Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCYEP2PX48GTYCRYD3N8WZP

Run Details

Duration:
46.3s
Cost:
$0.072789
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a heavy metallic click. Aurora pulled the oak door inward, framing Lucien Moreau against the damp, mustard-yellow light of the stairwell. "You took seven months to cross four miles of London." Lucien rested his weight onto his ivory-handled cane, the polished ferrule silent against the threshold. His charcoal suit showed no crease, though the downpour outside had beaded across his shoulders like liquid silver. He tipped his head, heterochromatic eyes—one golden amber, the other absolute pitch—tracing the line of her jaw. "Three deadbolts, Rory? You used to rely on a butter knife jammed into the frame." She made to swing the door shut. The ivory knob of his cane slammed against the jamb, blocking the arc. Leather gloves gripped the wood before the latch caught. "We are not settling this in the corridor." "We aren't settling anything." Lucien leaned into the opening, bringing the sharp tang of cedar, rain, and ozone into her face. "The curry house downstairs smells of burnt cardamom, and your neighbors listen through the floorboards. Step back, or I spill your secrets to the entire street." Aurora tightened her fingers around the brass handle. Her left wrist twitched, pulling the crescent-shaped scar white against her skin. She retreated two steps into the clutter. Lucien crossed the threshold with smooth, predatory grace. His cane clicked against the worn floorboards before he kicked the door shut behind him. His gloved thumb threw all three deadbolts with fluid familiarity. Ptolemy pushed out from beneath a tower of leather-bound research notes, tail high. The tabby cat strode toward Lucien's trousers and rubbed his striped cheek against the charcoal hem. Lucien did not look down, though the corner of his mouth twitched upward. "You replaced me with a cat." "Ptolemy eats mice, doesn't lie, and leaves when I tell him to." She retreated toward the small kitchen alcove, putting a wooden table stacked with parchment and open texts between them. The radiator hissed, releasing a puff of metallic heat into the room. Downstairs, the muffled clatter of pots beat a steady rhythm against the floorboards. "I never lied to you." "Omission is the same currency, Moreau." Lucien set his cane against the edge of an armchair overflowing with maps of the London underground. He peeled off his lambskin gloves, finger by finger, revealing pale hands with black-tinged nails—the mark of his demon lineage besides the abyss of his left eye. "I told you what you needed to hear to keep your heart beating in your chest." "You told me what served your contract with the court." She snatched a copper kettle off the cold stove ring, her movements clipped, deliberate. Her bright blue eyes stayed locked on his face, refusing to drift down to the taper of his waist or the broad lines of his chest under the waistcoat. Seven months had not softened his edges. The shadow beneath his cheekbones had sharpened, giving his pale features the look of carved marble. "The contract was void the moment you walked out of that warehouse in Whitechapel." "I walked out because staying meant becoming another asset on your ledger." Lucien stepped around the armchair, brushing aside a loose scroll that dangled near his hip. He didn't rush. Every movement carried the precision of a man who controlled the room, even when he didn't own it. "Look at me, Rory." "I am looking at you. I see a fixer who lost his favorite errand girl." He reached out, his bare fingers stopping an inch short of her jawline. Heat radiated off his skin like an open furnace in the cold room. "You were never an errand girl." Aurora didn't pull away, though every instinct shouted at her to put five feet of open air between them. The scar on her wrist throbbed with phantom heat—a remnant of the night they had barely survived together in the winter frost, when he had pressed his own blood against her torn flesh to seal the wound. "Then what was I? A charity case? Eva's tragic friend running from her past?" "A disaster." His tone dropped, dark as poured molasses. "An absolute disaster that cost me two favors with the high court and half a million euros in liquidated assets." She let out a harsh laugh that died against the cramped walls of the flat. "You paid them off?" "Did you think they simply forgot about the broken seals in Cardiff?" He closed the remaining space. His chest nearly brushed hers, trapping her against the edge of the kitchen counter. The smell of cedar and rain grew thick, drowning the stench of spices from below. "I paid your debt because I couldn't stand the thought of their hounds tracking you through London." "I didn't ask for your protection." "You never ask for what you need. You run, or you fight, or you hide behind piles of dusty parchment." His hand moved the final inch, fingers brushing the dark hair away from her neck. His skin burned warm, a demon's furnace beneath a human frame. Aurora's breath hitched in her throat. She hated how her pulse betrayed her, hammering against her ribs like a trapped bird. "You should have let them come." "And watch them dismantle you?" His heterochromatic eyes searched her face, amber blazing under the low lamp, black swallowing the reflection of her own stare. "I built my reputation on control, Rory. You shattered it in three weeks." "Good. Control is boring." She reached up, grabbing his linen tie in her fist, twisting the silk until he had to bow his head down toward her. "You think coming here changes anything? You think a dramatic entrance and a tall tale about court debts washes away the fact that you vanished while I was still bleeding on your floor?" Lucien didn't pull back against her grip. He let her haul him closer, his breath fanning across her lips. "I vanished to hunt the man who bled you." Her fingers went slack against his tie. "Evan?" "He won't be returning to London." The flat went quiet save for the hiss of the radiator and Ptolemy's soft purring as the cat curled up on Lucien's dropped gloves. Aurora stared up at him, her mind racing through the implications, searching for the catch, the broker's cut, the hidden price tag that accompanied Lucien Moreau's gifts. "Why?" "Because he touched something that belonged to me." "I don't belong to you." "No." Lucien lowered his hand, his thumb catching the curve of her lower lip, pressing until her breath hitched again. "You belong to no one. That is why you terrify me." She leaned into the touch for one second before slamming her palm against his chest and shoving him back. He stumbled half a step, his heels catching on a stack of legal transcripts. "Don't manipulate me, Lucien." "I am not manipulating you." "You come into my flat, drop a dead abuser at my feet like a present, and expect me to fall into your arms?" He straightened his charcoal vest, smoothing the fabric with slow strokes, though his eyes never left hers. "I expected you to pull a blade on me. I am disappointed you haven't." Aurora snatched a brass letter opener from the cluttered desk behind her and flipped it in her hand, point outward. "Keep talking and I might fulfill your expectations." A slow smile spread across Lucien's face, exposing the slight elongation of his canine teeth. "There she is." He took a step toward the window, looking out over the rain-slicked roofs of Brick Lane. The neon sign of the curry house below cast a deep pink glow across his pale profile. "The court knows Evan is dead. They know who killed him. My standing in the underworld was revoked an hour ago." Aurora lowered the letter opener, her brow knotting. "What are you saying?" "I am saying I no longer have a house in Mayfair. I no longer have account books or bodyguards or favors to trade." He turned back to her, his posture straight, his amber eye reflecting the neon bleed from the window. "I am a fugitive, Rory. And you are the only person in London who knows how to hide." She stared at him, the weight of his words crashing into the tiny, cluttered room. The silence stretched between them, heavy with years of unspoken words, unresolved touches, and the magnetic pull that had drawn them together in the first place. "You want my help?" "I am offering a partnership. No ledgers. No omissions." Aurora looked down at the letter opener in her hand, then across at the half-demon standing in her cramped living room, stripped of his power, looking at her as if she were the only anchor in a storm. "You're an idiot, Moreau." "Undoubtedly." She dropped the letter opener onto the desk with a sharp clatter. "Clear those books off the couch before I change my mind."
created_at"2026-07-25T15:31:43.328Z" 7/25/2026, 3:31:43 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1497
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1497
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"tinged"
count1
3
word"marble"
count1
4
word"throbbed"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"shattered"
count1
7
word"silk"
count1
8
word"racing"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count1
11
word"magnetic"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"tracing"
2"tinged"
3"marble"
4"throbbed"
5"pulse"
6"shattered"
7"silk"
8"racing"
9"silence"
10"unspoken"
11"magnetic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of his words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1493
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount974
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.33
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien13
Moreau2
London1
Ptolemy2
Brick1
Lane1
Aurora8
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Aurora"
places
0"London"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore0.833
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1493
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs86
mean17.36
std14.29
cv0.823
sampleLengths
027
110
250
315
47
522
68
74
817
926
1027
1133
1242
136
1412
1544
165
176
1844
1916
2010
2166
2214
2312
2436
254
2615
2726
286
2956
3014
312
327
3320
3415
354
3612
3734
3817
396
4020
4147
426
435
4420
4513
464
4723
4833
4919
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs142
matches(empty)
68.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences116
ratio0.026
matches
0"He tipped his head, heterochromatic eyes—one golden amber, the other absolute pitch—tracing the line of her jaw."
1"He peeled off his lambskin gloves, finger by finger, revealing pale hands with black-tinged nails—the mark of his demon lineage besides the abyss of his left eye."
2"The scar on her wrist throbbed with phantom heat—a remnant of the night they had barely survived together in the winter frost, when he had pressed his own blood against her torn flesh to seal the wound."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount985
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"damp, mustard-yellow light"
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.014213197969543147
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003045685279187817
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean12.87
std7.42
cv0.576
sampleLengths
010
117
210
315
418
517
615
77
813
99
108
114
1217
1326
148
1512
167
178
1815
1910
2013
2116
2213
236
2412
2519
2612
2713
285
296
3017
3127
3216
3310
3414
3529
367
3716
3814
3912
4015
413
4218
434
4415
4513
4613
476
4819
4937
45.11% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3017241379310345
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners35
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
26.25% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences64
matches
0"His charcoal suit showed no"
1"He tipped his head, heterochromatic"
2"She made to swing the"
3"Her left wrist twitched, pulling"
4"She retreated two steps into"
5"His cane clicked against the"
6"His gloved thumb threw all"
7"She retreated toward the small"
8"He peeled off his lambskin"
9"She snatched a copper kettle"
10"Her bright blue eyes stayed"
11"He didn't rush."
12"He reached out, his bare"
13"His tone dropped, dark as"
14"She let out a harsh"
15"He closed the remaining space."
16"His chest nearly brushed hers,"
17"His hand moved the final"
18"His skin burned warm, a"
19"She hated how her pulse"
ratio0.484
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences64
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"Aurora pulled the oak door"
2"Lucien rested his weight onto"
3"His charcoal suit showed no"
4"He tipped his head, heterochromatic"
5"She made to swing the"
6"The ivory knob of his"
7"Leather gloves gripped the wood"
8"Lucien leaned into the opening,"
9"Aurora tightened her fingers around"
10"Her left wrist twitched, pulling"
11"She retreated two steps into"
12"Lucien crossed the threshold with"
13"His cane clicked against the"
14"His gloved thumb threw all"
15"Ptolemy pushed out from beneath"
16"The tabby cat strode toward"
17"Lucien did not look down,"
18"She retreated toward the small"
19"The radiator hissed, releasing a"
ratio0.984
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
72.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She reached up, grabbing his linen tie in her fist, twisting the silk until he had to bow his head down toward her."
1"Aurora stared up at him, her mind racing through the implications, searching for the catch, the broker's cut, the hidden price tag that accompanied Lucien Morea…"
2"Lucien lowered his hand, his thumb catching the curve of her lower lip, pressing until her breath hitched again."
3"The silence stretched between them, heavy with years of unspoken words, unresolved touches, and the magnetic pull that had drawn them together in the first plac…"
4"Aurora looked down at the letter opener in her hand, then across at the half-demon standing in her cramped living room, stripped of his power, looking at her as…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
81.0135%