Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD4NKZK2PEMGVG3Z3S4PHFY

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Duration:
18.5s
Cost:
$0.009930
Provider:
Meta

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck. Rory threw her shoulder against the door of Eva's flat and the lock gave with a cough of metal. Cold from Brick Lane rushed in. Curry fat and rain. Lucien Moreau stood in the hall. He wore charcoal. Of course he wore charcoal. The suit cut sharp across his shoulders, rain beading on the wool. His platinum hair lay slicked back, damp at the temples. His cane rested against the cracked linoleum, ivory handle catching the bare bulb light. One amber eye. One black. Rory's hand stayed on the latch. "You're wet." He looked down at himself, then back at her. A faint smile touched his mouth. "Observation as brilliant as ever, Laila." "Don't call me that." The cat wound between her ankles. Ptolemy jumped onto the tower of books by the door and knocked a scroll onto the floor. Neither of them moved to pick it up. "You changed the locks," he said. "Eva changed the locks. I changed the flat." "You changed cities in your head and forgot to tell the rest of us." Rory stepped back. Not an invitation. A retreat. He took it as one anyway and crossed the threshold. The flat swallowed him. He had to duck a hanging bundle of dried sage Eva swore warded off low spirits. It brushed his hair. The whole place smelled of paper and cumin from the restaurant below. Every surface held Eva's chaos — open grimoires, coffee rings on top of Post-its, a half-eaten toast balanced on a stack of library books stamped PROPERTY OF UCL OCCULT ARCHIVES. Lucien's cane tapped as he navigated the narrow path between piles. "You still make yourself small in other people's mess." "I live here now." "Above Silas's bar, last I heard. Now here. You move a lot for someone who hates goodbyes." Ptolemy stared at him from the bookshelf. Lucien stared back. The cat blinked first. Rory shut the door. One bolt. Two. Her fingers hesitated on the third. "You were in Marseille." "I was." "For three months." "Four." She crossed her arms. The sleeve of her delivery jacket rode up. The little crescent scar on her left wrist showed white. His gaze dropped to it. "You never texted back." "You sent a postcard. Of a beach. No message. Just your initial." "It was a very nice beach." Rory laughed. Short. Sharp. "Christ." He set his cane against Eva's chipped kitchenette counter. The ivory handle gleamed. He unbuttoned his jacket with careful fingers. "May I?" "No." He sat anyway on the edge of Eva's sagging futon. The frame creaked under him. He looked out of place against the thrifted blanket, too clean, too pressed. Like a knife left on a pile of laundry. "Eva called me." "Eva needs to learn boundaries." "She said you had trouble. With Yu-Fei's client. The one with the hands that don't match." Rory went still. "She shouldn't have told you." "She did. Because you didn't." Ptolemy leapt from the shelf and landed on the futon beside Lucien. The cat butted his thigh with his head. Lucien's hand hovered, uncertain, then settled. His fingers sank into tabby fur. The amber eye half-closed. "He likes you," Rory said. "He has poor taste. Like someone else I know." She grabbed two mugs from the sink. Poured cold tea from the pot into both. Pushed one across the counter toward him. The liquid sloshed. "Drink and leave. I have a shift." "You quit Golden Empress." "I un-quit. Rent." He picked up the mug. Did not drink. "Rory." "What?" "Look at me." She did. Straight black hair stuck to her neck where rain had hit it when she ran up the stairs. Bright blue eyes that never learned how to lie. Her jaw set the way it did before an argument in Cardiff moot court, before she tore someone apart with logic. "You left my flat on a Tuesday," he said. "In my shirt. You said you'd come back after your exam. You never came back." "I had a reason." "Care to share it now? Four months later?" The words hung in the small room. The curry house extractor fan rattled below. "You told Silas I was a liability." Her voice dropped. "You told him I was human and humans break. And you were right. But you didn't have to say it behind my back." Lucien's hand stopped on Ptolemy's back. The cat meowed in protest. "Ah." "Ah? That's it?" "I told Silas you were human. I did not say you break." "You implied it." "I implied Silas was an idiot for sending you alone to collect from a Stryg in Camden. Which he was. My syntax suffers when I am furious." Rory stared. "You were furious?" "I was incandescent." He stood. Ptolemy jumped down. The futon sighed in relief. Lucien crossed the two steps to the kitchenette. Close enough that she smelled wet wool and his cologne, something dark and smoked. He reached for her wrist. Light. Questioning. She let him take it. His thumb brushed the crescent scar. "Brendan Carter's daughter," he said, "who fled Pre-Law because she hates losing arguments she knows she will win, who works under the table for a woman who cooks with ghost peppers that literally weep, who keeps three deadbolts locked and still leaves her window open. You think I called you fragile." "You called me someth—" "I called you the only thing in London worth protecting without a contract." Silence. The kettle clicked off. No one had turned it on. Eva's flat did that. Rory pulled her hand back. "Pretty words. You speak four languages. You must have better ones in French." "I do. You never liked when I used them. Said it felt like cheating." "It is cheating." He smiled. Real this time. It reached the mismatched eyes. "Tu m'as manqué." "See? Cheating." "I said I missed you. My English is not sufficient for the way I missed you." She swallowed. The delivery jacket felt too hot. She shrugged it off and it fell onto the pile of mail. "You show up here after four months and you... you pet the cat and you say you missed me and that's supposed to fix it?" "No. I show up here because Eva said a man with mismatched hands asked for you by name at the restaurant. I show up here because I know what that is. I show up here because the last time we fought you slept on my couch and left before I w—" He stopped. Rory stepped closer. Her shoulder almost touched his chest. She had to tilt her chin up. "Before you what?" His jaw worked. The black eye reflected the bare bulb, endless. "Before I could tell you to stay." The rain hit harder against the single window above the sink. Neon from the curry house sign bled red across the wet glass. Rory's fingers found the lapel of his damp suit. Not pushing. Not pulling. Holding. "You left a blade in my boot," she said. "After you left for Marseille." "I left a spare. For protection." "You left your favourite one. The one with the ivory." "I have two." "Liar." He covered her hand with his own. Warm despite the cold outside. Calloused from the cane. "Keep it. Or give it back. But tell me to go and I will." "And if I tell you to stay?" Ptolemy jumped onto the counter between them and knocked both mugs over. Cold tea spread across Eva's research notes, darkening the ink.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.091
leniency0.182
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.02% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1256
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
92.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1256
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"navigated"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"navigated"
1"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences114
matches
0"d in relief"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences114
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences174
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1257
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
73.18% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount716
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.54
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva7
Brick1
Lane1
Moreau1
Rory11
Post-its1
Lucien7
Cardiff1
Ptolemy6
Silence1
One3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
5"One"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.732
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1257
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences174
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs102
mean12.32
std12.34
cv1.001
sampleLengths
04
129
26
349
46
52
615
76
84
931
106
118
1214
1342
1442
1511
169
174
1817
1914
2013
214
222
233
241
2522
265
274
2812
296
304
311
3220
332
341
3537
363
375
3816
393
405
415
4236
435
449
4525
467
474
483
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs132
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences174
ratio0.006
matches
0"Every surface held Eva's chaos — open grimoires, coffee rings on top of Post-its, a half-eaten toast balanced on a stack of library books stamped PROPERTY OF UCL OCCULT ARCHIVES."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount718
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.023676880222841225
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences174
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences174
mean7.22
std7.02
cv0.972
sampleLengths
04
119
26
34
46
53
65
712
810
914
103
112
126
132
149
156
166
174
186
1917
208
216
228
2314
243
253
262
2710
284
2916
304
3112
3230
3311
349
354
3617
377
383
394
404
412
421
436
444
452
463
471
484
498
52.11% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3505747126436782
totalSentences174
uniqueOpeners61
74.07% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences90
matches
0"Of course he wore charcoal."
1"Bright blue eyes that never"
ratio0.022
95.56% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences90
matches
0"He wore charcoal."
1"His platinum hair lay slicked"
2"His cane rested against the"
3"He looked down at himself,"
4"He took it as one"
5"He had to duck a"
6"It brushed his hair."
7"Her fingers hesitated on the"
8"She crossed her arms."
9"His gaze dropped to it."
10"He set his cane against"
11"He unbuttoned his jacket with"
12"He sat anyway on the"
13"He looked out of place"
14"His fingers sank into tabby"
15"She grabbed two mugs from"
16"He picked up the mug."
17"Her jaw set the way"
18"Her voice dropped"
19"He reached for her wrist."
ratio0.311
48.89% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences90
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck."
1"Rory threw her shoulder against"
2"Curry fat and rain."
3"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
4"He wore charcoal."
5"The suit cut sharp across"
6"His platinum hair lay slicked"
7"His cane rested against the"
8"Rory's hand stayed on the"
9"He looked down at himself,"
10"A faint smile touched his"
11"The cat wound between her"
12"Ptolemy jumped onto the tower"
13"Neither of them moved to"
14"Rory stepped back."
15"He took it as one"
16"The flat swallowed him."
17"He had to duck a"
18"It brushed his hair."
19"The whole place smelled of"
ratio0.822
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.076
leniency0.152
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.0622%