| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.538 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.65% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 749 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 46.60% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 749 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "velvet" | | 2 | "footfall" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "crystalline" | | 6 | "intensity" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 56 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 56 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 730 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.22% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Behind her, Eva choked back a laugh that sounded wrong, brittle." |
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| 35.84% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 657 | | uniqueNames | 3 | | maxNameDensity | 2.28 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.358 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 2.74 | | wordCount | 730 | | matches | | 0 | "not upward but in spiraling arches, heavy with grapes the size of fists, sk" | | 1 | "not fruit but crystalline vessels filled with smoking liquid" |
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| 59.14% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "spirals that cast" | | 1 | "carrying that wind" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 17.8 | | std | 12.34 | | cv | 0.693 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 39 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 34 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 45 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 52 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 37 |
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| 99.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | |
| 95.01% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 127 | | matches | | 0 | "was staring" | | 1 | "was already vomiting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 19 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 62 | | ratio | 0.242 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed first—thick with honey and smoke and something that made her teeth itch." | | 1 | "The ground was not ground—soft, yielding, like stepping across a giant's velvet tongue." | | 2 | "Somewhere in the distance, music played—strings plucked too slowly, voices harmonizing in a language that hurt to understand." | | 3 | "They entered a vineyard where vines grew not upward but in spiraling arches, heavy with grapes the size of fists, skins translucent and glowing with internal light—gold, violet, deep arterial red." | | 4 | "The sky was wrong—warm amber, yes, but also layered, like looking up through shallow water." | | 5 | "At it sat figures—some human, some not—gorging." | | 6 | "A chef—no, not human, too tall, too many arms—moved among them, offering platters with a smile that showed too many teeth." | | 7 | "Eva pulled Rory back into shadow—though in this realm, shadow was Nyx's domain, and he expanded around them like a cloak." | | 8 | "Rory's boots—stolen from her delivery job, practical—sank into soil that pulsed like a heartbeat." | | 9 | "They followed it to a clearing where a competition was underway—cooks battling with knives that screamed, with spices that exploded in clouds of color and emotion." | | 10 | "One chef wept as he chopped onions; another laughed with manic intensity as he seared something that might have once been human." | | 11 | "Rory watched a woman—young, maybe Rory's own age—taste a sauce and immediately begin eating her own hands, smiling all the while." | | 12 | "But Rory was staring at the sky now, at those geometric clouds, and she realized with a jolt that some of them were eyes—vast, lidless, observing." | | 13 | "Rory stepped closer to the feast's edge, close enough to smell the food—every smell she had ever loved, amplified, twisted." | | 14 | "Rory led them onward, deeper into the realm of never-enough, her blade cold against her ribs, her heart—normal, human, beating—hammering with the knowledge that leaving this place unsatisfied might be the hardest thing she had ever done." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 680 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.039705882352941174 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007352941176470588 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 62 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 62 | | mean | 11.77 | | std | 7.98 | | cv | 0.678 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 26 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 26 |
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| 73.12% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.46774193548387094 | | totalSentences | 62 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere in the distance, music" | | 1 | "Then they saw the feast." |
| | ratio | 0.04 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "They entered a vineyard where" | | 1 | "It splattered, and the ground" | | 2 | "They moved deeper." | | 3 | "She touched her blade, hidden" | | 4 | "They followed it to a" | | 5 | "She pulled her coat tighter." | | 6 | "she said, her voice steady" | | 7 | "Her mouth watered." | | 8 | "She bit her lip hard," | | 9 | "she said, mostly to herself" |
| | ratio | 0.2 | |
| 50.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 41 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pulled her scarf over" | | 1 | "The air changed first—thick with" | | 2 | "The grove was gone." | | 3 | "Nyx materialized from a pocket" | | 4 | "Rory touched the pendant at" | | 5 | "The crimson stone pulsed, warm" | | 6 | "The ground was not ground—soft," | | 7 | "Each footfall released scents: roasting" | | 8 | "Eva grabbed Rory's arm." | | 9 | "The path widened." | | 10 | "They entered a vineyard where" | | 11 | "Rory plucked one." | | 12 | "The skin yielded like overripe" | | 13 | "Nyx drifted closer, his shadow-form" | | 14 | "Rory dropped the grape." | | 15 | "It splattered, and the ground" | | 16 | "They moved deeper." | | 17 | "The sky was wrong—warm amber," | | 18 | "Clouds drifted in impossible geometries," | | 19 | "A table stretched for miles," |
| | ratio | 0.82 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed first—thick with honey and smoke and something that made her teeth itch." | | 1 | "Somewhere in the distance, music played—strings plucked too slowly, voices harmonizing in a language that hurt to understand." | | 2 | "Clouds drifted in impossible geometries, cubes and spirals that cast shadows in directions that made Rory's eyes ache." | | 3 | "Food steamed in impossible abundance: towers of pastry that collapsed and rebuilt themselves, meats that twitched with residual life, fruits that screamed softl…" | | 4 | "A chef—no, not human, too tall, too many arms—moved among them, offering platters with a smile that showed too many teeth." | | 5 | "Rory led them onward, deeper into the realm of never-enough, her blade cold against her ribs, her heart—normal, human, beating—hammering with the knowledge that…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx drifted, his shadow-form leaving frost on the nearest vine" | | 1 | "Nyx said, his voice carrying that wind-whisper quality" | | 2 | "she said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands" | | 3 | "she said, mostly to herself" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 1 | "Nyx agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.462 | | leniency | 0.923 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.308 | |