Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCYEN2YDWJ9K8EGZ2RSV0MR

Run Details

Duration:
14.1s
Cost:
$0.015648
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain slicked the Soho pavement, reflecting the distinctive green neon sign above the entrance of The Raven's Nest. Inside, amber light pooled over polished mahogany and old black-and-white photographs of pre-war London. Raindrops tapped a steady rhythm against the leaded glass windows. Silas Blackwood limped behind the bar, his silver signet ring clinking against a crystal tumbler as he polished it with a lint-free cloth. Hazel eyes tracked the doorway out of habit—a leftover impulse from three decades in MI6. The heavy oak door swung open, setting the brass bell chiming. A tall man stepped out of the wet night. He pulled off a dripping leather jacket, revealing a tailored charcoal suit underneath. Broad shoulders tucked inward, his posture guarded. His hair, once a unruly mass of jet-black curls, was cropped close to the scalp, peppered with stark silver around the temples. He wiped his boots on the mat, scanning the low-lit room before his gaze locked onto the bar. Silas froze. The polishing cloth slipped into the glass. "The green neon hasn't changed," the man said, his voice a gravelly baritone that grated against the soft jazz filtering from the corner speaker. "Though I expected a few more bullet holes given the neighborhood." Silas set the glass down with a heavy thud. He adjusted his stance, leaning his weight onto his good right leg to spare the knee ruined in Prague. "Julian." "Silas." Julian walked toward the mahogany counter, his leather shoes silent against the worn Persian rug running down the center aisle. He pulled out a stool, the wood scraping softly, and sat. "You look older." "You look expensive." Silas reached under the counter, pulled a dusty bottle of eighteen-year-old single malt from the bottom shelf, and set two clean rocks glasses between them. "Last time I saw you, you were wearing a stained parka and sleeping on my sofa in Berlin, dodging Stasi informants." Julian unbuttoned his jacket, revealing a platinum watch that caught the low light. "A man grows up. Or he adapts. The parka didn't fit the corporate boardrooms in Geneva." Silas poured two heavy fingers of dark amber liquid into each glass. The smell of peat and oak rose between them. "Geneva. So the rumors were true. You bought into the private security sector." "I bought into stability." Julian picked up his glass, swirling the ice until it clinked against the crystal. He didn't drink. He just stared at the swirling liquid. "Something we never had running assets through check-points." "Stability." Silas raised his glass, took a slow sip, and let the burn settle in his chest. "Is that what we're calling mercenary work now? Clean linen, gold cufflinks, and private military contracts?" Julian’s jaw tightened, a muscle jumping beneath his tan skin. "We built the foundation for those contracts, Si. You and me. In the dark, taking the blame whenever a politician panicked. I just decided to start getting paid for the risk." "You left." Silas leaned forward, placing his calloused palms flat on the bar. His hazel eyes narrowed. "No word. No hand-off. You vanished from the safehouse in Vienna and left three local contacts exposed." "Vienna was burnt and you know it!" Julian’s voice cracked through the quiet bar like a pistol shot. A couple sitting in a booth near the jukebox glanced over. Julian held up a hand, smoothing his silk tie, his breathing shallow. He waited until the patrons turned back to their drinks before continuing, dropping his tone to a harsh whisper. "The Directorate compromised our comms. If I stayed, we both would have ended up in a ditch outside Bratislava." "Two of those contacts did," Silas said quietly. He didn't blink. "Marek and his sister. I pulled Marek’s body out of the Danube three weeks later. His sister was never found." Julian looked away, his eyes tracking the yellowed map of the Austro-Hungarian Empire pinned to the wall behind Silas. The silence stretched, thick with the smell of rain, old wood, and decades of buried dust. The jazz record clicked, shifting to a slow, melancholic trumpet solo. "I went back for them," Julian said, the gravel in his voice thickening. "Six months later. When the heat died down." "Six months is an eternity in our former line of work." "I know." Julian finally lifted the glass to his lips, swallowing the scotch in one long, desperate gulp. He slammed the heavy glass back onto the bar. "You think I don't see their faces every time I open my eyes in the middle of the night? You think the money washes that out?" "I don't know what the money does for you, Julian," Silas said, taking another measured sip. "You didn't leave a forwarding address." "I couldn't." Julian reached into his inner jacket pocket. For a fraction of a second, Silas’ hand twitched toward the shelf beneath the bar where a loaded Browning Hi-Power rested. Julian only pulled out a leather wallet, sliding a folded, yellowed photograph across the mahogany. "I kept this." Silas looked down. The photograph was creased, the edges frayed. It showed three young men standing in front of a cold war bunker in the Black Forest, arms slung over each other's shoulders, laughing against a gray sky. Silas on the left, full hair and no limp. Julian in the middle, grin wild and unburdened. And on the right, a young man with sharp eyes who never made it out of Hungary. "We were fools," Silas murmured, touching the corner of the picture with a thumb weathered by time. "Arrogant, righteous fools." "We believed in something," Julian corrected softly. "Or at least, I thought we did. Before the suits in Whitehall decided our team was expendable." "I still believe in something," Silas said. He gestured around the dimly lit room, at the quiet sanctuary he had carved out in the heart of London. "I believe in protecting the people who come through that door. I believe in keeping my debts paid." "And what about my debt?" Julian asked, his voice barely audible over the patter of rain against the glass. "How do I pay that?" "You don't." Silas took the photograph, flipped it over, and slid it into his shirt pocket, right over his heart. "The ledger doesn't balance, Si. It never did." Julian stared at his empty glass. The neon green light outside cast long, geometric shadows across his sharp features, highlighting the deep lines etched around his eyes—lines forged not by age, but by sleepless nights in foreign hotels. "I saw the sign," Julian said, his shoulders dropping an inch. The formidable corporate titan vanished, leaving behind the ghost of the boy who had once shared a cold rat-infested cellar in Prague. "I was on my way to Heathrow. I saw the green neon from the back of the cab. I told the driver to stop." "Why?" "I wanted to see if you were still alive." Julian pulled a stack of hundred-pound notes from his wallet and set them on the counter. "Or if I was the only ghost left." Silas looked at the money, then reached out, picking up the stack and sliding it back across the wood until it hit Julian’s knuckles. "Drinks are on the house for old friends," Silas said, his voice dropping its hard edge, leaving only a weary resonance. "For strangers, it’s twenty quid." Julian stared at the bills touching his hand. A slow, bitter smile touched his lips. He picked up the money, stuffed it back into his pocket, and stood up. He buttoned his charcoal jacket, hiding the tailored shirt, hiding the watch, armoring himself once again against the wet London night. "Keep the good scotch on the bottom shelf, Silas," Julian said, turning toward the exit. "You might get another ghost coming through that door." "I keep the door unlocked," Silas replied. Julian pulled open the heavy oak entrance. The bell chimed, sharp and clear. A gust of damp wind swept into the tavern, bringing the smell of exhaust, wet asphalt, and the vast, unfeeling city outside. Julian stepped through, the door clicking shut behind him, cutting off the chill. Silas stood alone behind the bar. He picked up Julian’s empty glass, feeling the residual warmth of his thumb on the heavy crystal. He didn't wipe it down. Instead, he poured another finger of the eighteen-year-old malt, lifted it toward the empty stool, and drank in silence while the rain beat a steady rhythm against the leaded glass.
created_at"2026-07-25T15:31:42.312Z" 7/25/2026, 3:31:42 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Silas said quietly [quietly]"
1"Julian corrected softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.449
leniency0.898
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.082
92.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1416
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1416
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"crystal"
count3
1
word"stark"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"silk"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"measured"
count1
8
word"sanctuary"
count1
9
word"etched"
count1
10
word"resonance"
count1
11
word"chill"
count1
12
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"crystal"
1"stark"
2"scanning"
3"weight"
4"silk"
5"whisper"
6"silence"
7"measured"
8"sanctuary"
9"etched"
10"resonance"
11"chill"
12"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences78
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1414
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
31.44% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount970
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.37
worstName"Julian"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
London3
Blackwood1
Silas19
Prague2
Persian1
Julian23
Austro-Hungarian1
Empire1
Black1
Forest1
Hungary1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Blackwood"
2"Silas"
3"Julian"
4"Empire"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Prague"
3"Black"
4"Forest"
5"Hungary"
globalScore0.314
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.707
wordCount1414
matches
0"not by age, but by sleepless nights in foreign hotels"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
88.13% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean32.88
std15.08
cv0.458
sampleLengths
042
138
211
369
49
535
629
735
849
929
1034
1136
1233
1341
1434
1518
1642
1719
1831
1946
2021
2111
2253
2322
2448
2555
2617
2720
2824
2945
3024
3128
3238
3357
341
3533
3624
3726
3850
3924
407
4148
4258
96.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences78
matches
0"was cropped"
1"was creased"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs163
matches(empty)
88.44% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences105
ratio0.019
matches
0"Hazel eyes tracked the doorway out of habit—a leftover impulse from three decades in MI6."
1"The neon green light outside cast long, geometric shadows across his sharp features, highlighting the deep lines etched around his eyes—lines forged not by age, but by sleepless nights in foreign hotels."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount651
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.021505376344086023
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.009216589861751152
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean13.47
std7.24
cv0.537
sampleLengths
018
114
210
323
415
511
69
713
87
922
1018
112
127
1324
1411
159
1619
171
1821
1911
203
2128
2221
2313
2416
2512
269
2713
2818
293
307
318
3217
3316
3410
3531
3613
374
3817
3918
4011
4112
4219
4319
448
453
4620
4719
4816
4911
48.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners35
44.44% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"Instead, he poured another finger"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences75
matches
0"He pulled off a dripping"
1"His hair, once a unruly"
2"He wiped his boots on"
3"He adjusted his stance, leaning"
4"He pulled out a stool,"
5"He didn't drink."
6"He just stared at the"
7"His hazel eyes narrowed."
8"He waited until the patrons"
9"He didn't blink."
10"He slammed the heavy glass"
11"It showed three young men"
12"He gestured around the dimly"
13"He picked up the money,"
14"He buttoned his charcoal jacket,"
15"He picked up Julian’s empty"
16"He didn't wipe it down."
ratio0.227
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences75
matches
0"Rain slicked the Soho pavement,"
1"Raindrops tapped a steady rhythm"
2"Silas Blackwood limped behind the"
3"Hazel eyes tracked the doorway"
4"The heavy oak door swung"
5"A tall man stepped out"
6"He pulled off a dripping"
7"His hair, once a unruly"
8"He wiped his boots on"
9"The polishing cloth slipped into"
10"the man said, his voice"
11"Silas set the glass down"
12"He adjusted his stance, leaning"
13"Julian walked toward the mahogany"
14"He pulled out a stool,"
15"Silas reached under the counter,"
16"Julian unbuttoned his jacket, revealing"
17"Silas poured two heavy fingers"
18"The smell of peat and"
19"Julian picked up his glass,"
ratio0.933
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Julian unbuttoned his jacket, revealing a platinum watch that caught the low light."
1"It showed three young men standing in front of a cold war bunker in the Black Forest, arms slung over each other's shoulders, laughing against a gray sky."
2"The formidable corporate titan vanished, leaving behind the ghost of the boy who had once shared a cold rat-infested cellar in Prague."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Julian said, his shoulders dropping an inch"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Silas murmured (murmur)"
1"Julian corrected softly (correct)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.245
leniency0.49
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.082
83.7323%