Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCYJCXTFY4SWKAN4BF21N8D

Run Details

Duration:
13.0s
Cost:
$0.005823
Provider:
BaseTen

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pulled her scarf over her mouth and stepped past the boundary stones. The air changed first—thick with honey and smoke and something that made her teeth itch. Behind her, Eva choked back a laugh that sounded wrong, brittle. "Where are we?" Rory turned. The grove was gone. Ancient oaks replaced by trees with bark like polished obsidian, leaves that chimed like distant bells in a breeze she could not feel. Nyx materialized from a pocket of darkness between two trees, his violet eyes bright. "Dymas. The realm of excess." Rory touched the pendant at her throat. The crimson stone pulsed, warm against her skin. They walked. The ground was not ground—soft, yielding, like stepping across a giant's velvet tongue. Each footfall released scents: roasting meat, fermenting wine, sugar burning to caramel. Eva grabbed Rory's arm. "Listen." Somewhere in the distance, music played—strings plucked too slowly, voices harmonizing in a language that hurt to understand. The path widened. They entered a vineyard where vines grew not upward but in spiraling arches, heavy with grapes the size of fists, skins translucent and glowing with internal light—gold, violet, deep arterial red. Rory plucked one. The skin yielded like overripe flesh, and sweet liquid sprayed her wrist, sticky and hot. "Don't eat that." Nyx drifted closer, his shadow-form leaving frost on the nearest vine. "The wine of Dymas doesn't quench. It demands." Rory dropped the grape. It splattered, and the ground absorbed it with a sound like lips parting. They moved deeper. The sky was wrong—warm amber, yes, but also layered, like looking up through shallow water. Clouds drifted in impossible geometries, cubes and spirals that cast shadows in directions that made Rory's eyes ache. Then they saw the feast. A table stretched for miles, hewn from dark wood that sweat with condensation. At it sat figures—some human, some not—gorging. Food steamed in impossible abundance: towers of pastry that collapsed and rebuilt themselves, meats that twitched with residual life, fruits that screamed softly when bitten. A chef—no, not human, too tall, too many arms—moved among them, offering platters with a smile that showed too many teeth. Rory's stomach turned, though she had not eaten in hours and now, perversely, she was starving. "Helbound souls," Nyx said, his voice carrying that wind-whisper quality. "Contracted. They cook for eternity, and they feast for eternity, and neither ever ends." Eva pulled Rory back into shadow—though in this realm, shadow was Nyx's domain, and he expanded around them like a cloak. "Keep walking," he said. They did. Past orchards where trees bore not fruit but crystalline vessels filled with smoking liquid. Past gardens where flowers turned to watch them pass, petals like eyelashes blinking in slow, curious rhythm. Rory's boots—stolen from her delivery job, practical—sank into soil that pulsed like a heartbeat. She touched her blade, hidden beneath her coat. The moonsilver was ice-cold, and for that she was grateful. The music grew louder. They followed it to a clearing where a competition was underway—cooks battling with knives that screamed, with spices that exploded in clouds of color and emotion. One chef wept as he chopped onions; another laughed with manic intensity as he seared something that might have once been human. Rory watched a woman—young, maybe Rory's own age—taste a sauce and immediately begin eating her own hands, smiling all the while. "Don't stare," Nyx warned. But Rory was staring at the sky now, at those geometric clouds, and she realized with a jolt that some of them were eyes—vast, lidless, observing. She pulled her coat tighter. The pendant burned hotter. "We need to find the portal," she said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands. Nyx nodded, shadow rippling. "It's near. The stone pulls toward rifts." Eva was already vomiting behind a tree that wept syrup. Rory stepped closer to the feast's edge, close enough to smell the food—every smell she had ever loved, amplified, twisted. Her mouth watered. She bit her lip hard, tasted iron, and turned away. "There's wonder here," she said, mostly to herself. "There is," Nyx agreed, "and that's the danger. Dymas doesn't hurt you with pain. It hurts you with want." Rory led them onward, deeper into the realm of never-enough, her blade cold against her ribs, her heart—normal, human, beating—hammering with the knowledge that leaving this place unsatisfied might be the hardest thing she had ever done.
created_at"2026-07-25T15:33:45.027Z" 7/25/2026, 3:33:45 PM
model"thinkingmachines/inkling-20260715"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency455
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time12484
tokens_prompt1763
tokens_completion1174
native_tokens_prompt1712
native_tokens_completion1015
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning0
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
num_fetches(null)
web_search_engine(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
service_tier(null)
usage0.00582275
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"ba2df08c-c0a0-4e0e-9f31-d79a9c475b70"
id"chatcmpl-6b5c2657d045422fa6c560ff323f096a"
is_byokfalse
latency443
model_permaslug"thinkingmachines/inkling-20260715"
provider_name"BaseTen"
status200
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.18.0; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
request_id"req-1784993625-3wVctGgJQiGvaUsSjCh9"
session_id(null)
preset_id(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1784993625-gchNNW6ExzJczOiYMlo8"
upstream_id"chatcmpl-6b5c2657d045422fa6c560ff323f096a"
total_cost0.00582275
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"BaseTen"
response_cache_source_id(null)
data_region"global"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.538
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.65% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount749
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
46.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount749
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"velvet"
count1
2
word"footfall"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"crystalline"
count1
6
word"intensity"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"velvet"
2"footfall"
3"stomach"
4"whisper"
5"crystalline"
6"intensity"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences56
matches
0"was grateful"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences56
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences62
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords730
ratio0
matches(empty)
97.22% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Behind her, Eva choked back a laugh that sounded wrong, brittle."
35.84% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount657
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity2.28
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Rory15
Nyx7
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Nyx"
places(empty)
globalScore0.358
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.74
wordCount730
matches
0"not upward but in spiraling arches, heavy with grapes the size of fists, sk"
1"not fruit but crystalline vessels filled with smoking liquid"
59.14% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences62
matches
0"spirals that cast"
1"carrying that wind"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean17.8
std12.34
cv0.693
sampleLengths
039
13
229
319
415
52
625
75
818
934
1018
1122
1217
133
1433
155
1645
1721
1816
1924
2021
214
222
2331
2414
2518
2652
2721
284
2926
305
314
3217
3311
3410
3520
363
3710
388
3919
4037
99.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"was gone"
95.01% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs127
matches
0"was staring"
1"was already vomiting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount19
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences15
totalSentences62
ratio0.242
matches
0"The air changed first—thick with honey and smoke and something that made her teeth itch."
1"The ground was not ground—soft, yielding, like stepping across a giant's velvet tongue."
2"Somewhere in the distance, music played—strings plucked too slowly, voices harmonizing in a language that hurt to understand."
3"They entered a vineyard where vines grew not upward but in spiraling arches, heavy with grapes the size of fists, skins translucent and glowing with internal light—gold, violet, deep arterial red."
4"The sky was wrong—warm amber, yes, but also layered, like looking up through shallow water."
5"At it sat figures—some human, some not—gorging."
6"A chef—no, not human, too tall, too many arms—moved among them, offering platters with a smile that showed too many teeth."
7"Eva pulled Rory back into shadow—though in this realm, shadow was Nyx's domain, and he expanded around them like a cloak."
8"Rory's boots—stolen from her delivery job, practical—sank into soil that pulsed like a heartbeat."
9"They followed it to a clearing where a competition was underway—cooks battling with knives that screamed, with spices that exploded in clouds of color and emotion."
10"One chef wept as he chopped onions; another laughed with manic intensity as he seared something that might have once been human."
11"Rory watched a woman—young, maybe Rory's own age—taste a sauce and immediately begin eating her own hands, smiling all the while."
12"But Rory was staring at the sky now, at those geometric clouds, and she realized with a jolt that some of them were eyes—vast, lidless, observing."
13"Rory stepped closer to the feast's edge, close enough to smell the food—every smell she had ever loved, amplified, twisted."
14"Rory led them onward, deeper into the realm of never-enough, her blade cold against her ribs, her heart—normal, human, beating—hammering with the knowledge that leaving this place unsatisfied might be the hardest thing she had ever done."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount680
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.039705882352941174
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.007352941176470588
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences62
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences62
mean11.77
std7.98
cv0.678
sampleLengths
013
115
211
33
42
54
623
714
85
97
108
112
1213
1312
144
151
1618
173
1831
193
2015
2114
228
234
2413
253
2615
2718
285
2913
307
3125
3221
3316
3410
3514
3621
374
382
3914
4017
4114
428
4310
444
4526
4622
4721
484
4926
73.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.46774193548387094
totalSentences62
uniqueOpeners29
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences50
matches
0"Somewhere in the distance, music"
1"Then they saw the feast."
ratio0.04
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences50
matches
0"They entered a vineyard where"
1"It splattered, and the ground"
2"They moved deeper."
3"She touched her blade, hidden"
4"They followed it to a"
5"She pulled her coat tighter."
6"she said, her voice steady"
7"Her mouth watered."
8"She bit her lip hard,"
9"she said, mostly to herself"
ratio0.2
50.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount41
totalSentences50
matches
0"Rory pulled her scarf over"
1"The air changed first—thick with"
2"The grove was gone."
3"Nyx materialized from a pocket"
4"Rory touched the pendant at"
5"The crimson stone pulsed, warm"
6"The ground was not ground—soft,"
7"Each footfall released scents: roasting"
8"Eva grabbed Rory's arm."
9"The path widened."
10"They entered a vineyard where"
11"Rory plucked one."
12"The skin yielded like overripe"
13"Nyx drifted closer, his shadow-form"
14"Rory dropped the grape."
15"It splattered, and the ground"
16"They moved deeper."
17"The sky was wrong—warm amber,"
18"Clouds drifted in impossible geometries,"
19"A table stretched for miles,"
ratio0.82
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The air changed first—thick with honey and smoke and something that made her teeth itch."
1"Somewhere in the distance, music played—strings plucked too slowly, voices harmonizing in a language that hurt to understand."
2"Clouds drifted in impossible geometries, cubes and spirals that cast shadows in directions that made Rory's eyes ache."
3"Food steamed in impossible abundance: towers of pastry that collapsed and rebuilt themselves, meats that twitched with residual life, fruits that screamed softl…"
4"A chef—no, not human, too tall, too many arms—moved among them, offering platters with a smile that showed too many teeth."
5"Rory led them onward, deeper into the realm of never-enough, her blade cold against her ribs, her heart—normal, human, beating—hammering with the knowledge that…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Nyx drifted, his shadow-form leaving frost on the nearest vine"
1"Nyx said, his voice carrying that wind-whisper quality"
2"she said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands"
3"she said, mostly to herself"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Nyx warned (warn)"
1"Nyx agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.462
leniency0.923
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.308
71.4193%