Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCYH7EV5DSX0N8FXEZ94ZK7

Run Details

Duration:
15.4s
Cost:
$0.017410
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the leaded glass of The Raven’s Nest, blurring the streetlights of Soho into long, amber streaks. Inside, the tavern smelled of spilled stout, pipe smoke, and the wet wool of rain-soaked coats. Aurora leaned against the worn mahogany counter, tracing a circle in the condensation on her pint glass. Her pale thumb hooked into the cuff of her sweater, covering the crescent-shaped mark on her left wrist. Five years since she stepped off the morning train from Cardiff with forty pounds in her pocket and a bruised collarbone. Five years of working double shifts at the Golden Empress, dodging her father’s frantic phone calls, and sleeping in the cramped studio flat above this very taproom. The brass bell attached to the heavy oak front door chimed. Cold air swept through the room, snapping the fire in the brick hearth. Aurora glanced up, expectantly scanning for Silas to return with the rest of the inventory ledger. Instead, her eyes caught on the silhouette standing in the doorway. The woman shook out an umbrella with a sharp, practiced flick of her wrist. She wore an ivory cashmere coat that caught the low amber light of the chandelier, tailored so sharply it seemed to cut through the tavern's dim haze. Her blonde hair fell in severe, lacquered waves over one shoulder. Aurora stopped breathing. The pint glass slipped an inch in her grip. "Eva?" The woman turned. Her tailored shoulders stiffened before a smooth, rehearsed smile slid into place. She stepped over the threshold, heels clicking against the sawdust-dusted floorboards with terrifying precision. She looked at Aurora's faded denim jacket, the faint yellow grease stain near the pocket from the restaurant's kitchen, and the dark circles smudged beneath her bright blue eyes. "Rory." Eva’s voice was lower than Aurora remembered, devoid of the high, bubbling laughter that used to echo off the stone walls of their Cardiff dorm room. "Good god. It really is you." "What are you doing here?" Aurora wiped her damp palm on her jeans, stepping back from the bar. "This place isn't... you don't come to Soho." "A client meeting ran late at the firm on Greek Street." Eva gestured vaguely toward the window, her gold bracelets clinking together like tiny coins. "I needed a drink while I waited for my driver. The neon sign was bright." "The green neon." Aurora gestured toward the window. "Yeah. Silas keeps it on." Eva slid onto a high oak stool, her coat parting to reveal a silk blouse the color of crushed pearls. She didn't hug Aurora. She didn't lean in. She simply sat, occupying the space with an effortless, cool authority that made Aurora’s ribs ache. "I'll have a gin and tonic," Eva said. "Hendrick’s, if you have it." "We have Gordon's. Or whatever Silas distills in the tub upstairs when he thinks no one is looking." Aurora reached under the bar, grabbing a clean glass. Her hands shook, just a fraction, so she pinned her elbow against her ribcage. "Gordon's it is." She poured the shot, the clear liquor sloshing against the rim. She slid the glass across the counter. Eva picked it up, taking a measured sip without wincing. "Still making terrible split-second decisions, I see." "I work here, Eva. It's a job." "You were going to be a barrister, Rory. Your father had the chamber lined up." "My father had my entire life lined up. Including who I spoke to, how I sat, and who I let touch me." Aurora leaned her forearms on the bar, staring directly into the cool grey eyes that used to belong to her best friend. "You helped me pack my bags, remember? You bought my ticket at Queen Street station." "I gave you two hundred pounds and told you to hide for a month," Eva corrected softly. She set the gin down, the heavy glass striking the wood with a dull thud. "I didn't expect you to scrub floors in Soho for half a decade while your life decayed." "I don't scrub floors. I deliver food. And I sleep without looking over my shoulder." Aurora picked up a bar rag, twisting the damp fabric until her knuckles turned white. "What happened to you, Ev? You look like a photograph in a magazine." Eva let out a quiet, breathy laugh that lacked any real heat. "I grew up. Someone had to." "You used to sleep in your paint-splattered overalls," Aurora said. "You used to steal my clothes and cry when the rain ruined your sketches." "I burned those sketches." The silence stretched between them, thick and heavy, competing with the soft jazz playing from the old valve radio near the taps. "You burned them?" "They didn't pay the rent on my flat in Kensington," Eva said, resting her manicured chin in her palm. "Art is a luxury for people who don't care about starving. I took a paralegal job at Sterling & Vance. Then I made partner." "You went into law?" Aurora stared, the rag falling limp in her hand. "You hated the law. You told me my father's friends were parasites." "Your father’s friends bought my first apartment, Rory." Eva picked up her drink again, turning the glass slowly in her hand. "Or rather, their firm did. The work is clean. The money is absurd. And nobody hurts me." The last words hung in the air, weighted with a sharp, jagged truth. Aurora looked down at her wrists. The small crescent scar caught the bar's warm light. Eva had been in the bathroom of that Cardiff apartment the night Evan threw the glass bottle against the doorframe. Eva had held the ice pack to Aurora's face while they waited for the bleeding to stop. "Evan came looking for you," Eva said quietly. "Six months after you left." Aurora's spine snapped straight. "What?" "He came to my studio. He was drunk. He thought I knew where you were." Eva reached into her leather handbag, pulled out a silver cigarette case, then paused, looking at the *No Smoking* sign nailed to the brick wall. She snapped the case shut with a sharp crack. "He broke my easel, Rory." Aurora’s mouth opened, but no sound came out. "I didn't tell him a thing," Eva continued, her voice flat, devoid of emotion. "Not because I was protecting you. But because I realized, watching him tear through my canvas, that you left me behind to clean up the wreck." "I had to run, Eva. He would have killed me." "I know." Eva looked at her, really looked at her, eyes scanning the worn sweater, the unstyled black hair falling around Aurora's shoulders, the exhaustion carved into her jawline. "I didn't blame you for running. I blamed you for never calling. I waited by the phone for two years. You vanished into the fog and left me holding the bag with your family, with him, with everyone." "I was trying to protect you." "You were coward," Eva spat gently. The word hit harder for its lack of volume. "You were terrified, and so you hid. And you're still hiding." Silas emerged from the back room, his left leg dragging slightly against the floorboards. He stopped at the end of the counter, his hazel eyes flickering from Eva’s high-end coat to Aurora’s rigid posture. His grey-streaked eyebrow twitched, reading the atmospheric pressure in the room in a second flat. "Everything alright here, Rory?" Silas asked, his voice a low rumble. He adjusted his signet ring with his thumb. "Fine, Silas," Aurora murmured without looking at him. "Just catching up with an old acquaintance." Silas nodded slowly, picking up a tray of clean glasses. "Right then. I'll be downstairs sorting the casks." He gave Eva a long, assessing look before disappearing back down the wooden steps, his limp creating an uneven rhythm that faded into the cellar. Eva watched him leave. "Interesting boss." "He's good to me," Aurora said defendly. "He's an old man in a dying pub." Eva reached into her coat, pulling out a slim black leather wallet. She extracted a fifty-pound note and laid it flat on the mahogany counter between them. "I have to go. My driver just pulled up." Aurora looked at the crisp paper note. "The drink is three pounds." "Keep the change, Rory. Buy yourself a sweater that doesn't have holes in the elbows." Eva stood up, smoothing the front of her ivory coat. She picked up her umbrella, her hand hovering over the handle. For a fraction of a second, the polished facade cracked. Her eyes softened, catching Aurora's bright blue gaze, and for a heartbeat, the girl from Cardiff—the one who used to drink cheap cider on the bay and dream of Paris—was there behind the glass. "I loved you, you know," Eva whispered. "You were my sister." "Eva, wait—" "Don't." Eva pulled her gloves on, her posture rigid once more. "We're different people now. Time did its job." She turned on her heel and pushed through the heavy oak door. The bell chimed, a bright, lonely sound. Cold rain swept into the entryway before the door clicked shut, leaving only the smell of wet pavement and expensive perfume lingering in the warm draft. Aurora stood behind the bar, her fingers resting on the crisp edges of the fifty-pound note. Outside, the red taillights of a black saloon car illuminated the sheets of falling rain before disappearing down Greek Street, swallowed whole by the London night.
created_at"2026-07-25T15:33:06.661Z" 7/25/2026, 3:33:06 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
36.07% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"Eva gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"Eva corrected softly [softly]"
2"Eva said quietly [quietly]"
3"Eva spat gently [gently]"
4"Aurora said defendly [defendly]"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.41
leniency0.82
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.164
71.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1580
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count2
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count2
5
adverb"gently"
count1
6
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"sharply"
2"really"
3"softly"
4"slowly"
5"gently"
6"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1580
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count2
2
word"echo"
count1
3
word"silk"
count1
4
word"effortless"
count1
5
word"measured"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"eyebrow"
count1
8
word"facade"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"scanning"
2"echo"
3"silk"
4"effortless"
5"measured"
6"silence"
7"eyebrow"
8"facade"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences81
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences117
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords2
totalWords1578
ratio0.001
matches
0"No Smoking"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions66
wordCount1039
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.41
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Cardiff4
Golden1
Empress1
Silas4
Aurora25
Eva23
Evan1
Paris1
Greek1
Street1
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Empress"
3"Silas"
4"Aurora"
5"Eva"
6"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"Golden"
3"Paris"
4"Greek"
5"Street"
6"London"
globalScore0.297
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1578
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean28.18
std19.53
cv0.693
sampleLengths
035
183
224
327
452
512
61
758
833
926
1040
1113
1244
1313
1444
1518
1617
177
1815
1959
2049
2143
2218
2324
244
2522
263
2743
2825
2938
3013
3152
3213
335
3454
358
3640
3710
3867
396
4026
4149
4219
4315
4443
456
467
4744
4812
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs170
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences117
ratio0.009
matches
0"Her eyes softened, catching Aurora's bright blue gaze, and for a heartbeat, the girl from Cardiff—the one who used to drink cheap cider on the bay and dream of Paris—was there behind the glass."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1048
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.02862595419847328
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.01431297709923664
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences117
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences117
mean13.49
std8.67
cv0.643
sampleLengths
019
116
217
318
421
527
611
713
816
911
1014
1127
1211
133
149
151
163
1712
1814
1929
2027
216
2218
238
2425
2515
268
275
2820
294
304
3116
328
335
3427
3514
363
3711
387
3910
407
417
4215
4344
4415
4517
4615
4717
4830
4913
48.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.358974358974359
totalSentences117
uniqueOpeners42
42.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"Instead, her eyes caught on"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences78
matches
0"Her pale thumb hooked into"
1"She wore an ivory cashmere"
2"Her blonde hair fell in"
3"Her tailored shoulders stiffened before"
4"She stepped over the threshold,"
5"She looked at Aurora's faded"
6"She didn't hug Aurora."
7"She didn't lean in."
8"She simply sat, occupying the"
9"Her hands shook, just a"
10"She poured the shot, the"
11"She slid the glass across"
12"She set the gin down,"
13"She snapped the case shut"
14"He stopped at the end"
15"His grey-streaked eyebrow twitched, reading"
16"He adjusted his signet ring"
17"He gave Eva a long,"
18"She extracted a fifty-pound note"
19"She picked up her umbrella,"
ratio0.282
11.28% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences78
matches
0"Rain lashed against the leaded"
1"Aurora leaned against the worn"
2"Her pale thumb hooked into"
3"The brass bell attached to"
4"Aurora glanced up, expectantly scanning"
5"The woman shook out an"
6"She wore an ivory cashmere"
7"Her blonde hair fell in"
8"Aurora stopped breathing."
9"The pint glass slipped an"
10"The woman turned."
11"Her tailored shoulders stiffened before"
12"She stepped over the threshold,"
13"She looked at Aurora's faded"
14"Eva’s voice was lower than"
15"Aurora wiped her damp palm"
16"Eva gestured vaguely toward the"
17"Aurora gestured toward the window"
18"Eva slid onto a high"
19"She didn't hug Aurora."
ratio0.897
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She simply sat, occupying the space with an effortless, cool authority that made Aurora’s ribs ache."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Eva gestured vaguely, her gold bracelets clinking together like tiny coins"
1"Aurora stared, the rag falling limp in her hand"
2"Eva continued, her voice flat, devoid of emotion"
3"Silas asked, his voice a low rumble"
4"Eva pulled, her posture rigid once more"
68.03% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Eva corrected softly (correct)"
1"Eva continued (continue)"
2"Eva spat gently (spit)"
3"Aurora murmured (murmur)"
4"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.18
leniency0.361
rawRatio0.455
effectiveRatio0.164
78.5013%