Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCYEYTBRFGH85988GTDB07S

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Duration:
14.7s
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$0.006689
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Quinn stepped onto the cracked mosaic of the abandoned Tube station. Her boots echoed against the tile. The air smelled of ozone and rust. "Full moon migration," she said. "The Market moved here two nights ago." DS Reeves adjusted his collar. His face shone with sweat despite the cold. "Not a crime scene, Detective. Abandoned tunnel. No bodies." Quinn crouched beside the vendor stalls. Bone tokens lay scattered across the stone floor, carved with sigils that had been snapped in half. Brass scales glinted in the dark. A satchel of restricted books had spilled onto the tracks — Eva Kowalski's worn leather bag, she recognised the scuff marks. "These tokens grant entry," Quinn said. "Broken ones mean forced exit. Or refusal." Reeves kicked a verdigris-stained compass. "Trinket." Quinn picked it up. The needle spun wild, then locked north toward a bricked-up archway. "Not broken. Attuned." She turned the small brass casing in her fingers. Protective sigils etched the face. "Shade-made. Points to rifts." "Rifts?" "Doors that shouldn't exist." Reeves shifted his weight. "You lost Morris in a place like this." Quinn's jaw tightened. The worn leather watch on her left wrist ticked loud in the silence. "Morris died because I missed what was hidden in plain sight. I won't miss it twice." She stood, her posture straight as iron. Salt-and-pepper hair caught the bare bulb's glare. Brown eyes scanned the platform. Three stalls sold banned alchemical substances. The bottles lay intact. Not looted. Abandoned. "Look," Reeves said. "No blood. No violence. Sellers packed up and left for the next location. Routine." Quinn walked to the archway. Mortar crumbled around the bricks — fresh damage, not decay. She ran her fingers along the fractures. "Full moon was yesterday," she said. "The Market should have relocated then. These stalls remain. The sellers didn't leave for schedule." She pointed to the books. "Eva Kowalski works restricted archives. She'd come here for information. Her satchel is empty, but the books stay. She took nothing except knowledge." Reeves frowned. "A researcher? This is black market territory." "Exactly. She came for answers. Found something that made the sellers abandon their goods." Quinn knelt beside a puddle of black liquid. Not blood. Alchemical residue, crystallised into geometric patterns. "This wasn't evacuation," she said. "This was interruption." She pulled out her phone, snapped a picture of the compass needle's fixed direction. The needle trembled, then held steady on the bricked arch. "Someone opened a rift here," Quinn said. "Not through the Market. Through it. The bone tokens broke because the entry laws shattered." Reeves swallowed hard. "That's impossible. There's no evidence of—" "Evidence is wrong if you read it wrong." Quinn stood, brushing dust from her coat. The sharp line of her jaw cut the shadows. "You see an empty station. I see a crime scene where the crime hasn't finished happening." She turned to the archway. Behind the bricks, air moved in the wrong direction. "Eva was here," Quinn said. "She saw the rift open. The sellers panicked, broke their tokens to flee, but the arch pulled them through instead of letting them run." "Pulled them?" Reeves asked. "Or walked through willingly." Quinn stepped closer to the brick. "The compass points to supernatural energy. The needle doesn't lie. There's a portal behind this wall, and it's still open." She pulled a bone fragment from her pocket — her own token, worn smooth from three years of carrying Morris's memory. "I'm going in," she said. Reeves grabbed her arm. "Quinn. We don't have backup. We don't have—" "We have deduction." She shook him off, her grip firm as steel. "Morris died behind a wall like this. I missed the pattern then. I see it now." She pressed her palm against the brick. The mortar crumbled away. The archway breathed. Inside, darkness shaped itself into a corridor that shouldn't fit beneath Camden. The air tasted of old paper and regret. Quinn stepped through. Her boots hit stone that wasn't there five minutes ago. Behind her, Reeves cursed softly, then followed. The corridor stretched longer than the station could allow. Shadows clung to the walls like wet silk. Quinn moved with military precision, her watch ticking against the unnatural silence. She held the compass out. The needle pointed deeper. "Eva," she called. Her voice didn't echo. It vanished. Then, a sound. Pages turning. Quinn turned the corner. Eva Kowalski sat on the floor, her round glasses cracked, her curly red hair wild. The worn leather satchel lay open beside her, full of books that bled ink onto the stone. Her freckled face was pale, her green eyes wide. "Detective," Eva said. "The books told me. The Market sellers opened the arch with a ritual. They wanted to trade with what's on the other side." Quinn crouched beside her. "Who?" "Not who," Eva said. "What. The rift eats people who understand too much. The sellers broke their tokens to escape, but the rules of entry changed when the arch opened. They became the offering." Quinn's brown eyes narrowed. She looked past Eva, into the dark. Something moved there. Not human. Not alive in any way Quinn recognised. She stood, her hand on the compass. The needle spun, then pointed directly at the shape. "Morris," Quinn whispered. The shape shifted. For a second, it wore DS Morris's face. Then it dissolved. Quinn didn't lower the compass. "It's not him. It's what took him." Eva grabbed Quinn's sleeve. "The clique — the ones you've been tracking — they're not criminals. They're researchers who made contact. They opened this rift three years ago. Morris was the price." Quinn's jaw clenched. The leather watch ticked faster. "I see it now," she said. "The supernatural origins I couldn't understand. They weren't hidden. I was looking for crime, not ritual." She turned back to Reeves, who stood trembling at the corridor's mouth. "Call for extraction," Quinn said. "Not police. Museum security. Eva's archives have protocols for this." Reeves nodded, his face ashen. Quinn faced the darkness again. The compass needle pointed steady, true, unafraid. "I missed the pattern," she said to the empty air. "Not anymore."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.07% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1014
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.83% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1014
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"mosaic"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
7
word"shattered"
count1
8
word"silk"
count1
9
word"echo"
count1
10
word"jaw clenched"
count1
highlights
0"mosaic"
1"echoed"
2"etched"
3"weight"
4"silence"
5"scanned"
6"trembled"
7"shattered"
8"silk"
9"echo"
10"jaw clenched"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences99
matches(empty)
99.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences99
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences129
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1019
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount602
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity3.82
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Reeves11
Eva6
Kowalski2
Protective1
Quinn23
Morris2
Camden1
persons
0"Reeves"
1"Eva"
2"Kowalski"
3"Quinn"
4"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1019
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences129
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean16.98
std10.57
cv0.622
sampleLengths
024
112
222
350
413
56
636
71
84
912
1032
1119
1213
1317
1422
1521
1628
179
1814
1916
208
2124
2222
239
2440
2514
2629
274
2830
2921
305
3112
3228
3314
3420
353
3617
3717
3821
399
405
414
4241
4326
445
4534
4611
4712
4816
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"been snapped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs123
matches(empty)
76.41% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences129
ratio0.023
matches
0"A satchel of restricted books had spilled onto the tracks — Eva Kowalski's worn leather bag, she recognised the scuff marks."
1"Mortar crumbled around the bricks — fresh damage, not decay."
2"She pulled a bone fragment from her pocket — her own token, worn smooth from three years of carrying Morris's memory."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount603
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay open beside her,"
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.02321724709784411
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004975124378109453
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences129
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences129
mean7.9
std5.7
cv0.721
sampleLengths
011
16
27
35
47
55
68
79
86
917
106
1121
126
137
145
151
164
1711
1812
195
204
211
224
234
248
253
2613
2716
287
297
305
316
324
332
341
353
3614
375
3810
397
406
4115
425
4323
442
457
4614
478
482
496
63.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3953488372093023
totalSentences129
uniqueOpeners51
86.58% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences77
matches
0"Then, a sound."
1"Then it dissolved."
ratio0.026
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences77
matches
0"Her boots echoed against the"
1"His face shone with sweat"
2"She turned the small brass"
3"She stood, her posture straight"
4"She ran her fingers along"
5"She pointed to the books."
6"She pulled out her phone,"
7"She turned to the archway."
8"She pulled a bone fragment"
9"She shook him off, her"
10"She pressed her palm against"
11"Her boots hit stone that"
12"She held the compass out."
13"Her voice didn't echo."
14"Her freckled face was pale,"
15"She looked past Eva, into"
16"She stood, her hand on"
17"She turned back to Reeves,"
18"she said to the empty"
ratio0.247
24.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences77
matches
0"Quinn stepped onto the cracked"
1"Her boots echoed against the"
2"The air smelled of ozone"
3"DS Reeves adjusted his collar."
4"His face shone with sweat"
5"Quinn crouched beside the vendor"
6"Bone tokens lay scattered across"
7"Brass scales glinted in the"
8"A satchel of restricted books"
9"Reeves kicked a verdigris-stained compass."
10"Quinn picked it up."
11"The needle spun wild, then"
12"She turned the small brass"
13"Reeves shifted his weight."
14"Quinn's jaw tightened."
15"The worn leather watch on"
16"She stood, her posture straight"
17"Salt-and-pepper hair caught the bare"
18"Brown eyes scanned the platform."
19"The bottles lay intact."
ratio0.87
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences14
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Her boots hit stone that wasn't there five minutes ago."
1"The worn leather satchel lay open beside her, full of books that bled ink onto the stone."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She shook, her grip firm as steel"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Quinn whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.32
leniency0.64
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.04
82.9480%