Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD4WYN83FWX7Z27YFJEN2F5

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Duration:
22.8s
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$0.013149
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Meta

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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered Soho in sheets. It turned Old Compton Street into black glass. Neon bled across it. The green sign of The Raven's Nest stuttered against the downpour, buzzed, spat light onto wet brick. Inside that light, a silhouette detached from the doorway and moved fast. Quinn caught it in her periphery and straightened. Her coat collar stuck to her neck. Water ran off her cropped salt-and-pepper hair and down the sharp line of her jaw. She stood with her weight even, boots planted, both hands buried deep in her pockets. The worn leather strap of her watch cinched tight on her left wrist. Eighteen years kept her still when rookies fidgeted. The figure from the bar kept his head down. Hood up. Hands jammed in a windbreaker. Too warm a coat for the night, too bulky at the waist. Quinn pushed off the wall. She closed ten feet before he looked. Brown eyes met brown. His face jumped. He ran. Quinn ran. Her boots slapped water. The street tilted. A taxi blasted its horn and swerved. She cut around its bumper, palm finding hot metal, using it to pivot. The suspect hit the mouth of Dean Street at a sprint. He knocked a stack of milk crates. Glass bottles exploded. Milk turned the rain white. Quinn cleared it. Her knees drove. Her breath sawed in and out through clenched teeth. "You stop right there!" Her voice cut through the rain and the traffic noise. People turned. Umbrellas snapped. He didn't stop. He veered left into a service alley between two curry houses. Bins overflowed. Steam rose off a vent. Quinn followed. The alley stank of fat and rot. Her shoulder brushed brick and scraped. The hood ahead bobbed. He vaulted a chained bike. Quinn hit it full. The chain bit her thigh and she went down on one knee, palm splaying in filthy water. Skin split. She hissed and pushed up. Blood mixed with rain on her forearm. The suspect burst out onto Shaftesbury Avenue. More light. More people. Quinn shouted again, louder, badge out now in her left hand, held high. "Police! Clear the way!" The crowd parted half a second too slow. The suspect shoved a woman sideways. She fell into her companion. Drinks spilled. Someone yelled. He cut toward the Underground entrance at Leicester Square, took the stairs four at a time. Quinn followed, her boots now slick on stone steps. Waterfalls poured off each lip. The station swallowed them. Fluorescent lights and the smell of damp and electricity and fried onions. Commuters stared. The suspect vaulted the ticket barrier. The gates alarmed. A staff member shouted. Quinn flashed the badge, did not break stride, vaulted after. Her calf clipped the barrier and she stumbled, caught herself on a handrail, kept moving. Northern line southbound first. He was not on the platform. Quinn scanned. Her chest heaved. Brown hair plastered to her head. She wiped rain and sweat from her eyes with the back of her wrist. Then she saw movement down the tunnel maintenance door at the far end. The door stood ajar. Red paint flaked off it. A staff-only sign hung crooked. She sprinted. The door banged shut as she reached it. She yanked. Locked. She slammed her shoulder against it. Metal shrieked. On the other side, feet slapped concrete. Quinn stepped back, raised her boot, and kicked beside the lock. The frame buckled. She kicked again. The lock tore free and the door crashed open. Darkness and the roar of a train on the other side of the wall. A narrow service passage, half-flooded, lit by failing bulbs. Pipes sweated. The suspect's hood had fallen. Curly dark brown hair plastered to his skull. Olive skin shone in the low light. Quinn knew him from a photo on her incident board. Tomás Herrera. Former paramedic. License revoked. Known associate of Silas' crowd from the Nest. Tomás risked a glance over his shoulder. His eyes widened. His left forearm flashed. A pale scar, thick, raised, caught the bulb light. "Tomás! Down on the ground!" Tomás shook his head. Water dripped from his chin. "You don't want to follow. Not here." His voice echoed off wet concrete. He held something in his fist. Small, white, carved. He turned and ran again. At the end of the passage a brick wall blocked the way. Dead end. Tags covered it. Except— He dropped to his knees. He pressed his fist to a particular brick near the floor, one etched with a shallow crow's foot. The brick sank in. Mortar cracked. A seam appeared in the wall where no seam should exist. Cold air breathed out, sour and cold and spiced like incense and copper. The wall moved. It slid inward an inch, then dragged, stone grinding on hidden track, revealing a vertical slice of darkness. Tomás slipped through. Quinn reached the wall three seconds later. The gap already narrowed. She jammed her forearm into it. Stone crushed against her sleeve, pinched skin. Beyond, steps descended. Not Tube steps. Rough-hewn, wet, leading down into a vaulted space that hummed. Light flickered down there; not electric. Candlelight, lantern light, and something else that shifted color. Voices rose. Many voices. The murmur of a crowd, barter, argument, laughter that did not sound human. She knew the file note by heart. Detective Inspector's scribble after DS Morris died three years ago in a room with no entry and a chest cavity emptied from inside. "Market? Moves every full moon. Camden. Bone token." The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. The Veil Market. Her radio crackled dead static on her hip. No signal this deep. Tomás stared up at her from three steps below. His chest rose and fell fast. Rain still ran off him onto the stone. "You need to go back." Quinn wedged her shoulder into the gap and forced the stone. The muscles in her back locked. "I lose you, I lose the chain that ties two dead girls to Silas' back room." She remembered that room. The hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf in the Raven's Nest. Maps and black-and-white photographs on its walls. Tomás' coat had brushed that bookshelf on his way out tonight. Bulge at the waist now made sense. "What did you carry out of the Nest? Drugs? Alchemy?" Tomás opened his fist. He did not carry powder or vials. He held the white thing. A token, carved bone, small as a coin but with a hole through its center and runes cut around the rim. Blood darkened one edge. Fresh. "Not drugs. Something worse. A trade already gone bad." Footsteps scraped below. A figure climbed toward them, hooded, tall, face hidden. Tomás stepped back down, put himself between Quinn and the figure. Quinn looked down into the dark. The Market breathed. The air smelled of wet stone and ozone and burnt sugar. Tables stretched under an arched roof daubed with old Underground tiles. Shelves floated without support. Jars held light that moved. People—some people—haggled. Others had too many joints in their limbs, or no eyes. In the center a cage hung empty. Its door swung. Every instinct from eighteen years of service pulled her back. Procedure demanded backup, demanded a call, demanded she not enter a subterranean labyrinth without cover, without warrant, without light. Morris had entered alone. Morris never came out whole. Her watch ticked against her wrist bone. Her jaw locked until it ached. If she turned now, Tomás vanished. The token vanished. The girls tied to that Market stayed nameless in the morgue and the Nest kept its bookshelf closed and its secrets poured. If she went down, she broke every rule she built her life on and entered a place where rules meant nothing. The stone pressed against her forearm. It cut off circulation. Numbness prickled her fingers. Tomás' hand shot up and gripped her wrist. Not to pull her in. To steady her. "You go in, you pay. Everything in there costs." Quinn stared at his scarred forearm, at the hand holding her, at the bone token that bled. She made her choice. She shoved with her shoulder and forced the gap wider. Stone screamed. Dust showered. The gap yawned enough for a body. She slipped through.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1379
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.62% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1379
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"electric"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"scanned"
2"echoed"
3"etched"
4"flickered"
5"electric"
6"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences192
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences192
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences204
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1377
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount1276
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity1.33
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Old1
Compton1
Street2
Raven2
Nest3
Dean1
Shaftesbury1
Avenue1
Underground2
Leicester1
Square1
Herrera1
Tomás8
Tube2
Inspector1
Morris3
Camden1
Veil1
Market3
Quinn17
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Square"
3"Herrera"
4"Tomás"
5"Tube"
6"Inspector"
7"Morris"
8"Market"
9"Quinn"
places
0"Soho"
1"Old"
2"Compton"
3"Street"
4"Dean"
5"Shaftesbury"
6"Avenue"
7"Underground"
8"Leicester"
globalScore0.834
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences95
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1377
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences204
matches
0"remembered that room"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs68
mean20.25
std14
cv0.691
sampleLengths
05
141
266
328
45
514
62
72
827
926
1015
114
1214
1321
1419
1540
1611
1713
184
1923
2030
2118
2213
2325
2435
2527
2621
277
2826
2925
3044
3110
3213
335
349
357
3615
3723
3853
3921
403
4124
4231
4317
4438
459
4612
4723
485
4917
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences192
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs244
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences204
ratio0.015
matches
0"Except—"
1"Light flickered down there; not electric."
2"People—some people—haggled."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount718
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.019498607242339833
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002785515320334262
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences204
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences204
mean6.75
std4.5
cv0.666
sampleLengths
05
18
24
317
412
58
67
715
815
913
108
119
122
135
1412
155
167
174
183
192
202
214
223
237
2413
2511
267
273
285
293
303
319
324
3310
342
352
363
3711
382
395
402
417
426
434
445
454
4617
472
485
497
61.27% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.4117647058823529
totalSentences204
uniqueOpeners84
41.41% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences161
matches
0"Too warm a coat for"
1"Then she saw movement down"
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences161
matches
0"It turned Old Compton Street"
1"Her coat collar stuck to"
2"She stood with her weight"
3"She closed ten feet before"
4"His face jumped."
5"Her boots slapped water."
6"She cut around its bumper,"
7"He knocked a stack of"
8"Her knees drove."
9"Her breath sawed in and"
10"Her voice cut through the"
11"He didn't stop."
12"He veered left into a"
13"Her shoulder brushed brick and"
14"He vaulted a chained bike."
15"She hissed and pushed up."
16"She fell into her companion."
17"He cut toward the Underground"
18"Her calf clipped the barrier"
19"He was not on the"
ratio0.286
40.75% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount135
totalSentences161
matches
0"It turned Old Compton Street"
1"Neon bled across it."
2"The green sign of The"
3"Quinn caught it in her"
4"Her coat collar stuck to"
5"Water ran off her cropped"
6"She stood with her weight"
7"The worn leather strap of"
8"The figure from the bar"
9"Hands jammed in a windbreaker."
10"Quinn pushed off the wall."
11"She closed ten feet before"
12"Brown eyes met brown."
13"His face jumped."
14"Her boots slapped water."
15"The street tilted."
16"A taxi blasted its horn"
17"She cut around its bumper,"
18"The suspect hit the mouth"
19"He knocked a stack of"
ratio0.839
93.17% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences161
matches
0"If she turned now, Tomás"
1"If she went down, she"
2"To steady her."
ratio0.019
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Rough-hewn, wet, leading down into a vaulted space that hummed."
1"The murmur of a crowd, barter, argument, laughter that did not sound human."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
92.5960%