Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD4YG3PB5ZHRTNHBC4M3J28

Run Details

Duration:
1m 7s
Cost:
$0.027486
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came three times, measured and polite, which was itself suspicious. Nobody polite knocked on this door at midnight. The curry house below had closed an hour ago, and Ptolemy, curled on a stack of annotated grimoires, lifted his head and stared at the door with the flat contempt of a creature who knew better. Rory looked through the peephole and forgot how to breathe for a second. Lucien Moreau stood in the hallway, charcoal suit immaculate despite the rain that had been hammering East London all evening, platinum hair darkened at the edges where water had found it. His ivory-handled cane tapped once against the floorboards, impatient. "I know you're standing there, Carter. I can hear you not opening the door." She undid the first deadbolt. Stopped. Undid the second. Stopped again. "How did you find me?" "Three deadbolts and you're interrogating me through the door." The amber eye would be catching the hallway light, she knew. She remembered exactly how it caught light. That was the problem. "Your friend Eva talks in her sleep. At conferences. Loudly." "That's not how conferences work." "Open the door, Rory." The third deadbolt slid back and there he was, close enough that she could smell rain on wool and something underneath it, smoke from a place that wasn't London. Six weeks. Six weeks since she'd watched him walk out of Silas' bar without looking back, and he stood on her doorstep like a man returning a borrowed umbrella. "You look terrible," he said. "You look expensive. Same as always." "Expensive isn't the opposite of terrible." Ptolemy wound between Lucien's ankles and Lucien, who she had once seen stare down a creature with too many teeth and no face, leaned down and scratched the cat behind the ears. That small gesture undid something in her chest she had spent six weeks nailing shut. "You're letting the heat out," she said, and stepped aside. He moved through the flat the way he moved through every room, cataloguing it. The books stacked on every surface. The scroll pinned to the wall with a kitchen knife. Her delivery jacket hanging by the door, Golden Empress embroidered in red thread. His jaw tightened at that, briefly, a thing she would have missed six weeks ago and caught now like a reflex. "You should have called." "You should have called. Six weeks ago. When you said you would." She folded her arms. "You said, and I quote, 'I'll ring you Thursday, and then we'll discuss what this is.'" "I remember what I said." "Thursday came and went, Lucien. So did about five other Thursdays." He set the cane against the arm of her sofa with care, and when he turned back the polished composure had a crack in it, the black eye darker than the amber one in the lamplight, both of them fixed on her with an attention she had forgotten the weight of. "Thursday, I was in Avaros. Involuntarily." He loosened his tie, an act of informality so unlike him it landed like a confession. "My father's people decided I owed them a debt. Debts there are collected in time, not money. I came out the other side three days ago. It was still Thursday, to me. Then I looked at a calendar." "That's—" She hated that she believed him. That was the worst part of Lucien Moreau: his lies were elaborate and his truths were worse, and she had learned to tell them apart by the way he held his hands. Right now his hands were still. "You couldn't send word? A note? A carrier pigeon? Anything?" "Would you have rather had a note? 'Dear Carter, detained in a demon realm, don't wait up.'" "I would have rather had anything than standing in Silas' bar watching your back disappear through the door. I thought—" She stopped. The things left unsaid crowded her throat and she refused to let them out cheaply. "I thought you decided I wasn't worth the complication." "You are nothing but complication." He said it almost gently. "You deliver noodles for a living, you live above a bar over a curry house, you have a crescent scar on your wrist you won't explain, and you once talked a debt collector out of kneecapping Yu-Fei using contract law you claim to hate. You are the most complicated person I know, and I know people who are technically two people." "Don't compliment me. You're not allowed to compliment me while I'm angry at you." "You're not angry." "I'm furious." "Your hands have stopped shaking." He took one step closer. The flat was small enough that one step put him in arm's reach, and she hated that her body remembered the distance, remembered closing it. "Rory. Look at me." She looked at Ptolemy instead, who had settled on Lucien's abandoned cane like a dragon claiming gold. "You can't just appear at midnight with an impossible excuse and a nice suit and expect—" "I expect nothing. I came because three days ago I stood in a realm where time eats itself, and the only thing I could think about, the only anchor I kept, was Thursday." His voice dropped, the polish scraping off it entirely. "I missed Thursday. I refuse to miss the rest of them." The radiator clanked. Rain ticked against the window. Rory's pulse was doing something undignified and she pressed her fingers against her wrist, against the small crescent scar, an old habit. "Say something," he said, and for the first time since she'd known him, Lucien Moreau sounded unsure. "Was I the anchor, or was the appointment the anchor? There's a difference." "You. The appointment was logistics." The black eye and the amber one both held steady on her. "It's always been you. That's the thing I didn't say, before. I'm saying it now, badly, at midnight, because apparently that's the only way I know how to say true things." She crossed the distance before she'd decided to, and her fist caught his lapel, and for a moment she genuinely didn't know if she was going to shake him or kiss him. He went very still, the way a man goes still when he wants the second option and will accept the first. "Six weeks," she said. "Six weeks," he agreed, his hand coming up to cover hers against his chest, warm through the rain-damp wool. "Punch me if it helps." "It wouldn't help." "No," he murmured, lowering his head until his forehead nearly touched hers. "But this might." "Don't you dare be charming." "I am not being charming. I am being terrified. There's a difference, as you say." She laughed, one short, unwilling sound, and it broke the last of it, the six weeks and the five Thursdays and the door at Silas' bar. Her fingers loosened in his lapel and slid up to his jaw instead, rough with a day's stubble, real and present and here. "You're sleeping on the sofa," she said. "Of course." "Ptolemy gets the good blanket. You get the scratchy one." "Naturally." "And tomorrow you explain Avaros. All of it. Every word." "Tomorrow," he said, and kissed her like a man keeping an appointment, six weeks late and exactly on time.
created_at"2026-07-25T17:25:12.961Z" 7/25/2026, 5:25:12 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.36
leniency0.72
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1206
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1206
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"weight"
2"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences52
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen62
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1206
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount700
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy3
Moreau3
East1
London2
Lucien6
Golden1
Empress1
Thursdays1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Empress"
places
0"East"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1206
matches(empty)
88.24% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences85
matches
0"hated that she"
1"hated that her"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean24.12
std20.88
cv0.866
sampleLengths
056
113
240
314
411
55
641
75
84
958
105
116
126
1347
1410
1564
164
1732
185
1911
2051
2160
2255
2317
2446
2571
2614
273
282
2939
3033
3153
3230
3317
3413
3548
3653
374
3824
393
4015
415
4215
4349
447
452
4610
471
4810
4919
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs124
matches
0"was doing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences85
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount584
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.030821917808219176
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.010273972602739725
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean14.19
std11.61
cv0.818
sampleLengths
012
18
236
313
431
59
614
75
81
93
102
115
1220
137
144
1510
165
174
1829
192
2027
215
226
236
2432
2515
2610
2714
286
2910
3013
3121
324
3316
3416
355
3611
3751
3822
3938
407
4132
426
4310
4417
4522
4615
479
4810
4961
60.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.4235294117647059
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
15.56% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences45
matches
0"His ivory-handled cane tapped once"
1"She undid the first deadbolt."
2"She remembered exactly how it"
3"she said, and stepped aside"
4"He moved through the flat"
5"Her delivery jacket hanging by"
6"His jaw tightened at that,"
7"She folded her arms"
8"He set the cane against"
9"He loosened his tie, an"
10"She hated that she believed"
11"He said it almost gently"
12"He took one step closer"
13"She looked at Ptolemy instead,"
14"His voice dropped, the polish"
15"he said, and for the"
16"She crossed the distance before"
17"He went very still, the"
18"he agreed, his hand coming"
19"he murmured, lowering his head"
ratio0.511
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences45
matches
0"The knock came three times,"
1"Nobody polite knocked on this"
2"The curry house below had"
3"Rory looked through the peephole"
4"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
5"His ivory-handled cane tapped once"
6"She undid the first deadbolt."
7"The amber eye would be"
8"She remembered exactly how it"
9"That was the problem."
10"The third deadbolt slid back"
11"Ptolemy wound between Lucien's ankles"
12"That small gesture undid something"
13"she said, and stepped aside"
14"He moved through the flat"
15"The books stacked on every"
16"The scroll pinned to the"
17"Her delivery jacket hanging by"
18"His jaw tightened at that,"
19"She folded her arms"
ratio0.933
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The curry house below had closed an hour ago, and Ptolemy, curled on a stack of annotated grimoires, lifted his head and stared at the door with the flat contem…"
1"Lucien Moreau stood in the hallway, charcoal suit immaculate despite the rain that had been hammering East London all evening, platinum hair darkened at the edg…"
2"The third deadbolt slid back and there he was, close enough that she could smell rain on wool and something underneath it, smoke from a place that wasn't London…"
97.22% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"His voice dropped, the polish scraping off it entirely"
90.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
2"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.12
82.3700%