Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD4ZYY37EF3FAK95270KVED

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Duration:
19.8s
Cost:
$0.012225
Provider:
Meta

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hit Soho in sheets. Green light from above Silas' bar bled across the wet pavement and caught in puddles. THE RAVEN'S NEST buzzed and stuttered in neon. Rory stood under it with her helmet tucked against her hip and water running off the shoulders of her jacket. Her shift at the Golden Empress finished twenty minutes past. Her hair stuck to her forehead in black lines. She pushed the door. Inside smelled of old wood polish and spilled ale and lemon cleaner. The maps on the wall sweated in the heat. A low murmur filled the room. Silas stood behind the bar, his sleeves rolled to the elbow, his silver signet catching light as he poured. He looked up. He nodded at her. She nodded back. She hung her helmet on the peg by the bookshelf that wasn't a bookshelf and went to her usual stool at the far end. The one with the wobble. The door opened again behind her and let in a gust of cold air and traffic noise. Rory did not turn. Then someone laughed. The laugh hit her spine before her brain placed it. "No fucking way." Rory turned. A woman stood just inside the doorway, shaking rain from a camel wool coat. Blonde. Cut sharp at the jaw. Red lipstick perfect despite the weather. She stared at Rory and her mouth opened. "Rory? Aurora Carter?" Rory's hand tightened on the bar. "Megan Parry." Megan crossed the room in three strides. Coat still dripping. She grabbed Rory's shoulders. Her hands were cold. "Look at you. Look at — Christ. It is you." Megan pulled her into a hug that smelled of expensive perfume and rain. Rory let her. Over Megan's shoulder she saw Silas watching. His hazel eyes narrowed a fraction. Megan stepped back and held Rory at arm's length. "You cut your hair." "You bleached yours." Megan laughed again and the sound filled too much space. "I did. God. How long? Five years? Six?" "Seven." "Seven years. Since graduation. You vanished." Megan slid onto the stool next to Rory's without asking. Her coat left a dark smear on the leather. Silas set a glass of water in front of Rory without a word. He looked at Megan. "What do you drink?" "White wine. Dry. Whatever you have that's decent." Silas' mouth twitched. He poured. Rory wiped rain from her forehead. The small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist showed white against her damp skin. "You look—" Megan started. "You look different." "I know." Megan touched her own cheekbone, her throat, a gesture that showed a diamond bracelet. "I live in Chelsea now. Proper adult life. Do you remember Mrs Hughes said I'd end up working the till at Tesco?" "I remember." "I work in PR now. For a gallery in Mayfair. I have clients. Real clients. I just got back from Basel." She said it like a challenge. Rory picked up her water. "That's great." Megan leaned in. Her eyes dropped to Rory's jacket, the faded jeans, the scuffed trainers by the footrest. "Are you still— Do you still live up— I heard you moved to London. Mum told me. She saw your mum at St David's." "I live upstairs." Megan followed her glance up at the cracked ceiling. "Upstairs? Here? Above the bar?" "Yeah." "Oh." Silence settled for a beat too long. The radiator hissed. Megan sipped her wine and made a face and sipped again anyway. "Do you remember Year Eleven? The languages trip to Paris. You and me and Chloe. We bought those terrible matching bracelets off a man by the Seine and you lost yours in the canal on the second day." "I didn't lose it. Chloe threw it in." "She did! She threw it in because you kissed Ben Thomas." "I didn't kiss Ben Thomas. You kissed Ben Thomas." Megan's laugh cracked in the middle. "Did I? Fuck. I did. Poor Ben." She stared into her glass. The neon from outside threw green across her blonde hair. "I thought we'd both get out. You know. Properly out. Not just —" She gestured at the window, at the street beyond. "Cardiff was too small. You said that." "I said a lot of things when I was eighteen." "You said you were going to be a barrister. Like your dad. You said you'd own a flat in the Inner Temple and wear those stupid wigs." Rory's jaw worked. "I changed my mind." Megan's hand found Rory's wrist before Rory could pull away. Her thumb brushed the crescent scar. "You still have this. From the Davies' fence. You dared me to climb it." "You dared me." "You fell. You bled everywhere. Mrs Carter went mental." Rory pulled her hand back and tucked it under her thigh. "It was a long time ago." "I tried to find you. On Instagram. You deleted everything." "I know." "I thought— We were best friends, Ror. You were at my house more than yours. Then you just stopped answering. For months. Then your number dead-ended." Rory looked at the row of bottles behind the bar. Her throat tightened. "I left." "Yeah. People told me. Something about your boyfriend? Evan?" Silas placed another water down harder than necessary. Water slopped. Megan jumped. Rory stared at her. "What do you want me to say, Meg?" Megan opened her mouth. Closed it. "I don't know. I thought you'd be happy to see me." "I am happy to see you." "Are you? You look like you want me to leave." Megan's voice rose. A couple at a table near the maps glanced over. Rory exhaled through her nose. She forced her hands flat on the bar. "No. I just — It's been a long day. I did thirty drops in the rain. Yu-Fei's short-staffed." "Yu-Fei?" "My boss." "You deliver food?" "Part time." Megan stared. "Rory, you were top of our class. You were going to read Law at Cardiff. You were—" "I'm aware of what I was." The words snapped. Megan flinched. She stared at the wine as if trying to read something at the bottom of the glass. "I missed you." Rory's shoulders dropped. "I missed you, too." Megan reached again, slower this time. "You never called." "You never came." "I didn't know where to come." "I was in Cardiff until I wasn't." Megan's eyes shone. Red leaked a little at the edge of her lipstick. "My dad died last year. Did you know? Heart attack. January." Rory's head came up. "No." "Yeah. It was quick. The funeral — I kept looking at the door. Stupid." Rory reached out. Her fingers hovered over Megan's forearm and then landed. "I'm sorry." Megan covered Rory's hand with her own. Her diamond bracelet clicked against the bar. "I kept his old Polaroid camera. Remember how he used to take pictures of us in the garden? Even when we told him to piss off?" "I remember." "His pictures are shit. All overexposed. But I kept it." The door opened again. Two men entered, loud, drunk. Silas intercepted them with a look and a slight shift of his weight on his left leg and steered them to a table far from the bar. Rory watched him and felt the tightness in her chest ease a millimetre. Megan sniffed and wiped under her eyes with a knuckle, careful of mascara. "So you really live up there? What's it like?" "Small. Cold in winter. Silas lets me use the back room when I need quiet." "The back room?" Rory glanced at the bookshelf. Megan followed her gaze and did not understand, which was fine. "And you like it here? In London?" Rory considered the question. She rolled the glass between her palms. "I like that no one knows me before I walk in." Megan laughed, a wet sound. "Fucking hell, Rory. That's bleak." "It's honest." Megan drained her wine and pushed the glass away. She fumbled in her expensive bag. "Look. I'm here till Thursday. I'm staying at a hotel on Dean Street. Let me take you for lunch. Or dinner. Proper dinner, not— No offence to this place." "None taken." Silas said it from behind her. Megan jumped again. Megan pulled a card from her bag. Thick paper. Embossed. "My mobile's on there. Text me. Any time. Even if it's just— Even if you want to tell me to fuck off in writing." Rory took the card. The paper was smooth. "I still have the same number." "You do?" "Last four digits. Same as our old house number. 2217." Megan's face lit up. "2217. Mrs Hughes' classroom." "Mr Davies gave me detention there." "For calling him a bald prick." "He was a bald prick." They both laughed and the sound cracked the seven years in half for a second. Megan stood. She pulled her coat around her. "Text me." "I will." Megan hugged her again, shorter this time. She smelled less like perfume now and more like rain. The door shut behind her and took the cold with it. Rory stared at the card. She turned it over. Blank. Silas picked up Megan's empty glass. He wiped the ring it left. "Friend from home?" "From when home meant something else." He set the glass down. "You alright?" Rory slipped the card into the inside pocket of her jacket. She zipped it closed. She picked up her water and drank.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences88
tagDensity0.023
leniency0.045
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1562
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
90.40% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1562
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"perfect"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"perfect"
1"silence"
2"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences121
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences121
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences208
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1565
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions73
wordCount850
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity3.88
worstName"Megan"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Megan"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Golden1
Empress1
Rory30
Megan33
Silas7
persons
0"Empress"
1"Rory"
2"Megan"
3"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Golden"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if trying to read something at the bottom of the glass"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1565
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences208
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs151
mean10.36
std9.82
cv0.947
sampleLengths
06
162
24
356
429
517
67
710
83
92
1034
113
126
132
1418
1510
1629
179
184
193
2010
218
221
236
2419
2517
264
278
285
2920
304
313
3238
332
3421
356
365
372
3818
3924
403
419
425
431
441
4510
4612
4738
488
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences121
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs154
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences208
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount597
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.020100502512562814
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0016750418760469012
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences208
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences208
mean7.52
std6.13
cv0.815
sampleLengths
06
115
28
320
410
59
64
712
89
96
1019
113
124
133
1424
155
1617
174
183
1910
203
212
2214
231
245
256
268
273
286
292
307
313
324
334
3410
3513
363
377
386
399
404
413
4210
438
441
456
4610
479
4813
494
39.42% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.2692307692307692
totalSentences208
uniqueOpeners56
30.86% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences108
matches
0"Then someone laughed."
ratio0.009
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences108
matches
0"Her shift at the Golden"
1"Her hair stuck to her"
2"She pushed the door."
3"He looked up."
4"He nodded at her."
5"She nodded back."
6"She hung her helmet on"
7"She stared at Rory and"
8"She grabbed Rory's shoulders."
9"Her hands were cold."
10"His hazel eyes narrowed a"
11"Her coat left a dark"
12"He looked at Megan."
13"She said it like a"
14"Her eyes dropped to Rory's"
15"She stared into her glass."
16"Her thumb brushed the crescent"
17"Her throat tightened."
18"She forced her hands flat"
19"She stared at the wine"
ratio0.296
6.30% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences108
matches
0"The rain hit Soho in"
1"THE RAVEN'S NEST buzzed and"
2"Rory stood under it with"
3"Her shift at the Golden"
4"Her hair stuck to her"
5"She pushed the door."
6"The maps on the wall"
7"A low murmur filled the"
8"Silas stood behind the bar,"
9"He looked up."
10"He nodded at her."
11"She nodded back."
12"She hung her helmet on"
13"The one with the wobble."
14"The door opened again behind"
15"Rory did not turn."
16"The laugh hit her spine"
17"A woman stood just inside"
18"She stared at Rory and"
19"Rory's hand tightened on the"
ratio0.907
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She hung her helmet on the peg by the bookshelf that wasn't a bookshelf and went to her usual stool at the far end."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Megan touched, her throat, a gesture that showed a diamond bracelet"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.1260%