| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.394 | | leniency | 0.788 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1234 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 51.38% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1234 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "throb" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "throbbed" | | 5 | "footfall" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "lurched" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "fluttered" | | 10 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 166 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 166 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 186 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 24 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1234 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 47.06% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 66 | | wordCount | 1020 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 2.06 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Rory | 21 | | Fae | 3 | | London | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Fingers | 1 | | Dymas | 2 | | Isolde | 14 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Water | 1 | | Light | 3 | | Nyx | 8 | | Roots | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Fingers" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Yu-Fei" | | 6 | "Light" | | 7 | "Nyx" | | 8 | "Roots" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Water" |
| | globalScore | 0.471 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1234 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 186 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 78 | | mean | 15.82 | | std | 12.67 | | cv | 0.801 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 59 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 30 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 38 | | 29 | 40 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 44 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 166 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 186 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.41% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 186 | | ratio | 0.022 | | matches | | 0 | "The park’s distant traffic, the dogs, the planes over London— all of it cut." | | 1 | "The amber sky of Dymas from stories Isolde told, the endless vineyard where souls cooked while they wept— this pocket leaned against that place." | | 2 | "The delivery shift, Yu-Fei’s kitchen, the flat above the bar— distant, smeared." | | 3 | "Through the tear she saw— not park." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1028 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.019455252918287938 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0019455252918287938 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 186 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 186 | | mean | 6.63 | | std | 4.48 | | cv | 0.676 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 61.83% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.4032258064516129 | | totalSentences | 186 | | uniqueOpeners | 75 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | 0 | "It was not wind." | | 1 | "Their voice came from behind" | | 2 | "Her boot did not hit" | | 3 | "They solidified with a snap," | | 4 | "They flexed their hands" | | 5 | "It pulsed under her palm." | | 6 | "It was not a path." | | 7 | "She shoved her sleeve down." | | 8 | "Her stomach turned over." | | 9 | "Her hand hovered." | | 10 | "Their shadow-hand passed through rind." | | 11 | "She kept her hand flat" | | 12 | "Her lavender eyes caught light" | | 13 | "They rang anyway." | | 14 | "It dragged her a step." | | 15 | "Her reflection showed no face." | | 16 | "It grew from the rock." | | 17 | "She had not eaten since" | | 18 | "Their whisper turned sharp, a" | | 19 | "It did not ripple for" |
| | ratio | 0.156 | |
| 41.56% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 118 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | 0 | "The stones did not belong" | | 1 | "Rory stopped at the treeline" | | 2 | "Lichen silvered the ridges." | | 3 | "The air between them shivered." | | 4 | "It was not wind." | | 5 | "The shimmer hung vertical, thin" | | 6 | "Rory’s hand went to her" | | 7 | "The Heartstone pendant burned under" | | 8 | "A throb in time with" | | 9 | "Isolde stood already halfway through" | | 10 | "Light passed through her and" | | 11 | "Nyx pooled at Rory’s feet," | | 12 | "Their voice came from behind" | | 13 | "Rory pulled the Fae blade" | | 14 | "The moonsilver sucked the grey" | | 15 | "The edge stayed cold enough" | | 16 | "Sound fell away." | | 17 | "The park’s distant traffic, the" | | 18 | "Her boot did not hit" | | 19 | "An inch, two, into moss" |
| | ratio | 0.837 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 49.69% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 23 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "A flat sheet of black, still as glass, rimmed with bone-white flowers that rang when wind touched them." | | 1 | "A clear tone, then another, off-rhythm, building a chord that made Rory’s teeth hurt." | | 2 | "A slope of groaning vines heavy with fruit that bled juice, tables that stretched forever, souls in chef whites with faces stitched in concentration." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.152 | | leniency | 0.303 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.061 | |