| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "The woman's expression softened almost [almost]" | | 1 | "The woman gestured around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.357 | | leniency | 0.714 | | rawRatio | 0.133 | | effectiveRatio | 0.095 | |
| 84.33% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1595 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "cautiously" | | 1 | "sadly" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "quickly" | | 4 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 43.57% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1595 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "shimmered" | | 2 | "otherworldly" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "footsteps" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "grave" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "flicker" | | 12 | "raced" | | 13 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 123 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 84.79% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 123 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 149 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 19 | | totalWords | 1580 | | ratio | 0.012 | | matches | | 0 | "Midnight. The Grove. Come alone." | | 1 | "You're not who they think you are. Come to the Grove. Midnight. Come alone." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 1262 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.66 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | London | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Aurora | 21 | | Silence | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Come | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Silence" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Cardiff" | | 5 | "Welsh" |
| | globalScore | 0.668 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 21.79% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like broken glass" | | 1 | "seemed rooted to the spot" | | 2 | "seemed alive with movement" | | 3 | "something like copper and old blood" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1580 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 149 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 74 | | mean | 21.35 | | std | 15.14 | | cv | 0.709 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 54 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 50 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 34 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 39 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 55 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 48 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 43 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 53 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 25 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 57 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 35 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 23 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 33 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 27 |
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| 96.71% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | | 0 | "being surrounded" | | 1 | "was adopted" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 220 | | matches | | 0 | "was being" | | 1 | "were moving" | | 2 | "were moving" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 149 | | ratio | 0.094 | | matches | | 0 | "The GPS showed nothing here—just empty fields and old mining equipment rusting in the rain." | | 1 | "Wildflowers bloomed in riotous colour—foxgloves, bluebells, and strange white blossoms she couldn't name—all glowing with their own soft light." | | 2 | "But there was no glass here—just earth and flowers." | | 3 | "Between them, shadows moved—too fluid, too deliberate to be mere trickery of light." | | 4 | "Three weeks ago, she'd found a body in Richmond Park—a woman who looked exactly like her, wearing her clothes, carrying her phone." | | 5 | "But then she'd remembered the scar on her left wrist—the small crescent mark from a childhood accident that her parents had never explained." | | 6 | "But when she turned, there was nothing—just the swaying of branches and the soft luminescence of the flowers." | | 7 | "In their midst, something pale gleamed—a figure, or perhaps just a trick of the light." | | 8 | "But something was wrong—her skin had the pallor of someone who hadn't seen sunlight in years, and her lips were cracked and bleeding." | | 9 | "Everything made sense now—the dreams, the scar, the woman in the grave who looked exactly like her." | | 10 | "She could smell ozone and something else—something like copper and old blood." | | 11 | "And somewhere in the distance, Aurora could hear the sound of footsteps—many sets of them, all moving towards the centre of the clearing." | | 12 | "She thought of the woman in the grave, who had her face and her eyes and her memories—or at least, the memories that weren't hers." | | 13 | "The shadows were moving faster now, taking on definite shapes—tall figures with elongated limbs and faces that shifted and flowed like smoke." |
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| 92.26% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1048 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "same straight black hair" |
| | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.04198473282442748 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.016221374045801526 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 149 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 149 | | mean | 10.6 | | std | 7.67 | | cv | 0.723 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 39 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 23 |
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| 53.24% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.35570469798657717 | | totalSentences | 149 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 63.49% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the whisper of wind" | | 1 | "Then she was gone, vanished" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd driven two hours north" | | 1 | "She pushed through the last" | | 2 | "She could feel it in" | | 3 | "she called out, her voice" | | 4 | "She looked down." | | 5 | "Her footprints glowed faintly, then" | | 6 | "Her teeth ached." | | 7 | "She walked deeper into the" | | 8 | "It burned now, hot against" | | 9 | "She'd come here because she" | | 10 | "*You're not who they think" | | 11 | "She'd almost ignored them." | | 12 | "She was being watched." | | 13 | "She approached cautiously." | | 14 | "She'd always known she was" | | 15 | "She could smell ozone and" | | 16 | "She thought of her flat" | | 17 | "She could feel the portal" | | 18 | "She thought of Eva, who'd" | | 19 | "She thought of the woman" |
| | ratio | 0.21 | |
| 64.76% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 83 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "The crunch of gravel underfoot" | | 1 | "Aurora paused at the tree" | | 2 | "The silver chain had been" | | 3 | "She'd driven two hours north" | | 4 | "The GPS showed nothing here—just" | | 5 | "Aurora checked her phone." | | 6 | "The screen flickered, casting blue" | | 7 | "She pushed through the last" | | 8 | "The clearing stretched before her," | | 9 | "Wildflowers bloomed in riotous colour—foxgloves," | | 10 | "Time moved differently here." | | 11 | "She could feel it in" | | 12 | "she called out, her voice" | | 13 | "Silence answered her." | | 14 | "Aurora stepped forward, her boots" | | 15 | "She looked down." | | 16 | "Her footprints glowed faintly, then" | | 17 | "The wrongness had been building" | | 18 | "The air tasted metallic, like" | | 19 | "Her teeth ached." |
| | ratio | 0.79 | |
| 47.62% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing in this impossible" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 44.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Ancient oak standing stones ringed the perimeter, their surfaces covered in moss that shimmered with an otherworldly hue." | | 1 | "The standing stones seemed to lean inward, their ancient faces twisted into expressions of something that might have been hunger." | | 2 | "Three weeks ago, she'd found a body in Richmond Park—a woman who looked exactly like her, wearing her clothes, carrying her phone." | | 3 | "The standing stones began to hum, a low vibration that made Aurora's teeth chatter." | | 4 | "The flowers pulsed in time with the sound, their colours shifting and blending until the entire clearing seemed alive with movement." | | 5 | "She thought of Eva, who'd taken her in after she fled Evan's violence, who'd helped her rebuild her life piece by piece." | | 6 | "She thought of the woman in the grave, who had her face and her eyes and her memories—or at least, the memories that weren't hers." |
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| 58.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "the woman said, and her voice was like dry leaves scraping against stone" | | 1 | "the woman said, her voice suddenly urgent" |
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| 78.57% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" | | 1 | "the woman continued (continue)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.238 | | leniency | 0.476 | | rawRatio | 0.3 | | effectiveRatio | 0.143 | |