Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD4PCA10SVC72PHYBM6TPWV

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Duration:
21.4s
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$0.012417
Provider:
Meta

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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon of The Raven's Nest bled onto the wet pavement of Greek Street. Rory ducked under it, shoulder hunched against the rain that had soaked through her delivery jacket, and pushed the door with her hip. The bar exhaled warm air and low jazz and the smell of old wood polish. The walls wore their maps and their black-and-white photographs like a second skin. She left a puddle by the mat. Silas stood behind the bar. He wiped a glass with a white cloth. His grey-streaked auburn hair caught the amber light. The silver signet on his right hand flashed as he turned the glass. "You locked the back?" "An hour ago." Rory peeled off her jacket. Water darkened the floorboards. "Mrs. Kowalski on Bateman wanted extra chilli oil again. She told me about her grandson's eczema." Silas poured. The liquid rose amber and still. "On the house. You look drowned." Rory slid onto a stool. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the light, pale against her skin. She tucked the hair behind her ear, straight and black and damp at the shoulders. Her bright blue eyes went to the figure at the far end of the bar. A woman in a navy wool coat. Blonde hair cut sharp at the jaw. A leather briefcase on the stool next to her. She drank white wine and checked her phone. The woman looked up. Her mouth opened. "Rory Carter?" Rory froze with the glass halfway to her mouth. The name she used at university, full and proper and unfamiliar now. "No." The woman laughed and the sound cracked a little. She stood. She left the briefcase. "Jesus. It is you." Rory set the glass down. Slow. "Gwen?" Gwen Thomas crossed the space between them. Same height. Different posture. At Cardiff she slouched in oversized hoodies; now her spine held a straight line and her coat cost more than Rory's bike. "You live in London?" "I live upstairs." Gwen looked at the ceiling, then at Silas, then back. "Of course you do. Of course you live above a bar in Soho. God." Silas placed a fresh napkin in front of Gwen and topped up her wine without being asked. His left leg dragged a fraction as he shifted his weight. "On the house as well, for old friends." "You two—" Gwen perched on the stool next to Rory. She smelled of expensive perfume and rain. "How long has it been?" "Five years. Since second year." "Six. You left before finals." The words landed flat between them. Rory curled her fingers around her glass to hide the scar. "I left after." Gwen's smile thinned. She picked at the edge of her napkin and tore a corner off. "You just disappeared. Your phone went dead. Your mum called me." Rory stared at the maps on the wall opposite. The coastline of Wales pinned with a rusted tack. "I had to go." "I know you had to go. Evan was—" Gwen stopped. She drank. "I went to your flat. He answered the door. He told me you went home to Ireland with your dad." "He lied." "I know that now." Silence pulled. The jazz track ended and left the hiss of the espresso machine and the traffic outside. "You look good," Gwen said. "You look different." In Cardiff Gwen had a shaved undercut dyed pink, a nose ring, a laugh that took up whole rooms. She organized sit-ins outside the law building and smoked roll-ups on the library steps and told Rory she would never wear a suit. Never. Now her nails were manicured. Her blouse was cream silk. The briefcase had a brass lock. "Corporate law," Gwen said, as if Rory had asked. "Cardiff Magistrates first, then London. I'm with Hartridge now. Property development. We just— I was just at a client dinner around the corner. I needed a drink before the Tube." "You hate property law." "I did." "You called it legalized theft." Gwen's fingers tightened around the stem of her glass. Knuckles white. "People change." Rory felt the old heat rise, the same one from their argument in the kitchen on Senghennydd Road, dishes piled high, Gwen shouting about Rory's essays getting better marks because Rory argued what the lecturers wanted to hear. "You wanted to defend squatters. You wanted to—" "I wanted a lot of things when I was nineteen." Gwen's voice sharpened. Heads turned by the bookshelf that hid the back room. "I couldn't afford to want them anymore, Rory. My mum got sick. My loan. You left and I had to finish that house share by myself and pay both our rents because Evan trashed the place after you went and the landlord kept the deposit." Rory's throat closed. "You never told me that." "You were gone. You asked Eva to tell everyone not to contact you." "Eva—" "Eva did what you asked." Gwen stared at her wine. "I don't blame you. Not for that part." Silas moved down the bar, polishing the same spot on the wood. He gave them space without leaving. Rory traced the rim of her glass with her thumb. "I thought you would be at Greenpeace. Or running a commune." "I thought you would be a barrister by now. Like your dad." Rory laughed. A short, hard sound. "Pre-law lasted exactly as long as you remember. Now I deliver noodles for Mrs Cheung." "It's honest work." "It's rent." Gwen looked at the door, at the rain still falling past the green sign, at the briefcase that held whatever contracts allowed her to afford the coat. "I saw Brendan's article last month. In The Irish Times." Rory's shoulders pulled in. "He sends me clippings." "Does he know you're here?" "He knows I'm not in Cardiff." Gwen reached out. The gesture stalled mid-air and landed on the bar instead, close to Rory's hand but not touching. "I missed you." Rory looked at that hand. No rings. The skin raw at the knuckle from where Gwen used to bite it during exams. "I missed you too." "What happened to your wrist? The scar—" "I fell." Gwen's eyes narrowed. Bright, familiar, angry on Rory's behalf before Rory even finished the lie. "When?" "When I was a kid." "You always said that. Even when it was him." Rory pulled her sleeve down. The movement was quick, practiced. "Don't." "Okay." Another track started. A trumpet, low and tired. Gwen lifted her glass. "To who we were, then. Because someone should." Rory lifted hers. The glasses clinked. Both drank. "You still talk like that," Rory said. "Like what?" "Like you're giving a closing argument." Gwen smiled for real this time. The old one, crooked on the left. "Old habits." "Terrible habits." "Yours were worse. You never slept. You made those terrible charts on the kitchen wall with string." "They worked." "They were insane." They both laughed. The sound surprised them. It loosened something in the air around the bar, in the tight line of Silas's shoulders as he listened. Gwen checked her watch and winced. "My last train—" "Stay." "I can't. Early meeting. Canary Wharf." She opened the briefcase and pulled out a business card. Thick stock. Embossed. "My mobile's the same. Well. Not the same. New one. This one I actually answer." Rory took it. She turned it over. No doodles. No coffee stains like the ones Gwen used to pass in lectures. "Mine's different too. I'm still at the same number Eva has." "I'll text." "You don't have to." "I want to." Gwen stood. She put on her coat. The lining flashed red silk. She hesitated. "You could have called, you know. After." "I know." "Next time you run—" "I didn't run. I left." Gwen nodded. She slung the briefcase over her shoulder. "Next time you leave, tell me you're leaving." Rory stood as well. The stools scraped. "I will." Gwen stepped forward and hugged her. Quick, hard, perfumed. Rory smelled the rain again under it and something older, roll-up tobacco and library carpet. Gwen pulled back. "Take care of her," she said to Silas. Silas lifted his glass in salute. The signet ring caught the green from the window. "Always do." Gwen pushed out into the rain. The bell over the door jingled and then settled. The neon buzzed. Rory remained standing. She held the business card between her fingers until the edges bent.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences82
tagDensity0.098
leniency0.195
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1400
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
78.57% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1400
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"silk"
count2
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
2"silk"
3"traced"
4"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences120
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences194
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1400
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions74
wordCount892
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity3.25
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity6.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Greek1
Street1
Water1
Thomas1
Cardiff2
Rory29
Silas8
Gwen26
Wales1
Senghennydd1
Road1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Water"
3"Thomas"
4"Rory"
5"Silas"
6"Gwen"
places
0"Greek"
1"Street"
2"Cardiff"
3"Wales"
4"Senghennydd"
5"Road"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1400
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences194
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs125
mean11.2
std10.67
cv0.953
sampleLengths
038
135
234
34
428
58
66
749
831
97
102
1121
121
1315
144
156
161
1733
184
193
2010
2114
2228
238
2422
255
265
2717
283
2916
3011
3118
324
3332
342
354
3618
375
383
3943
4016
4139
424
432
445
4511
462
4738
488
4910
99.42% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences120
matches
0"being asked"
1"were manicured"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs155
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences194
ratio0.005
matches
0"At Cardiff she slouched in oversized hoodies; now her spine held a straight line and her coat cost more than Rory's bike."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount899
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.01557285873192436
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences194
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences194
mean7.22
std6.35
cv0.88
sampleLengths
015
123
215
313
47
55
68
78
813
94
108
114
1216
132
146
156
165
1714
1815
1915
207
217
229
238
244
253
262
279
2812
291
309
312
324
334
345
351
361
377
382
392
4022
414
423
4310
4414
4517
4611
478
4810
497
44.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.31443298969072164
totalSentences194
uniqueOpeners61
33.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"Bright, familiar, angry on Rory's"
ratio0.01
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences99
matches
0"She left a puddle by"
1"He wiped a glass with"
2"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
3"She tucked the hair behind"
4"Her bright blue eyes went"
5"She drank white wine and"
6"Her mouth opened."
7"She left the briefcase."
8"His left leg dragged a"
9"She smelled of expensive perfume"
10"She picked at the edge"
11"She organized sit-ins outside the"
12"Her blouse was cream silk."
13"He gave them space without"
14"They both laughed."
15"It loosened something in the"
16"She opened the briefcase and"
17"She turned it over."
18"She put on her coat."
19"She slung the briefcase over"
ratio0.222
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount93
totalSentences99
matches
0"The green neon of The"
1"Rory ducked under it, shoulder"
2"The bar exhaled warm air"
3"The walls wore their maps"
4"She left a puddle by"
5"Silas stood behind the bar."
6"He wiped a glass with"
7"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
8"The silver signet on his"
9"Rory peeled off her jacket"
10"Water darkened the floorboards."
11"The liquid rose amber and"
12"Rory slid onto a stool."
13"The crescent scar on her"
14"She tucked the hair behind"
15"Her bright blue eyes went"
16"A woman in a navy"
17"Blonde hair cut sharp at"
18"A leather briefcase on the"
19"She drank white wine and"
ratio0.939
50.51% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"Now her nails were manicured."
ratio0.01
73.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Rory ducked under it, shoulder hunched against the rain that had soaked through her delivery jacket, and pushed the door with her hip."
1"Rory felt the old heat rise, the same one from their argument in the kitchen on Senghennydd Road, dishes piled high, Gwen shouting about Rory's essays getting b…"
2"Gwen looked at the door, at the rain still falling past the green sign, at the briefcase that held whatever contracts allowed her to afford the coat."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Gwen said, as if Rory had asked"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences82
tagDensity0.049
leniency0.098
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.7518%