Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD4VYMC78S199BCEDR8NNRK

Run Details

Duration:
1m 10s
Cost:
$0.029865
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came sideways off Camden High Street, needling Harlow Quinn's face as she ran. Ahead of her, a hooded figure cut between the stalls and the shuttered shops, boots hammering the wet pavement, and every few seconds the streetlights caught the thing clutched against his chest — a canvas bag she'd watched him take from the dead man's flat an hour ago. "Metropolitan Police! Stop!" He didn't stop. They never did. Quinn's lungs burned. She was forty-one, and the boy had twenty years on her, but eighteen years of policing had taught her that panic made people stupid. He was already making mistakes — looking back too often, choosing the lit streets instead of the dark ones. Her worn leather watch pressed cold against her wrist as she checked the gap closing between them. Forty metres. Thirty. Her radio crackled at her shoulder. "All units, be advised—" She ripped it off and dropped it in a bin without breaking stride. Control had told her twice to wait for backup. Control hadn't seen what was in that flat. Control hadn't seen Morris's face three years ago either, that grey slackness, the shape his body had made against the warehouse floor, the file that said unexplained circumstances and then said nothing at all, forever. The suspect veered left, down a side street that dead-ended at a row of hoardings. Quinn smiled despite the burn in her legs. Nowhere to go. Then the boy did something that made no sense. He ducked through a gap in the hoarding — a gap that hadn't been there a moment ago, she would have sworn it — and disappeared into what looked like the mouth of a disused Tube entrance. Quinn skidded to a stop at the hoarding's edge. Tiles. Old, cream-coloured Underground tiles, slick with algae, curving down into blackness. A station that wasn't on any map she knew, and she knew Camden the way she knew her own case files. The roundel beside the entrance had been painted over, but something showed through the black paint in faint white strokes. A symbol. Not a letter. Her hand went to her phone. No signal. Of course. "Fantastic," she muttered, and went down. The stairs swallowed the street noise within a dozen steps. The rain became a memory, then nothing. Quinn drew her baton — she had no firearm, this was London, not America — and moved with the military precision drilled into her two decades ago, shoulder to the wall, eyes adjusting to a light that had no source she could find. A pale greenish glow lived in the tunnel ahead, like moonlight filtered through pond water. She heard voices. Many voices. A market's murmur — haggling, laughter, the clink of glass — rising from below where there should have been only disused platforms and rats. The tunnel opened out, and Quinn stopped dead. The platform stretched away in both directions, longer than any platform had a right to be, and every inch of it was alive. Stalls leaned against the tiled walls, built from driftwood and scaffolding poles and things that might have been bones. Lanterns burned with flames the wrong colour. And the crowd — Quinn's detective brain catalogued them automatically and then quietly refused to file what it found. A woman with too many joints in her fingers counted out coins that whispered as they moved. Something in a priest's collar turned to look at her, and its eyes reflected the lantern light like a dog's. A child — she hoped it was a child — sat on a stall counter swinging legs that ended in hooves. Morris, she thought. Morris, is this what killed you? She stood at the tunnel mouth with her baton half-raised, every instinct she owned pulling her in two directions. Behind her: the stairs, the rain, the rational world, the report she'd never be able to write. Ahead: the suspect, somewhere in that throng, with a dead man's bag and answers to three years of questions that had hollowed her out. A figure detached itself from the nearest stall. A man, ordinary-looking, which somehow made it worse. Olive skin, short curly dark hair, warm brown eyes that assessed her the way she assessed crime scenes. He wore a Saint Christopher medallion against his collarbone and an expression of professional calm she recognised from every A&E she'd ever walked a victim into. "You're bleeding," he said. "I'm not." "You will be." His gaze flicked to her baton, then back to her face. "Put that away, Detective. Iron and intent both get noticed down here." "How do you know I'm a—" "You walk like the Met and you look at everyone like they've done it." He held his hands loose at his sides, non-threatening, practised. "Tomás Herrera. I patch people up. You look like you're about to need patching." Quinn kept the baton where it was. "A man just came through here. Twenties, hooded, carrying a canvas bag. He took evidence from a crime scene." "A lot of men come through here with bags." "Don't play games with me, Mr Herrera." Something shifted in his face — not fear, exactly. Caution, the kind that came from experience. "This isn't your jurisdiction. It's not anyone's jurisdiction. Whatever law you think you're enforcing, it stops at the top of those stairs." "Murder doesn't stop at the top of any stairs." "No," Tomás agreed quietly. "Down here it's just more common." A roar went up from somewhere deeper in the market — a crowd cheering something Quinn couldn't see, and the sound had a wrongness to it, too many voices in registers no human throat should reach. The smell hit her a moment later: incense and rot and something sweet that made her back teeth ache. She thought about Morris. She thought about the file, and the word unexplained, and the way the senior investigating officer had looked at her when she'd pushed — pity mixed with warning. She thought about how she'd spent three years pretending she'd let it go. Her suspect was down there somewhere. Twenty metres into a market that shouldn't exist, in a crowd of things that weren't people, in a place her warrant card meant less than nothing. Quinn checked her watch out of habit. The second hand had stopped. "How far in does this go?" she asked. Tomás's eyebrows rose. "You're staying?" "I'm asking how far it goes." "Farther than you want. And it moves — every full moon, the whole market picks up and relocates. You find your way out tonight, it won't be here tomorrow." He studied her for a long moment, then sighed and reached under his collar, pulling the medallion over his head. "Here. Wear this where people can see it. It won't protect you from anything real, but it tells the ones with manners that someone's vouched for you." "And you're vouching for me?" "I'm vouching that you're about to do something stupid either way, and I'd rather sew you up with the information I need than without it." He pressed the medallion into her palm. His fingers were warm. Steady. A medic's hands. "The man you're chasing — describe the bag." "Grey canvas. Red stitching. About so big." She held her hands apart. "It was locked in a floor safe in a dead man's flat." Tomás went still. The professional calm stayed on his face, but it cost him something now; she could see the effort. "Bone tokens," he said. "Entry passes. That's what he stole." "Tokens to get in here?" "To get deeper than here." His voice dropped. "Detective, listen to me carefully. This platform is the shallow end. If your man came down with a bag full of bone tokens, he's not selling them at a stall. He's going down to the lower levels, and the things that trade down there do not care that you have eighteen years of decorated service." Quinn looked past him, into the crowd, into the green-lit wrongness of it all. Somewhere in there was the closest thing to an answer she'd had in three years. "Then I'd better not lose him," she said, and stepped off the tunnel's threshold into the market, with Tomás Herrera swearing softly in Spanish at her back.
created_at"2026-07-25T17:23:49.527Z" 7/25/2026, 5:23:49 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Tomás agreed quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.364
leniency0.727
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.061
92.67% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1365
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
96.34% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1365
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences86
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1381
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.17% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1041
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.06
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden2
High1
Street1
Harlow1
Quinn11
Morris4
Tube1
Underground1
London1
America1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás4
Herrera1
Spanish1
Control3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Underground"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Tomás"
7"Herrera"
8"Control"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"London"
4"America"
5"Spanish"
globalScore0.972
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like the mouth of a disused Tube e"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1381
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean30.69
std27.31
cv0.89
sampleLengths
063
13
26
366
410
565
626
746
867
910
106
1175
1229
138
14126
159
1660
1760
184
192
2026
216
2238
2326
249
257
2638
279
2810
2955
3045
3132
3212
338
345
356
3676
375
3848
3924
4031
415
4263
4329
4427
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"been painted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs185
matches
0"was already making"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences107
ratio0.103
matches
0"Ahead of her, a hooded figure cut between the stalls and the shuttered shops, boots hammering the wet pavement, and every few seconds the streetlights caught the thing clutched against his chest — a canvas bag she'd watched him take from the dead man's flat an hour ago."
1"He was already making mistakes — looking back too often, choosing the lit streets instead of the dark ones."
2"He ducked through a gap in the hoarding — a gap that hadn't been there a moment ago, she would have sworn it — and disappeared into what looked like the mouth of a disused Tube entrance."
3"Quinn drew her baton — she had no firearm, this was London, not America — and moved with the military precision drilled into her two decades ago, shoulder to the wall, eyes adjusting to a light that had no source she could find."
4"A market's murmur — haggling, laughter, the clink of glass — rising from below where there should have been only disused platforms and rats."
5"And the crowd — Quinn's detective brain catalogued them automatically and then quietly refused to file what it found."
6"A child — she hoped it was a child — sat on a stall counter swinging legs that ended in hooves."
7"Something shifted in his face — not fear, exactly."
8"A roar went up from somewhere deeper in the market — a crowd cheering something Quinn couldn't see, and the sound had a wrongness to it, too many voices in registers no human throat should reach."
9"She thought about the file, and the word unexplained, and the way the senior investigating officer had looked at her when she'd pushed — pity mixed with warning."
10"The professional calm stayed on his face, but it cost him something now; she could see the effort."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1034
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"Old, cream-coloured Underground"
1"short curly dark hair,"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.03288201160541586
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006769825918762089
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean12.91
std11.17
cv0.865
sampleLengths
015
148
23
33
43
53
624
719
817
92
101
116
124
1313
149
158
1635
1715
188
193
209
2137
229
231
2411
2521
2620
272
283
296
302
312
326
3310
347
3543
3615
373
382
3924
408
4123
4219
437
4419
4517
4620
4721
483
496
72.59% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.48598130841121495
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners52
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences75
matches
0"Nowhere to go."
1"Then the boy did something"
2"Somewhere in there was the"
ratio0.04
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences75
matches
0"He didn't stop."
1"They never did."
2"She was forty-one, and the"
3"He was already making mistakes"
4"Her worn leather watch pressed"
5"Her radio crackled at her"
6"She ripped it off and"
7"He ducked through a gap"
8"Her hand went to her"
9"she muttered, and went down"
10"She heard voices."
11"She stood at the tunnel"
12"He wore a Saint Christopher"
13"His gaze flicked to her"
14"He held his hands loose"
15"She thought about Morris."
16"She thought about the file,"
17"She thought about how she'd"
18"Her suspect was down there"
19"He studied her for a"
ratio0.333
33.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences75
matches
0"The rain came sideways off"
1"He didn't stop."
2"They never did."
3"Quinn's lungs burned."
4"She was forty-one, and the"
5"He was already making mistakes"
6"Her worn leather watch pressed"
7"Her radio crackled at her"
8"She ripped it off and"
9"Control had told her twice"
10"Control hadn't seen what was"
11"Control hadn't seen Morris's face"
12"The suspect veered left, down"
13"Quinn smiled despite the burn"
14"He ducked through a gap"
15"Quinn skidded to a stop"
16"A station that wasn't on"
17"The roundel beside the entrance"
18"Her hand went to her"
19"she muttered, and went down"
ratio0.853
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Control hadn't seen Morris's face three years ago either, that grey slackness, the shape his body had made against the warehouse floor, the file that said unexp…"
1"A station that wasn't on any map she knew, and she knew Camden the way she knew her own case files."
2"A market's murmur — haggling, laughter, the clink of glass — rising from below where there should have been only disused platforms and rats."
3"Stalls leaned against the tiled walls, built from driftwood and scaffolding poles and things that might have been bones."
4"Ahead: the suspect, somewhere in that throng, with a dead man's bag and answers to three years of questions that had hollowed her out."
5"Olive skin, short curly dark hair, warm brown eyes that assessed her the way she assessed crime scenes."
6"Twenty metres into a market that shouldn't exist, in a crowd of things that weren't people, in a place her warrant card meant less than nothing."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Tomás agreed quietly (agree)"
2"He pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.212
leniency0.424
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.182
84.1951%