| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.455 | | leniency | 0.909 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.091 | |
| 75.94% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1247 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "completely" | | 3 | "very" | | 4 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 39.86% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1247 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "stomach" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "quickened" | | 5 | "throbbed" | | 6 | "rhythmic" | | 7 | "hulking" | | 8 | "lurch" | | 9 | "gleaming" | | 10 | "resolving" | | 11 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 53 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1259 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Not human bone, she told herself." |
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| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 1043 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.15 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Veil | 1 | | Shade | 1 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Aurora | 12 | | Nyx | 6 | | Evan | 1 | | One | 2 | | Isolde | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Fae | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Shade" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Belphegor" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 0.925 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1259 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 35.97 | | std | 27.94 | | cv | 0.777 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 53 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 50 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 44 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 58 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 61 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 38 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 52 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 88 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 50 | | 21 | 53 | | 22 | 54 | | 23 | 70 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 84 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 104 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 32 | | 33 | 79 | | 34 | 11 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.04% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 171 | | matches | | 0 | "was, pressing" | | 1 | "was plating" | | 2 | "were breathing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 88 | | ratio | 0.091 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stumbled out onto soil the color of burnt honey, her boots sinking an inch into earth that felt warm — actually warm, like a body." | | 1 | "It was amber, a deep glowing amber like the world was sealed inside a jar of honey, and there was no sun she could find — the light simply was, pressing down from everywhere and nowhere, sourceless and heavy." | | 2 | "Aurora pressed her lips together, but it was already on her tongue — ripe fruit and woodsmoke, roasting fat and cinnamon, a hundred flavors layered so thick she could almost chew them." | | 3 | "It had been doing that since Richmond — a faint heartbeat of warmth that quickened as they'd approached the rift point — but here, in Hel, it throbbed steadily, contentedly, like something that had finally come home." | | 4 | "The warmth of the soil seeped through her boots, and somewhere far off she could hear music — something with strings, played too slowly, mournful and sweet at once." | | 5 | "Trees with silver bark bore fruit that glowed faintly from within — peaches lit like lanterns, apples veined with gold." | | 6 | "Up close, the fruit-light cast moving patterns on the ground, and the air hummed — actually hummed, a low frequency Aurora felt in her molars." | | 7 | "Beyond the fountain, the ground rose toward a palace — if it could be called that — built of something pale and gleaming that Aurora realized, with several seconds of slow horror, was bone." |
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| 96.14% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1040 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.04423076923076923 | | lyAdverbCount | 21 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.020192307692307693 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 88 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 88 | | mean | 14.31 | | std | 11.01 | | cv | 0.769 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 39 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 37 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 30 | | 42 | 28 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 23 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 82.58% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.5227272727272727 | | totalSentences | 88 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 48.31% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she pulled the pendant" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 92.46% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "She tilted her head back" | | 1 | "It was amber, a deep" | | 2 | "It did have a taste." | | 3 | "Her stomach cramped with sudden," | | 4 | "It had been doing that" | | 5 | "They stood at the edge" | | 6 | "she said, mostly to herself" | | 7 | "They walked between the rows." | | 8 | "She caught herself staring at" | | 9 | "Her fingers were trembling." | | 10 | "She didn't answer, because she" | | 11 | "She thought, absurdly, of Evan's" | | 12 | "She looked exhausted." | | 13 | "She also looked, Aurora realized" | | 14 | "They descended into the orchard." | | 15 | "It wasn't water flowing over" | | 16 | "It was wine, dark and" | | 17 | "Their eyes were open." | | 18 | "They were breathing." | | 19 | "She hated that they were" |
| | ratio | 0.319 | |
| 83.19% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "The portal swallowed them like" | | 1 | "Aurora stumbled out onto soil" | | 2 | "She tilted her head back" | | 3 | "It was amber, a deep" | | 4 | "Nyx said, their voice a" | | 5 | "The Shade had gone solid" | | 6 | "It did have a taste." | | 7 | "Aurora pressed her lips together," | | 8 | "Her stomach cramped with sudden," | | 9 | "It had been doing that" | | 10 | "Nyx said, flowing ahead of" | | 11 | "They stood at the edge" | | 12 | "The vines were black-barked and" | | 13 | "she said, mostly to herself" | | 14 | "They walked between the rows." | | 15 | "The warmth of the soil" | | 16 | "The smell grew stronger with" | | 17 | "Aurora's mouth flooded." | | 18 | "She caught herself staring at" | | 19 | "Her fingers were trembling." |
| | ratio | 0.754 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 14.65% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stumbled out onto soil the color of burnt honey, her boots sinking an inch into earth that felt warm — actually warm, like a body." | | 1 | "It had been doing that since Richmond — a faint heartbeat of warmth that quickened as they'd approached the rift point — but here, in Hel, it throbbed steadily,…" | | 2 | "The vines were black-barked and ancient, twisted into shapes that reminded Aurora unpleasantly of knotted muscle, and the grapes hanging from them were the size…" | | 3 | "Figures moved among the tables: some hulking and horned, some disturbingly ordinary, men and women in stained chef's whites who moved with the desperate efficie…" | | 4 | "The pendant beat against her collarbone, warm and steady, and she found herself thinking of the unknown benefactor who'd given it to her." | | 5 | "It was wine, dark and red and endlessly falling, and around the basin sat figures who had clearly been sitting there for a very long time." | | 6 | "The music she'd heard from the vineyard came from inside it, closer now, the slow strings resolving into something that made her want to sit down and weep and e…" |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx said, their voice a whisper that somehow carried" | | 1 | "she said, mostly to herself" |
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| 13.64% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Aurora faltered (falter)" | | 2 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.409 | | leniency | 0.818 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.273 | |