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Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCYPCDG2TVGGM3FTPHEEWWK
Run Details
Model:
Thinking Machines Inkling
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
1m 60s
Cost:
$0.007505
Provider:
DeepInfra
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
83.69%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
34.75%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
62.94%
Name drop frequency
(details)
74.24%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
57.57%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
68.16%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
75.76%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
47.27%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
5.45%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
83.33%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
82.9053%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Rory shoved the chipped brass
deadbolt back. The chain rasped.
Then she opened the flat’s
front door against its protest.
Lucien stood in the narrow
corridor, slicked-back platinum hair catching the yellow bulb’s glare, charcoal suit immaculate despite the London drizzle.
His ivory cane leaned against
the wall.
The hidden blade inside clicked
softly
when he shifted his
weight
. "You forgot the invitation," he said.
She shoved the first deadbolt
into place behind him. "You came uninvited to Eva’s flat." "Eva called." His amber eye held hers; the black one
seemed to
drink the dim light. "She feared you’d ignore something important." Ptolemy wove between Rory’s ankles, tail high, then spat at the Frenchman. Inside, books and scrolls covered every flat surface of the cramped one-bedroom above the curry house.
The scent of old paper
and cumin clung to the air.
Rory walked past a tower
of research notes that threatened collapse. "Something important?"
She set the delivery bag
on a stack of texts. "From you." He stepped in.
His cane tapped the worn
floorboards
slowly
, tick-tock, a
measured
rhythm. "A name. A threat. The kind that wears
familiar
faces." She turned. Straight shoulder-length black hair fell across her cheek. "You don’t belong in Eva’s flat, Lucien." "I belong wherever the danger is."
He set the cane aside
.
The blade never glinted, but
she knew it waited inside the ivory handle. "And tonight, the danger wears your face, Aurora."
She flinched at the full
name.
He moved closer, past scrolls
written in languages she half-recognised. "Evan called me," Lucien said. The room shrank. Rory’s bright blue
eyes narrowed
. "You spoke to him?" "He offered money to find you. To hurt you."
The amber eye softened, though
his mouth stayed hard. "I refused." Rory laughed, a sharp brittle sound. "You refused? Your kind don’t refuse. You broker." "I broker information."
He reached out, not quite
touching her wrist, the one with the small crescent-shaped scar. "Not bodies. Not you." She pulled her arm back. "Then why come here? Eva’s flat has three deadbolts for a reason. You’re not reason."
He glanced at the cluttered
table, at a scroll depicting something with too many eyes. "Because I know what he’s planning. And I know you, Laila. You’ll chase this alone, like you chased answers in Cardiff. You’ll run straight into the dark without a blade." "I have a blade," she said. "You have quick thinking."
He tilted his head
. "Quick thinking breaks bones. I break necks." Silence stretched between them. Outside, Brick Lane traffic hummed, distant and muffled. Ptolemy jumped onto a bookshelf and knocked a pen clattering to the floor. Rory picked up the fallen pen. Her fingers
trembled
, then steadied. "You hurt me, Lucien. In London. In Marseille. Wherever you decided to vanish." "I vanished to save you."
His voice dropped, smooth and
dangerous. "The realm of Avaros has rules. My father’s kind doesn’t forgive half-breed children who fall for mortals." "So your father’s a demon. Your mother human."
She stepped closer, close enough
to smell cedar and old leather. "That explains the heterochromia. Not the cruelty." The black eye
flickered
with something raw. "Cruelty is leaving. Cruelty is not explaining why." She stopped, her breath shallow. "Then explain now." A crash came from the flat below. The curry house door slammed. Footsteps pounded up the stairs, heavy, too many. Rory’s hand flew to the chain lock, but Lucien was faster. He swept the cane up; the hidden blade sang free, thin steel catching the light like a silver smile.
He pushed her behind the
tower of books. "Eva’s flat has visitors," he said. The first deadbolt
shattered
inward with a splintering crack.<|end_message|>
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7/25/2026, 3:35:55 PM
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tokens_completion
967
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native_tokens_completion
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
12
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
30
tagDensity
0.4
leniency
0.8
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
83.69%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
613
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"softly"
count
1
1
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
highlights
0
"softly"
1
"slowly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
34.75%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
613
totalAiIsms
8
found
0
word
"weight"
count
1
1
word
"measured"
count
1
2
word
"familiar"
count
1
3
word
"silence"
count
1
4
word
"trembled"
count
1
5
word
"flickered"
count
1
6
word
"footsteps"
count
1
7
word
"shattered"
count
1
highlights
0
"weight"
1
"measured"
2
"familiar"
3
"silence"
4
"trembled"
5
"flickered"
6
"footsteps"
7
"shattered"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
49
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
49
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
67
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
30
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
613
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
12
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
62.94%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
17
wordCount
402
uniqueNames
8
maxNameDensity
1.74
worstName
"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity
2
worstWindowName
"Rory"
discoveredNames
London
1
Ptolemy
2
Rory
7
Frenchman
1
Silence
1
Brick
1
Lane
1
Lucien
3
persons
0
"Ptolemy"
1
"Rory"
2
"Silence"
3
"Lucien"
places
0
"London"
1
"Frenchman"
2
"Brick"
3
"Lane"
globalScore
0.629
windowScore
1
74.24%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
33
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"not quite touching her wrist, the one with the small crescent-shaped scar"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
613
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
67
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
31
mean
19.77
std
10.32
cv
0.522
sampleLengths
0
20
1
39
2
6
3
15
4
22
5
12
6
38
7
14
8
24
9
17
10
32
11
6
12
15
13
12
14
20
15
14
16
22
17
20
18
45
19
6
20
15
21
25
22
24
23
28
24
26
25
15
26
8
27
20
28
38
29
6
30
9
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
49
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
77
matches
(empty)
57.57%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
2
flaggedSentences
2
totalSentences
67
ratio
0.03
matches
0
"\"Eva called.\" His amber eye held hers; the black one seemed to drink the dim light."
1
"He swept the cane up; the hidden blade sang free, thin steel catching the light like a silver smile."
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
408
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar."
adverbCount
14
adverbRatio
0.03431372549019608
lyAdverbCount
2
lyAdverbRatio
0.004901960784313725
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
67
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
67
mean
9.15
std
5.25
cv
0.574
sampleLengths
0
7
1
3
2
10
3
21
4
7
5
11
6
6
7
9
8
6
9
16
10
6
11
12
12
16
13
11
14
11
15
12
16
2
17
3
18
11
19
10
20
2
21
8
22
7
23
11
24
13
25
8
26
6
27
10
28
5
29
3
30
5
31
4
32
18
33
2
34
6
35
8
36
18
37
4
38
5
39
15
40
15
41
30
42
6
43
8
44
7
45
4
46
8
47
13
48
6
49
5
68.16%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
1
diversityRatio
0.417910447761194
totalSentences
67
uniqueOpeners
28
75.76%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
1
totalSentences
44
matches
0
"Then she opened the flat’s"
ratio
0.023
47.27%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
19
totalSentences
44
matches
0
"His ivory cane leaned against"
1
"She shoved the first deadbolt"
2
"His amber eye held hers;"
3
"She set the delivery bag"
4
"He stepped in."
5
"His cane tapped the worn"
6
"He set the cane aside"
7
"She flinched at the full"
8
"He moved closer, past scrolls"
9
"He reached out, not quite"
10
"She pulled her arm back."
11
"He glanced at the cluttered"
12
"He tilted his head"
13
"Her fingers trembled, then steadied."
14
"His voice dropped, smooth and"
15
"She stepped closer, close enough"
16
"She stopped, her breath shallow."
17
"He swept the cane up;"
18
"He pushed her behind the"
ratio
0.432
5.45%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
40
totalSentences
44
matches
0
"Rory shoved the chipped brass"
1
"The chain rasped."
2
"Lucien stood in the narrow"
3
"His ivory cane leaned against"
4
"The hidden blade inside clicked"
5
"She shoved the first deadbolt"
6
"His amber eye held hers;"
7
"Ptolemy wove between Rory’s ankles,"
8
"The scent of old paper"
9
"Rory walked past a tower"
10
"She set the delivery bag"
11
"He stepped in."
12
"His cane tapped the worn"
13
"He set the cane aside"
14
"The blade never glinted, but"
15
"She flinched at the full"
16
"He moved closer, past scrolls"
17
"The room shrank."
18
"Rory’s bright blue eyes narrowed."
19
"The amber eye softened, though"
ratio
0.909
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
44
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
14
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
83.33%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
12
uselessAdditionCount
1
matches
0
"The amber eye softened, though his mouth stayed hard"
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
4
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
30
tagDensity
0.133
leniency
0.267
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
82.9053%