| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 73.54% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1134 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "warmly" | | 2 | "lazily" | | 3 | "utterly" | | 4 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 16.23% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1134 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "comforting" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "profound" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "crystalline" | | 6 | "crystal" | | 7 | "cascading" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "lurch" | | 10 | "unreadable" | | 11 | "echo" | | 12 | "weight" | | 13 | "stark" | | 14 | "warmth" | | 15 | "rhythmic" | | 16 | "echoing" | | 17 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.77% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1128 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Easy, Rory whispered to herself, taking a slow, steady breath." | | 1 | "We are crossing the threshold, Nyx murmured, their voice sounding less like speech and more like a dry autumn wind rustl…" | | 2 | "The path is open, but it does not belong to us, Isolde said, her voice carrying a melodic, unhurried cadence." | | 3 | "Look at that, Rory whispered, her voice dropping to a reverent hush as they pressed deeper into the grove." | | 4 | "It smells like Dymas, Rory muttered, frowning as she touched the Heartstone Pendant again." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 54 | | wordCount | 1128 | | uniqueNames | 25 | | maxNameDensity | 0.98 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 2 | | English | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 2 | | Rory | 11 | | Nyx | 4 | | Carter | 2 | | Isolde | 7 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 1 | | London | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Prince | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | You | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Carter" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "Gluttony" | | 7 | "Evan" | | 8 | "Blade" | | 9 | "Empress" | | 10 | "You" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "London" | | 5 | "Cardiff" | | 6 | "Golden" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like polished obsidian" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.887 | | wordCount | 1128 | | matches | | 0 | "not of leaves, but of cascading ribbons of liquid light" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 45.12 | | std | 24.19 | | cv | 0.536 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 33 | | 4 | 38 | | 5 | 58 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 72 | | 11 | 48 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 81 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 45 | | 16 | 32 | | 17 | 42 | | 18 | 103 | | 19 | 66 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 91 | | 23 | 74 | | 24 | 37 |
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| 93.94% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "is sought" | | 1 | "been burned" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 175 | | matches | | 0 | "was pulsing" | | 1 | "was always freezing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 62 | | ratio | 0.129 | | matches | | 0 | "The half-fae seer made no sound at all; her bare feet brushed over the dew-slicked grass without bending a single blade." | | 1 | "It wasn't merely a change in scenery; it was a physical shift in pressure, like diving deep underwater and feeling the ears pop." | | 2 | "Wildflowers bloomed in riotous profusion across the forest floor—crimson bellflowers, silver-petaled ferns, and massive amber blossoms that turned lazily on their stalks to follow the trio as they walked." | | 3 | "Even in the few seconds since they crossed the boundary, the ambient hum of the city—the distant drone of traffic on the A3—had utterly vanished, swallowed by a profound, cathedral-like silence broken only by the strange, crystalline chiming of unseen insects." | | 4 | "The air grew delightfully warm here, carrying the scent of roasted chestnuts, ripe pomegranates, and caramelized sugar—a rich, decadent aroma that made Rory’s stomach give a sudden, confusing lurch of hunger, despite having eaten a heavy meal just hours before." | | 5 | "Rory didn't flinch, though the mention of fire and past burns brought a bitter taste to the back of her throat—a phantom echo of Evan and the suffocating panic of her old life in Cardiff." | | 6 | "Remember—the path is narrow, and the gluttons of Hel are always watching for a stray soul to sweeten their feast." | | 7 | "Her boots crunched softly on the moss, but beneath the sound, she could hear a deeper, rhythmic thrumming—a heartbeat that didn't belong to her, echoing from the earth itself." |
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| 76.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1146 | | adjectiveStacks | 4 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "wry, tight-lipped smile," | | 2 | "slender, leaf-shaped dagger" | | 3 | "blinding, amber-tinted light" |
| | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.03315881326352531 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013961605584642234 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 62 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 62 | | mean | 18.19 | | std | 9.92 | | cv | 0.545 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 41 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 41 | | 27 | 40 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 35 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 32 | | 44 | 35 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 92.47% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5645161290322581 | | totalSentences | 62 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "We are crossing the threshold," | | 1 | "Her silver hair, reaching all" | | 2 | "You and your riddles, Isolde." | | 3 | "It wasn't merely a change" | | 4 | "It smells like Dymas, Rory" | | 5 | "She reached out with a" | | 6 | "You carry iron and fire," | | 7 | "She clenched her right hand" | | 8 | "It was always freezing to" | | 9 | "We keep moving, Rory said," | | 10 | "We find the tear, we" | | 11 | "You measure eternity in noodle" | | 12 | "They pushed deeper into the" | | 13 | "It was a place designed" | | 14 | "Her boots crunched softly on" | | 15 | "She could feel the shiver" |
| | ratio | 0.258 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Rory stopped, her hand automatically" | | 2 | "The shade's faintly glowing violet" | | 3 | "We are crossing the threshold," | | 4 | "Time does not walk straight" | | 5 | "The half-fae seer made no" | | 6 | "Her silver hair, reaching all" | | 7 | "The path is open, but" | | 8 | "Rory offered a wry, tight-lipped" | | 9 | "You and your riddles, Isolde." | | 10 | "The world dropped away." | | 11 | "It wasn't merely a change" | | 12 | "The gray London drizzle vanished" | | 13 | "Wildflowers bloomed in riotous profusion" | | 14 | "Isolde had spoken the truth" | | 15 | "The air grew delightfully warm" | | 16 | "It smells like Dymas, Rory" | | 17 | "The pendant was pulsing faster" | | 18 | "A place of excess, Nyx" | | 19 | "The Prince of Gluttony leaves" |
| | ratio | 0.677 | |
| 80.65% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "Even in the few seconds" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 11.66% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park grew suddenly heavy, smelling of crushed pine needles, ozone, and a rich, earthen sweetness that belonged to no season Aurora recognize…" | | 1 | "The shade's faintly glowing violet eyes scanned the perimeter, their form shifting like smoke caught in a draft." | | 2 | "We are crossing the threshold, Nyx murmured, their voice sounding less like speech and more like a dry autumn wind rustling through dead leaves." | | 3 | "Her silver hair, reaching all the way to her waist, seemed to catch a light source that wasn't there, shimmering with the pale lavender hue of her eyes." | | 4 | "Ahead of them, a massive weeping willow stood at the edge of a crystal-clear spring, its drooping branches woven not of leaves, but of cascading ribbons of liqu…" | | 5 | "The air grew delightfully warm here, carrying the scent of roasted chestnuts, ripe pomegranates, and caramelized sugar—a rich, decadent aroma that made Rory’s s…" | | 6 | "A place of excess, Nyx observed, their shadow-form drifting closer to the water's surface, where the ripples reflected a sky that didn't match the one above." | | 7 | "We keep moving, Rory said, her voice dropping into the cool, pragmatic tone she used when she had to deliver late-night food packages to sketchy alleyways or fa…" | | 8 | "Her boots crunched softly on the moss, but beneath the sound, she could hear a deeper, rhythmic thrumming—a heartbeat that didn't belong to her, echoing from th…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |