Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD4QQR9NCTV14KPV3H54SSJ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 42s
Cost:
$0.039474
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The stairs down to the old Camden passage had been sealed since before Quinn made detective, and the padlock on the grille still wore its rust like a scab. Somebody had cut the chain with bolt croppers and left the links curled on the concrete like shed skins. Quinn ducked under the blue-and-white tape and felt the temperature drop with every step, though July pressed hot against the city above. "Watch your head, ma'am. Cable's down on the left." The constable at the bottom held his torch low. Beyond him the platform stretched into darkness, tiles the colour of old teeth, posters for films nobody remembered peeling off the walls in long tongues. A knot of scene-of-crime officers worked at the far end, their lamps throwing hard shadows against the tunnel mouth. DS Ferreira met her halfway, notebook already open, tie loosened. He had that look he wore when he'd solved something before breakfast and wanted credit for it. "White male, mid-thirties, no identification. Found by a graffiti crew around four this morning — they did a runner, but one of them had a conscience and phoned it in from a call box, if you can believe it. Best guess: drug deal gone wrong. Place has been a squat on and off for years." "Best guess," Quinn said. She crouched beside the body. The man lay on his back between the platform edge and the tiled wall, arms arranged at his sides, legs straight. Too straight. His face held an expression she'd seen once before and had spent three years trying to forget — eyes wide, mouth open, the whole architecture of terror frozen mid-scream. Morris had worn that face. She pressed the thought down where it belonged. "Frost on his collar," she said. "July." "Fridges," Ferreira said. "Some of these old stations had cooling plant. Could be a pocket of cold air. SOCO's noted it." "There's no cooling plant in this station. It was a lift shaft station, lifts long gone." She moved her torch over the dead man's hands. No defensive wounds. Fingernails clean — no, not clean. Something grey under them, like ash. "Time of death?" "Doc says sometime between midnight and two. Though he keeps muttering about the core temperature being all wrong. Body's colder than it should be. Wants to run it again at the mortuary." Quinn stood and walked the scene in a slow circle, the way Morris had taught her — body first, then the space around it, then the space around that. Her leather watch ticked against her wrist. The platform dust lay thick and undisturbed, a grey felt over everything, except for a clean corridor where the graffiti crew had walked and where the body lay. No drag marks. No scuffle. No footprints approaching from the tunnel. "How did he get here?" she asked. "Same way the vandals did. Grille was cut." "The dust on the stairs is unbroken. I checked on the way down. One set of prints going up — the crew leaving. Nothing coming down. Nobody's used that entrance in weeks." Ferreira frowned into his notebook as if it had betrayed him. "Tunnel, then. Walked up the line from the running station." "In a three-piece suit?" She turned the torch on the dead man's clothes. Good wool, bespoke cut, handmade shoes with leather soles. Leather soles, on a man supposedly picking his way down a live rail tunnel in the dark. "And look at his shoes. Not a scuff. Not a fleck of track grease." "So he was carried. Dumped." "By ghosts?" She swept the beam across the floor. "One exit trail, no entry trail. The body appeared here, Danny. That's the problem you should be chewing on." She went back to the corpse and worked through his pockets with gloved hands. Wallet gone — Ferreira raised an eyebrow at that, mugging written all over his face — but the left breast pocket held something wrapped in a square of black cloth. Quinn unfolded it on her palm. A compass. Small, brass, green with verdigris, its face etched with marks that made her eyes slide sideways if she looked at them too long. The needle didn't point north. It trembled, then swung, and held steady toward the tiled wall behind the body. "Broken," Ferreira said. "Junk. Probably nicked it off a market stall." "There's a battery of these in a cabinet at the Museum." The voice came from the shadows beyond the lamps, and every head turned. A young woman sat on a crate by the wall, red curls escaping a clip, round glasses catching the light, a worn leather satchel clutched on her lap. A uniformed officer stood over her looking apologetic. "Sorry. I wasn't supposed to say anything. But it isn't junk, and it isn't broken." "Who is this?" Quinn asked the constable. "Found her on the platform when we arrived, ma'am. Says she's a researcher. She's been sitting quiet as you like, hasn't touched anything." "Eva Kowalski," the woman said. She tucked a curl behind her left ear. "British Museum, restricted archives. I study... older systems of navigation, among other things. That compass was made to point at something specific. Not north. If the needle's holding on that wall, then there's something in that wall it's pointing at." Ferreira laughed once, without humour. "Right. And I suppose the victim was navigating to Narnia when he overdosed." "Show me a needle mark," the woman said. "Show me paraphernalia. There isn't any. You're building a drug deal because it's the shape you recognise." Quinn watched her for a long moment. The girl's hands shook on the satchel strap, but her voice didn't. People who shook and still spoke were worth listening to. "You said there's a battery of these in a cabinet," Quinn said. "Meaning you've seen them before. Meaning you knew what this place was before we arrived." Eva's throat moved. "I knew what it used to be." "Which was?" "A market. It moves. It isn't here any more — not properly. But the door it used is still in the wall, and doors like that don't always close all the way." She nodded at the corpse. "He came through it. That's why there are no footprints. That's why he's cold. Wherever he came from, it's cold." Ferreira shut his notebook with a snap. "Ma'am, with respect—" "Get photographs of the wall," Quinn said. "Every tile. Full spectrum." She crossed to the tiles and ran her light across them. Advertising hoarding, blank cream glaze, grime. Then the beam caught something — a seam where no seam should be, a hairline of darker dark running in an arch from floor to apex, eight feet tall. She put her palm flat against the tile inside the arch and felt it through the latex. Cold. A deep, patient cold, like a river moving on the far side. In the dust at the arch's base lay a scatter of small white objects. She crouched. Bones — finger bones, bird bones, she couldn't tell — each one drilled through and strung on a thread of red that had rotted or been cut. Tokens of some kind. Dozens of them, dropped, scattered, trampled. "Payment," Eva said from behind her, quiet now. "You don't get through a door like that for free. He came through with a pocketful and dropped them when—" She stopped. "When whatever frightened him to death got close enough," Quinn finished. The doctor said fright, later, leaning over the body for the second time with his thermometer and his deepening frown. Massive cardiac event, no underlying disease, adrenaline off the scale, core temperature that made no sense at all. He said the word "anomalous" four times and looked at Quinn the way Morris used to look at her, right at the end, when he'd started keeping a second notebook he wouldn't let her read. Ferreira stood apart, rewriting his theory out loud to anyone who'd take it. Laced drugs. A hallucinogen. A prank that killed a man. The words got thinner each time he said them. Quinn closed her hand around the compass. The needle hadn't wavered from the wall in twenty minutes. Behind her the forensic lights hummed, the cameras flashed, and the hairline arch in the tiles held its patient cold against the warm London night. "Log the bone pieces separately," she said. "And I want Ms Kowalski's statement taken at the Yard. Full statement. Everything she knows about this market." "You're not seriously—" Ferreira started. "I'm seriously noting that your drug deal has no drugs, no entry, no exit, and a compass that disagrees with every other compass in London." She held his gaze until he looked away first. "Write down what you can prove, Danny. I'll handle what I can see."
created_at"2026-07-25T17:21:31.409Z" 7/25/2026, 5:21:31 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.458
leniency0.917
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1455
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1455
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"eyebrow"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"trembled"
count1
3
word"navigating"
count1
4
word"wavered"
count1
highlights
0"eyebrow"
1"etched"
2"trembled"
3"navigating"
4"wavered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences85
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1466
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
82.96% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount895
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.34
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Quinn12
July1
Ferreira9
Morris3
Good1
Eva2
London1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"July"
2"Ferreira"
3"Morris"
4"Eva"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.83
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1466
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences111
matches
0"had that look"
1"worn that face"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean31.19
std22.01
cv0.706
sampleLengths
070
19
253
327
455
54
662
78
87
921
1043
1132
1264
1311
147
158
1632
1721
1853
195
2028
2150
2244
2311
2475
257
2623
2753
2818
2925
3029
3127
3210
332
3457
3510
3611
3776
3853
3930
4011
4173
4232
4342
4425
455
4647
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"been sealed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs147
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences111
ratio0.054
matches
0"His face held an expression she'd seen once before and had spent three years trying to forget — eyes wide, mouth open, the whole architecture of terror frozen mid-scream."
1"Fingernails clean — no, not clean."
2"Quinn stood and walked the scene in a slow circle, the way Morris had taught her — body first, then the space around it, then the space around that."
3"Wallet gone — Ferreira raised an eyebrow at that, mugging written all over his face — but the left breast pocket held something wrapped in a square of black cloth."
4"Then the beam caught something — a seam where no seam should be, a hairline of darker dark running in an arch from floor to apex, eight feet tall."
5"Bones — finger bones, bird bones, she couldn't tell — each one drilled through and strung on a thread of red that had rotted or been cut."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount892
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.01905829596412556
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002242152466367713
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean13.21
std10.2
cv0.772
sampleLengths
029
119
222
39
49
525
619
710
817
955
104
115
1221
132
1429
155
168
176
181
193
2018
2125
223
236
246
253
2632
2729
287
2928
303
312
326
337
348
3532
3611
3710
3813
399
4017
4114
425
439
4419
4514
4630
476
482
4923
95.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.6216216216216216
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners69
49.75% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"Then the beam caught something"
ratio0.015
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences67
matches
0"He had that look he"
1"She crouched beside the body."
2"His face held an expression"
3"She pressed the thought down"
4"She moved her torch over"
5"Her leather watch ticked against"
6"She turned the torch on"
7"She swept the beam across"
8"She went back to the"
9"It trembled, then swung, and"
10"She tucked a curl behind"
11"She nodded at the corpse"
12"She crossed to the tiles"
13"She put her palm flat"
14"He said the word four"
15"She held his gaze until"
ratio0.239
42.09% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences67
matches
0"The stairs down to the"
1"Somebody had cut the chain"
2"Quinn ducked under the blue-and-white"
3"The constable at the bottom"
4"A knot of scene-of-crime officers"
5"DS Ferreira met her halfway,"
6"He had that look he"
7"She crouched beside the body."
8"The man lay on his"
9"His face held an expression"
10"Morris had worn that face."
11"She pressed the thought down"
12"She moved her torch over"
13"Fingernails clean — no, not"
14"Something grey under them, like"
15"Quinn stood and walked the"
16"Her leather watch ticked against"
17"The platform dust lay thick"
18"Ferreira frowned into his notebook"
19"She turned the torch on"
ratio0.836
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
73.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Ferreira frowned into his notebook as if it had betrayed him."
1"Small, brass, green with verdigris, its face etched with marks that made her eyes slide sideways if she looked at them too long."
2"Massive cardiac event, no underlying disease, adrenaline off the scale, core temperature that made no sense at all."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"The voice came, and every head turned"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.271
leniency0.542
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.5616%