| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 51 | | tagDensity | 0.373 | | leniency | 0.745 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1348 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 51.78% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1348 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "desire" | | 4 | "shattered" | | 5 | "quickened" | | 6 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.61% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seem to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 111 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1355 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 26.48% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 50 | | wordCount | 931 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 2.47 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | December | 3 | | Isolde | 10 | | London | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | Aurora | 23 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Shade | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Ripples | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Shade" |
| | places | | 0 | "December" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.265 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 94.44% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "something between dusk and dawn, violet bleedin" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1355 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 53 | | mean | 25.57 | | std | 20.48 | | cv | 0.801 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 65 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 41 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 47 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 72 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 45 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 44 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 50 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 62 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 31 | | 33 | 48 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 41 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 25 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 79 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 52 | | 45 | 26 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 68 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 164 | | matches | | |
| 39.90% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 111 | | ratio | 0.036 | | matches | | 0 | "Ripples spread, and for a moment Aurora saw something in them — a kitchen, warm light, her mother laughing — before the image shattered." | | 1 | "In the centre stood a low table of pale wood grown straight from the ground, and upon it lay objects half-covered in moss — a broken crown, a flute of yellowed bone, a handful of silver coins stamped with faces Aurora didn't recognise." | | 2 | "So Aurora talked — about the coins, the flute, the strange warmth of the stones under her palm — while Isolde moved to the table's centre and began brushing moss from its surface with slow, deliberate strokes." | | 3 | "Aurora touched the pendant, still beating warm against her chest, and wondered which kind of time was passing beyond the oaks — and what might be passing through while they stood here, hidden from the world." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 926 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.029157667386609073 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0064794816414686825 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 111 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 111 | | mean | 12.21 | | std | 10.46 | | cv | 0.857 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 38 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 73.87% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4594594594594595 | | totalSentences | 111 | | uniqueOpeners | 51 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "they whispered, their voice a" | | 1 | "She pressed a hand over" | | 2 | "It didn't fade." | | 3 | "It vanished, snatched away between" | | 4 | "She stood in a clearing" | | 5 | "She pulled it out." | | 6 | "They walked on." | | 7 | "She stepped back fast, chest" | | 8 | "They pressed deeper." | | 9 | "Its pulse had quickened." | | 10 | "They came at last to" | | 11 | "She circled the stones instead," | | 12 | "Her skin prickled." |
| | ratio | 0.2 | |
| 6.15% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "The stones appeared where no" | | 1 | "Aurora stopped at the edge" | | 2 | "Bark blackened with age." | | 3 | "Trunks wide enough to hide" | | 4 | "Isolde's silver hair caught light" | | 5 | "Nyx flowed up beside Aurora," | | 6 | "they whispered, their voice a" | | 7 | "Aurora adjusted the strap of" | | 8 | "She pressed a hand over" | | 9 | "Isolde stepped between the two" | | 10 | "The grass bent beneath her" | | 11 | "Aurora glanced at Nyx." | | 12 | "The Shade shrugged, a ripple" | | 13 | "The cold vanished." | | 14 | "It didn't fade." | | 15 | "It vanished, snatched away between" | | 16 | "She stood in a clearing" | | 17 | "Foxgloves heavy with bees whose" | | 18 | "Aurora looked up." | | 19 | "A canopy of interlaced branches" |
| | ratio | 0.908 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 10.58% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 27 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood in a clearing that could not fit inside Richmond Park, a meadow stretching further than the eye could reasonably measure, carpeted in wildflowers that…" | | 1 | "The water climbed a gentle slope toward a pool ringed in white stone, and fish moved through it in slow spirals, their scales scattering flecks of light that dr…" | | 2 | "They came at last to the grove's heart: a circle of standing stones, smaller than the boundary oaks but older somehow, each carved with spirals and symbols that…" | | 3 | "Nyx slid along beside her, their form flickering at the edges, struggling to hold solidity." | | 4 | "Rivers and circles and branching lines that meant nothing to her but clearly meant something to the seer, whose fingers stopped moving." |
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| 72.37% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "they whispered, their voice a draft slipping under a door" | | 1 | "The seer drifted, and the flowers seemed to lean toward her as she passed" |
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| 71.57% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "the Shade whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "they murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 51 | | tagDensity | 0.196 | | leniency | 0.392 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.157 | |