Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCYP47CNXFP952G1J0QD2RS

Run Details

Duration:
11.5s
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$0.007777
Provider:
BaseTen

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolts on Eva's flat snapped back in rapid succession—clack, cluck, thunk—before Aurora Carter pulled the chain taut and cracked the door. Lucien Moreau filled the frame like smoke that had learned to wear charcoal. She hadn't seen him in eight months, not since that winter morning in Marble Arch where he had walked away with her heart caught in his teeth and her pride bleeding on the cobblestones. He wore a three-piece suit, slate-dark, pressed to knife edges that hugged his narrow hips. His platinum hair gleamed in the hallway's dead bulb, slicked back hard from his high forehead. One eye glowed like captured honey; the other pooled black, dead to light but tracking her with a hunger that made her throat close. She didn't open the door wider. "Eva's not here," she said. "Bonne nuit, Rory." That voice still hit her like warm cognac sliding down her spine—smooth, accented, dangerous. "She went to Manchester for some kind of conference. Left Tuesday." "So you are here alone?" "I'm not letting you in." His mouth quirked, one corner dragging upward with old familiarity. "You already did." She glanced down. The chain hung loose in her fingers, unhooked without her remembering the motion. "Damn." "Your security habits remain excellent." The hallway smelled of turmeric and old plaster. Behind her, Eva's books sprawled across every surface—stacks of grimoires in dead languages, research notes pinned with rusted tacks, Ptolemy curled on a tower of folklore texts near the radiator. The flat was one cramped bedroom above a curry house, three deadbolts for a reason, and now those deadbolts meant nothing because Lucien was already stepping across the threshold with that ivory-handled cane tapping a rhythm she used to anticipate in her sleep. She retreated until her spine hit the kitchen counter. The marble was cold through her delivery jacket. "Get out, Lucien." "Non." He closed the door with his hip, the deadbolts sliding home behind him with soft, final clicks. "We talk." "We talked. Eight months ago, you talked and I listened and then you disappeared with my—" She stopped, swallowed hard, her blue eyes locking on his mismatched ones. "With nothing. You left with nothing of mine except some bruised memories." "Not nothing." He leaned the cane against the wall—ivory gleamed, the hidden blade within silent for now. His charcoal sleeves were rolled to the forearms, revealing pale skin traced with faint silver veins that pulsed when he was angry or aroused. Tonight she couldn't tell which. "You smell like cardamom," he said, stepping closer, "and fear." "I smell like I delivered forty-seven orders of chicken tikka masala tonight, and if you come closer I'll put this knife in you." She grabbed a chef's knife from the magnetic strip. The blade was dull from Eva's occasional vegetable chopping, but the point was sharp. Lucien paused three feet away. His black eye seemed to absorb the lamplight; the amber one caught it like molten gold. "That is a kitchen knife, chérie." "Still sharp enough for a half-demon's heart if I aim right." "You aim for the left side, yes? Behind the ribs?" "Don't flatter yourself." He smiled then, and her stomach dropped like a faulty elevator. "You remember my anatomy. Flattering indeed." "Get out." "Rory." He said her name like a prayer and a curse intertwined. "You think I came here for old times?" "I think you came because you're bored and feel like reopening old wounds." "Perhaps." He moved closer—slow, deliberate, each step measured like a predator testing ice. "Or perhaps I came because eight months of silence has not cured what you did to me in Marble Arch." She tightened her grip on the knife. The crescent scar on her left wrist—pale, old, from a childhood fall—itched with phantom heat. "What I did? You lied about being a fixer for the human council. You lied about the demon contract in your blood. You lied about—" "About loving you?" His voice dropped, rough as gravel soaked in whiskey. "That was never a lie." The air left her lungs in a sharp exhale. He was close now, close enough that she could smell the cedar and iron that always clung to him—something wild beneath the expensive cologne. His height put his eyes level with hers if she straightened, but she stayed hunched, defensive, the knife a useless barrier. "You have a strange way of showing it." "And you have a strange way of hiding." His gaze dropped to her mouth, then back to her eyes, and that amber eye burned with something that made her knees weaken. "Eight months, Aurora Carter, and you still wear my absence like a second coat." She shoved him then—not hard, but hard enough that his shoulder hit the wall of books. One of Eva's scrolls tumbled, parchment rasping against the floor. "Don't." Her voice cracked like cheap porcelain. "Don't come into her flat with your suit and your cane and talk about absence like you didn't cause it." He righted himself with fluid grace, adjusting his lapel with one long finger. The black eye seemed to glitter with something not quite human—amusement, or pain, she couldn't parse it. "I came to warn you," he said. That stopped her cold. "Warn me?" "Evan is dead." She blinked, the knife lowering half an inch. "My ex? The one who—" "Yes. Found in the Thames with his throat opened. Not human work, but not demon either. Something in between." She should have felt relief. She should have felt vindicated. Instead she felt nothing but a hollow echo, because Lucien was still staring at her like she was the only living thing in a dead world. "Why are you telling me?" "Because his killer asked about you. By name. Aurora Carter, delivery girl, living above a bar in Shoreditch with a flatmate who dabbles in old magic." He stepped closer, ignoring the knife that now rested against his charcoal waistcoat. "That sounds like someone who needs protection, non?" She pushed the blade harder, feeling the resistance of fabric and then flesh—just a prick, but he flinched, his breath hissing through perfect teeth. "Don't touch me," she said, her voice barely audible. "Then don't lie to me about not wanting it." The tension between them snapped like an overwound clock. She dropped the knife. It clattered against the linoleum, skidding under the radiator where Ptolemy startled awake with an indignant yowl. Then she was in his arms, or he was in hers—she couldn't tell which came first. His mouth found hers with the desperation of a drowning man breaking surface, all teeth and tongue and eight months of stored silence. He tasted like smoke and peppermint, like winter nights in hotel rooms she pretended hadn't happened. She pulled him down onto Eva's cramped sofa, books sliding to the floor in rustling avalanches around them. His cane fell with a heavy thunk. His hands were everywhere—her waist, her hair, the curve of her hip through her delivery jacket—while hers fisted in his platinum hair, dragging his mouth back to hers with a violence that surprised them both. "God, Rory," he breathed against her jaw, his accent thickening with emotion. "You still wear that crescent scar like a medal." "Shut up." She bit his lower lip, hard, and he groaned—deep, guttural, half-demon and all heat. The books scattered. Ptolemy watched with judgmental green eyes from atop a teetering stack of occult texts. Outside, Brick Lane hummed with late-night traffic and curry house exhaust fans. Inside, Aurora Carter stopped running, just for now, with her heart hammering against Lucien Moreau's and her lips still burning from the taste of everything they had refused to say.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her voice cracked like [like]"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.271
leniency0.542
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.042
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1296
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1296
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"marble"
count3
1
word"down her spine"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"magnetic"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"measured"
count1
7
word"predator"
count1
8
word"silence"
count2
9
word"porcelain"
count1
10
word"echo"
count1
11
word"perfect"
count1
12
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"marble"
1"down her spine"
2"traced"
3"pulsed"
4"magnetic"
5"stomach"
6"measured"
7"predator"
8"silence"
9"porcelain"
10"echo"
11"perfect"
12"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences66
matches
0"was angry"
99.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences66
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1280
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount916
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.55
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva5
Aurora2
Carter2
Moreau2
Marble1
Arch1
Ptolemy3
Lucien5
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Aurora"
2"Carter"
3"Moreau"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Lucien"
places
0"Marble"
1"Arch"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
59.09% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"not quite human—amusement, or pain, she couldn't parse it"
1"tasted like smoke and peppermint, like wi"
43.75% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.563
wordCount1280
matches
0"not hard, but hard enough"
1"Not human work, but not demon either"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean20.65
std19.18
cv0.929
sampleLengths
022
113
289
36
45
53
614
711
85
95
1013
1116
121
135
1481
1517
163
1720
1840
192
2044
2110
2223
2323
2421
256
2611
2710
283
2917
302
3120
3213
3333
3447
3517
369
3745
388
3945
4026
4127
4230
437
446
453
4613
4719
4836
495
99.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"were rolled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs159
matches
0"was already stepping"
1"was still staring"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences15
totalSentences101
ratio0.149
matches
0"The deadbolts on Eva's flat snapped back in rapid succession—clack, cluck, thunk—before Aurora Carter pulled the chain taut and cracked the door."
1"One eye glowed like captured honey; the other pooled black, dead to light but tracking her with a hunger that made her throat close."
2"That voice still hit her like warm cognac sliding down her spine—smooth, accented, dangerous."
3"Behind her, Eva's books sprawled across every surface—stacks of grimoires in dead languages, research notes pinned with rusted tacks, Ptolemy curled on a tower of folklore texts near the radiator."
4"He leaned the cane against the wall—ivory gleamed, the hidden blade within silent for now."
5"His black eye seemed to absorb the lamplight; the amber one caught it like molten gold."
6"\"Perhaps.\" He moved closer—slow, deliberate, each step measured like a predator testing ice."
7"The crescent scar on her left wrist—pale, old, from a childhood fall—itched with phantom heat."
8"He was close now, close enough that she could smell the cedar and iron that always clung to him—something wild beneath the expensive cologne."
9"She shoved him then—not hard, but hard enough that his shoulder hit the wall of books."
10"The black eye seemed to glitter with something not quite human—amusement, or pain, she couldn't parse it."
11"She pushed the blade harder, feeling the resistance of fabric and then flesh—just a prick, but he flinched, his breath hissing through perfect teeth."
12"Then she was in his arms, or he was in hers—she couldn't tell which came first."
13"His hands were everywhere—her waist, her hair, the curve of her hip through her delivery jacket—while hers fisted in his platinum hair, dragging his mouth back to hers with a violence that surprised them both."
14"She bit his lower lip, hard, and he groaned—deep, guttural, half-demon and all heat."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount937
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.03415154749199573
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0021344717182497333
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean12.67
std8.88
cv0.7
sampleLengths
022
113
234
315
416
524
66
75
83
914
1011
115
125
1310
143
153
1613
171
185
198
2030
2143
229
238
243
2518
262
2728
2812
292
3015
3124
325
3310
3423
359
3614
375
3816
396
4011
4110
423
4311
446
452
4612
478
4813
4913
68.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.43564356435643564
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners44
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences64
matches
0"Instead she felt nothing but"
1"Then she was in his"
ratio0.031
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences64
matches
0"She hadn't seen him in"
1"He wore a three-piece suit,"
2"His platinum hair gleamed in"
3"She didn't open the door"
4"His mouth quirked, one corner"
5"She glanced down."
6"She retreated until her spine"
7"He closed the door with"
8"She stopped, swallowed hard, her"
9"He leaned the cane against"
10"His charcoal sleeves were rolled"
11"he said, stepping closer"
12"She grabbed a chef's knife"
13"His black eye seemed to"
14"He smiled then, and her"
15"He said her name like"
16"He moved closer—slow, deliberate, each"
17"She tightened her grip on"
18"His voice dropped, rough as"
19"He was close now, close"
ratio0.625
14.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences64
matches
0"The deadbolts on Eva's flat"
1"Lucien Moreau filled the frame"
2"She hadn't seen him in"
3"He wore a three-piece suit,"
4"His platinum hair gleamed in"
5"She didn't open the door"
6"That voice still hit her"
7"His mouth quirked, one corner"
8"She glanced down."
9"The chain hung loose in"
10"The hallway smelled of turmeric"
11"The flat was one cramped"
12"She retreated until her spine"
13"The marble was cold through"
14"He closed the door with"
15"She stopped, swallowed hard, her"
16"He leaned the cane against"
17"His charcoal sleeves were rolled"
18"Tonight she couldn't tell which."
19"he said, stepping closer"
ratio0.891
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
81.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"One eye glowed like captured honey; the other pooled black, dead to light but tracking her with a hunger that made her throat close."
1"His hands were everywhere—her waist, her hair, the curve of her hip through her delivery jacket—while hers fisted in his platinum hair, dragging his mouth back …"
2"Inside, Aurora Carter stopped running, just for now, with her heart hammering against Lucien Moreau's and her lips still burning from the taste of everything th…"
9.62% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He closed, the deadbolts sliding home behind him with soft, final clicks"
1"she said, her voice barely audible"
2"he breathed, his accent thickening with emotion"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.042
77.1736%