636 | |